First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. Each stanza helps the reader to understand how to cope with hart times.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the emphasis on prayer.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it had good advice about coping with hard time.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of longing forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poems plot.
Final Thought: This well-written poem is a good description of a dysfunctional family.
First Thoughts: The first stanza established the theme of the poem, and also hooked the reader. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: This is my favorite line, Waiting to get a driver’s license. I like this line because it made me smile.
First Thoughts: The first stanza established to form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last line is my favorite, because it climaxed the poem with a lesson.
Final Thought: I am giving this well-written children's poem a 5.0, because children will enjoy reading and listening to it.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's acceptance to technical school. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the emoticons.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the emoticons.
First Thoughts: The first stanza established the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm moved the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The second stanza is my favorite, because of the rhyme on lost and cost.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the smooth flow of the plot.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, speaker, and theme of the poem. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace while revealing their fear and personality.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot with hopelessness.
Final Thought: The first person point of view and voice are good choices for this story, because the reveal the emotions of hopelessness.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because it climaxes the plot with hope.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story-poem because of the way it expressed hope.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because it defines home.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it showed the definition for home.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the musical rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of disappointment and fear forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it ask a question and gives an answer in the same stanza.
Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because it give an answer to one of the problems this country is facing.
First Thoughts: The scripture verse at the beginning of this essay hooked me. In this essay the author gives us an example of how we should go to the Lord and ask for His assistance and instructions.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the way the sacred scriptures are used in this essay, because they help the reader to understand the importance of going to the Lord for Advic.e
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this thought-provoking essay because it gave me something to think about in my own spiritual journe.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and subject of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is remembrance.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it tells what the poppies stand for.
Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because of the way it expresses the emotion of remembrance.
First Thoughts: The question about the contents of the vase hooked me. The interaction between the characters moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the climax, because it revealed that not all strangers are dangerous.
Final Thought: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story, because the revealed the speakers personality and fears.
First Thoughts: The first sentence hooked me with Mordon dying. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like this simile, like the touch of the snow water that ran down from Mount Hebris. I like it because it is descriptive and fresh.
Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the action kept me focused on the plot and the characters.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Astor standing in the apartment door. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like Astor because she is an intriguing and a sympathetic character.
Final Thought: The end of this chapter aroused my curiosity as to what was going to happen next.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's hip hurting. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving enough background information to help the reader understand him.
Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, yet wit, I suggest changing wit to with.
My favorite part: I like the way this article ended, because it showed that there is always hope. It also showed that sometimes we need to take action to help ourselves instead of waiting for God to doe it.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this article because of the way it expressed hope.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the question. The descriptions are part of the action and moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the part where he pinches the woman's bottom, because it show what type of guy he was and what he expected after the date.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker. The first person point of view was a good choice for this story.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the purple could. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace while giving the reader a different view of reality.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the way the story ended, because it showed that people need to accept the answer to a prayer even when the answer is unexpected.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because it had a happy ending.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of longing forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, you already new me, I suggest changing new to knew.
My favorite part: The first stanza is my favorite because it drew me into the poem.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it express the emotion of longing.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Mayor Monty's statement. The conversation move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the climax because it made me smile.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the characters.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Grandma eavesdropping. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the laughter.
What I Like: The way Grandma's dentures flew out of her mouth and into the punch bow.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me laugh.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Danny going onto the empty stage. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters builds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the way the story ends, because it is a happy ending.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Danny.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Andy being told to go to the Walper Building. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like this simile, twitch like a guitar string because it is fresh and descriptive.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this because of the main character.
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