This was an excellant educational peice. I know about bitem and image, but I did not know about the others. I will be coming back to visit this page from time to time. Would it be a problem to put the image tag on here? I just learned it last week. I had such a problem creating my contest page. Also could you tell me where I can find the smileys tags. Everyone uses them beautifully, and I would like to learn the skill to pass along a smile.
Thank you so much for sharing this. I have been on here near two years, and I wish I would have visited before.
Love this poem. Could we even imagine what an angel has to walk through in the spiritual relm? I mean looking at my life. The angels in my life has to walk through doupt (sometimes), heart brake, and just bad times.
This poem has a great rhyme, and it is very inspirational peice.
I have a bad connection so here is the fourh time reviewing this peice. I love the poem. It captures love in the essience. The flow is smoot, and it was a great read. You were able to paint a beautiful picture of love.
This was a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
I adore this poem. I remember when I had my first child, and this item takes me back to the days of holding her and her brothers. You paiint a beautifu picture of love. The poem has a good flow and rhyme. You have the talent to carry me into your work. THis a job well done.
This is a great poem. The flow is good. I have had people and pets that create the feeling of summer in my life no matter what time of year they are around. My children are my spring.
The words are well chosen, and the image was wll painted.
This poem has some wonderful things with in it. First of all the picture is so beautiful. Next the flow and rhyme worked well to create a great read. Then the interesting part to me was the imagery with the educational part. Like I am not sure I have hear of the words "cygnus" and "gossamer". Could you tell me the meanings of these words? Cygnus means swan? Gossamer is some kind of weeds?"
Great message! I love this poem, and I can vision being high in the sky looking down on the world. I truly think of this as something that needs to be printed in newspapers. More people should begin to think in this direction. I was impressed with this wonderful poem.
If the reader has children, they certainly can relate to your words. This poem has a great flow and rhyme. I didn't find mistakes. I never do when the peice captures a part of me. I found this to be a great read that shows you skill of catching the subject and painting a picture with few words.
This is a wonderful way to challenge the one area that I truly need to work on. I have a problem covering a story line or emotion of an item in a few words, and I a secretly envous of those who can.
I hope to come back with an entry soon. It seems to be an exciting way to exercize my short line skills.
Thank you for writing this and sharing this with us.
Ida
THis is a wonderful and informative peice. I agree to how things that once made up our morals and lifestyles have been down played to mear existanc. I have children, and I watch that them grow up with all the mess that makes up the world that they live in. Living in a family where "dad" has left and married someone and they do not see him.
Men and women don't have the hearts of the "goog ole days".
I like this, and I hope that you continue to add to this item. Not just quotes that you hae heard, but also add your own. I mean each day and emotional state creates its own little theme of the day.
I mean what do you think the day was like for the person when they said "Dreams do come true."?
Just a thought, I really like this. MMM maybe creat a contest.. Allow the entries to be statements that catch other's attention or inspire. Then choose the winner.
This is a wonderful heartfelt poem. I loved the twist. The rhyme made it a fun read, and the flow made it an easy read. This painted a wonderful picture of a new relationship that brings me back in time, and I hope into the future.
I love this poem paints two stories, and I just adore the rhyming pattern that you have chosen for this work. The item flows with such ease, and it speaks so clearly about one of my favorite Bible stories (Today is my Baby (11 yrs) Noah's birthday).
This was a great poem for a sunny day like this. Here in Kentcky, we are sufferig flooding all around. Now to remember the rainbow.
This is so cute, and reminds us that all things and events always have purpose in our lives (even if it is to have a laugh on another bad day down the road). I plan to visit the link that you have provided above. I am sure that there are a few things that may bring smily.
This is a great poem, and this is a fluent and enjoyable read. I can feel loneliness in the words, but I also feel that the person in the poem realizes that he/she has friends that need attention from him/her. It feels as though the person here don't really trust enough to give to others. This makes him lonely and always wanting something that the perso in the poem can not give.
I miss the feeling of the true love. I had it once I thought, and I am waiting for it to return. You captured the feeling of that new love.
I feel that your poem has a very fluent read. The emotions are strong and created sweet memories from a love that had lasted eighteen years until I was traded in for someone just four years older than our marriage.
You are very descriptive, and the poem flows well. I think that you have create a story that brought me along with your words. I love the way that you are able to create a contrast with the way the waters appear with the way it can turn.
I have enjoyed the read, and feel that it is a wonderful read.
This poem has a great flow, and its rhyme makes it to be a wonderful read. I love the message that you carry with in the lines. I Think that we all can relate. I love the way you remind us that the past can not be changed, but we have remember that the past is a text book to live for today.
I think ths picture is so cute this dog reminds me of my dog reba she may be pregnant so we have no clue if she is or not but we are not taking the chances with it and I love dogs and cats to in fact I love all animals and I can not see how no one can not care for one or hurt one or see on sit there and die with out steping in.
thank you for sharing this picture with us Ida and Charity.
I love this, and would like you to create it into a forum and group when you get the opportunity to do so. I am a single mother also, and it never gets any better.
No about this poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. I loved the way it brought me into this item.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and concider creating a place for th rest of the singles. It is a wonderful time to do so,,,,, it is mother's day coming back.
This is great peice, and I think that the politics in it makes it a different kind of read for me.
The flow of this story is great. You show your talent in your skill of discription. And the dialog is fluent. This is the area that I have problems creating a flowing conversation.
THis is a Very good page. I like the way you show the pattern of the lines. I find it hard to get the beat down to a poem, but I write from my emotions. These labled items really help me learn more forms of poetry. I loe the flow, rhyme of the poem on the page. The imagery is great.
I like that picture and I like dogs plus this picture reminds me of what my mom tells me all te time do not sleep with the dogs I sleep with 4 dogs and 1 cat but right now one of the dogs have parvo and the worst thing about it is he is only 8 weeks old so love the picture and think you for sharing.
This is a great idea, and I will think on what I will be writing. I am doing my first contest, and someone sent me some gps and a suggestion to encrease the awards on my contest. I decided to pass on the kindness. I am sending you 7000 gps so that you can get the first place an awardicon.
Thank you for the opportunity to writing something new.
Ida
This would be a learning experience. I think that this is an oppurnity to study to be able to create a great an interesting item with an air of truth. I realy think that this is an interesting contest.
Thank you for sharing this wih us.
Ida
PS if you pray pleace ask God to help my fourteen year old daughter's newest baby (her little pup Fits), because he has parvo. We are giving him water every 15 minutes to try to save him.
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