Wow! I like this piece so very much. You have given me the beginning, middle, and ending to a life well spent or not. I hope that when the day comes and I lay down for good I will have done all in my power to have lived a life well spent. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com. Keep up the great writing.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I love your poetry, and this one I think is by far my favorite. But I will return to read and read from your site, and please hold the hound's at bay.
You're a gifted writer and I feel that you are going to be very sucessful with your writing. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I since this piece is not quite finished, I'm I right?
But I can see the visual within and a lovely piece it will be. I like what your trying to do and say with this particular form and I admire you for that. It is not an easy thing to do. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com. Please let me know when you have completed it I'd love to read it again.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Yes, those four years will go very fast, and then on to that Masters Degree. Very cute poem very light and gay and I love it every line. I particular love reading about that higher education. Thank you for sharing and welcome to the Writing.Com family. I look forward to reading more from your port and know you'll go far.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I know that wherever Jennie, is she is looking down and wishing the same thing. I know had you known and talked to her she would never have wanted to leave her wonderful and loving friends.
This was a beautiful message and tribute to one gone to soon. But her presence will be with her friends forever.
Thank you so much for sharing this lovely piece.
Love
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You have been in my favorite authors list from the
first time I read your work. Thank you for being,
and thank you for being here the at WDC. You have come to the right place.
Sherri, this is so hauntingly lovely and brings back such memories from the past.
Love and Hugs
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You are just a wonderful artist! Your words are like taking a brush to a canvas and painting the most beautiful picture. Don't ever stop painting, I love every line of your work. Before I go off tonight I will read your other new poem's. I started one which I
will go back and finish and review. You are one talented lady. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely work of art.
Love and blessing
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This was such a sweet little cutie, I just couldn't resist giving it a five. I really love that last line, I love all the other's too, but the last line touched my heart and took me back to my first kiss. You are very talented and I look forward to reading more of your work very soon. Welcome to Writing.Com and keep up the great writing.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I will never forget the first time I reviewed you as a Newbie, I thought with that name you must own a radio station. I don't know about the radio station but your work will always be a part of my life, just as you will. You have made such a difference just being a part of WDC, and for that I will always be thankful I had this chance to know you as a friend, author, and a wonderful God loving person.
Hang tight my friend and give'm hell. Thank you so much for sharing you, and your work with your fellow peers. You may forget us, but we'll never forget you! You can count on that.
Love and Hugs from my
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Thank you so much for sharing this lovely fact filled monologue. Wouldn't this world be just the greatest show on earth if everyone lived by your words? I've tried to live this life and rise my children to live this life and so far so good. This is a very inspiring piece and I enjoyed it tremendously. Keep up the great writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I really love the words to your poem! I questioned the first stanza because you seem to be asking several questions but without placing the required question marks. I felt that prehaps this was intentional so I read on and suddenly you are putting question marks in the next two verses. Now I don't quite understand this form. But I'm over looking them and rating you on the writing alone, it's simple beautiful. I hope you can clear this up for me.
Please keep writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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I saw your name on a list shared by Intuey, and since it was at the bottom I thought I'd start there. I am so very glad that I did. I love your poetry and your writing in general. This little poem speaks a mouthful, and captures all the feelings I feel inside about my very best friend who lives thousands of miles away. Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to visiting your site again soon.
Sincerely
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What a wonderful downpour that was, and such a soul cleansing it proved to be. The emotions were quite
powerful and the thunderstorm must have been just what the doctor ordered. Beautifully written and the visual was incredible. Thank you so much for sharing I'm so happy you came to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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What a lovely little piece you've written, about
those growing up years. Yes the time does go so
swiftly, and before you know they will be entering
the University. I remember my own son's first day
in school, I think I was just as scared as they were.
Now they have children of their own. Thank you for
sharing, and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I like your piece,but I've never read one that makes me feel so sad for the person who is so ill treated.
Just a suggestion, but you might want to put cap's on your I. Over all very well written. Please continue to write and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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A very lovely piece written to someone who just can't
bring themselves to stop pretending, and living a lie.
I like the spacing and your choice of words, please continue to write and welcome to Writing.Com. I look forward to visiting your port again soon.
Sincerely
M Duci
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This is for sure a case of soul mates; one's who can't be apart! Yet can't really be together. Isn't it funny
how many people have this same condition in their life? They love one another with every fiber of their souls, but on the other hand! Wow. Sound's as if you and your ex-husband may have found the right key for getting it right. Hope all goes well, thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a beautiful story, and told with so much love and emotion. I love your piece and feel it a privilege to know someone with so much love and kindness in her heart. Thank you for sharing and I will visit again soon.
I found the whole piece wonderful, but these lines will remain in my heart.
'It was during this period of time I truly came to fully comprehend and appreciate what it meant to have given my life to serving my Father and His children.
The cherished experiences of that special day cemented my resolve to continue my sacred walk and to be His willing `instrument.'
Sincerely
M Duci
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Smile, it is very lovely, six lines in all but it reads like a book. It is truly priceless, and of course smiling is the best thing ever. When I see a smiling face it opens up the world to me, that is all it takes for me to have a blessed day is to see another smiling face. Wonderful little piece! Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Beautiful short story told in the form of a poem. You've touched every base with your writing leaving no stone unturned.
Each line was fulfilling and tenderly told. I love how you begin with the cicadas and finish with the last line. Great piece of writing, please continue to Write On. Welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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The events of this poem sound so sad, I hope everything worked out for this person and that
their friend didn't leave their side. I would
like to know what took place on that day or night and if they came through okay.
I also think that putting caps on your (I's) would help it flow a lot smoother also.
Over all a very good piece, keep writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I think you have the making of a very fine song,
with just a wee bit more work. You could put a little
chores in between the main lyric’s, and clean up the piece by capitalizing. I think your song would flow a lot smoother with just a bit of work. I like your words, keep writing, and welcome to Writing.Com.
M Duci
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Five lines on the page, a life time complete with a rainbow kissed face and loving to float all day long in the sky. So, much said, with so few words. I feel as if I know you very well! This sounds so much like me. I'm home, but my mind is in another place, sometimes my Muse is here sometimes she's gone, but we just go on. I love this piece, thank you so much for sharing this little cutie and welcome to the WDC.
Sincerely
M Duci
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You've written a very nice poem to the lady of your
dreams, I hope that you'll be back with her very soon.
I can see from this piece that she is your very special to you and you must be very special to her.
I would love to suggest that you put cap's on all your
I's as it will make your work sound and look so much better. Over all very well done, and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Welcome to this weeks contest and thank you for entering.
I liked your story very much, I think I knew the ending from the start, when he hadn't eaten anything, and he loved to eat! Thank you for sharing and I look forward to seeing more of your work very soon.
Sincerely
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