I saw your name on a list shared by Intuey, and since it was at the bottom I thought I'd start there. I am so very glad that I did. I love your poetry and your writing in general. This little poem speaks a mouthful, and captures all the feelings I feel inside about my very best friend who lives thousands of miles away. Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to visiting your site again soon.
Sincerely
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What a wonderful downpour that was, and such a soul cleansing it proved to be. The emotions were quite
powerful and the thunderstorm must have been just what the doctor ordered. Beautifully written and the visual was incredible. Thank you so much for sharing I'm so happy you came to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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What a lovely little piece you've written, about
those growing up years. Yes the time does go so
swiftly, and before you know they will be entering
the University. I remember my own son's first day
in school, I think I was just as scared as they were.
Now they have children of their own. Thank you for
sharing, and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I like your piece,but I've never read one that makes me feel so sad for the person who is so ill treated.
Just a suggestion, but you might want to put cap's on your I. Over all very well written. Please continue to write and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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A very lovely piece written to someone who just can't
bring themselves to stop pretending, and living a lie.
I like the spacing and your choice of words, please continue to write and welcome to Writing.Com. I look forward to visiting your port again soon.
Sincerely
M Duci
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This is for sure a case of soul mates; one's who can't be apart! Yet can't really be together. Isn't it funny
how many people have this same condition in their life? They love one another with every fiber of their souls, but on the other hand! Wow. Sound's as if you and your ex-husband may have found the right key for getting it right. Hope all goes well, thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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What a beautiful story, and told with so much love and emotion. I love your piece and feel it a privilege to know someone with so much love and kindness in her heart. Thank you for sharing and I will visit again soon.
I found the whole piece wonderful, but these lines will remain in my heart.
'It was during this period of time I truly came to fully comprehend and appreciate what it meant to have given my life to serving my Father and His children.
The cherished experiences of that special day cemented my resolve to continue my sacred walk and to be His willing `instrument.'
Sincerely
M Duci
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Smile, it is very lovely, six lines in all but it reads like a book. It is truly priceless, and of course smiling is the best thing ever. When I see a smiling face it opens up the world to me, that is all it takes for me to have a blessed day is to see another smiling face. Wonderful little piece! Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Beautiful short story told in the form of a poem. You've touched every base with your writing leaving no stone unturned.
Each line was fulfilling and tenderly told. I love how you begin with the cicadas and finish with the last line. Great piece of writing, please continue to Write On. Welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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The events of this poem sound so sad, I hope everything worked out for this person and that
their friend didn't leave their side. I would
like to know what took place on that day or night and if they came through okay.
I also think that putting caps on your (I's) would help it flow a lot smoother also.
Over all a very good piece, keep writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I think you have the making of a very fine song,
with just a wee bit more work. You could put a little
chores in between the main lyric’s, and clean up the piece by capitalizing. I think your song would flow a lot smoother with just a bit of work. I like your words, keep writing, and welcome to Writing.Com.
M Duci
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Five lines on the page, a life time complete with a rainbow kissed face and loving to float all day long in the sky. So, much said, with so few words. I feel as if I know you very well! This sounds so much like me. I'm home, but my mind is in another place, sometimes my Muse is here sometimes she's gone, but we just go on. I love this piece, thank you so much for sharing this little cutie and welcome to the WDC.
Sincerely
M Duci
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You've written a very nice poem to the lady of your
dreams, I hope that you'll be back with her very soon.
I can see from this piece that she is your very special to you and you must be very special to her.
I would love to suggest that you put cap's on all your
I's as it will make your work sound and look so much better. Over all very well done, and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Thank you so much for this timely piece. A very dear friend of mine is a diabetic, his mother became diabetic while pregnant with him, nearly fifty years ago. And, although she lived to be ninety-one she had both legs amputated in her eighty's. He became diabetic in his early forty's and just recently they've amputated half his right foot, and now there is a threat to the lift foot being amputated from a tiny cut under his toenail. I had no idea just how bad diabetes could be until now. I’ve been taking him for his hyperberric treatment daily because his wife has to work. While waiting for his two hour 1 fathom under the sea treatment, I’ve seen young children and older children suffering so much from the pain caused from lost limbs due to diabetes and juvenile diabetes seem to be the worst.
My heart goes out to all the young people who haven't begun to live yet, and it makes me so sad to see how little is still known about the causes or cure. Thank you so much for sharing and continue the fight.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Welcome to Writing.Com, and thank you for sharing your writing talents with us.
This piece shows a lot of promise and just needs a small amount of work to really be very good.
This is just a suggestion, and you don't have to follow this guide line. But your poem would look
and feel much better with sentences complete. Please inform me when you have made changes to your work and I'll gladly change the rating to five as I feel it has a lot of promise.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Such a promising piece here, I love it and find it easy to relate too! I truly loved the last two lines and I love your display of words which took work in order to sound so easy. Keep up the great writing, and welcome to Writing.Com.
'I tell them I am a door,
opening only to those with my key.'
Only one tiny typo:
everythng-should be everthing
Sincerely
M Duci
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You and I could not agree more on this beauty. Thank you for writing everything I feel about life, love and the pursuit of happiness. Your words are very simple and honest, and your work shows you have a passion for giving and loving. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Very nice short story, I'm hoping I got the story right, its about a horse whisper yes? I will feel so bad if I'm wrong for I've read it over twice and at first I thought it was about of group of young people getting ready for a race! Then I pictured something else. So, I hope you'll clear this one up for me. But I did enjoy it very much. Keep up the good writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I feel so blessed just coming upon this lovely poem,
thank you so much for sharing it and I can hardly wait to visit your port again. This poem held so much for such a short piece, but filled my heart with so much love and joy for looking towards tomorrow. Thank you for these precious lines.
'Although my life and love will end too soon,
I smile; my life holds both the sun and moon.'
This is very special, thank you for writing it. I love
that I could reach out and touch this lovely painting.
I love looking at the mountains...and do so each and every day! As I live high in the mountains of Cal. They are just as you say; 'Like a colossal titan...' Thank you for sharing, and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I love going down Memory Lane! There is always such an excitement waiting for those that take the trip. This was no exception. The one thing that really sold me on the perfection of this little cutie, is your very last line. I love those words and they touched me deeply. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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Thank you for this picture, so real, so visual. It start's so deep and dark and slowly the color changes to that of peaceful hues. Yet, the beckoning sound of yet another struggle within the darkness continues to call. Plant both feet firmly and refuse it's calling, it will soon grow tire and move on. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to returning to your site to read more of your work.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I've read both of your poem's, and I must tell you that I think very highly of your writing. This one filled my heart with sadness and many tears. Sometimes I think it is only the young of today who are going through these same circumstances, but looking back I can see the women of the past experiencing these same events in their own lives. Thank you so much for this honest look at life in a nutshell. Thank you for sharing and continue the great writing, and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
M Duci
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I hope that this is just what you say it is a 'short story, horror/scary :: death' what you did not tell us was if this was fiction or non-fiction. I hope this is a story of fiction! Because if you just meant it to scare, you did a good job of scaring me. Every detail was very scary and the color was total black and white. You've given a vivid account of that horror filled night. Good writing, and very scary. Welcome to Writing.Com, and continue writing.
Sincerely
M Duci
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This short story held my attention to the end, even though I think being in a short story form it would look better and feel a lot better on tired eyes used for reviewing and writing. But the story content was awesome and I love what you can do with a mere 331 words. Thank you for sharing and welcome aboard the great reviewing group of 'I Remember When.'
p.s. I love your reviewing signature it was certainly a five rating.
Sincerely
M Duci
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