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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi, Alex Morgan Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Hem of His Garment" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Rachel stumbling across the town center. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo and missing word in this phrase, grabbed him of. I suggest changing him to the hem. Because it was the hem of Jesus' robe she touched.

My favorite part: I like the lesson this story teaching about faith. Rachel showed the type of faith that brings both forgiveness and heals.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way it demonstrated faith .

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Review of Passing A Church  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Lou-Here By His Grace Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Passing A Church" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and speak of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhytm moves the spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to give the name of the poetry form.

My favorite part: I like the way the lines suggest someone passing a church and the feeling of peace it gives.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the tranquil feeling it give me.

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Review of Doing My Part  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Kenzie Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Doing My Part" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the environment genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the author doing her part for the environment by not taking a daily newspaper. The author's reason for no longer taking a daily newspaper is logical because it explained what she learned about the way news was gather.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the part about the way front pages stories are chosen.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this article because I learned something new about the newspapers.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Graywriter Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Road to Immortality" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The three-year old's plea to her father hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the lesson this story taught about being careful what you wish for.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson.

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Review of Birthday Surprise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Graywriter Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Birthday Surprise" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Marg suggesting a guest. The conversation between the characters moves the plot and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the story ended because it made me laught.

Final Thought: I am giving this funny story a 5.0 because it made me laugh from the beginning to the end.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Amindthattravels Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Crossing the bridge" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker waking up and wanting to share the moment of peace. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A missing word in this phrase, why do have to. I suggest inserting you between do and have.

I suggest making this story part of a novel based on the speaker's adventures in the world of magic.

My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite. I like this paragraph because it climaxes the story, while making me wonder about what is going to happen to the speaker.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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for entry "Invalid Entry" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, No Sox with Sandals Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Poetically Prompted" Open in new Window. "Invalid Entry" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the acrostic poetry form and looks good on the page. The words define hope, while giving the poet's personal view of this spiritual emotion.

Suggestions: In this line, Everythin, I suggest changing everythin to everything.

My favorite part: I like the word choices for each line.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed hope.

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Review of I Am…  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, PeppermintP1 Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "I Am…" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first line establishes the theme, mood, and subject of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of hope and faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this line, I am love, I am light, I am vision, I am sight. Because of the internal rhyme on light and sight.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and beautiful poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses hope and faith.

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Review of God's Holy Grace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Debanjan Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "God's Holy Grace" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page.

First Thoughts: The main emotions of this article are tranquility and hope. The author expresses their faith in a way that emphasizes the spiritual in every religion.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the meditative and tranquil emotions this article expressed.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this article because it left me with a feeling of peace and serenity.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Louis Williams Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "On Pain and Suffering" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the self-help genre page.

First Thoughts: This free verse poem reveals pain in the light of faith. It shows that pain can helps us grow spiritually and emphasized that the pain is an attribute of the material plane we are living on.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, and lift up this pain in offering to the one. I like this line because it reminds me that pain and suffering will help an individual grow in faith when that pain is offered to the divine.

Final Thought: I am giving this poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning pain and suffering.

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Review of The Mule Trainer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi, Daisan Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Mule Trainer" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the crime/gangster genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the mule not knowing what to do once in the harness. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to use Lil Charles in another story.

My favorite part: I like Lil Charles because he tells a good story.

Final Thought: I would be curious to know how Lil Charles intended to get someone's attention.

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Review of The Tokoloshe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Tokoloshe" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the dark genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker riding a train through Botswana. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first person point of view and voice are good choices for this story because the show the speaker's emotions.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the creature.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Whiskerface Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Take That, Ya Punx!" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the comedy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with people thinking Phil is a dumb animal. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first person point of view and voice are good choices, because they give authenticity to the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story, because it made me smile.

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Review of Panty Pandora  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, 45Powerman Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Panty Pandora" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the comedy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Finley patrolling the dense jungle. The descriptions are part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Finley because he is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Kanishka Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Having the last laugh" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the comedy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this article hooked me with the author working with a happy team. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while explaining the importance of laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite, because it reminded me that it takes effort to make people laugh.

Final Thought: I enjoyed this article because it made me smile while giving me something to think about concerning laughter.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Graywriter Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Sunny Afternoon in '66" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Amy's question. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction between mother and child built the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the song lyrics were used to move the plot forward, while revealing the love between mother and child.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Amy and Tommy.

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Review of Ezha's Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Louis Williams Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Ezha's Gift" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Ezha's description. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A possible type in this phrase, his claws clutched bare are for a moment. I suggest changing are to air.

My favorite part: I like the similes used in this story because the are fresh and visual. This is my favorite simile, like oil paint being splattered through water colors.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Ezha. He is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Brad's Inheritance" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the comedy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Brad's full name. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Brad, because he was an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story, because it made me smile.

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Review of The Cab Ride  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Graywriter Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Cab Ride" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker sitting in the taxi stand. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the active descriptions because they helped move the plot forward.

Final Thought: The first person point of view and voice was a good choice, because they revealed the speaker's personality.

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Review of Breakthrough  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Anni Pon Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Breakthrough" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the scientific genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's master being a funny man. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the speaker because he is a sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Review of Collaboration Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Collaboration Day" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Kelcie's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the speaker makes the descriptions of his society part of the action.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because it makes me think about the result of what is happening in the U.S. today.

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Review of Billy's New Car  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Graham B. Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Billy's New Car" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Billy looking forward to his new car. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between Billy and Sadie built the suspense.

Suggestions: An unnecessary word in this phrase, minutes and he would. I suggest deleting the and.

My favorite part: I like Sadie because she is an intriguing and sympathetic car.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction between Billy and Sadie.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Seamus’ Leprechaun" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the folklore page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Seamus going back to the pub. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Seamus Halloran II because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of Seamus.

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Review of The Right to Vote  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, cheshire Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, and I am reviewing "The Right to Vote" Open in new Window. for "Invalid Item" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the phrase, ave us from our freedoms. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.

What I Like: This is my favorite sentence, But most of the time people don't change because they are afraid to do so. I like this sentence because it gave me something to think about.

Suggestions: In this phrase, how that will help the whole, I suggest placing will in front of that.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this article, because of the thought-provoking message bout voting.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Jacky Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, and I am reviewing "The Grumpy Old Lady" Open in new Window. because I found it on the "Invalid Item" Open in new Window. page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker weeding the garden. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while including enough background to reveal her as a sympathetic characters.

What I Like: I like the climax, because it showed how the encounter with the child changed the speaker.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story, because of the characters.

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