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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, W.P. Gerace , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Spring Reunion"  because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (April 19, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with John Martins waking up to a bird alarm. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a happy ending, with John and Millie being together forever.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of its happy ending.

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Review of Shattered Worlds  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Louis Williams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Shattered Worlds"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, What they seek shall forever be mine. I like this line because it closes the poem with hope.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the smooth flow of the rhythm.

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Review of Final Battle  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, W.P. Gerace , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Final Battle"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the reason Tommy was returning to Park Village. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the battle between Tommy and the plane because it was all action.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way Tommy overcame his fears.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo- back to basics again! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022/2023"  "Week 41 - Tigerjade - A Church service"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: This poem is a beautiful description of a spiritual service.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite verse, Oh Lord - Our Father God - Unto you we give praise. I like this verse because it is the goal of every spiritual service in the world. I also like the way this poem expresses the emotion of faith.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the spiritual emotions.

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Review of Manakin  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Manakin"  because I discovered it on the steampunk genre page.

First Thoughts: Professor Michael Exeter's statement about the perfect personal servant hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the character builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the confrontation between Exeter and Sir Cyril Mosbach because it revealed them as intriguing characters.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because the action kept me focused on the movement of the plot.

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Review of Second Thoughts  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Second Thoughts"  because I discovered it on the cultural genre page.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the way to understand the Second Amendment to the Constitution. The author give insight into the thinking of the framers of the Constitution. In addition he makes a logical and valid argument for rethinking gun ownership and the Second Amendment.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite because it shows that sacrifice is a part of being responsible.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this well-written essay because of its logical argument.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, R.C. McClure , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Is Artificial Intelligence dangerous?"  because I discovered it on the technology genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the question of AI's full capabilities. The author does a good job of giving the dangers of AI.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite because it suggests a solution.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written essay a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning AI.

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Review of Algorithm Gods  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Mandy Writes , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Algorithm Gods"  because I discovered it on the comedy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first line of this poem made me smile. The rhythm moves the narrative and comedy forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first line is my favorite because it establishes the theme and mood of the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem because it made me smile.

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Review of Time To Leave  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Time To Leave"  because I discovered it on the computer genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the message from base. The conversation among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Barsaces , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Androidization of Man"  because I discovered it on the internet/web genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the jungle. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the description of the jungle.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interactions of the characters.

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Review of Chosen As Queen  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Hallee R. Krupp , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Chosen As Queen"  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (April 12, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the speaker's cousin hating her. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I suggest placing a line break between paragraphs so the story is easier to read.

My favorite part: I like the way the interaction among the characters revealed their personalities.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Fiction Factory  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Damon Nomad , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Fiction Factory"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Randy and his friends waiting for their grades. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Rudy and Brenda because they are sympathetic and intriguing characters.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the characters and active descriptions.

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Review of Luck of the Draw  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, W.P. Gerace , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Luck of the Draw"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Ernie Barker being woke up by his neighbor's arguing. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the descriptions show Ernie Barker's personality. I also like the surprise ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way it showed Ernie Barker's character instead of simply describing it.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, foxtale , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Doc's Scuttlebutt Cap"  because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the explanation of a Scuttlebutt Hoist. The descriptions educate the reader the sea scouts.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the prank.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written essay a 5.0 because I learned something new.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, bn skinner , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Uncle Louis' Sepulchre"  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (April 12, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the Duke staring at the tourist. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way this part of the story ended because it aroused my curiosity about the rest of the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this because of the characters.

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Review of The Last Vein  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Sumojo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Last Vein"  because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (April 12, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Reg Scribbs thinking no one would track him to his present location. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was the logical conclusion to the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Pray  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Pensive , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Pray"  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the plot, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm move the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem's plot with hope and faith.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way the plot built towards the climax.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Naomi , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Most Powerful Healing Prayer"  because I discovered it when I searched writing.com for healing prayers.

First Thoughts: The first sentence of this prayer establishes the speaker, theme, and mood. The rest of the prayer expresses the spiritual emotions of both faith and hope.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first sentence is my favorite because it can be both the beginning of prayer and a positive affirmation.

Final Thought: I am giving this prayer a 5.0 because it works as both a prayer and a positive affirmation.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, jackson , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Boy Who Carried a Burlap Sack"  because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (April 12, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the reason the speaker's sister did not give him the letter sooner. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, Little pieces of my heart are gathering in my eyes against my will, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: This letter revealed the speaker emotions, and why the memories were important in making him who he is.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Poems for Weekly Challenge "  "Life Among the Shadows "  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The title hooked me. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while making the reader want to know more about Big Daddy.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poems plot and gives a good reason for Big Daddy wanting to live in the shadow.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it was about Big Daddy.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Mandy Writes , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Pagan Spring Prayer"  because I discovered it on the Read and Review a Newbie page.

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the supplication and emotions of faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the rhyme on near and fear, because it showed faith.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this prayer poem because of the subject.

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Review of Beyond Boundaries  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this free verse poem is love.

What I liked: This is my favorite line, Love is a many folded marvel; it is our need of the hour. I like this line because it state the main lesson of the poem.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its focus on love.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, 🌕 HuntersMoon , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Dragons in the Garden"  because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (April 5, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, plot, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the poem's plot.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the dragon.

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Review of Kindness  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Dragonfly , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Kindness"  because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (April 5, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of how the Apple Gall being was created. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: In this phrase, Patience and hope, I suggest making the h in hope upper case.

My favorite part: I like the lesson this story teaches about kindness and friendship.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the way it demonstrated the lesson of kindness.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Morthva Truveau , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Nightmare of Confusion"  because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (April 5, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first stanza established the speaker, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions of fear forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot of the poem with questions.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it showed the emotion of fear.

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