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Review of Coffee Crossed  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Sox and Sandals , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Coffee Crossed"  because I discovered it on the "Joyous July SuperPower Raid!!"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the chance meeting. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters build the suspense.

What I Like: I like the climax, because it was the logical ending of the story.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way coffee brought the couple together.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, PennyInPocket , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , reviewing "Not Your Average Cup of Coffee"  because the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker looking for an exotic cup of coffee. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like this simile, like Mount Saint Helens moments before she blew her top. I like this simile because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax, because it was unexpected.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because o f the unexpected climax.

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Review of Island Storm  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, MidnightStalker , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Island Storm"  because I discovered it on the Steampunk genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Annabelle running down the staircase. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Martha because she is an intriguing and a sympathetic character, who is a strong woman.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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Review of Norman Votes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Maddie Sunshine Stone , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Norman Votes"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Norman being nervous about voting for the first time.

Suggestions: I found no technical problem.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, brain was a ball of mush between his ears, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Norman.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Obdinagong's Quest"  because I discovered it on the fantasy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with some of the instructions being weird. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while making the descriptions part of the action.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to use this knight in another story.

My favorite part: I like the knight because he is an intriguing and a sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it made me smile.

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Review of No Doubts  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, G. B. Williams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "No Doubts"  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: This is an inspiring and thought provoking message everyone should read and meditate on.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The fifth sentence is my favorite because we sometimes we all need to be reminded to put our cares in God's hands.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this thought-provoking message because of the way it expressed the hope and faith.

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Review of HE Has Saved Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, green supports Israel , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "HE Has Saved Me"  because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, speaker, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of joy forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with faith, joy, and hope.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses the spiritual emotions.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Think About It - entry"  because I discovered it on the "Invalid Item"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker walking through a cemetery. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was unexpected.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the unexpected climax.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, JoABuilder , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "A Storm's a Brewin'"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Captain O'Neal being tossed from his bunk. The descriptions were part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters built the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Captain O'Neal.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Lynn }, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Zombie Apocalypse Chili"  because I discovered it on the food/cooking genre page.

First Thoughts: Cleaning out a metal trashcan and using it to cook in hooked me. The narrative moves the plot and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the last paragraph about guzzling Pepto for dessert.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me laugh.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, lbidler , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Re-Igniting the Flame"  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The scripture from Psalm 119 hooked me. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while keeping the reader's attention.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is the include the translation of the Bible this verse is taken from.

My favorite part: I like the prayer at the end because I could feel the Holy Spirit flowing through it.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this essay because it reminded me how important it is to read God's word daily.

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Review of A time to burgle  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JoABuilder , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "A time to burgle"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Mike crawling across the floor. The action is part of the descriptions and moves the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of The War of Power  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, brom21 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The War of Power"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the priest weeping. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, a surge of power like lightning was coursing through his veins because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the battle because the action kept me focused on the characters and the plot.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this exciting story because of the action.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, brom21 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Beast and The Word"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with John's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, swords and spears were like toothpicks to the supernatural beast, because it is fresh, descriptive, and visual.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this inspiring story because of the way John used the Holy Word.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JoABuilder , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Faulty Transmitter"  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 2, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the sound. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Chris because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I like the climax because it left me wondering about the contraption.

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Review of Home Renovation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JoABuilder , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Home Renovation"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 2, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Deanna's question. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the logical way Detective Miller and the police officers went through the crime scene.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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for entry "Hallowe'en" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Dave , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Le Voyage Magnifique"  "Hallowe'en"  because I discovered it in "Poetry Newsletter (November 2, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The poem follows the stated form and looks good on the page. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it made me smile.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it showed a Happy Halloween.

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for entry "Week 17 Tri Fall Poem" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo- back to basics again! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022/2023"  "Week 17 Tri Fall Poem"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with joy and faith.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses the emotion of faith.

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Review of Maggie  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, ridinghhood-p.boutilier , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Maggie"  because I discovered it on the "Invalid Item"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the location of the speaker's job. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, giving enough information about her co-worker to show the woman was a caring person.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the part about the pearl bracelet.

Final Thought: This story reveals Maggie as an intriguing and caring individual.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, DestinyAwaitsDarling , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Irrefutable Whispers"  because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem are shame and forgiveness.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way each stanza ends with the voice of God.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed forgiveness.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, G. B. Williams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Ramblings of A Thankful Person"  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph of this editorial hooked me with gratitude medical science. The author give items in this editorial that people do not always consider blessing.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite sentence, I pray that one day we will value the word of God more than we do the words of man. I like this sentence because it gives the reader something to think about.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written editorial a 5.0, because it gave me something to think about concerning blessings.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, matelot , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Manners Maketh Man"  because I discovered it under Read a Newbie.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with pomposity beating pride to the gate. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Paddy Higgins because he is an intriguing and a sympathetic seaman who knows his duty. I also like the climax because it made me laugh.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review of Begin Again  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Begin Again"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the question. The interaction and conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this intriguing Halloween story.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Graywriter , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "This is Blackmail!"  because I discovered it on The Hub under Recently Awarded Items..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the photos. The conversation and interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, he shook off the shock like a dog shedding water, because it is fresh, descriptive, and visual.

Final Thought: The climax surprise me because I did not expect the lawyer to be the blackmailer.

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Review of Seriously?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, AmyJo- back to basics again! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Seriously?"  because I discovered it on the holiday genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, location, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poems plot with relief.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the description of waiting in line.

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