This is so much fun. It was put together well, and the responses were just as much fun. Though the ideas were a little strong, we were able to laugh. Think about fantacies of making the other man pay. Like ex husbands. I could see him in so many of these ideas.
I love this poem. It seems that I am in for some real competetion. The rhyme is smooth, and the flow was easy. I found that you created this poem the same as I did my duck poem. I love the picture that you painted and who would not want to fly.
This is a well written poem.
Sorry that I missed the date. I find that my friend is doing well for writing.com. I love you all, and find that out of anywhere in this world, this site is where I belong.
Could you tell me how to do more here, and how to raise money to send. I have been on here for over three years. I turly would like to do more.
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.
Title:
So Thank You
This title allows me to know that there are appreicative people in this world.
Content:
I think that this is written with true admoration. I love the relationship of the author to her subject.
Changes:
I would not change anything unless I added the word DAD.
Conclusion:
There are very few good people that leave this word with the knowledge that some one feels the way this author seems to feel. It gives reward to a life that touched others and that was well lived.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.
Title:
Last Light
This title raises questions. What happened last night, and I had to read more to find out just what it was.
Content:
To me the sea is so much like life. Never staying the same. It always has some kind of drama to deal with, but the calm is so rewarding when we find it
Conclusion:
This is a very well written poem that I enjoyed reading.
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.
Title:
Like a Garment
This brings me to read just to know the meaning of the title.
Content:
I’ll wear my garment proudly
Telling everyone I meet,
It’s great qualities and support for me
With each and every heart beat.
This was a wonderful message to how marriages truly last. I really was comfronted by the pictures that you painted of love.
Changes:
The only changes in my opinion is that the definations should have been moved to the top to make the reading of the unusual words easier to understand.
Conclusion:
I enjoyed this read. It was smooth and beautifully written.
I normally dont read about space. This item kept my attention, the flow was smooth, and the message was interesting. I loved the discription in your words, and I could see the Earth in the window. I think that seeing the Earth for the first time would help us all appreiate it more.
Nice to visit your port. I am glad to be reading the words of my writing.com family.
Title:
The title caght my attention because I have been told that this is to be my life for such a long time.
Content:
This page is full of facts, and inspiration to overcome the pain.
I am going to take some of the advice and see if we together can not beat the soreness.
Changes:
I could not change a thing. This passage left me thinking and more hopfull.
Conclusion:
I am going to find the links very helpful. I had no idea of what I am dealing with. You have helped me so much.
I think that this is a very nice poem. I loved trhe rhyme and the flow made it a great read. I loved how you made the note with it. This shows your talent of poetry. You were able to take me as the reader into your words. It makes me kind of miss the mountians.
You can fill the emotion in this well written story. I could see the emotion of the lost boy when he sees his mother. Your words touched home, I am a mother with three children, and daughter chose to live with her dad. It has been over a year since I have seen her. I could not go on knowing someone had taken her away.
I loved this poem. I can not tell you much about the grammer or spelling. I am unable to tell you of the rhyme. The words took my attention away from the grading eye. I got cought up in the emotion. I could feel the loneliness of the Jester. Thinking about what his story could have been, and the blessed connection that he had with the children, was all that I could see. That is what makes a great peice.
I love this page, and found inspiration in the words. I am so insprired by the way you have it set up, and would love to take the time someday to take the idea and set one up for myself. It seems to be a wonderful way to set goals, and to monitor your growth.
Truly a work that we in this day can relate to. The wording is great, and the flow is smoothe. I found this to be a poem that is written at the right time. With all the news about the dept of USA and the government right now, your words blend right in.
You have a great talent for dialog. This is a skill that I need to improve. You were able to bring the reader into your story, and have them to feel your words. The discriptions were well written. This was an enjoyable read all the way around. I am sure you will get nothing but good reviews on this one.
I love this poem, and the picture is so clearly painted with the words that you chose to use. It brings me to think of my dad. The litteral seas have not taken him away, but the seas of time has taken most of him. We are still children to him, and I wish that the waves that took him from could bring him back for a time before he crosses that river.
Thank you for sharing this story, poem, a well done item with us.
Ida
Very well written poem. It touches a place in my heart that compares life with other creations of God. It is a talent to be able to bring such a deep subject in such a manner that the reader (no matter who they are) can be brought to understand the workings of the Lord himself.
Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida
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