This is a very well written poem. It is easy to read with a great flow and smoothe rhyme. I could feel the move of God on these words. I feel that it is truly inspired by God and that the words are chosen that we all can relate.
This is an item that connects our heart with God's.
I love this poem. Its flow and rhyme created a great read. The words and the message is an inspiration. I think that I read this God is truly assoiating it with each reader. The words become ours to God. This is a peice that will stick with me for a long time.
This poem is well written. The flow carries the reader into the words. I love the suprise ending, and it is relatable to many events in my life. I like the way it makes you laugh. I have enjoyed this poem and can't wait to read more. The greatest thing is the way you made the situation so visisual.
The poem is very smoothe. It reminds the reader to not take for granted the older people in our lives. They have things to share that we can learn from. Things that we would otherwise not know. You have painted a picture of the wisdom of this poet, and the thoughts that one day it maybe someone choosing your words for me.
I think that I often spend alot of time thinking about what is awaiting for us. You have chosen brought me back into my thoughts of God's plans for us. The poem is very well written. The lines read very smoothe. It brings the reader into thoughts of where we need to be going.
I love this poem, and in the days of troubles everywhere, it speaks pages to what God must be thinking. I found the read to be smoothe and very deep. I can not imagine what God thinks about what his creation has become. It took me into evaluating my own decisions.
Job well done. Thankk you for sharing this with us.
Ida
This is a well written peice. The flow made it a great read. THe subject matter is deep and takes us back to different times in our lives that make us feel as though we are the only people in a situation.
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I can not wait to read more of your work.
This is a very special poem. The picture would be painted to each readers loss of people in their lives. Some first loves, other's lost family members, or some has lost memories of just their lives.
I think that this poem shows your real talent and skill. thank you for sharing this with us.
I love this poem. The flow was smoothe and the read was enjoyable. It reminds me of the Kentucky Men's college backetball. I have such a high on watching. It is a emotional roller coaster. I am so happy at time and mad at another. Bein ahead in the game, just isn't enough. They need to beat the other team with every basket.
THis is a very written poem. The flow kept my attention, and the flow created a enjoyable read. I was taken into the poem with the word choice that you chose. I was able to relate to the poem, and found it easy to follow.
This is a poem that reaches to everyone. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
This a wonderful poem. I love the picture that it paints. It had a smooth and enjoyable flow. I found my self back to places in my life that has helped create who I am. The words were well chosen, and the questions really brought the reader into the lines.
This was well done. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
You are talented, and your choice of words painted a beautiful picture. I find that your poem has a great flow. It was a very enjoyable read. This poem reminded me of a baby or a small child. They are clean and waiting to be created. I wish that I could start over empty and clean.
This is a very well written poem, and it is so vivid. This is a great read. I know that the word is just waiting for the undefiled and believing hearts to bring them hopelessness and helplessness. I can relate to your words and have found myself about to give up and giving in to the battle the world and times are raging on me.
This is one of the deepest and wonderful poems that I have read in a long time. I can just see a man standing watching a family that he worked hard to create. I could feel the presence of his late wife lingering with pride side by side with the love that she is still waiting to reunite with.
This poem was a very well written poem, and I was proud to read this emotional peice.
I know the pain of moving forward. It is never easy to find the right choices to make the future any better than the past. This poem was deep. It had a great flow that created a very enjoyable read. It fits the theme of my day.
Tonight seems as though the world is hurting. Hearts are being broken. And tears are being shed. This is a great poem. Its emotion is deep and easy to relate to. I love the way that you able to explain the fear of not being remembered that most of us experience.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
This poem had great flow, and the rhyme is excellent. I was brought into your work with well chosen words. I find that this is a sweet item. One that we all can relate to in one way or another.
I hope to see more of your work. I hope that you find this site a good vent.
Ida
A very vivid item. You are able to paint a picture with your words that the reader can relate to. When it comes right down to it we all have been there, and you were able to bring the reader back to that point.
I have found a great read in your poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.
THis is a poem that I have lived so many times. I thought my ex husband was my forever, but after too much to deal with, I found my self divorced. Now and ex in my present. It is weird who is meant to be in our lives.
This is well written, and it show your talent to get your reader just where they need to be.
This is a wonder story told in the lines of your poem. I enjoyed the read and was able to step into her shoes. It must have been hard for the man to fall in love with her when she did seemed to be killed out inside.
I found this to be a well written item, and easy to relate to.
This is a very well written poem. I found it easy to read with a great flow. I love how you were able to take the reader to the cotton fields, and feel the pain of a family torn and sold apart. This was deep, and introduced a time that this generation could not know without the authors taking the time to make emotions and paiins real for us newbies.
This poem is much the questions of my life. You have brought the reader to a place that they have been many times. It is easy to relate to, and the flow makes it a great read. Reading the introduction, really makes the poem come to life.
This is a very well written peice. I often compare my life to things that are happening around me. The play ground is my favorite place to think. I like the line that are contiplating changing the first line to. I think that it would be more vivid to the reader.
I love this idea, and plan to save the contest so that I can come back and work on an entry. This will be a challenge. I have not written terror since seventh grade. This is on that a person can become part of the story. Gives me a place to center this bad month that I have had and still be a free woman. lol
This is a cool poll. My house hold picked right while I got it wrong. I think that was fun and interesting. This brings me back to those saturday morning cartoons. There was no vilance, adult material, and carried a slapstick comedy.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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