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Review of Couples  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Couples" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with You’ll never believe. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the conversation revealed the couple's relationship.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation.

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Review of The Owl in Winter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Dan I Am Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Owl in Winter" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the owl's voice cutting through the night. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while causing the reader to wonder about the owl.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the speaker speculation about the owl, because it gave me something to think about.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this monologue because of the subject.

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Review of Connie Laughed  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Connie Laughed" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Lilly's statement. The conversation between Lilly and her grandmother move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it made me smile.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Review of Cucumber Karma  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Damon Nomad Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Cucumber Karma" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The speaker's statement about a backyard garden hooked me. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the part about the cabinets dumping the jars of pickles on the basement floor.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it made me smile.

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for entry "The Unconquered" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi, Max Griffin 🏳️‍🌈 Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Three Tales of the Solstice" Open in new Window. "The Unconquered" Open in new Window. because I read the other two stories in this book and wanted to read this one.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the metaphor in the first sentence. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, shivers jittering down his spine, because it is fresh and descriptive. I also like the way the active descriptions kept me focused on Ike and the movement of the plot.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this exciting story because of the visual and active descriptions.

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Review of Ear Worm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, QueenNormaJean Julyishereboom! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Ear Worm" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the radio playing the song over and over. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the speaker because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because I learned a new phrase Idée fixe.

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for entry "A Solstice Gnome" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi, Max Griffin 🏳️‍🌈 Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Three Tales of the Solstice" Open in new Window. "A Solstice Gnome" Open in new Window. because I reviewed the story before in in this book.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Mandy's life being in tatters. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between Mandy and Ismael built the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Ismael because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation between Mandy and Ismael.

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for entry "Fire on the Mountain" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi, Max Griffin 🏳️‍🌈 Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Three Tales of the Solstice" Open in new Window. "Fire on the Mountain" Open in new Window. because I discovered the book on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Johnny waiting to summon the light. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the descriptions of the fiddles being played, because I could visualize them in my mind.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the visual descriptions.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jeffhans Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Mystery of the Coprolite." Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the scientific genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the lab using all backup samples to confirm the initial findings. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I suggest using this story in a longer short story or novel that attempts to solve the coprolite mystery.

My favorite part: I like the second paragraph because of the gold and the age of the sample.

Final Thought: The first person point of view and voice are good choices for this story, because they give an authentic feeling to the story.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Quiltingmama Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "An old Christmas Card" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the fireplace mantle moving away from the wall. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the part where James found the Christmas card from World War I.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction between James and Lee.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, R.S. Cooper Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Gospel for Dipsomaniacs" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with the drunk hearing God speak to him. The rhythm moves the narrative, plot, and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the plot of the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this thought-provoking poem about divine revelation.

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Review of Lesson Learned  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, QueenNormaJean Julyishereboom! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Lesson Learned" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Mike's mother's statement. The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it taught a lesson.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson.`

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Last Bird of Autumn" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Sam Adams walking in the mountains. The rhythm moves the poem's narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because it climaxes the poem's plot with Sam attempting to do something to save the birds.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of Sam Adams.

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Review of Silky Word  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Silky Word" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with copywriters being like spiders. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Shwetha because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this because of the comparison of writing to weaving silken words.

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Review of Close Call  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, tj wanderlust-words-in-motion Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Close Call" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Joby's statement. The conversation between Joby and Zak moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Zak and Joby, who are intriguing and sympathetic characters.

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Review of The Corner Shop  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Madelyn Stone Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Corner Shop" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Shelby's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.d

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Shelby and Landon because they are intriguing and sympathetic characters.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of The Watch  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, William Cole Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "The Watch" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 30, 2022)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Gabe attempting to estimate how much time has past since finding the watch. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, felt the watch’s siren call, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the watch.

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Review of By Any Other Name  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Beholden Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "By Any Other Name" Open in new Window. because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (November 30, 2022)" Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Rubella's name. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the names.

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Review of A New Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean Julyishereboom! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "A New Life" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: Professor Michel's question in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Even Prompter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Even Prompter" Open in new Window. "Gannet" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The question in the first line hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the narrative forward at a good pace. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the rhyme on fight and flight.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it told me something about Gannets I did no know.

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Review of Proper Attire  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, amateur40 Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Proper Attire" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the knock on Donald's office door. The interaction and conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found not technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the conversation between Donald and Gloria reveal their personalities.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction between the characters.

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Review of Tolerance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, G. B. Williams Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Tolerance" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the community genre page.

First Thoughts: The description under the title hooked me. The author moves the editorial's narrative forward at a good pace, while encouraging tolerance.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: My favorite part is about embracing all the winter holidays, no matter which ones you celebrate.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written editorial a 5.0 because gives concrete examples of tolerance.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, NewIncarnation Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Scarecrow's Thanksgiving" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the holiday genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Tatters being a happy scarecrow. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the farmer took care of Tatters for the winter.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this beautiful children's story because of Tatters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "In Less Than A Month for Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with Sam Adam's life change in a second. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the plot with a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem story because it had a happy ending.

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Review of Less Than a Month  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, AmyJo-Downhill slide begins! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Less Than a Month" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph establishes the speaker, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the poem's plot and made me smile.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem because of the way it showed the rush of the winter holidays.

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