A nice poem depicting how steam is formed and it is dispersed in the atmosphere. It is a real pleasure to look at it when coming out of the kettle or from hot water. In fact, it can be recycled to be used as water. The term' dancing' paints a marvelous scene of the steam. Unfortunately it is ephemeral.
Interesting poem dedicated to the pumpkin. Indeed, It is a real feast for the eyes with its wonderful colours. As a vegetable it has many nutrients. Iit is attractive to the viewer. Pumpkin is also a good laxative. It is a natural gift to humanity. The author has not pointed out the recipes about pumpkin
A poem illustrating the loneliness of a woman at night. Devoid of companion she tries to befriend all that is present around her. She feels like crying but is comforted by the other creatures. Feeling cold in the night she seeks protection from the blanket.. The poem needs some more expansion concerning the perils at night.
Being a nurse i can approve that these items are most commonly seen in the hospital. Others are sphygmomanometrer, glucometrer, nebuliser, syringes and needles, sucker and tubes, drainage tubes, deaths and corpses
A poem reflecting to what extent the individual has sunken in depression. It needs much support and efforts to overcome it. But alone it will be a difficult task. There is only darkness in his /her life. To seek light ask for help from a psychiatrist and a psychologist. Don't give up. Life is an eternal struggle.
A poem depicting the eagerness of the young man to grow up quickly. He wants to run before walking. But life is composed of several stages. I Now it's time for you to enjoy life and be carefree. You have to go through all the steps to attain maturity. Who knows when you are older you may have nostalgia about your youth. So,let life go at its won pace.
A poem evoking the pleasure and delights of camping. There is good humour and happiness. Indeed it is an excellent way to evade the daily routine of life. A need for a break. But in these 5 lines the reader does not get enough detail about the camping activities
Interesting poem narrating how the author has come into light after having been in darkness. There are again rays of hope in life. It depicts optimism and recovery from depression. But one must fight hard and be morally armed to get out of it. Every cloud has a silver lining as it is said.
The poem makes us laugh with all the stories about Huford. He is not prepared to die which explains why he comes back from his tomb every time he is buried. Neither the doctor nor the doctor can explain this strange phenomenon. He loves the world too much to depart from it. A supernatural piece told in a hilarious way.
A suspense story illustrating hoe Haeden was scared when he could not find his brother and saw the hideous creature lying on Eric. He defends himself pretty well against the reptile. Finally he is able to recuperate his brother and both are safe and sound. But the reader is kept pondering what is the creature? Perhaps Haeden could not identity it in darkness.
A story telling the reader how Simon reacted to his grandfather's mannerisms. His grandmother has been tolerating them for ages. We see the relationship between the members of the family. Papa is very strict towards his family. But when we learn about his disease, there is some sort of sympathy. Its like that. We realise the importance of somebody after he has left us.
A concise poem reflecting on the role of the ball which goes high up in the sky. The author is refers to soccer which are played on a competition basis. This sport brings forth entertainment in the stadium where the fans become ecstatic and overwhelmed with joy. Indeed it is a real pleasure to attend a football match.
The poem underlines the value and importance of education. It puts emphasis on the benefits. By flying high we must cross the borders to achieve knowledge. Learning starts and ends with life. Education is the main pillar for achievements. Without it a person is incomplete .
Beautiful dream interrupted by mom. Dreams are sometimes necessary to help us evade from the harsh realities of life. It allows us to break the daily routine. If it is a good dream then we spend a nice day. But we must avoid becoming a day dreamer.
Interesting poem analyzing the definition of love.. According to the author love is an expression of powerful feelings towards another human being. However, there are different types of love.
Lake of tear
Ocean of bliss
Valley of sorrow
End of life.
A true poem based on revenge. The need to avenge oneself is a natural characteristic dormant in every human being But we must not let it control our mind. But how to eliminate the Black Beast.? You must be big -heart to forgive and forget.
The poem is evocative of unsuccessful love. The woman is missing badly her lover. She seems to suffer his loss.She has been replaced by another partner in his life. But everything is in its real place. To live with tears and regrets has become part and parcel of her life.
A scary poem depicting how the narrator was trapped with the coin from the sea. It is indeed an awful description when his arm is being snatched from the body by the shark. We see how sometimes superstition has psychological impact on humanity. So it is better to take care on Halloween.
A story depicting the relationship between a father and daughter which had been ruptured. But now they are in the process of re-establishing it.A series of hurdles come in between them before they are united. It gives us a lesson to think carefully before severing any family ties.The story starts well but ends abruptly.
A touching anecdote explaining how Franklin abused of others' weakness to get the most out of it. We see all the stratagems used by him to dupe his family and benefit the maximum advantages. But here it must be pointed out that Franklin became a delinquent because of over tolerance. If the responsible parties had curtailed his behaviour and bad habits at the very start he could have grown into a good citizen.
An unusual story unraveled in only 55 words. Emphasis is laid on the word magic. It starts and ends with the same word. The reader dose not get much details about the Empress Usha. At times it looks absurd and incomprehensible
Interesting poem written in anew style and rhyme. It depicts how friendship finally turns into love. The lady is unable to control her emotions with the ups and downs affecting her health. But her partner seems to ignore these feelings. So, she's complaining about her moody character.
An interesting poem illustrating the natural link between the narrator and the field. The connotation of field reminds us of agriculture whereby food and crops are grown for human beings. Nowadays, there can be a scarcity of edible stuff as warned by The F.A.O. The person is hopeless on seeing the arid field.
A great tribute by a mom to her baby. Indeed, it is an indescribable feeling on the arrival of new guest at home. The mother is recalling the good moments spent in the company of her babe. She portrays the emotional and tender relationship developed by upbringing her child. These are indelible memories for a mother.
A good list for surgery but certain items are missing like the artery forceps, dissecting forceps, mosquito forceps, laryngoscopes, gauze and cotton, suture materials,diathermy, syringes, etc. In fact, it all depends on the nature of the operation.
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