Just thought I'd drop by and let you know what a joy
it was to come into your port and read this wonderful
piece of art, right from a gifted heart. Thanks to you
and the Story Master who have made Writing.Com the place to be from anywhere on any map. I live and dream Writing.Com. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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Hope you are feeling better! Sorry to hear you've been sick. This is a great piece of work and I hope that getting those thoughts out will help ease the pain.
I like the way you spoke your mind and your honesty was to the point. Thank you for sharing and take care.
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I love this poem; it brings excitement to my heart.
I love poems and this one goes beyond many that
I have read or written. The person in your life is wrapped in so much love they must be shinning like new gold. I look forward to reading more of your work and welcome to Writing.Com. Keep that fire and word use going it's lovely.
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M Duci
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I found your poem of breaking the chains that bind very haunting and hopefully for the person they were
able to get to where they were going. I felt the pain
and the need to get away. What I would have like to hear more of who or what it was she was running from.
Over all very good read, just a few little typo's that are easy to correct.
Couldnt (Couldn't)
Cant (Can'T)
Keep writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
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M Duci
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I like the Prologue to this little tale and I can't wait to continue reading the story. You from what I can see have away of locking your reader into your web. I don't normally read little shop of horrors before bedtime, but I couldn't take my eyes off the page. It is very good so far, and I think you should
enter it into a weekly contest. I'd like to welcome you to Writing.Com and hope you'll love here as much as we do.
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M Duci
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Yes they do randomly fly, I've been watching them
flip, flop, twirl all day! Even though it's now Spring in some places it still looks like fall here in Cal. today anyway. Ah! I'm so looking for Spring. I hope your granddaughter stays forever young and can still see the beauty in the falling leaves always. Welcome to Writing.Com and I'll drop by for a longer visit soon.
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M Duci
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I've never thought such wonderful things about
crickets before now! But you've given me a whole
new out-look on that small noisey creature. I enjoyed your poem so much, about how they play their ragtime music that I can now see a picture of the whole band playing, and it's great.
Thank you so much for sharing this little cutie and
good luck in the contest.
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What a joy to read your 'Sigh of Spring,' Here in California we are a little late in seeing Spring this year. I'm keeping my eyes peeled towards the sky for the little Monarch butterfly.
I like the colors you used in your piece and it made me feel like Spring had truly Sprung.
Good luck in the contest and welcome to Writing.Com.
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I love this piece! There is not much more that I
can say. The love that you share with your husband
is beautiful and your words to him are divine.
Good luck in the contest and welcome to Writing.Com.
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What I like about your poem is everything! I like
that the character is asking for help to get through
life's little challenges that we all must go through. I also love who they are asking for this help without telling.
I really love this last stanza:
'Tear down the walls around me.
Draw me from my shell.
Lift me from the darkness,
And save me from myself.'
Good luck in the contest and welcome to Writing.Com
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It is always so sad when we lose a love one to death!
But when we lose them to decline is also very sad. I found your story taking form and I hope that you'll get it all down before to long. Keep writing and welcome to Writing.Com. Good luck in the contest.
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I found this Sojourner so lovely and relaxing.
I felt I was on another plane and I could have stayed
there a while longer. Good luck in the contest
and welcome to Writing.Com.
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I enjoyed your poem very much of a love that
had been shattered and lost. My favorite lines;
'The boundaries forsaken
Enabling expansive grief.'
I thought it done in very good taste and found no errors what so ever. Good luck in the contest and welcome to Writing.Com.
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What a lovely way to talk to ones self and seems you got that little voice to quite down! For now. Everyone
needs someone, and once you get used to having a house full, it'll get better of course. You never know when the shoe will be on the other foot, and that same little guy will be the one to look after you. Take care and enjoy.
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M Duci
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Welcome to Writing.Com. I love your story of the little butterfly that tried to make it up that mountain.
I also very much liked your ending. I felt my own breath catch a few times as she tired and lost her strength but never stopped trying. I hope you write more stories on the butterfly, for I love butterflies and will read almost anything written on them! I see them as tiny angels. Take care, have a great week.
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M Duci
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What a beautiful poem, it just tore my heart to bits.
I feel so sad that couples who have known such sweet love to begin with, then stand by as love drowns and drifts away. This is one of the most beautiful poems I've read and I've read so, so many. Each stanza tore at my heart, but this last one caused me to be temporarily blinded by my tears.
'If only I had said to you that very first time
When hurt crept in and love seemed out of rhyme,
"Love is not enough, I really have to go,"
If only are the saddest words I know.'
Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent.
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The very thought that this could happened to someone
I know and love would cause me more pain then even
your story can tell. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for entering your story in this weeks contest.
What I like about your story is that it made me laugh, and it read like nothing I've ever read before.
I don't think you need all those caps in the reference of yourself, but that is just a suggestion. Over all I loved it and look forward to seeing you next week.
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Welcome to Writing.Com from a member of the review group "I Remember When." Thank you for sharing your
little poem with us and hope you'll have many happy
hours here at WDC. In your poem you have many comma's
and followed them with capitals which isn't nessasary.
Unless you meant for them to be on sparate lines like this. You might want to check out this link in order to learn how to do bitems. Best wishes.
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Sadness fills the house,
The rooms seem dark and small,
The silence is depressing as the
Children sit and morn.
Their faces filled with questions,
Their eyes are full of tears,
Yesterday is vanishing because
Their friend has disappeared.
To them there’s no tomorrow if their
Buddy isn’t there,
To them there’s no tomorrow
And they’ve ceased to even care.
Thank you for entering your story in this weeks contest.
I have to thank you for clearing up the myth about the job of Human Resources Manager. Every time I speak to the very important Human Resources Manager, who happens to be a member of my family I'll have to run out side because I don't really want to hurt his feelings and by laughing every time he tells us how busy his job is.
This was a great read and a bigger laugh. Thanks for sharing. Hope to see you with another one next week.
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Thank you for submiting your story for this weeks contest.
I found 'The Birth of Roy,' a enjoyable read and I was very much into your characters. I thought the description of the house, the people who lived there and their descriptions very visual and not a bit over done. Thank you for sharing and looking forward to the next sketch.
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Great take on the Big Eddie character, you made a hit with me with this character analyses. I can't wait until you've written the story to find out just what it
is that Big Eddie doesn't want to make look all messy like. Looking forward to reading it.
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M Duci
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What an interesting story you've written, It was a good read from beginning to end. I see that is about someone in history or is it fiction? It reads very well and for it length I could have read on! For it kept me on the edge of my chair wondering if ever she would get away from those awful people. Thank you for sharing.
I did not see any errors or grammar that needed correction. Please write on and welcome to Writing.Com.
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M Duci
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Thank you so much for this beautiful story of such lasting love. I think back to how it would have been
had my own parents lived to see fifty years together.
My own Father passed shortly after my Mother, they'd
been married twenty-five years and loved one another until the end. She at forty-seven and he at forty-nine.
Too young, younger then I am now. Thank you for sharing, I hope this story will not end here!
Great writing as always a joy to read your work.
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