Where have you been hiding yourself? You have written the book of books! The essay of essay's. You are a talented gift from the Father. Thank you so much for this, for these are my own beliefs and I know that my Father loves me unconditionally.
I too have heard these same sentiments in my life time and I continue to do his good works, and leave them to theirs of talking down and slamming all that don't see it just their way. Like you I will hang on to what I know and feel in my center of being and my love for this kind and always present Father until my end.
Continue the wonderful gifts he has presented to you.
I am reviewing your story today for the Newbie Challenge Contest.
I feel that you have a wonderful fill for Sci-Fi. You've done a very good job with your character content making them seem very believable. I only noticed one little thing that made me want to ask a question of you.
You wrote:'Tilane felt himself crawling across the floor,' how about 'tilane pulled himself across the floor.' Just a suggestion. Good luck in the Newbie Challenge Contest.
Sincerely
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I am reviewing your short story for the Newbie Challenge.
Night, I would have loved to hear what the aunt and uncle called unpure, and what it was that made the young girl so different that it would cause her to cut herself so deeply. I'd like to know if this is the end of the story or is there more to come. Thank you so much for sharing this sad story and good luck in the Newbie Challenge Contest.
Sincerely
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I am reviewing your short story today for the 16th Newbie Challenge.
I must tell you that I enjoyed your story very much, and it does seem like a life that every young women would desire.
I love the mangaka form of art and would love to see some of yours. I'd hope one day that you might display some of your work for us to view.
I found now errors in your work, and I wish you luck in the Newbie Challenge Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Sincerely
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You've just made my day, with this lovely expression of Season's passing. I feel the same way, each day that I awake and find a new and wonderful day that
I'm still walking, talking, going about my business just like any other day. Seeing the children blooming into such beautiful little people and being able to thank God' for another useful day. Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck in the Newbie Challenge.
Sincerely
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What a great read, and you've just hit the nail on the head, so to speak. Yes the drop back down to earth can be a little tough, but not to worry you'll reach your goals. I must admit, that I had to get up and go for water because of laughing so hard. You're a very talented writer and I wish you luck in the Newbie Challenge. I really loved the last line. Thanks for sharing.
Sincerely
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I will have to admit this was a very confusing dream, as it must have been to the dreamer. I think dreams are meant to be confusing, wouldn't you agree. This dream took on so many forms and left me clearly shaken.
The rhyme and rhythm are wonderful, and I saw no errors. Good luck in the Newbie Challenge, and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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Furaha, dear you have again touched the soul and rendered me speechless once again.
The meaning surely speaks for itself and heaven has intervened to bring closure. Each stanza is a story within it's very lines, a few yet to unfold will come in time. Lovely, and timely it deserved that beautiful Awardicon, congratulations.
Sincerely
Marlena
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That day stands out in mind, and will for the rest of my life. Such beautiful children, and somehow you make me feel better about them never having anymore pain. For the pain the world felt on the day they were found is incomprehensible.
A mother with son's and grandson's of my own I can't even imagine the pain that I would have felt had they be mine. Yes they will be loved and remembered forever.
Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us, and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
You've written so much for so short a piece. I love your way of writing the details of the event are so vivid and clear. What happens in that jungle brought fresh tears to my eyes. I had a cousin in those jungles and he never got to marry his sweetheart, the story could have been his and thousands of others just like them. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and welcome to Writing.Com. It's a wonderful place to let loose all those old emotions.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I'd like to say this is a wonderful very enlightening piece of work. You are such a gifted talent. Your writing is far ahead of your time and age for fourteen. I look forward to reading your work at age twenty-one. I have read and met many gifted young people in your age group on the WDC, and I must say I'm proud to know all of you. Thank you Toni for sharing. Welcome to Writing.Com
Sincerely
M Duci
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This was a lovely tribute, to beautiful lady. I've never seen her but I call her beautiful because she lived to see ninety-eight, and your description of her and her life is so surreal.
Funny how the rain will bring up so many memories from the past, perhaps that's why it rains so often.
'42, she can still hear the screech of tires on wet road and feel the impact of the crash the claimed her son.' Tiny little error 'the' should be that.
I enjoyed reading this piece so much and welcome to Writing.Com. I Love your work.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Thank you story Master, for getting that person's head on straight. There are many so-called writing workshops out there, but none like Writing.Com. This is a fun, peaceful, inspiring place to come and express yourself by writing, venting your thoughts down on your site; maybe it's kept a few people from harming themselves, or someone else. Here you may read wonderful, insightful stories, poetry, and it's open 24/7. I love it here, love the friends I've met here. The Story Master and Story Mistress are top's in my book, Writing.Com in my humble opinion is like going to a fun birthday party every day all day long.
Thank you Writing.Com I love you.
Sincerely
M Duci
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It's a one of a kind as far as I can tell.
I'm sure it's possible that this form has been
done before, I have not seen it myself.
When reading the poem in parentheses I started from
the bottom up to the beginning. Than I read it down
from top to bottom. Up reads well, down reads well.
No errors could I find.
You have a great read, welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a beautiful poem of lost love. I could feel the aloneness, sadness even the overwhelmed feelings expressed in your humble words. I would have to say these three lines I will treasure. Lovely, thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
'It's like a glass box
I see you, I hear you
I can't touch you'
Sincerely
M Duci
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The moment I read Amon-Re, I thought of the Egyptian God' Amon-Re meaning, "The Hidden One." According to Theban doctrine Amon-Re was creator of all things. He was over all the other Gods' and ruler of things concerning fertility, the wind, water, and all things held secrete. I enjoyed reading your poem and if one remembers their Mythology Class, they won't have a hard time understanding what your little poem is trying to convey. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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You have just captured my heart with this poem.
I love to read, write, and think the very same
way you do. I love in the same way, When I think
of my special friend who is far away, I can't
wait until I'm there with them. I have so
much time to think about them, smile about
them, and write about them.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Have you entered into any of the Newbie
Contests? If you'd like too; Let me know I'll
send you some links. Have a wonderful bright and
cheerful day. Thanks for stopping by today you've made my day even brighter.
Sincerely
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How you bring memories of my girl hood racing back to me. The days when I thought I was the only person who had dreams of growing up and spreading my wings. I may have used a few of the same words too, to no one in particular, just preparing to make my place among the grown. I love your story. Thank you for sharing.
Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely
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I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed your story about Bubba and those Blue Ridge Mountains. I'm sure I will get to read more about him soon. You have painted a beautiful picture of those Blue Ridge mountains, and if I close my eyes I can see 'ole granma cooking that ham and eggs. Even bopping you on the head, I can see the clear blue sky's and smell the fresh air. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us and welcome to Writing.Com. I know you're going to love it here.
Great story telling and I look forward to the next chapter.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I like your poem very much; the story is one that I hear quite often, but never quite the same. Yours
is very sad and the character seems to have lost more than just his soul.
Why the many hyphens placed throughout the piece? If they have no real reason for being there it may be better to remove them! Replace with comma's and exclamations.
Just a suggestion, it's a very good piece. Good luck in the Newbie Challenge Contest.
Sincerely
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I love these lines, they make some sense of the problems the couple experienced while to gather.
Love bled dry, sad to say this does happen.
Once we experienced innocence, Untainted and childlike.
But your thirst soured. A clouded pool of blood,
Tears follow love, follow memory. Love bled dry.
In a haze of bitterness, I reject you.
Good luck in the Newbie Challenge Contest, and welcome to Writing.Com
Sincerely
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What a wonderful sweet song. It's so hard to write this note to you for the tears keep falling down, causing me to continue to wipe before writing more.
I have recently lost a love from brain stem cancer, and she was so dear to my heart. So I know what it
feels like to have lost but never forgotten. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com, and to the group "I Remember When." I will look for your cd.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Your stories always wonderful, thrilling, and always a hitch to the ending. Sometimes I can guess the source, but not today. This one held me captive right to the end. Even after reading the big sign TERMINAX, I still thought I was reading a great Sci/Fi. Great story, I always enjoy and recommemed your work to whom ever drops by.
Thanks for sharing.
M Duci
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What a wonderful view about that horror filled day of 911 and the way we stood up to the challenge. Your images appear so real and sent chill's along my spine. Just to remembering was a little much for my mind. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com
M Duci
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