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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, brom21 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Carnal Appetites "  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the people gathering the bread seeds in baskets. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the lesson this story taught about testing God.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it gives the reader something to think about concerning testing God.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, DestinyAwaitsDarling , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Passing on the Mantle of Shame"  because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the speaker, the theme, and the subject. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the commanding tone the speaker uses in this poem because it shows they are taking control of their own emotions.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it gives the reader something to think about concerning abuse.

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Review of The Book  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, brom21 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Book"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Eridian entranced by the gray sky. The conversation and interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the lesson about loving one's enemies this story taught.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of lesson about loving your enemies.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, cheshire , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "A Question to Humanity"  because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Thoughts: The title of this article aroused my curiosity. The questions are those that each human being must ask themselves. The answers can only be found through an independent search for the answer by each human being.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the questions because the require the readers to look within themselves and question their own preconceived or taught opinions.

Final Thought: I am giving this article a 5.0 because it ask the hard questions that everyone must eventually find an answer for.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, G. B. Williams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "How Do You Know Him?"  because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page.

First Thoughts: The title hooked me and drew me into this non-fiction essay. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last line is my favorite because it caused me to think about how I know God.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written, thought-provoking item a 5.0, because it made me thing about how I know God.

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Review of Home Sweet Home  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, W.D.Wilcox , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Home Sweet Home"  because I discovered it on the horror/scary genre page.

First Thoughts: The third paragraph hooked me with Charlies being ripe with rot. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the similes and metaphors used in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. I especially like this simile gnawed their way out of him like worms.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the action kept me focused on the plot and the main characters.

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Review of A Helping Hand  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, matelot , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "A Helping Hand"  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 16, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's description of the upper floor. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense and the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, like a drunk attempting unsuccessfully to get a key in a lock, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because it made me laugh.

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Review of Even Prompter  
for entry "Pain Decides" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Even Prompter"  "Pain Decides"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it suggest acquired wisdom.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it of how it shows age and pain.

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Review of The Runaway  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi, Obasi Naomi , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Runaway"  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 16, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the main character knowing he had to get away. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I suggest using this story as the beginning of a longer story or novel about the main character and what he finds when he reaches the place the road leads.

My favorite part: I like the main character because he is a sympathetic and intriguing person.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, jackson , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Academy for the Riding of Dogs"  because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (November 16, 2022)" .

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Old Fraidy Cat being a non-denominational cat. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters build the suspense and laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, a warm wind fiddled its way through the branches of the sweet apple tree, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the description of the cat riding the dog.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Aiva Raine , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Strange Bedfellows"  because I discovered it on the crime/gangster genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Merrick being an assassin. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to use Merrick again in either a short story or novel.

My favorite part: I like Merrick because he is an intriguing characters.

Final Thought: The action kept me focused on the plot and the main character.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, brom21 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Pride and Punishment "  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Lucas sneering at the poor man. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I liked the lesson this story taught about helping the poor.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the lesson about helping the poor.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Kotaro , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "A Very Unlikely Meeting"  because I discovered it on the community newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Len hesitating to enter the room. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the name to the charter.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review of Lost Again  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Lost Again"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the message of the GPS. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was the logical conclusion to the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Review of The Granson Place  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, W.D.Wilcox , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Granson Place"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker driving to the Granson Place. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A possible typo in this phrase, infamous Grandson Place. Is word Granson or Grandson?

My favorite part: I like the similes used in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. This is my favorite simile, the veil of darkness that hung like folded wings.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the climax sent chills up my spine.

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for entry "Sewers of Paris" 
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Sumojo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Day to Day happenings in my life"  "Sewers of Paris"  because I discovered it on the "I Write: Enter the Second Decade"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The quote from Victor Huge aroused my curiosity about the Sewers of Paris. The information about the Paris sewers hold the reader's attention and reveals another approach building sewers the work as they are supposed to.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the part about the museum giving a history of the sewers.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this educational entry because it gave me an entirely new vision of sewers.

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Review of The Tower  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean 4th's Loud Here , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Tower"  because I discovered it on the comedy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the man demanding that the woman let down her hair. The conversation between the pair moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the message about love being the only true magic.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it made me smile.

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Review of The Message  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Message"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker being late getting home because of the traffic jam. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the speaker's decision to walk the dog when the lights went out.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the message about not focusing so much on work.

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Review of AI & I  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, LightinMind , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "AI & I"  because I discovered it on the computer genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the question. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense. The descriptions of the speaker's AIs enhance the action of the story, while revealing the speaker's personality to the reader.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because the interaction of the characters kept me focused on the plot.

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Review of Aging  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Beth350 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Aging"  because I discovered it on the read & review a newbie page.

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions in this poem are joy and discovery.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, New places to visit, new songs. I like this line because it shows that finding new joys and songs when one ages keeps a person young in mind and heart.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its view of aging.

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Review of Out of time  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sumojo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Out of time"  because I discovered it on the "I Write: Enter the Second Decade"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the salesman's question. The interaction and conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the explanation about the wrong date on the check.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Song of the Vamp  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Song of the Vamp"  because I discovered it on the folklore genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Penelope's statement. The interaction and conversation between Count Yorgi and Penelope moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax, because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story because of the characters.

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Review of Invisible light  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Kåre Enga in Montana , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Invisible light"  because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the reflection in the corner of one's eye. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while revealing their ability to survive.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the speaker, the alien, because they are sympathetic and intriguing.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this monologue because of the speaker.

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Review of Crystal Lake  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, russelljadams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Crystal Lake"  because I discovered it under the Friendship Friday post on the community newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the the prey that the man was hunting. The descriptions and background are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the flashbacks are written into the action of the story, because it is not distracting.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the action kept me focused on the movement of the plot and Tony Zift.

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Review of My Brother Joe  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Dave , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "My Brother Joe"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The first stanza establishes the theme and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem are pride and mourning.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first stanza is my favorite, because it drew me into the poem.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses the emotions of pride and mourning.

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