This is very well written. I think that it is words to live by.It gives instructions or advice if you will on how to live your life in a happier existance. I love the way you show us using humor in the peice to keep the attention of the reader. T
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I absolutaly love this. I like that way it covers what love is in a couple of words at a time. How else can we explain love? We tell our children that it is much like the fairytale with all the happy ever afters. Then we divorce their mom/dad. Yes, this is a very well flowing poem. I enjoyed the read.
I love the rhyme. The poem had a wonderful flow, and the vision of the message was excellant. I think of books like the Cat in the Hat when I read this. My son loves animals, and I can not wait for him to read this. I wish that you put this in a book with pictures. I am sure that it would be major.
This is a touching story. I have two kittens, and one of my cats got out. I looked everyday for him. I am a mother of three, but I was looking for this cat as if I had lost one of my children in this cold dark world. When he found his way back, he ran into the house afraid. I think about how we get scared in this world, but we can get back to God.
These are so beautiful picture. We have two cats. ONe is a blue russian. He is so smart, and the king of the house. THe other is a baby. Her name is Morticia. She is fiesty, and bosses chopper the blue russian. My mother in law has two Jack russles. They are so different than each other to have come from the same litter. Gigget is hyper, but likes to be held as a baby. Her sister MoMo chases balls, and she watches T.V. sitting on her but like we do.
Could you please send me this by email. I love the idea of making this for me and my children. I am always looking for simple foods that are healthy for me and my children. I am a over weight mother of three, and a step-mom of three over weight girls. This is a pleasure to find.
Please send this by email to me. I would like to make it from time to time. I love fruit, and being well over weight, this would be a big treat. I want to tell you that I appreicate anything that comes easy when having children.
I wish that I could understand the syllable thing more. My poems are usually just by the rhyme, and I really admire those that can do it and use beat within a poem. This is a well written poem, and I truly enjoyed the read.
I love this poem. I have felt this way many time. Fruit is my favorate food. I think that this is runs well, and paints a picture that the reader. The flow was smoothe, and the words were well chosen to create the picture of the fruit.
This poem is so cute.
This is so wonderful. I can feel the emotion in this item. The flow is very nice, and I think that everyone of us have been there. I have more than once. I can relate to your words, and they truly bring me back to the moments that I have had to watch my love walk out of my door.
I like this poem. Your flow was nice, and you were able to keep my attention. I can see the love for the fossils, and I could see the wonder for them in your words. This is a great poem to share with us. The rthym was just great. I hope to read more of your work.
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Ida
I love this poem. I love the message. I love the vision. I can see a woman crying, and I have been in every situation mentioned in you words. I believe that there will not be one reader that these words could not have been taken right out of their heart.
THis poem is full of vision. I like the depth. The flow is easy and creates a great read. I like that you used a larger font. It is important for the reader to be able to read your work even those (like me) who have vision problems. I enjoyed the read.
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Ida
This is a nicely written item. I enjoyed the way it was written. The rhyme was great and the flow really kept my attention. I love the message. I believe that the emotion and story will catch most reader's eyes due to the experiences that we all have.
A great item to write during the Valentine's season. I love that it covers an emotion that we all can relate to. I too have a soul mate, and feel your words. I think that you have a nice rhyme, and the flow makes this a good read. I do not really review for mistakes. I review for the story, and I am glad that I found this item.
This is a story told in poem form. The words brings the reader into the piece. It is the best way to tell the stories. It had a nice flow that made the item easy to read. The story is deep with a message that shows strong emotion. People can relate to your words.
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This picture is so cute. Is this kitten a Blue Russian? We got Chopper when he was five weeks old. When he was that small, he would growl as we held his bottle. I truly love this cat, and now we have a little kitten for his friends. Chopper is now almost three, and the kittlen (Mortisha) is about 3 months. She is like the short hair british.
I wanted to take a look at the images here, but I see that there is some changes being made. I would have liked to share in viewing them. I am going to try to go to your port and see what else that we can share.
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I have got to build my gps. I only have 5,000 + right now due to trying to save my membership. I really wish that I could take some of these pictures. They are beautiful, and show great talent.
I am going to check some of these posts. I see some known names on the page.
I love the poem. The lines flow very well. The rhyme kept my interest. And the message was one that most of us can relate with at one time or another. I found this to be a enjoyable read that pulled me into the story that you captured in such few words.
I love the aged look of this picture. The message really is encouraging. I wonder how much of our country is made of workers such as these. Now, things are hard. I know that many people would be happy to have any job. Our for fathers worked the skin from their fingers to have what we are fighting to keep now.
This story pulls at the heart. I really enjoyed your work greatly. The story of the angle taking the man home after he had the chance to complete his life was amazing. I think that this would be a story that any one could write. We all will leave something undone. When the time comes we all hope that we will be given the chance, we hope to be given the chance to make the ending to our lives complete.
This poem is written at an great time. We are all happy to see our men come home. They have som many people that are waiting for them. I love the flow of your words, and the twist that you introduced at the end. I am happy to see such strong emotion brought to the reader.
You have a great poem. I am 43 and I took your words to heart. The rhyme is good, and flow is great. The message is one that touches many people. I think that this is one that is an investment to any reader. I would like to welcome you to the writing. com family.
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Ida
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