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Review of Begin Again  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Begin Again" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the question. The interaction and conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this intriguing Halloween story.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Graywriter Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "This is Blackmail!" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on The Hub under Recently Awarded Items..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the photos. The conversation and interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, he shook off the shock like a dog shedding water, because it is fresh, descriptive, and visual.

Final Thought: The climax surprise me because I did not expect the lawyer to be the blackmailer.

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Review of Seriously?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, AmyJo-Downhill slide begins! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Seriously?" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the holiday genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, location, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poems plot with relief.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the description of waiting in line.

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Review of Haunted  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Angelica Weatherby- July 4th Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Haunted" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the holiday genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Sandy frightening Mike. The interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, Now for through that, I suggest changing for to go.

My favorite part: I like the moment the robot spider fell on Sandy's head.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this not so scary Halloween story because of the haunted house.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Mez Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Love & Diamonds Through my Dad's Eyes" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (October 26, 2022)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the question about love. This tribute to the author's father reveals her love him.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The third paragraph because they were David Michael Smith's own words.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this well-written tribute because it include some of David Michael Smith's own words.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Dream that Change his Life " Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and romantic emotions forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The second stanza is my favorite because of the rhyme on life and wife.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the happy ending.

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Review of Ink Spots  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Louis Williams Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Ink Spots" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Chaz's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A possible typo in this phrase, Then two, I suggest changing two into too.

My favorite part: I like the way the story builds up to the climax. It reveals Chaz as a sympathetic and intriguing charaction.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the active descriptions of the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Damon Nomad Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "You are 99.99% Empty Space" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The title of this essay hooked me. The author of this essay does a good job of explaining why we are 99.99% empty space.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way this concept is explained. The language used is technical, but not so technical that the essay cannot be understood by a nontechnical person.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written essay a 5.0, because I learned something.

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Review of The Broken Vase  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Tsuna-chan Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Broken Vase" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the inspirational genera page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this story hooked me with the vase becoming chipped. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it revealed that there is beauty even in the broken pieces of our lives.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson it taught.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, IAmMeadowRayne Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Not-So-Hidden Truth" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the community newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the questions. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the surprise climax, because I did not expect Jared to turn on his wife.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because the first person point of view kept me focused on the characters and the plot.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Black Panther Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Veil Gets Thinner!" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the family genre page.

First Thoughts: The description under the title hooked me. The author holds the reader's attention while showing what Halloween means to her.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to increase the font size so that this essay is easier to read.

My favorite part: The part about leaving food out for loved ones who have passed into the spiritual world.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this essay because it revealed another person's belief.

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Review of The Basset Hound  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo-Downhill slide begins! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Basset Hound" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and the emotions of love and joy forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it expressed the reason for having a dog.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem because it made me smile.

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Review of Loose Ends  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JoABuilder Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Loose Ends" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the detective genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Leslie waking up in a cold sweat. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it suggested that Leslie could be the next victim.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Leslie.

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Review of The Probe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Cave Dweller Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Probe" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the speaker hearing the voice in their head. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the buried temple, because of the descriptions of the statues.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this because of descriptions. I could visualize them in my minde.

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Review of Winner  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Odessa Molinari Author Icon }, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Winner" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (October 12, 2022)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Sheree oohing over Fernando. The interaction and conversation among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last sentence is my favorite because it made me smile.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Eean Black Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Battling the Elements" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (October 12, 2022)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the below zero temperature dropping steadily. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the first person point of view, because it showed the speaker's emotions.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because the action kept me focused on the character and the plot.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Whitemorn Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "I Need to Get Ahead" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (October 12, 2022)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's statement of needing a head. The monologue moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite sentence, It's rather hard to find heads just laying around now-a-days, I like this sentence because it made me laugh.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this monologue because it made me laugh.

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Review of My Pet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, DragonWrites~The Fire Faerie~ Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "My Pet" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the Gothic genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's hand burned. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, dragonwoman Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Oaken and Geaverbogud" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the Food/Cooking genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me wit Oaken Smithfield's profession. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the Geaverbogud because it is a unique animal. I also like the lesson this story gave about helping endangered species.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson about endangered creatures.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Sumojo Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Not for the first time" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the environment genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the isolated beach. The descriptions were part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like both Serena and Ryan because they were sympathetic and intriguing characters.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because the action kept me focused on the plot.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Mr. George Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Alien encounter, drunken walk home" Open in new Window. because I discovered it under by online authors.

First Thoughts: The first sentence hooked me with the bubbles. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it fitted the plot of the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this article because it made me smile.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Scared Crow Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "A prayer of thanks" Open in new Window. because I discovered it under Read a Newbie.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with the salutation Eternal father. The speaker moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace, while showing gratitude through the chosen words.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The second stanza is my favorite because it shows the speaker's emotion.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this prayer-poem because of the way it expressed gratitude/

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Review of Welcome Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi, Wilma Seke Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Welcome Home" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "For Authors Newsletter (October 12, 2022)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Aaron slamming the box onto the floor. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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for entry "Invalid Entry" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, No Sox with Sandals Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Poetically Prompted" Open in new Window. "Invalid Entry" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the stated form and looks good on the page.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last line is my favorite because it made me smile.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it is a limerick.

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Review of Dark Matter Drive  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Ryan Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Dark Matter Drive" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the descriptions of the surroundings. The descriptions are art of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the interaction and conversation between the characters.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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