This is so lovely, your last line touched my heart deeply.
Maybe it is time to move on for you and the love one
you're trying so hard to reach. There comes a time when we have to let go and let them fly, who knows
when we too must fly across the starry skys. Thank
you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a little beauty! I love it, 'YOU' I can relate to this one very well and feel the same way about the other someone in my own life. You are so right, it is so hard to write a poem that fits the very essense of the one person in the world you love with all your heart. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing.
Sincerely
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This writing is of such a depth that only that of like mind can dare to penetrate within its borders. I could feel the fear, dread the darkness, chilled by all the shadows surrounding its inner sanction. You have written a small masterpiece ala Poe.
Keep writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Was reading through the public pages and ran across a review Isa Danton, had written and it sounded very interesting! So I thought I'd nosey on over and see what it was all about. I'm so very glad I did! I'd been introduced to Google from looking at my own Writing.Com stats. I normally look things up in Explorer, or Yahoo but there was Google displaying an essay of mine several times for and about anything I'd written. Wonderful I thought! I don't have to pay to have my essay researched. Then one day I checked on my stats and found that someone had added a link onto my essay which was not true nor had I said anything about what they insinuated! I wrote Google, told them that someone was using my essay for their own use, and guess what? They had that compromise removed right away. So, good for Google, I love them and maybe for all of you who write and allow the public to view your work, check out your stats and see who is reading your work. Thanks for sharing this invaluable information and see you around.
Sincerely
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This story is touching to the core! I hope that you'll one day complete this wonderful story of someone still held so dear. It sounds like the makings of a great novella. I would love to read more on this Maverick.
Love and Hugs
Marlena
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Your poem brought a meaningful tear to my eye, as I could picture my parents at age seventeen, just their age. My dad himself on bended knee asking my mom to be his bride. I never saw them with wrinkled hands, or hair turning gray as they both died very young, she at forty-seven and he at fifty-four. But I know if they would have lived to see into their later years, they'd be seated on that swing holding hands and loving every moment of it. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com
Sometimes those 3am type's are very, very good. This one is just such a poem. I have a few of these little Imp types running around lose in some part of my brain too! Don't they just wake you up at the oddest hours?
Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
Such a wonderful story, I could hardly contain the tears myself as I read the test along with you. I'm so sorry that it didn't happen but I loved reading evey single line and my jubilation was just as happy as the day I found out I was carrying my first born. This was a great read and please continue on. So happy you've found a home at Writing.Com, Welcome.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a beautiful little piece you've written.
I love the flow and the rhythm. You're imagery
was excellent and in and of its self deserved a high ranking five.
Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Your writing is always an inspiration! It feels good to need a boost and visit your site knowing you'll fine a little nudge right there. You've never failed to comply.
This one melts the heart and heals the soul of one who has lost such a love in their life.
Thank you dear lady for this lovely piece and please continue to write, write, write.
Sincerely
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I hope you did well in the contest! This was such a very delightful piece. I enjoyed it very much and I
love the way you displayed the colors so richly and
lovingly. These two lines blew me away, as did the rest, but these the most:
'Where might it end? Where did it begin?
Infinite lines; a set of yellow twins.'
Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a perfect little beauty you've painted. Your brush strokes are covering perfectly each and every line.
I like everything about it and can't find not one break in your lines, no paint has spilled over it is a perfect five. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I like what you do with rhyming and rhythm and the pursuit of life. It makes a lot of sense to me and
the visual's are very, very good. I can see that this is a form of writing that you are very contented with, and also you seem to be in perfect control of what you have to say. Thank you for sharing this piece with us and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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"The Sentence Amusement park." Thank you for so many wonderful lessons in just one nicely wrapped package.
Not to say that you haven't but this piece should be sent out to teachers, schools, and heads of schools around the country. I'm sure that children everywhere if starting with the bases you've described would soon advance into the future much more productive than some of their counterparts.
Thank you so much for sharing these fantastic rides even the slightly more bumpy-ones.
Sincerely
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What a beautiful tribute to your wonderful Mum. There is nothing more real then a relationship between a mother and her child. You are both so blessed to have that kind of love and adoration for one another. I had that same adoration for my parents and even though they are both gone I still fill them near and loving.
I feel this for my own children and grand-children and they for me. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Now and then one will read a short poem that will give the detail of one's own life in a nutshell. This you have done for the 'Love of my life.' These could be words written from my own inner thoughts, words that would come from the bottom of my heart to the one I love in this same way. What a wonderful find I have found in your site tonight! Sorry I've only just found it.
Thank you very much for sharing the 'Love of your Life.'
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a beautiful array of words used in this lovely
poem filled with the feelings of being Baptized with love. I don't think I've heard love described quite so
nice, as the thought of one being baptized, and made whole with love. Excellent choice of words.
I love your every line and more then anything if feels as if I've just peeked inside a beautifully written letter to someone very special.
Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I loved this little cutie, and the rhyming was very
pretty. I know this is ole clique shay but you've hit
the nail right on the head. Sometimes we are just determined to make something fit; that in the end just won't no matter how much we try. There are things in our life we hold onto that should have gone out to the trash can ages ago, but we just couldn't let go. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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What a wonderful read this was! I couldn't stop laughing, even choked on my cappuccino during some of the heady comments. You are a natural born storyteller and I cannot wait to invade your port for more of your fascinating tales. This piece should be in everyone's library to read whenever cupid comes flying by. Thanks again for the great read and many laughs. I like to feature this piece in our Feb. issue of "I REMEMBER WHEN" Newsletter with your permission.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Quite a funny story on Sleep Apnea! You have captured a member of my own family in your little drama. She,
has been driving sleep for years, I always worry about her getting home because of it. She, is now on the machine and according to her she is doing much better.
The first time I noticed that she was sleep driving, I was a passenger in her car. Needless to say If ever I have to ride with her ANYWHERE! I make sure I keep my eye on her all the way . Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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'Joy and love thought forever gone' Bravo, Bravo! Well done a small master piece.
Lovely beyond words, I see nothing that should be fixed or corrected. I am lost for words. Please continue this vain of writing and it is a pleasure to welcome you to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a beautiful tribute to our Lord' you've written.
This is a prayer that we could all learn and live by
and what a wonderful world this would really be.
'As I worship let it come,
reveal the glory of Your Son.
Let it fall, let there be
open heavens over me.'
I love every line you've written, but these hold so much more for me. Thank you so much for sharing.
This is a perfect score.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I don't know where this story will go from here either! But you have captured me heart and soul.
This was written with so much feeling and emotion that it rolled right over on me. I could have gone on reading forever I'm sure. My heart wanted to take all the children into my arms and hold them forever. Not being able to do that I will keep them in my heart in any case. Thank you for this wonderful piece. "Oh! Papa, poor Papa."
Continue please this story.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Today is the best day for staying in and reading the best of WDC, it's hot outside and I'm enjoying this time inside. I just happen to live in a National Forest in Cal. and I have seen the nuzzling of noses of these beautiful Deer's. I too could write stories just about how graceful they come and go. Thank you so much for sharing this Deer story with us.
'Prancing
Glancing as she goes
Whimsical ballerina of the wild'
Such a joy to watch.
Sincerely
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Very nice take on being washed by the moon's ray's.
I feel this same way about the moon! I have heard those same stories about the full moon, etc. But I
love to think of it as the man in the moon or any such fairy tale. But I do think it is beautiful and even more so on a starry, starry night. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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I couldn't stop laughing, even choked on my cappuccino during some of the heady comments. You are a natural born storyteller and I cannot wait to invade your port for more of your fascinating tales. This piece should be in everyone's library to read whenever cupid comes flying by. Thanks again for the great read and many laughs. I like to feature this piece in our Feb. issue of "I REMEMBER WHEN" Newsletter with your permission.