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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "WEATHER OR NOT: is the question"  because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with God wanting a relationship with us. In this article the author emphasizes waiting on God's timing, which is not like our timing or wants.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the author emphases waiting on God's timing.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this article because of the subject.

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Review of Little Bird  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean 4th's Loud Here , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Little Bird"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Mary Jean being a bird in her first play. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the climax.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, G. B. Williams , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Lord, This is All I Have"  because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page.

First Thoughts: This article is a beautiful reminder to count our blessings.

Suggestions: A possible typo in this phrase, there never leave. Did you mean there or they.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, Assurance – of life after death! I like this line because it reminds us what we have to look forward to.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this item because it draws the reader out of their own problems.

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Review of Trouble  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJean 4th's Loud Here , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Trouble"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The statement in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation between the animals moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Abner because he acted like a typical cat, setting and listening to every conversation.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because it was about cats and dogs.

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Review of No Souvenirs  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, NeedingBeachDuf 🐠⛵🏝️ , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "No Souvenirs"  because I discovered it on the "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker watching the woman wait for her ride. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problem.

My favorite part: I like the smooth flow of the plot from the beginning to the climax.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Review of True Crime?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, B.C. Green , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "True Crime?"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (January 18, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with the smell from the car's backseat. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the metaphors in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. I especially like this metaphor giving his head a saintly glow.


Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the police stop in Kansas.

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi, Igor Skoglund , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Inventor and the Flood"  because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (January 18, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the rain and the city. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Lena because she is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Lena.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Espinado , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Transnian Contract"  because I discovered it in "Action/Adventure Newsletter (January 18, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: Faran's statement about a contract hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the logical and methodical way that the crew went about looking for the M-class planet.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, ruwth , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "ruwth is writing..."  "~ Wanting to Dream Again ~"  because it was the item ahead of me on "Twenty-three in Eleven " .

First Thoughts: The title of this entry aroused my curiosity. The author moves the monologue forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the questions because they are thought-provoking and cause readers to contemplate their own answers.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this item because of the thought-provoking questions.

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Review of Let The Light In  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Jeff , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Let The Light In"  because I discovered it on The Hub under Random Reads.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the detective taping the microphone to Marty's chest. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was the logical conclusion to the story.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Marty.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Lemuel Gulliver's Island Adventure "  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the arrow in Lemuel Gulliver’s left arm. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it showed the Gulliver did not give up easily.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Espero , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "What Is A Pastrami Sandwich Anyway?"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with something being on Harvey's mind for a few years. The interaction and conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Harvey's reaction to his wife's pastrami sandwich. He is right, a pastrami sandwich is not a pastrami sandwich unless it is on rye bread.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Norman and Alfred WC: 143"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: Alfred's statement in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation between Alfred and Norman move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I enjoyed the conversation because it showed two different sides of the same person.

Final Thought: This was a fun read because it showed at each personality was different from the other.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jeffhans , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "How else can you explain the Helium?"  because I discovered it on the sci-fi genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with there being a data set most people are not aware of. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last sentence is my favorite because of the reference to security clearance and history.

Final Thought: The first person point of view was a good choice for this story because it gave it authenticity.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, BrianKCompton, Here I Go Again , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Poetic Referendum(s) On Life"  "January PPC prompts"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2023-2024)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The couplet form fits the theme and emotions of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words move the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I don't think it need any more punctuation than it already has.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem on a meditative note.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed spiritual emotions.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sox and Sandals , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Weekly Goals for 2024"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with J.J.'s mother able to see sounds. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the mother's ability to see what her son's cries meant.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the mother's ability to see the colors of the sounds.

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Review of Old Cunning.  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Pennywise , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Old Cunning."  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the dog having a conversation with an Arabian horse. The conversation between the horse, the dog, and the bird move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the question. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: I like the climax, because it was chilling to think one's shadow can eventually get revenge.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Review of A Kitten Calls  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Caden and Parker going to investigate the noise. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction between Caden and Parker build the suspense.

What I liked: I like the climax because it was a happy ending and proved the Friday the 13th isn't always unlucky.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the lesson about helping other creatures.

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Review of OCTOBER  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Penelope Moonbeam , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "OCTOBER"  because I discovered it on the activity genre page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is joy and fun.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first line is my favorite because it establishes the season.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this well-written children's poem because it gave the most important reason for celebrating Halloween.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi, Sam N. Yago , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , reviewing "Pre-Flight Jitters"  because I discovered it on the action/adventure genre page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's choice of drinks. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like the speak because he is an intriguing and sympathetic individual.

Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.

}Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the smooth flow of the plot. The first person point of view was a good choice because it revealed the main character's personality.

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Review of Love on Ice  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, QueenNormaJean 4th's Loud Here , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Love on Ice"  because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the car spinning out on the ice. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

}Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of The Airport Thief  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Espero , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Airport Thief"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the police officers attempting to control traffic in a snow storm. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction between the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it showed that justice can win.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Espero , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Shopping With a 15 Year Old Teenager"  because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Donna asking if Lindsay was ready to go shopping. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the climax because it showed that teenagers can make good decisions sometimes.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Jason P. Hunt , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Star Trek: No Beach to Walk On"  because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (January 4, 2023)" .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the Enterprise delivering Lenore Karidian to Starbase Eleven. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversations and interactions among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite sentence, the universe had a way of working things out in its own way. I like this sentence because it is a true statement.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters and the plot.

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