I yearn for your love, your touch and your feel
These words were beautiful and relatable to start the poem off with. The flow was smoothe, and the rhyme made it an easy read. The message was wonderful, and most have been there. You were able to bring the poem alive to the reader.
This is a very well written poem. The flow and rhyme was smoothe and the message was one that most can relate to. I found that you chose words that painted a picture and brought me into the story. I found this poem a amazing read.
I think this is a great peice, and I enjoyed the story. This is a message that we all can relate to at some point. I love the dialog. I can see the skill in this item. I have peoblems with dialog, and I am always happy to read it from others.
I was able to see this date and the thoughts that was traveling in the minds.
I love the idea, and see where this can be a deep contest. One that has you to focus on things that can ignite passions, anger, and different emotions. It can inspire cause and effect of the seven deadly sins.
I am going to check the links that I see on this page. I love the idea of this group, and would like to know more about it. I have a busy life with five children, but I want to know how I can become a part of this good cause. I do not know how to create contests and such. I would like to be able to hold one for newbies to receive awardicons to encourage them as I was when I was a new family member here.
I love this group page. I am having problems with my memory, and I think that by looking up the answers will help me remember things from my teenaged years. I will come back and answer the questions. Using Google, I hope to give the right answers.
This is a great that page, and the information is wonderful. I wonder if you have thought of holding a class with this. I think that this is a lot of things that we need to know. My self I would love to know how to hold auctions, create banners, and contests. You seem to be very smart here. I have been on since 2007, and really would like to learn more.
I would like to start a group to give awards to newbies.
Hate to see the closed sign. This page is set up well. There is enought information to lead the reader to the decision of being a member or not. I agree with the message, and have found myself searching for words so that my reviews will not be useless.
Thank you for sharing this with us for a while.\
Ida
This sounds as if it is a great idea. However, I don't see enough information on this page. I am going to follow the other item listed here. I love the picture of books. It matches the theme.
This is so much fun. It was put together well, and the responses were just as much fun. Though the ideas were a little strong, we were able to laugh. Think about fantacies of making the other man pay. Like ex husbands. I could see him in so many of these ideas.
I love this poem. It seems that I am in for some real competetion. The rhyme is smooth, and the flow was easy. I found that you created this poem the same as I did my duck poem. I love the picture that you painted and who would not want to fly.
This is a well written poem.
Sorry that I missed the date. I find that my friend is doing well for writing.com. I love you all, and find that out of anywhere in this world, this site is where I belong.
Could you tell me how to do more here, and how to raise money to send. I have been on here for over three years. I turly would like to do more.
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Title:
So Thank You
This title allows me to know that there are appreicative people in this world.
Content:
I think that this is written with true admoration. I love the relationship of the author to her subject.
Changes:
I would not change anything unless I added the word DAD.
Conclusion:
There are very few good people that leave this word with the knowledge that some one feels the way this author seems to feel. It gives reward to a life that touched others and that was well lived.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.
Title:
Last Light
This title raises questions. What happened last night, and I had to read more to find out just what it was.
Content:
To me the sea is so much like life. Never staying the same. It always has some kind of drama to deal with, but the calm is so rewarding when we find it
Conclusion:
This is a very well written poem that I enjoyed reading.
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.
Title:
Like a Garment
This brings me to read just to know the meaning of the title.
Content:
I’ll wear my garment proudly
Telling everyone I meet,
It’s great qualities and support for me
With each and every heart beat.
This was a wonderful message to how marriages truly last. I really was comfronted by the pictures that you painted of love.
Changes:
The only changes in my opinion is that the definations should have been moved to the top to make the reading of the unusual words easier to understand.
Conclusion:
I enjoyed this read. It was smooth and beautifully written.
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