First Impression: The first stanza established the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming world compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the plot with a happy ending.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written poem because of the musical rhythm.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and frightening emotions forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the poem's plot, with a chilling ending.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the way it explained the noises houses make at night.
First Impression: The poem follows the stated form and looks good on the page. The rhythm flows easily form line to line and moves the emotions of faith and trust forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last line is my favorite because it closes the poem with faith.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the emotions it expressed.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the alarm waking Benny up. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story, because it is a happy ending.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed this story because of its lesson on never giving up hope.
First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the problem with the parking lot. The dialogue moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.
I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story, because it made me smile.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.
First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the speaker's description of the boy. The conversation between the speaker and the boy moved the plot forward at a good pace, while revealing the speaker as a compassionate individual.
What I liked: My favorite part of this story is the lesson about how to treat others. I also like the nonjudgmental way the speaker treated and talked to the young man selling juice.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written and thought-provoking story because of the lesson it taught.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes to form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot of the poem.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspiring poem because of its theme.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the woman running up to the bus-stop. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters bu lds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax was my favorite part of the story, because it was a happy ending.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.
First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the description of the apartment. The conversation between Ronnie and the Devil moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax made me smile because it was nice to see the devil lose one.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story.
First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Mr. Jasper's question. The conversation and interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax because it was the logical conclusion to the story.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Derek's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: Derek's reaction to the spider. As a person who suffers from arachnophobia, I know it was authentic.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Derek's reaction to the spider.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's excitement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: I like the similes used in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. This is my favorite simile, Rory's voice carries like cannon fire in a cavern.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exciting story because of the speaker.
First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the Devil's bounty hunter. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax was the logical conclusion to the story and suggested that justice always wins.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character getting what he deserved.
First Impression: The second paragraph of this non-fiction essay hooked me with the description of the rainbow. The author moves the narrative forward giving logical evidence of why she believes in God.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: Paragraph seven is my favorite because it shows that understanding how a rainbow is created in nature does not prevent one from believing in God.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0, because it gives the reader something to think about concerning belief in God.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and subject of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of sorrow and mourning forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it emphasizes the injustice of racial prejudice.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0, because of its message about the injustice of prejudice.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the man working. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between Gabe and Kastin build the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only question is who is Albertus?
I like: My favorite part is the description of the Sage Gem and the way it was set in the ring.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Gabe and Kastin.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the DeathBringers. The descriptions of the Deathbringers and the way they kill GeOn move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only question is what did the GeOn look like.
I like: Paragraph four is my favorite because it described the DeathBringers in detail.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story because of the DeatheBringers.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the soldiers walking the police officers down the street. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite part of the story was the mother's answer to her son. I like the answer because it was thought-provoking,
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning safety.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the Hermes launch reminding people of the importance of the Lunar colony. The description of the technology used kept the reader focused on the plot. The interaction of the characters built the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is a well-written and fresh simile, looked like an inverted candle flame in the inky vacuum surrounding the moon. It is visual and descriptive, letting the reader visualize it in their mind.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way the descriptions of the technology was made part of the action.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Amanda's conversation with her mother returning. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite simile, each beat sounding like some runaway train that would speed off its track to a deadly end. I like this simile because it is fresh and descriptive.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the of the descriptions. They kept me focused on the characters and the movement of the plot.
First Impression: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem are mourning and longing.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The first and last lines of this poem are my favorite. I like these line because they contain the most emotion.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the emotion of sorrow.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Shamus power-walking. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.
I like: I like the climax because it was a happy ending and the logical conclusion to the story.
Final thoughts: Detective Anderson is right about dog people and cat people they can both be just as crazy.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the way Sophia discovered the library. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
In the first section Sophia's talent, personality, and fears are revealed. This helps readers to sympathize with her. The second section reveals Sophia as an unselfish person, who is willing to help her village advance no matter what difficulties she has to face. The third section help readers understand why Sophia and John are a good match.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite part of the story is the climax, because it suggested that Sophia and John would live contented and happy lives.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Sophia, which is a sympathetic and intriguing character.
First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with DNA changes. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The first half of the story reveals both Zhang Jin's personality and fears.
The best part of the story's second section is the description of the lab hidden in the Tibetan Himalayas. The description was detailed enough for readers to visualize it in their minds. This section also reveals that Zhang, despite his attempt to suppress it, has a conscience.
The climax of this story is the logical conclusion of Zhang's conscience coming realizing what could, and probably would, happen if the lab and everything associated with it weren't destroyed.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: Zhang is an intriguing and sympathetic character, who is changed by the project he worked on.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Zhang and the lesson the story suggested.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Nora being dragged by a super mutant. The descriptions are part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite simile, like one would snap a stalk of celery. I like this simile because it is fresh and descriptive.
Final thoughts: The description of the transformation of the women was well-written, with enough details on how it was done to satisfy any questions the reader may have.
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