I must admit that I love this poem. Some might say that the use of small caps would be incorrect, but
because you kept the whole poem in the lower case
I give it a perfect five. Your words describing the
play between the sea and the wind were done with so
much delight that I found myself playing the game along with them. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I've enjoyed reading your short story and will hopefully get a chance to read more on the boy
wonder in your next chapter.
The story is something that I think every young
twelve to thirteen year old and even older will
love. Keep up the great writing and welcome to
Writing.Com. I did see one tiny typo: 'I couldn’t find am adequate word to describe him.' Am should be an.
Sincerely
M Duci
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This is one to keep forever! It takes me right down memory lane when my grandma would tell us wonderful
stories of those bye gone days of long dresses, of
horses pulling buggies and wagons. Then the stories
we were told by our father and mother of all their wonderful memory's, and of course we couldn't relate,
and now when I tell these stories to my own grandchildren, they laugh and continue playing their computer games. I laugh too! Because I know that one day the tables will turn. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I can see that your life is like one of many lives,
with its ups and downs. Hopefully it will have many more ups then downs. I quite enjoyed these little metaphors of yours, and the challenges they presented one in putting your life in "A Nutshell" I like how you put the Spanish in for the big stick. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Hello Chloes Secret,
What a beautiful way to look at death. I lost my husband in 1998, and it took years for that moon
to smile down and let me know that I was now free! But one day it did, and with it came someone quite dear. Never to take the place of that very special
person, but to fit inside an empty space. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a wonderful, loving picture you've taken and how wonderful I feel knowing that what you've seen in your mirror is who you are. 'Beauty is in the eye of the beholder,' and you have taken that big step forward you should be so proud of yourself. With self confidence life can take on a whole new meaning, and I believe that is just what you have done. Congratulations on taking a perfect picture, and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I'd say you had a little Angel with you on that particular night and that you were not to be on
that train. I hope that you'll always have your
gift of sight, and that one day you can help others who are in need. But for those who were aboard that
train, it was because they were meant to be...Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I'm not sure just what this story implies but I can see some truth in it no matter what. I could swear I was reading something from Revelations. The thought is scary but the idea is valued.
Ezra's roll as weapon maker was very interesting, but even with all his weapons he could not save them nor could they save themselves. The end was quite surprising! I do wish that, this could be the way of the world! that man will make plow's and whatever it takes to run the world, but never weapons, never again.
Keep up the great writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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This is just so very beautiful! I will print it off and frame it, just as a reminder that 'He walks with me, and talks with me,' each and every day that I live.
My own father passed away several years ago and he reminds me so much of my other Father.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful tribute and keep up the great writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a lovely description of not only the once beautiful flowering blossom, but of nature it self,
as the beauty of youth lingers awhile and just as suddenly removes the oil and tightness of the skin
leaving in its wake sags, bags and shinny baldheads.
Thank you very much for this reminder that nothing last forever. A remarkable read! Keep writing, and welcome to Writing.Com.
M Duci
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What a wonderful Mother you had who was able to prepare you for the challenge that life can present.
There are many pitfalls on the way to growth and thank God for all the wonderful, knowledgeable Mothers who softened their young daughters lives as well as their beds. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
M Duci
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These are always such sad stories to read, and there are so very many such sad stories on this site. I pray it is not your story, as you mentioned it just came from out of know where. But somewhere at the very time you put this writing to paper it was happening out there someplace, too to many children, male and female.
Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com
M Duci
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What a lovely essay you've written, and I must agree with you 100%. Love is all you say it is. Love Is. I love each and every line of it. But for some reason these three lines stand out for me! I love them.
'Love is taking a look at yourself, no matter how difficult it may seem. Never force your beliefs and ways of life onto another.'
Your writing is beautiful and very fulfilling keep right on writing, and welcome to Writing.Com
Sincerely
M Duci
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A very good job for your first try. I cannot say I
understand all that you are trying to say, but I like
your play of words. I can't say I understand a lot of
what famous poets are attempting to get across, but it
sounds good. I think your poem sounds good also. Keep writing and it will come clearer, and clearer.
Welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a fasinating read this little Gem is. I thought you did a wonderful character study and even though
you could have used the written word for u (you) and
urself (yourself) it kind of added to the scare and dare tactics. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
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Oh, I love this little essay, it sounds just like
something I would write.
I feel the same way if I logon and I see that little
zero I feel so bad I logout again until I get myself together.
Thats why I subscribe to all the Newsletters just so I know there will be something in my e-mail to read in case I see that 0. Thank you for sharing and also welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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What a lovely little gem of a poem Wren on what makes WDC, work for you. I could feel how much you love it here. Reading your piece makes me feel like I'm talking with you on the telephone. You know how to captivate your reader and that is wonderful. Keep up the wonderful addition and good luck in the contest.
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Your story has really touched me so very deeply! It's lovely.
You are right about your one reason for being on this
site! It, is because you love to write and share your
talents with other like minds. I have read much of
your work and never tire of it. Thank you so much
for sharing this beautifully written piece with us,
and we love you at Writing.Com.
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I enjoyed your essay on what it means to be a member of WDC. I feel the love and the strength you've gained just being some place where you can be who you want to be and write what you want to write. Thank you for sharing the wonderful information about the great things that have happened because of you and your friends at the WDC. Good luck in the contest, and never stop writing.
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What a heart wrenching story you've written about
how Writing.Com came to be a place of refuge for you. It was that way for many of us nearly in the same way! It's a home for what could become lost works of art.
Thank you for bring that to our attention, and lest we not forget that what happened to you could happen to any of us. Thank you so much for sharing your story, and good luck in the contest.
Sincerely
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Oh! My, what a darling read, I could not stop
smiling from beginning to end. I could have been
reading a little one act play, and you had a very
captive audience. Thank you so much for sharing this
piece and good luck in the contest.
Sincerely
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What an enteresting view you have on writing.
In fact it seems to be far removed from the
make-up of the contest! But I must tell you that I
enjoyed your little story, and the very honest
remarks came across quite well. Good luck in the
contest and do continue to write.
Sincerely
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Thank you for correcting! It is lovely.
To tell you the truth, I just read it
again and it certainly brought tears to
my eyes. It's even more lovely today.
I'm so sorry about your eyes, but your
soul makes up for them. Take care and
never stop writing. It is a perfect five.
Sincerely
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I like your poem very much, but it seems to need
a few little errors cleaned up. Like putting spaces between your words. 'youre pretty face' shouldn't it be your? I's should be capitalized. Over all a very
lovely work keep it up and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a beautiful drawing and I could see the wings so clear as they spread open wide, to go in search of those wonderful, loving arms. I could truly relate to your poetry and I will be visiting your port again to read more of your work. Thank you so much for sharing this one and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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