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Rated: E | (4.5)
I yearn for your love, your touch and your feel
These words were beautiful and relatable to start the poem off with. The flow was smoothe, and the rhyme made it an easy read. The message was wonderful, and most have been there. You were able to bring the poem alive to the reader.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of Angel  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very well written poem. The flow and rhyme was smoothe and the message was one that most can relate to. I found that you chose words that painted a picture and brought me into the story. I found this poem a amazing read.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of Alone  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem touched my heart. Its rhyme and flow made it an easy and enjoyable read.

I have lived these words a few times, and each time makes me a little stronger.

my favorate part is:

I miss your touch
Your loving kiss
My eyes shined brightly
Before all this

I live with my love, and I still miss these.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of Gender Translator  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I think this is a great peice, and I enjoyed the story. This is a message that we all can relate to at some point. I love the dialog. I can see the skill in this item. I have peoblems with dialog, and I am always happy to read it from others.

I was able to see this date and the thoughts that was traveling in the minds.

Job well done.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the idea, and see where this can be a deep contest. One that has you to focus on things that can ignite passions, anger, and different emotions. It can inspire cause and effect of the seven deadly sins.

The page is easy to read, and catches attention.

Thank you for the opportunity to grow.
Ida
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Review of "Pass It On"  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am going to check the links that I see on this page. I love the idea of this group, and would like to know more about it. I have a busy life with five children, but I want to know how I can become a part of this good cause. I do not know how to create contests and such. I would like to be able to hold one for newbies to receive awardicons to encourage them as I was when I was a new family member here.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida

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written by my 15 year old son.. his first one.. good job for ADHD
#1773448 by Ida_Matilda_Wright Help Author IconMail Icon
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Review of Lost In The 80's  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this group page. I am having problems with my memory, and I think that by looking up the answers will help me remember things from my teenaged years. I will come back and answer the questions. Using Google, I hope to give the right answers.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
 Anger Issue Open in new Window. ()
written by my 15 year old son.. his first one.. good job for ADHD
#1773448 by Ida_Matilda_Wright Help Author IconMail Icon
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Review of How To Get Viewed  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great that page, and the information is wonderful. I wonder if you have thought of holding a class with this. I think that this is a lot of things that we need to know. My self I would love to know how to hold auctions, create banners, and contests. You seem to be very smart here. I have been on since 2007, and really would like to learn more.

I would like to start a group to give awards to newbies.

Tahnk you for sharing this with us.
Ida

 Anger Issue Open in new Window. ()
written by my 15 year old son.. his first one.. good job for ADHD
#1773448 by Ida_Matilda_Wright Help Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hate to see the closed sign. This page is set up well. There is enought information to lead the reader to the decision of being a member or not. I agree with the message, and have found myself searching for words so that my reviews will not be useless.

Thank you for sharing this with us for a while.\
Ida
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
This sounds as if it is a great idea. However, I don't see enough information on this page. I am going to follow the other item listed here. I love the picture of books. It matches the theme.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is so much fun. It was put together well, and the responses were just as much fun. Though the ideas were a little strong, we were able to laugh. Think about fantacies of making the other man pay. Like ex husbands. I could see him in so many of these ideas.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I love this poem. It seems that I am in for some real competetion. The rhyme is smooth, and the flow was easy. I found that you created this poem the same as I did my duck poem. I love the picture that you painted and who would not want to fly.
This is a well written poem.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sorry that I missed the date. I find that my friend is doing well for writing.com. I love you all, and find that out of anywhere in this world, this site is where I belong.

Could you tell me how to do more here, and how to raise money to send. I have been on here for over three years. I turly would like to do more.

Thank you
Ida
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Review of Memories  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

Memories

This is a title that I had to find out what memories are for.

*Bird*Content:

This is a great story in the form of a poem that is easily read and related to.

*Bird*Changes:

I would not make any changes.

*Bird*Conclusion:

This is a great message that I have lived through many times. I feel that this is one of the deepest poems that I read in a long time.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of So Thank You  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

So Thank You

This title allows me to know that there are appreicative people in this world.

*Bird*Content:

I think that this is written with true admoration. I love the relationship of the author to her subject.

*Bird*Changes:

I would not change anything unless I added the word DAD.

*Bird*Conclusion:

There are very few good people that leave this word with the knowledge that some one feels the way this author seems to feel. It gives reward to a life that touched others and that was well lived.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of Last Light  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

Last Light

This title raises questions. What happened last night, and I had to read more to find out just what it was.


*Bird*Content:

To me the sea is so much like life. Never staying the same. It always has some kind of drama to deal with, but the calm is so rewarding when we find it

*Bird*Conclusion:

This is a very well written poem that I enjoyed reading.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

There's A Spider On My Foot!
This title is adorable, and left me wanting more.

*Bird*Content:

The flow was smoth. The rhyme was great, and the content brought a smile to my face.

*Bird*Changes:

This does not need any changes.

*Bird*Conclusion:

I think this is a poem for all ages, and I enjoyed the read. This is one of my favorates because of the uplifting nature.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of MAD COW DISEASE?  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

Mad Cow Disease?

It was eye catching.

*Bird*Content:

I was impressed by the ability that you have to use dialog and slang so easily in this poem.

*Bird*Changes:

NO changes

*Bird*Conclusion:

This poem was well written, and the flow was smooth. I would love to read more. This was truly a fun read.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

On Earth’s Where We Stand

The title caught my eye considering that Earth day just pasted.

*Bird*Content:

I love the relationship that you introduce to us between the Earth and man. I love how you remind us that we need each other.

*Bird*Changes:

No changes needed. I was caught up in your words to notice any grammar mistakes.

*Bird*Conclusion:

I am going to find the friendship with the world in which I live and teach it to my children.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

The Secret of the Departed

With loved ones that are no longer with us, I needed to read their secrets.

*Bird*Content:

I loved this poem. It touched me to read of the courage it takes to just live.

*Bird*Changes:

There is no reason for change.

*Bird*Conclusion:

I enjoyed this poem and found solice in your words.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of Like a Garment  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

Like a Garment

This brings me to read just to know the meaning of the title.

*Bird*Content:

I’ll wear my garment proudly
Telling everyone I meet,
It’s great qualities and support for me
With each and every heart beat.

This was a wonderful message to how marriages truly last. I really was comfronted by the pictures that you painted of love.

*Bird*Changes:

The only changes in my opinion is that the definations should have been moved to the top to make the reading of the unusual words easier to understand.

*Bird*Conclusion:

I enjoyed this read. It was smooth and beautifully written.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

Precious moments at Grandma's

This brought back memories of my grandmother's family dinners. So I just had to read this to visit her again.

*Bird*Content:

It brought tears to my eyes when I read of the grandmother still being in the kitchen even after she was gone. The memory comfronts me.

*Bird*Changes:

I did not see any reason for changes. I read the words without any ability to see mistakes through the happy memories.

*Bird*Conclusion:

It was nice to visit your grandmother while remembering mine.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida



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Review of To the Heavens  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

To the Heavens

THis title chatches the eye and interest.

*Bird*Content:

So to the heavens I'll continue to climb
In search of a life that was stolen from mine

This line truly touched my heart.

The poem paints a very nice picture that captures the soul.

*Bird*Changes:

I think that these are well chosen words and there is no need for change.

*Bird*Conclusion:

This was an inspiration. The poem has a good flow and smooth rhyme. It brought a smile to my mind.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of Euphrates  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

Euphrates

I am ashamed to say, but I had to look the word up. So the title its self taught me something.


*Bird*Content:

You had great flow, and the imaginary was terrific. It was relatable.

*Bird*Changes:

I did not see any need for changes.


*Bird*Conclusion:

This was a job well done, and I loved it.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of Nature's Love  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.

*Bird*Title:

Nature's Beauty

I like the title, but I think that I would like the last part of the poem to be the title...

We are nature


*Bird*Content:

Nature is the priceless smile of god

I love this phrase

*Bird*Changes:

delete the " }" before the first word. I have done this so many times.

*Bird*Conclusion:

I hope that you find this to be a family as I have.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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