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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A desperate soul in search of light. The person feels so depressed that he/she cannot see light. Indeed a depressed person lives in his own world unwilling to mingle with others. Most often it can be cured by finding out the cause but it has a tendency to relapse. A patient affected by this ailment becomes sluggish and unresponsive to stimuli.. Let's hope that there will be light at the end of the tunnel.
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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Good poem putting emphasis on the value of love in life. It is a basic necessity in life - to love and to beloved. Only death can put an end to its physical form but it remains immortal. The other theme deals with friendship. But I don't get the term' fracture' in this context.
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Review of Orbital Decay  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A story based on aero spatial matters orientated on the side effects of launching rockets and other space engines. It has been a subject of predilection since the baleful impacts on the environment cannot be assessed. The narrator regrets to have been involved in it but he/she accepted the job only out of obligation . But after weighing the pros and cons the employee is still in doubt whether to continue or stop.
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Review of Cowboy Heaven  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (3.5)
The cowboy seems worried about his future. He is doubtful whether he will be in heaven after demise. His thoughts are orientated only towards the job of cowboy. Will he be treated in the same way as he is now? He visualizes a world of horses only
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Review of The Secret Cargo  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (3.5)
A courageous soldier trying to be steady on the ship during the storm . He is saved by his colleagues. An in depth description is given about the activities going on board. The sailor is astonished when he sees a young boy on the deck. However, the sailor finally falls into the freezing water.
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Review of Aradia's Broom  
Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A poem with no specific theme. I get the impression that the author has written it randomly leaving the reader to discover the inner meaning of the poem. By analysing the lines we see that several topics have been proposed like horror, depression, impatience. But it does not exploit any of them.
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Review of The Wrath  
Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting poem depicting how the poet had undergone difficult situations in life. The outbreak of fire has engendered a serious loss to him/her. It took much time to start everything from scratch. The house was rebuilt with the assistance of his close relatives and friends from the ashes like the phoenix. But God spared his/her life .The lesson to learn from this mishap is that every time we must not look at things from the negative aspect.
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Review of Son  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A very touching poem illustrating the strong bond between a son and the parent. The parent exposes his/ her grief and experiences sadness when sending the son abroad. In fact, the poem gives the reader the feelings of remorse as far as family ties are concerned. The parent is always concerned about the child specially when the latter is far from the eyes. But it must be considered as part and parcel of life.
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Review of Sensationalism  
Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A veracious poem painting the role of the media in our daily life. Really there are far more sad and bad news than good ones. Of course this has a depressive impact on the reader mind. Most often the younger persons are tempted to ask questions about the occurrences. Rarely we learn something positive out of the papers. But the job of the journalist is to create sensationalism to sell the maximum quantity of the stuff. But the most important function is to inform and not to cause distortion
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Review of Psalm of being  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (3.5)
It appears to be a continuation of the Psalm of the Brained. It goes on with the same style. Each line is carefully presented and self explanatory. Sometimes there is appreciation and sometimes bitterness. But the poem arouses our consciousness on several matters.
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Review of If Trees Are Gone  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A vibrant homage to the importance of trees in our life. So many benefits have been outlined in this short poem. It is part and parcel of life. But man is destroying the environment on earth. By pulling down trees humanity is bringing forth its own downfall. We are subject to so many ecological disequilibrium. One day will come when we won't find shade anywhere Nature is warning us but we are turning a deaf ear.
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Review of Come What May  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem illustrates the state of mind of the lover who fears to lose the beloved. A firm appeal is being made for him/her to stay in front of the eyes. But the person seems adamant and not responding to the plea. We can visualise th e sufferings of the unsuccessful lover
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Review of The Farmer's Beg  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (3.5)
The farmer is worried about his plantation and crops. He is begging for additional time before going to the other world.There are many things incomplete which he regrets to leave behind. But who can stop death. We have to go when the alarm rings. Man must be ever ready for death.
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Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A very satirical plea from a tiger who suffers a lot by the hands of humanity. It's a solemn appeal by the animal to stop killing its kind just for fun and their skins. Man is destroying the species of tiger just for its greed.
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Review of The Unhappy Bride  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A good poem depicting the departure of the bride to her in-laws house. Everybody seems happy except the bride.She cannot adapt herself easily to the new environment. New people and new faces appear before her and she feels embarrassed. She has not yet forgotten her previous abode and her parents. But why is she unhappy? Perhaps she's not with the right person at the right place.
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Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A useful poem paying tribute to the mother. The author lays emphasis on the unflinching support which a mother represents to the child. She sacrifices herself in all aspects to shape the future of her kids. The importance of a mom is widely felt by her children. Nobody can replace her.
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Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A sad story telling us how Lilian was victim of an accident and since then she can no longer run. Indeed it must be very hard to bear and live in this condition. But what we must admire in the girl is her strong moral made of iron I would say. She is practising all the sports which perhaps a normal person would not dare to do. I appreciate that you are not desperate and enjoying life to the maximum.
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Review of Heroes Of The Sky  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A heroic poem depicting the dexterity of the heroes of the sky. Of course, it is very sensational to see those shows. Sometimes there is danger and sometimes excitement. They create a lot of suspense when hanging in the air and turning around in all positions. It is not recommended for persons with cardiac problems
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Review of Chagrin  
Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A poem reminding us of departure from this world. Some people fear to die perhaps because they have not made any preparations. Most of the time the fear is justified since it is still a mystery to humanity.Nobody has ever been able to return after death. . All the experiences about demise have failed up to now.
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Review of The Peddler  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (3.5)
Funny poem relating the story of the peddler.he roams about on the streets until he is aware ab out his shifting to another land. he moved to England to continue his meddling . However, he is knocked down by with a kettle. From Ireland to England the peddler is still peddling.
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Review of Mourning Dove  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice little poem illustrating how the person adventures into nature and discovers a birds' nest. The cracking sounds attract his attention. Finally he finds out the origin of the noise. The characteristics of nature is well painted but it requires a little more expansion of the ideas.
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Review of Poetry and me  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A realistic poem expressing the views of the poet on writing. It is considered a form of liberation to voice out one's feelings on paper. It is also a spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings. Poetry brings forth enlightment and happiness through creativity.
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Review of Writing  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
An interesting poem reflecting on the potentials of writing. It does not sound so easy. First of all the writer must look for inspirations to hold the pen. But once the inspiration is there he/ she goes on smoothly expressing words into ideas. However, no mention is made about frustration in writing.
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Review of Laugh and Cry  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A Japanese poem describing a Japanese sport. The fight symbolizes competition but the fighter lacks courage. Although he tries his level best the competitor cannot rise up to continue the Suma competition. So he laughs and cries simultaneously
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Review by Boz
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting poem depicting how the approach of the chap towards the cat and the kittens. In the beginning the animals seem to be sacred. Gradually, when they are being cared for the kittens are domesticated. Through the lines the reader gets a glimpse of the friendship between human beings and the pets.Finally they become members of the family.
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