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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Last Bird of Autumn"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Sam Adams walking in the mountains. The rhythm moves the poem's narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because it climaxes the poem's plot with Sam attempting to do something to save the birds.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of Sam Adams.

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Review of Happy Home  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JoABuilder , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Happy Home"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with the question. The rhythm and rhyming words moved the poem's narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem's plot with a planned action.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the couple's conversation.

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Review of Silky Word  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI Now What? , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Silky Word"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with copywriters being like spiders. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Shwetha because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this because of the comparison of writing to weaving silken words.

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Review of Close Call  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, tj ~ endeavors to persevere! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Close Call"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Joby's statement. The conversation between Joby and Zak moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Zak and Joby, who are intriguing and sympathetic characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JoABuilder , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Date Night Surprise"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first line hooked me with the question. The rhytm and rhyming words complimented each other. The rhythm moved the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the last stanza because it climaxed the poem's plot.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the conversation between the couple.

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Review of The Watch  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, William Cole , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Watch"  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 30, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Gabe attempting to estimate how much time has past since finding the watch. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, felt the watch’s siren call, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the watch.

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Review of By Any Other Name  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "By Any Other Name"  because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (November 30, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Rubella's name. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the names.

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Review of A New Life  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean 4th's Loud Here , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "A New Life"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: Professor Michel's question in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Even Prompter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Even Prompter"  "Gannet"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The question in the first line hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the narrative forward at a good pace. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the rhyme on fight and flight.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it told me something about Gannets I did no know.

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Review of Proper Attire  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, amateur40 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Proper Attire"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the knock on Donald's office door. The interaction and conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found not technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the conversation between Donald and Gloria reveal their personalities.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction between the characters.

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911
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, JoABuilder , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Most Important Thing"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with the last line. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other and move the emotions froward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it solves the myster.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning love.

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Review of Tolerance  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, G. B. Williams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Tolerance"  because I discovered it on the community genre page.

First Thoughts: The description under the title hooked me. The author moves the editorial's narrative forward at a good pace, while encouraging tolerance.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: My favorite part is about embracing all the winter holidays, no matter which ones you celebrate.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written editorial a 5.0 because gives concrete examples of tolerance.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, buddhangela's trying it all on , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Scarecrow's Thanksgiving"  because I discovered it on the holiday genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Tatters being a happy scarecrow. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the farmer took care of Tatters for the winter.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this beautiful children's story because of Tatters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "In Less Than A Month for Writer's Cramp"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with Sam Adam's life change in a second. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the plot with a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem story because it had a happy ending.

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Review of Less Than a Month  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, AmyJo- back to basics again! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Less Than a Month"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph establishes the speaker, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the poem's plot and made me smile.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem because of the way it showed the rush of the winter holidays.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, GeneralIroh , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The science of the supernatural"  because I discovered it discovered it on the fantasy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me wit Hazel taking notes. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: An extra word in this phrase, people in avoided it, I suggest removing the in.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, dark house was screaming with colorful lightd, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Hazel and the bats.

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Review of About Me  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Official "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  Judges' Review

I am reviewing About Me as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  October 2022. Thanks for entering!

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speakers statement of it being all about her. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense and reveals their personalities.

What I like: The first person point of view and voice, because the showed the main character's motivation for purchasing the house.

Final Remarks: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main characters. She is a strong woman.


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Review of The Art Contest  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Official "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  Judges' Review

I am reviewing The Art Contest as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  October 2022. Thanks for entering!

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Edith attempting to view the poster. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense, while revealing their personalities.

What I like: I like Edith Murgan because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character, with the possibility of being an strong woman. I also like the climax because it showed that talent wins.

Final Remarks: I enjoyed reading this story because of Edith Murgan.


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Review of Once Every Year  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Official "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  Judges' Review

I am reviewing Once Every Year as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  October 2022. Thanks for entering!

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the house disappearing in three days and taking whoever was it it along. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I like: I like Jasmine and Max because they are sympathetic and intriguing characters. I also like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Remarks: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Official "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  Judges' Review

I am reviewing The Hauptmann Residence as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  October 2022. Thanks for entering!

First Impression: The third paragraph hooked me with Noah's reason for being fascinated with the house. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense. The interaction among the characters reveals their personalities.

What I like: I like this simile, like a used-up whore wearing cosmetics, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Remarks: I enjoyed reading this story because of Noah.


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Review of The Dress  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Dress"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Cynthia's statement. The interaction and conversation among the character move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Jean.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Pernell Rogers , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "They Had the Proof"  because I discovered it on the mythology genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the needle bending. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the description of the way the scientist investigated the Sasquatch, because it was scientifically sound.

Final Thought: The climax surprised me even though it was the logical conclusion to the story.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Elizabeth , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Forbidden Forest"  because I discovered it on the folklore genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Elena searching the forest alone. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense and the terror.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this version of the fairy tale because of Elena.

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Review of Through the Door  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, elephantsealer , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Through the Door"  because I discovered it on the family genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's father being afraid to hold the baby. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving a personal meaning to the door.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite phrase, Through the years, the door became a passage in time. I like this phrase because it states the essence of all doors.

Final Thought: I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story to see what happens to the speaker.

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Review of Computer Trouble  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean 4th's Loud Here , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Computer Trouble"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Peggy declaring the computer broken. The conversation and interaction between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense and the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it made me smile.

Final Thought: The first person point of view and voice was a good choice for this story, because it emphasized the humor.

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