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Review of Paying The Bill  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Dave Ryan , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Paying The Bill" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (July 19, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the price. The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the title because it suggests a plot without giving anything away.

Final thoughts: The climax fitted the plot.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, WakeUpAndLive️~🚬🚭2024 }, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The fortune teller" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (July 19, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the water in the oak beer keg. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the character build the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Hecate because she is an intriguing and somewhat sympathetic character. I also like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the description of the ritual Hecate performed.

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Review of Just Sayin'  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Just Sayin'" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The question in the first stanza hooked me. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the plot and narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite stanza is the last because it climaxed the poem's plot.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem because of it made me smile.

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Review of Overnight Snack  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Overnight Snack" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the alarm set on vibrate. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the conversation between the mouse and the cat because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it made me smile.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI Now What? , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Some Things Just Don't Matter" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The sand castle being fun to build hooked me. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite. I like this paragraph because it stated the lesson of the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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Review of Emilia and Sepet  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, J.R. PETE , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Emilia and Sepet" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Emilia's having doubts about her upcoming wedding. The conversation between Emilia and Sepet moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A missing word in this phrase, she had spoken to him, I suggest adding not{/b{ after had.

A missing word in this sentence, You will become of us before you know it. I suggest adding one after become.

I like: Emilia is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way the conversation between the characters.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI Now What? , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Story with a Moral" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The moral of the story hooked me and made me laugh. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace, while making the reader laugh.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Toby because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review of My Life's Purpose  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, QPdoll , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "My Life's Purpose" , because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the author wondering about the purpose of her life. Each paragraph of this articles gives the reader something to think about concerning their purpose in life.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, Maybe my presence alone is all that's needed. I like this sentence because it is thought-provoking.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written article a 5.0 because it gave me several things to think about concerning my purpose in life.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lone Cypress Workshop , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Ki and spirituality" , because I discovered it while port surfing.

First Impression: The question about spirituality at the beginning of this poem hooked me. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and subject of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of discovery forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: These are my favorite lines. I like these lines because they show the importance of asking questions in relation to spirituality.
This thing that we call ‘spirituality’ is not something specific, but only
the personal investigation into the questions that we create and develop for ourselves.


Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0, because it gave me something to think about concerning spirituality.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Richard ~ Shenanigans INC. , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Ireland He Did Love. Or, Was It Cats?" , because I discovered it under by online authors.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it closed the poem and made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem because of the subject.

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Review of The Snake Tattoo  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, WriterAngel , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Snake Tattoo" , because I discovered it under by online writers .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Tara's comment. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite simile, I feel like a dragon who just swallowed flames down the wrong tube. I like this simile because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final thoughts: The climax was a bit of a surprise because I did not expect Tara to be a witch.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, AmyJo- back to basics again! , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Jots and Tittles and other Random Things"  "Expression Within 40 Words - Lesson - for 7/15/2023 - WC-35" , because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven "  forum page.

First Impression: The poem teaches a lesson and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, and the narrative gives the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the lesson this poem teaches.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the lesson it teaches.

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Review of faith at Sunrise  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "faith at Sunrise" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (July 12, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: A typo in this word unviverse, I suggest changing the spelling to universe.

I like: These are my favorite lines, I like these lines because the sum up the sum up the mystical experience.
}And knew that the unviverse
Was alive

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the mystical experience.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Wolfius , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Ferocious Squirrel" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (July 12, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker seeing a squirrel. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it gave the lesson the speaker learned.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story because the helped the reader under stand the lesson.

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Review of Antifaith  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Dr Gonzo , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Antifaith" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (July 12, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph of this monologue hooked me with the author's confession. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while speculating on truth and faith.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the author's logical approach to this subject because it lets the reader consider truth as related to faith.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this monologue because it gave me something to think about concerning truth.

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Review of 25 December 2022  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, Odessa Molinari , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reading and review "25 December 2022"  because the title aroused my curiosity,

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Santa being drunk. the conversation moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the climax and the laghter.

What I Like: The last sentence is my favorite because it made me laugh.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Louis Williams , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I picked "The Meaning of Giving"  to read and review because the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the city. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

What I Like: I like the lesson this story taught about giving. I also liked the climax because it was a happy ending.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, brown forelock of her air, I suggest changing air to hair.

A typo in this phrase, as he held it tight, I suggest changing he to she.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson about giving.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Joseph , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Never will I say Goodbye " , because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page..

First Impression: The rhythm and rhyming words of this beautiful poem compliment each other. The rhythm moves t he spiritual emotions of faith, certitude, and hope forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way this line, The forever sweet bye and bye, is repeated through out the poem because it emphasizes the emotions of faith and certitude.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this poem because they expressed emotions.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Charley , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Alien Conversation" , because I discovered it on the nonsense genre page.

First Impression: Jay's question in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation moves the plot and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax with the aliens going to see Abe Lincoln.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me laugh.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, G. B. Williams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Moment at The Front Porch Ministries" , because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page..

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the happiness of the people. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while describing The Front Porch Ministries through the action in the story.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way the speaker told about The Front Porch Ministries.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspirational story because of the way it showed people being helped.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Netty , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "“ THROUGH GOD’S EYES " , because I discovered it on The Hub under Newest Static Items.

First Impression: The poem follows the free verse form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it reveals the emotions of hope and love.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem because of the subject.

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Review of A quiet evening  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Eight-7 , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A quiet evening" , because I discovered it on the read & review a newbie page.

First Impression: The third paragraph hooked me with Paul cupping his hand over his daughter's mouth. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters build the suspense.

Suggestions: A possible typo in this phrase, John held his hand out toward her. Who is John?

I like: I like this simile, feeling like he was on an escalator walking the wrong way, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action, which revealed the characters fears. I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the way the descriptions kept my focus on the plot and the characters.

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Review of Ten Again  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, ridinghhood-p.boutilier , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Ten Again" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and speaker. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it made me think about solutions for the problems facing humanity today.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written poem because it made me think.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Jeff , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Stand-Up And Deliver" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" .

First Impression: Charlie's statement in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like Charlies because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed this amusing story because of Charlie.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jonblair , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "MATT DUGGAN - DETECTIVE SERIES" , because I discovered it in "Mystery Newsletter (July 5, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Matt's statement. The conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the climax because it aroused my curiosity about the rest of the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Matt and Delia.

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