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Review of OOPS!  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, hdarling , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "OOPS!"  because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the Captain's statement. The conversation among the crew and passengers moved the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise while fitted the plot of the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the crew.

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Review of Zombie Hoedown  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Dave , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Zombie Hoedown"  because I discovered it on the fantasy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, and subject of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the scary emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first stanza is my favorite because it drew me into the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this well-written poem, because of the monsters mentioned.

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Review of Cycle of Life  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Dondee , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Cycle of Life"  because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page.

First Thoughts: The rhythm of this free verse poem moves the narrative, plot, and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the last line because it climaxes the poem's plot, while stating the poem's lesson.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this thought-provoking poem, because it reflects the cycle of life.

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Review of Tenure of Terror  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Damon Nomad , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Tenure of Terror"  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (October 5, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with "Dismembered body under the floorboard." The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way Reginald Poindexter's personality and madness were revealed through the action of the story.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the way it showed Reginald Poindexter.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sox and Sandals , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Poetically Prompted"  "Invalid Entry"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about when making choices.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, choices changing many ways. I like this line because it suggest that the choices we make always changes something, even if we cannot see what they change.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the rhythm.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Tim Chiu , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Joyful Pride - A New Meaning"  because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme, subject, and mood of this free verse poem. Each stanza gives an intriguing picture of middle class life and encourages the reader to pause and meditate on the stanza.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the spiritual emotion of joy is expressed through the material description of middle class life.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expresses joy.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, healingwords, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Idealism and the Soul"  because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with everything existing as information in the mind of God. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: A word choice in this phrase, has no indeed to say. The word indeed does not appear to fit the meaning of the phrase. I suggest changing indeed to need.

I also suggest including the translation of the bible the scriptures are from.

My favorite part: I like the way each paragraph gives the reader something to think about concerning the soul's relationship with God.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this because it gave me something to meditate about my relationship with God.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Debanjan , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "God's Holy Message"  because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page.

First Thoughts: This letter gives the reader something to think about concerning forgiveness.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the spiritual and meditative feeling of this letter because it causes the reader to stop and consider who they have to say SORRY to.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this letter because it made me think.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, BB , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "I am Pentecostal "  because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me and made me smile because the statement is a positive proclamation of the author's belief in His Holiness Christ.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way this poem expresses the joyful emotions of faith.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses joy, faith, and happiness.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, DayleeCoffee , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "And This Is Our Story"  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker thinking she was abandoned by God. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I discovered no obvious technical problems. I suggest running this story through one of the free grammar checker that can be found online. These grammar checkers can catch many technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite phrase, because it is something that every individual needs to remember.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of its emphasis on the divine.

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Review of Tori's Wrong Turn  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Jeannie , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Tori's Wrong Turn"  because I discovered it in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (September 28, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Tori seeing shadows here and there. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the ending because it sent chills up my spine.

Final Thought: I am giving this story a 5.0 because of its chilling climax.

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Review of New Beginnings  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, debmiller1 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "New Beginnings"  because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Rachel's sudden change of locations. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, Pine boughs danced to the music of a gentle breeze. because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Rachel.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, jackson , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Copenhagen Faux Pas"  because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (September 28, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the splinter under the fingernail. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the main character convinced himself that he should spend the money on himself instead of his father's Copenhagen.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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Review of GREYHOUND GRIFTER  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, laidman , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "GREYHOUND GRIFTER"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (September 28, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Ellie not wanting people to think she was a silly dreamer. The interaction and conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it left me wondering about the identity of the real grifter.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of The Lie  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Choconut , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Lie"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (September 28, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker wanting to hug her husband. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while revealing the broken relationship between herself and her husband.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way each interaction between the couple moved the plot forward, while revealing their personalities.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson about what happens to a relationship that is built on lies.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Christopher Roy Denton , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Repentant Bully"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (September 28, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Ron's reluctance to go into the hospital room. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense. The conversation among the characters reveals their personalities and relationship.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like both Ron and Samuel because they are sympathetic and intriguing characters.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction between the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, sindbad , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Transformation of Divine Dragon"  because I discovered it on the mythology genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of Redfin Carp's spirit and character. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way Redfin Carp became a dragon.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this wonderful myth.

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Review of Old Lady Tales  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Old Lady Tales"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker walking home for the store. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the speaker's reaction when she thought the clown was juggling a live frog.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the clown and the frog.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Averren , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "A Frog by any other name..."  because I discovered it on the food/cooking genre page.

First Thoughts: Liam's knowledge that something would go wrong hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Liam because he is an intriguing and a sympathetic person.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character and his muse.

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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi, A*Monaing*Faith , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Greatest Motivator"  because I discovered it on the comedy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Amy's question. The conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the description of the dog.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this because of the conversation between the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo- back to basics again! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Halloween is Coming"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the plot, form, mood, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words complimented each other, while the rhythm moved the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the last stanza because it climaxed the poem's plot.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this scary Halloween poem.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Wickedfugitive , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Writer's Cramp"  because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (September 21, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the world changing. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the idea of a jinn speaking with a Scottish accent.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the jinn.

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Review of Death Wink  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Kotaro }, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Death Wink"  because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (September 21, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker picking a horse for the next race. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, like wipers in a storm, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way the speaker changed his habit of gampling.

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Review of Bad Friend  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sumojo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Bad Friend"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (September 21, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The question in the first sentence hooked me. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax, because it suggest who got the part.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story, because of the characters.

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Review of The Legacy  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sox and Sandals , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Legacy"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (September 21, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first sentence hooked me with the speaker's aim being the worst in the family. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last sentence is my favorite because it gave me something to think about.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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