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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Robin:TheRhymeMaven , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing ""Praised Be He Who Knoweth All"..." , because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza of this prose poem establishes the form, mood, and theme. The rhythm flows easily from line to line and stanza to stanza making this poem easy to read aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to use a larger font so that the poem is easier to read.

I like: This is my favorite line, Goodness flows throughout the universe. I like this line because it states a truth that many people need reminded of.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this prose poem because it encourage the reader to investigate other religions.

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Review of Summer Snow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Summer Snow" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The statement in the first paragraph hooked me. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the snow cones made with real snow and maple syrup.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me smile.

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Review of Temptation  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Temptation" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (June 21, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first sentence hooked me with longing in your eye. The speaker moves the narrative and emotions of desire and faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the choice of speakers because it expresses the feeling of both being young and old. The memory of youth and the desire to relive it.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written inspirational story a 5.0, because it brought back memories of my youth.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Eight-7 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A tap in the night" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the nagging voice urging the man to investigate the sound. The descriptions are part of the action moving the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like this metaphor, heartbeat went from fast to snare drum on a drum line, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax because it left me wondering what would happen next.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exciting story because of the active descriptions.

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Review of Security System  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, OldGuyThinker , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Security System" , because I discovered it under read a newbie .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the family leaving on vacation. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technicalities.

I like: I like this metaphor, a good imitation of a man running on a treadmill, going nowhere very fast, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax because of the money that was found.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because it made me laugh.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, NeedingBeachDuf 🐠⛵🏝️ , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "An old golden retriever" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the golden retriever on the speaker's front porch. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way the dog went after the wolves.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the dog.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Myrtle Armentrout WC 277" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's proclamation of not being a weak man. The speaker moves the plot and narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it reveals the speaker's emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Review of Second chances  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, LightinMind , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Second chances" , because I discovered it on the environmental genre page.

First Impression: Jennifer's question in the first paragraph hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it demonstrated justice.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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Review of Wanya's Day  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, PiriPica , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Wanya's Day" , because I discovered it on the action/adventure genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Wanya making her way through the city. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Wanya because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Unfortunate Memory Lapse WC 253" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Meredith feeling like the trip was a mistake. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax, because it was a surprise.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Meredith.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, OldGuyThinker , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Star Trek Poem (TOS)" , because I discovered it under read a newbie .

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot of the poem and made me smile.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me laugh and smile.

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Review of Promptly Poetry  
for entry "Thanksgiving" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Promptly Poetry"  "Thanksgiving" , because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of nostalgia forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the was the emotions of nostalgia is shown in this poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed nostalgia.

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Review of Escape Route  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, PB Curtis , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Escape Route" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first sentence hooked me with the speaker being on the run. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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Review of Burger and Fries  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, tracker , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Burger and Fries" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (June 14, 2023)" .

First Impression: The speaker moves the plot and action forward at a good pace, while giving the reader a lesson in kindness.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it caused me to think about the story's lesson.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Interesting Case of Mrs Ganly" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (June 14, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Jerome wanting to follow in his father's footsteps. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last sentence is my favorite because it climaxed the plot and made me laugh and smile.

Final thoughts: I am giving this funny story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review of The suitcase  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi, Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The suitcase" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the lightening. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it was the logical ending to the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the descriptions.

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Review of Time Bubbles  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Louis Williams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Time Bubbles" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first line hooked me with everything appearing to fit together. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, press edmy fingers, I suggest changing press edmy to pressed my.

I like: The last line is my favorite because it climaxes the poem without the speaker finding a solution to their problem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the plot.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Dr Gonzo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Down a Gentle Winding Path" , because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of love, hope, and faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it expresses the emotion of love.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed emotions.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, W.P. Gerace , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Golden Anniversary " , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Ellie not remember the significance of the day. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like this simile, like a rose bush for the first time, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the happy ending.

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Review of Four Sails  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, trailerpark bodhisattva , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Four Sails" , because I discovered it on the fantasy genre page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Kajara's ability to camouflage. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to make this a part of a longer story or novel.

I like: I like Kajara because she is an intriguing and somewhat sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Kalaja.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Peony Caper WC 276" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page .

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Abbie reaching through the chain link fence to pick a flower. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Abbie because she is an intriguing character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Runaway Cow WC 652" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker spending twice a year at a resort/working farm. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while recounting fond memories of her childhood.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the description of the cabins, with the ice boxes, and the outhouse.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it brought back memories of my grandparents, who always called a refrigerator an ice box.

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Review of Conscapsis Theory  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Joseph D. Smith , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Conscapsis Theory" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this thesis hook me with the definition of the Theory of Conscapsis.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the logical flow of this thesis, because it gives an explanation about the theory and the basis of the theory.

Final thoughts: This thesis is thought-provoking and well written.

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Review of Loser's Club  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Joto-Kai , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Loser's Club" , because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the stranger statement. The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Kissla because she is an intriguing character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation between the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, fyn , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Never Too Old for a Good Surprise" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (June 7, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Henry slumped by the window. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like both Henry and David because they are sympathetic and intriguing characters.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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