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Themes, Elements, and Tropes. Some things that Science Fiction is best known for.

Central International Airport

An airport with destinations and new beginnings. Take a trip.

OLDWARRIOR'S POETRY FOLDER

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Memorial Day in August

Inspired by the War Memorial in the rose gardens at Brooke Street and Mount in Missoula.

THE LEGEND

Octave is given for the rebellion a team, a ship, and a surprise. Babymetal song Inso

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Charlotte's Castle

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Alfaz Jo khamoshi samjh na sake

“Yeh nazm un jazbaat par hai jo hum kehna to chahte hain, magar keh nahi paate. .”

Alfaz Jo khamoshi samjh na sake

“Yeh nazm un jazbaat par hai jo hum kehna to chahte hain, magar keh nahi paate. .”

The Question of Why and How

Probably doesn’t have a rhythm, I am sleep deprived.

Things I Regret Saying

A raw poem about words spoken in pain, and the heartbreak they left behind.

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Lightning and Wind

A moment of glory remembered.

My First Duchess

The Dukes of Malvern always married twice. The second for themselves and the first for ...

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Memorial Day in August

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#4678065

Review of The Art Contest

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Official "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"

Judges' Review

I am reviewing The Art Contest as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"

October 2022. Thanks for entering!

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Edith attempting to view the poster. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense, while revealing their personalities.

What I like: I like Edith Murgan because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character, with the possibility of being an strong woman. I also like the climax because it showed that talent wins.

Final Remarks: I enjoyed reading this story because of Edith Murgan.

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#4678061

Review of Once Every Year

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Official "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"

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I am reviewing Once Every Year as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"

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First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the house disappearing in three days and taking whoever was it it along. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I like: I like Jasmine and Max because they are sympathetic and intriguing characters. I also like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Remarks: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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#4678060

Review of The Hauptmann Residence

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Official "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"

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I am reviewing The Hauptmann Residence as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"

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First Impression: The third paragraph hooked me with Noah's reason for being fascinated with the house. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense. The interaction among the characters reveals their personalities.

What I like: I like this simile, like a used-up whore wearing cosmetics, because it is fresh and descriptive.

I also like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Remarks: I enjoyed reading this story because of Noah.

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829

#4678002

Review of The Dress

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Jacky

, I'm reviewing "The Dress"

because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Cynthia's statement. The interaction and conversation among the character move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Jean.

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#4677729

Review of They Had the Proof

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Pernell Rogers

, I'm reviewing "They Had the Proof"

because I discovered it on the mythology genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the needle bending. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the description of the way the scientist investigated the Sasquatch, because it was scientifically sound.

Final Thought: The climax surprised me even though it was the logical conclusion to the story.

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#4677716

Review of Computer Trouble

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, QueenNormaJean Junesun24hours

, I'm reviewing "Computer Trouble"

because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Peggy declaring the computer broken. The conversation and interaction between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense and the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it made me smile.

Final Thought: The first person point of view and voice was a good choice for this story, because it emphasized the humor.

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#4677652

Review of Carnal Appetites

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi, brom21

, I'm reviewing "Carnal Appetites "

because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the people gathering the bread seeds in baskets. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the lesson this story taught about testing God.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it gives the reader something to think about concerning testing God.

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#4677650

Review of Passing on the Mantle of Shame

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, DestinyAwaitsDarling

, I'm reviewing "Passing on the Mantle of Shame"

because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the speaker, the theme, and the subject. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the commanding tone the speaker uses in this poem because it shows they are taking control of their own emotions.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it gives the reader something to think about concerning abuse.

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#4677649

Review of The Book

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi, brom21

, I'm reviewing "The Book"

because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Eridian entranced by the gray sky. The conversation and interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the lesson about loving one's enemies this story taught.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of lesson about loving your enemies.

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#4677577

Review of A Question to Humanity

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, cheshire

, I'm reviewing "A Question to Humanity"

because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Thoughts: The title of this article aroused my curiosity. The questions are those that each human being must ask themselves. The answers can only be found through an independent search for the answer by each human being.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the questions because the require the readers to look within themselves and question their own preconceived or taught opinions.

Final Thought: I am giving this article a 5.0 because it ask the hard questions that everyone must eventually find an answer for.

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#4677488

Review of How Do You Know Him?

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, G. B. Williams

, I'm reviewing "How Do You Know Him?"

because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page.

First Thoughts: The title hooked me and drew me into this non-fiction essay. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last line is my favorite because it caused me to think about how I know God.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written, thought-provoking item a 5.0, because it made me thing about how I know God.

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#4677320

Review of Home Sweet Home

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, billywilcox, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating

, I'm reviewing "Home Sweet Home"

because I discovered it on the horror/scary genre page.

First Thoughts: The third paragraph hooked me with Charlies being ripe with rot. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the similes and metaphors used in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. I especially like this simile gnawed their way out of him like worms.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the action kept me focused on the plot and the main characters.

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#4677314

Review of A Helping Hand

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi, matelot

, I'm reviewing "A Helping Hand"

because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 16, 2022)"

.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's description of the upper floor. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense and the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this simile, like a drunk attempting unsuccessfully to get a key in a lock, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because it made me laugh.

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#4677228

Review of Even Prompter

for entry "Pain Decides"

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Beholden

, I'm reviewing "Even Prompter"

"Pain Decides"

because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it suggest acquired wisdom.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it of how it shows age and pain.

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#4677211

Review of The Runaway

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Hi, Obasi Naomi

, I'm reviewing "The Runaway"

because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (November 16, 2022)"

.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the main character knowing he had to get away. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I suggest using this story as the beginning of a longer story or novel about the main character and what he finds when he reaches the place the road leads.

My favorite part: I like the main character because he is a sympathetic and intriguing person.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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#4677207

Review of The Academy for the Riding of Dogs

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Hi, jackson

, I'm reviewing "The Academy for the Riding of Dogs"

because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (November 16, 2022)"

.

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Old Fraidy Cat being a non-denominational cat. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters build the suspense and laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like this metaphor, a warm wind fiddled its way through the branches of the sweet apple tree, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the description of the cat riding the dog.

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#4677135

Review of Strange Bedfellows

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Hi, Aiva Raine

, I'm reviewing "Strange Bedfellows"

because I discovered it on the crime/gangster genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Merrick being an assassin. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to use Merrick again in either a short story or novel.

My favorite part: I like Merrick because he is an intriguing characters.

Final Thought: The action kept me focused on the plot and the main character.

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#4677113

Review of Pride and Punishment

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

Hi, brom21

, I'm reviewing "Pride and Punishment "

because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Lucas sneering at the poor man. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I liked the lesson this story taught about helping the poor.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the lesson about helping the poor.

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#4677030

Review of A Very Unlikely Meeting

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Kotaro

, I'm reviewing "A Very Unlikely Meeting"

because I discovered it on the community newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Len hesitating to enter the room. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the name to the charter.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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#4677008

Review of Lost Again

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Jacky

, I'm reviewing "Lost Again"

because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the message of the GPS. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was the logical conclusion to the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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#4676951

Review of The Granson Place

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi, billywilcox, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating

, I'm reviewing "The Granson Place"

because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker driving to the Granson Place. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A possible typo in this phrase, infamous Grandson Place. Is word Granson or Grandson?

My favorite part: I like the similes used in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. This is my favorite simile, the veil of darkness that hung like folded wings.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because the climax sent chills up my spine.

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#4676939

Review of Day to Day happenings in my life

for entry "Sewers of Paris"

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi, Sumojo

, I'm reviewing "Day to Day happenings in my life"

"Sewers of Paris"

because I discovered it on the "I Write: Enter the Second Decade"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The quote from Victor Huge aroused my curiosity about the Sewers of Paris. The information about the Paris sewers hold the reader's attention and reveals another approach building sewers the work as they are supposed to.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the part about the museum giving a history of the sewers.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this educational entry because it gave me an entirely new vision of sewers.

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#4676929

Review of The Tower

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, QueenNormaJean Junesun24hours

, I'm reviewing "The Tower"

because I discovered it on the comedy genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the man demanding that the woman let down her hair. The conversation between the pair moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the message about love being the only true magic.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it made me smile.

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#4676928

Review of The Message

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Jacky

, I'm reviewing "The Message"

because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"

forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker being late getting home because of the traffic jam. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the speaker's decision to walk the dog when the lights went out.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the message about not focusing so much on work.

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#4676925

Review of AI & I

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, LightinMind

, I'm reviewing "AI & I"

because I discovered it on the computer genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the question. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense. The descriptions of the speaker's AIs enhance the action of the story, while revealing the speaker's personality to the reader.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because the interaction of the characters kept me focused on the plot.

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