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Review of Grace  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, tj ~ endeavors to persevere! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Grace"  because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (January 4, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, speaker, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliments each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and the laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the plot with laughter.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this funny poem because it was about food.

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Review of Cat Hair!!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Elle Cyre , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Cat Hair!!"  because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (January 4, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, speaker, and subject of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and humor forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first stanza is my favorite because it made me smile and brought back memories of my cats.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem because it was about cats.

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for entry "26 Naani - Everest" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo- back to basics again! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022/2023"  "26 Naani - Everest"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. A beautiful description.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the emoticons used because they add to the enjoyment of the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Review of White Summer Moon  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Phatik always being left at home while the rest of the family went to exciting places. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: I like Phatik because he is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Phatik. I suggest using him in another short story or novel.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the flowers. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: I like the surprise about Ray being the one who sent the gifts.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: I am reviewing "~ The Apostle John Reminisces ~ "  in "ruwth is writing..."  because the title aroused my curiosity. The second paragraph hooked me with John not knowing where to begin his account of Jesus' life. John's prayer covers the important event in Jesus's life, while expressing his desire to see you again.

What I liked: I like the way John's love for Jesus is shown in this story.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it expressed both the speaker's and the author's love for Jesus Christ.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, LightinMind , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Lightning in the Primordial Soup"  because I discovered it on the scientific genre page.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with John reading the termination e-mail in the grocery store. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters builds the suspense, while revealing their personalities.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like John Scott because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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Review of The Mad King  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Damon Nomad , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Mad King"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Herman in his study. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the descriptions of the characters reveal their personalities and position in life.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean 4th's Loud Here , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Chapter One - Jackson City"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of Jackson City. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the twist at the end with the bride and groom spending their wedding night apart.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Beauty  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Eli , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Beauty"  in response to your request.

First Thoughts: This poem makes me think of the night sky, when I can see the stars shining in all their glorious beauty. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of awe forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, Angelic or cosmic. I like this line because of the internal rhyme.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the words chosen to describe beauty.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Eli , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Power of Women"  because I discovered it under read & review a newbie.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with The Odyssey being relevant in today's world. In comparing The Odyssey with An Ancient Gesture, the author shows that women, even in grief, can move forward with their life while mourning.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite phrase, do not let grief and sorrow destroy you for eternity. I like this phrase because it encourages the grieving to move forward while in mourning.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written essay a 5.0 because of its message to women.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Washing The Curtains"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker deciding to wash the curtains in the rented room. The descriptions are part of the action and move the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the surprise ending.

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Review of The Plan  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean 4th's Loud Here , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Plan"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the escape plan dawn in the sand. The conversation between the characters moves the plot and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it made me laugh.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me laugh.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, PureSciFi , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Mentally and Physically"  because I discovered it on the Hub under Recently Plugged Items.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Yanica considering eliminating the Kovinans. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between Yanica and the Kovinans build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Thonia because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction between Yanica and the other characters.

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for entry "Time" 
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, AmyJo- back to basics again! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022/2023"  "Time"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the words relentlessly and marches are repeated in the first and last stanzas because they emphasize the theme of the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Review of The Next Step  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Next Step"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker feeling done with the years. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite, because it climaxed the stories plot with hope.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Review of Down by the Water  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Dan I Am , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Down by the Water"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of love forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because it closes the poem with love.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it is a form I have never encountered before.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Christmas Thoughts"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the tree up and the house decorated. The speaker move the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite because it climaxes the story's plot with a mystery.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this beautiful Christmas story.

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Review of Released  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, soulquest , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Released"  because I discovered it when I searched WDC for "spiritual renewal".

First Thoughts: The poem follows the free verse form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem are awe and hope.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the comparison of the power of God to that of the ocean.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem because of the way it showed faith .

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Review of Spaces and Voids  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Thomas Seeker , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Spaces and Voids"  because I discovered it when I searched WDC for "spiritual renewal".

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with questions. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace. The questions in both parts help focus the reader's attention, while giving the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, a inner question, I suggest changing a to an.

My favorite part: This is my favorite sentence, Listening to the voice of intuition from within, to guide me. I like this sentence because, at certain times in our lives, the voice of intuition is the only voice we have to listen to.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this though-provoking essay because of the description of the way the void transforms an individual.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, s. yassa , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Heart's Desire"  because I discovered it when I searched WDC for "spiritual renewal".

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this non-fiction essay hooked me with the questions. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace. The divisions between the sections assist the reader in focusing on the subject of each sections.

Suggestions: I suggest including the translation of the Bible passages used in this essay. I also suggest including the dictionary reference used to define love, joy, and peace.

My favorite part: One of the things I like about this essay is the prayer before the section on Love. Another thing I like is the questions ask in each section, because they cause the reader to stop and consider how they would answer the question.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this thought-provoking essay because the questions required me to consider love, joy, and peace on a deeper level.

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Review of Yutta-hey!!!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Humble_Poet PNG , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Yutta-hey!!!"  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way "Yutta-hey!!!" is repeated every three stanzas because it gives unity to the poem.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses the spiritual emotions of hope and faith.

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Review of Dear God  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, KJB , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Dear God"  because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of longing and fear forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: A possible type in this line, Letting Go spells out -. Did you mean God or Go?

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, Who is putting who on the back burner? I like this line because it ask a question that every person ask when they encounter a spiritual tests.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this thought-provoking poem because it gave me something to think about concerning spiritual problems.

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Review of Visiting Santa  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Visiting Santa"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: Andrea's question in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while revealing the characters personalities.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Andrea because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because it brought back memories of my childhood.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean 4th's Loud Here , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Star Light Star Fight"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Marcie singing the wishing song. The interaction between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the Dad's solution to the sister fighting because it was creative and logical.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this holiday story about sibling rivalry.

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