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, I'm reviewing "In a burial ground"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the speaker, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite verse, You cover your eyes. I like this verse because it shows the speaker's fear.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it showed the speaker's fear.

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#4692072

Review of Poems for Weekly Challenge

for entry "No Pen and Paper for Me!"

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, JCosmos

, I'm reviewing "Poems for Weekly Challenge "

"PPC3: Week 37 - Pen and Paper"

because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while the speaker draws the reader forward with the descriptions.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like stanzas seven and eight. I like stanza seven because it made me laugh. I like stanza eight because it reminded that I sometimes have difficulty reading my own handwriting.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because it makes me smile and laugh.

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#4691891

Review of Fishing For the Past

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

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Hi, Joy

, I am reviewing "Fishing For the Past"

because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid"

page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Buddy's statement. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like Buddy because he is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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#4691885

Review of Outcast

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

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, I am reviewing "Outcast"

because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid"

page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the tent standing out like a ripening blister{/i}. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like the description of the creature attempting to get into the tent.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because the action kept me focused on the plot.

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#4691881

Review of Dream Vacation

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

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Hi, Graywriter

, I am reviewing "Dream Vacation"

because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid"

page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Shelly winning a three day vacation to Mexico. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction between the characters builds the suspense.

What I Like: I like this simile, like the sparkle of sun on gentle waves, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like Paul because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it showed that a vacation that begins with difficulties can turn out to be fun.

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#4691865

Review of Spring

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hi, Espero

, I am reviewing "Spring"

because I discovered it on the "March Superpower Reviewers Review Raid"

page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves to joyful emotions of spring forward at a good pace.

What I Like: This is my favorite line, Beautiful, Renewing, Scampering. I like this line because it shows how joyful spring is.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because of the way it expressed the joy of the season.

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#4691750

Review of My Earth

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, WakeUpAndLive️~scary 2024

, I'm reviewing "My Earth"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the theme, form, and mood. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like repetition of the word Earth because it helps focus the reader's attention on the poem message.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its emphasis on humanity depending on the planet.

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#4691603

Review of Doggone Conversation

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Massive Friendly Derg

, I'm reviewing "Doggone Conversation"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: This is a beautiful tribute to a beloved dog.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to write some stories or poems about Duke.

My favorite part: My favorite part was about the beanbag.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written item a 5.0 because of the way it expressed the author's love for Duke.

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#4691598

Review of Sundown

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Spiritual Dawning

, I'm reviewing "Sundown"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the first stanza because it drew me into the poem and made me smile.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and inspiring poem a 5.0 because it made me think of all the sunsets I have witnessed.

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#4691412

Review of A Starhawk Tale

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Author Joseph J. Madden

, I'm reviewing "A Starhawk Tale"

because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Boruus Noth's mood. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the crazy plan Jesse Forster used to capture Noth.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the interaction between the characters kept me focused on the plot. The interaction also revealed their personalities.

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#4691382

Review of Bus

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham

, I'm reviewing "Bus "

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker attempting to talk to the bus driver. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the bus driver's response about the reason he could not stop the bus.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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#4691380

Review of Destiny is unknown

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog

, I'm reviewing "Destiny is unknown"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of curiosity forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it explained the title.

Final Thought: I giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning destiny.

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#4691293

Review of Weaving Unity

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Igor Skoglund

, I'm reviewing "Weaving Unity"

because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of love forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with love.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0 because it expressed the unity of the human race.

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#4691287

Review of Loving You, Loving Me

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Kenzie

, I'm reviewing "Loving You, Loving Me"

because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, theme, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative, emotions, and plot forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is love.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way this poem expresses both romantic and spiritual love.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it express the emotion of love.

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#4691283

Review of New Year's Prayer

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, ridinghhood-p.boutilier

, I'm reviewing "New Year's Prayer"

because I discovered it on the holiday genre page.

First Thoughts: The first line hooked me because of dance inventing us. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the rhyme on divination and salvation, because both words, in their own way, express the emotions of hope and faith.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it was a form I have never encountered before.

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#4691215

Review of Ghost Hunter

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, Beholden

, I'm reviewing "Ghost Hunter"

because I discovered it in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (March 15, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Haldor's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the description of the graveyard because it was chilling.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written and frightening story a 5.0. because it sent chills up my spine.

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#4691037

Review of DEATH BY TIME CHANGE

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, SSpark

, I'm reviewing "DEATH BY TIME CHANGE"

because I discovered it on the on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Mary hitting the stop button on the alarm. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the scene that described how the could died, because it was a well-written action scene.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the action kept me focused on the characters.

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#4690876

Review of Two Red Eyes

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi, Fictiøn Ðiva the Wørd Weava

, I'm reviewing "Two Red Eyes"

because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 15, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Cathy holding her throbbing foot. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last sentence is my favorite, because it climaxed the plot and made me laugh.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because it made me laugh.

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#4690873

Review of Looking Good

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, Norman

, I'm reviewing "Looking Good"

because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 15, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words complimented each other. The rhythm moved the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it emphasized the speaker's eyesight difficulty.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0, because it made me laugh.

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#4690871

Review of Left Hand of the Artificer

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, Zed

, I'm reviewing "Left Hand of the Artificer"

because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (March 15, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The description of the final ruby falling hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the metaphors and similes used in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. I especially like this simile, an almighty crack like the breaking of a god’s bones.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because of the active and visual descriptions.

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#4690829

Review of God loves you

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"
Happy Anniversary, Chris Breva .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the mood and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The first stanza is my favorite because it drew me into the poem.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the spiritual emotions of faith and hope.

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#4690827

Review of The End is Coming Soon

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"
Happy Anniversary, Paul D .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker welcoming death. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: I like Amanda because she is an intriguing and somewhat sympathetic character.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because the speaker was a vampire, who knew what she wanted.

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#4690673

Review of Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022/2023

for entry "#36 - Inside Looking Out"

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, AmyJo- back to basics again!

, I'm reviewing "Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022/2023"

"#36 - Inside Looking Out"

because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"

.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with on the inside looking out. The rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is hope.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem's plot with hope.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed hope.

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#4690656

Review of Without Words, Where Would We Be

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, 💙 Carly

, I'm reviewing "Without Words, Where Would We Be"

because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven "

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza hooked me with the questions. The rhythm moves the narrative, plot, and emotions forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the questions because they made me think.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me think about answers to the questions.

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#4690638

Review of The Curious Burial of a Beating Heart

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi, Em Catrin

, I'm reviewing "The Curious Burial of a Beating Heart "

because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (March 8, 2023)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the doctor's estimate of eight to ten months. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, watched the seconds bleed away, because it is fresh and expressive.

Final Thought: This story did a good job of showing Brenna's emotional response and the way she finally came to accept the situation.

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