Convincing story about the progress in the doughnut business. Where there is a will there is away. Positive thoughts combined with struggle obviously lead to success. With persuasion and self confidence the person was able to re-establish an enterprise which was on the verge of failure. It pays at the end.
Interesting anecdote narrating the ingratitude of the fox. It can be applied to human beings. Nowadays, when children grow up they have the tendency to abandon their parents who become old and unprotected. It is of fundamental importance to inculcate moral values in the young generation so that they realise the existence of the elderly.
Very touching anecdote giving the reader ideas about the anguish which the patient is undergoing when she learns about the results. Really the morale must be very high to face the situation. We get the impression that it is an incurable disease. But the doctor should not tell the patient about the problem openly.
A good poem reflecting the impacts of doubts on the mind. Suspicions poison the brain refraining it to function positively. Just like Othello who kills his wife out of doubts. But doubts also have positive outcomes if the mind is not overshadowed.
A real scene of desolation illustrated in this poem after shipwreck. People trying to seek refuge anyhow and anywhere. The little girl appears to be lost amidst the ocean. A bit of elaboration on the morale of the passengers could have enhanced the piece of work.
Good poem showing the mea- culpa of the individual. He/she feels a burden on the heart. All steps are impossible. There is obligation to stagnate.. A scene of regrets and remorse. However, the poem dose not show any transition from sadness to joviality.
Well written poem depicting the ball of fire in ancient times. The rising of the sun announces hopes and a bright day. As there was no clock in those days the sun was used to reckon the time. Now the sun has become dangerous due to the destruction of ozone layer.
Nice poem flattering the wonders of love. Feelings of euphoria. The magic of love transcends all barriers to be sublime. But life also means work, struggle and achievements
A bold statement made by the writer admitting his weaknesses and attributes in the field of writing. He acknowledges that some persons have understood and appreciated his work sin their reviews. There is another category who bought the books just out of curiosity. But he does not give us any hint about the topics explored
It is really an interesting work focusing on the meaning of goals in life. A person without goals is like a kite without a string. Goals are the genuine motivators of our life. Life starts with and ends with goals. Without a goal there is no match.But did the ancient people who lived in the caves had goals?
Nice poem praising natural beauty. The narrator transports us in the world of ecstasy and escapism. The environment is conducive to all sorts of inspiration. But the last part appears to be absurd.
Very interesting piece of work reminding me of my childhood. This period will never be back again. There is perfect communion in the small family between the children and the animals. We can feel the serenity and the peace of mind surrounding the children.
The painting reminds us about events which occurred ages ago. It seems as if the viewer's memory is still fresh after so many years. trying to link the past with the present.The picture of the woman appears to be immortal. But there is a world's difference between reality and fiction
Boredom is often the cause of many ailments. It can only be avoided by activities. Time must be spent in a positive way so that it yields fruits in return. However, the poem does not give us an insight about the effects of monotony.
The poem reveals the oppressed intention to seek revenge. Probably the oppressor has crossed the boundary. There is mention of silent death in the form of sleep.. The striking point is that it is a war without any weapon
Satirical poem about intelligence and wisdom. Can these qualities be bought or exchanged? The use of the head signifies cerebral exercises. So, the brain should be always active to be free from diseases. As regards intelligence the question of money does not arise.
Rational poem analysing the importance of everything and everybody on earth. It' like a chain. If one ring is broken, it does not serve any purpose. A man needs a woman and vice- versa.. But what about Robinson Crusoe>? Nobody there to help
A very realistic poem putting emphasis on the importance of time. Time is money. Time which is lost will never come back. We cannot control time but time has an upper hand on humanity. However, it does not elaborate on the effects of wasting time.
Beautiful poem underlining the sincerity of love. The boy is infatuated by the girl.He has become blind in her love.He shows signs of craziness but still hopes to get his love back. I think there is over domination by the female partner
Well written poem about death. It emphasizes the small lapse of time to put an end of life. People live for long but we die within seconds. A line of demarcation between life and death. Here the author has not elaborated on the span on life.
The narrator has feelings of nostalgia when thinking about love. The presence of different perfumes makes him/her plunge into the world of romance. Life looks melancholic without the lover. However, it needs more elaboration on the aspect of sufferings.
Good poem describing the new thing which Tarzan has discovered- love. Jan,.acting as instructor is initiating him towards this feeling. But Tarzan seems to respond very slowly. However, there is no verbal expression of this sentiment
Good poem emphasizing the impact and importance of maternal love. Even if she is no longer in this world her absence is deeply felt. Death is described as a barrier between mother and child. She is the symbol of comfort. But this relationship is not fully exploited
The poem makes allusion to some form of hallucination. The fear of the unknown. It lacks some precision who it can be. At the end we come to know that it was an unjustified fright.
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