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Review of Lucid Reality  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem painting the realities of life. It gives the reader food for thought on several matters concerning the daily principles of living. It's true that humanity cannot change these established norms but they are important for the good functioning of the society. One must adapt or perish. Life is not a bed of roses.. The title should have been the harsh realities of life.
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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
An interesting guided tour in the farm explaining the various products exposed to the public.It makes the visitor discover the multiple varieties of jams and sauces. But be careful only a few of them are allowed as samples. The farm offers a wide rage of edible foods to be tasted by the onlooker. The only drawback is that some of the jellies and jams are injurious to health.
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Review by Boz
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
A poem describing the changing. of seasons with the presence of the wind announcing the transition. Each season had its own specific attributes and colours . Seasons come and go but the wind remains still. The beauties of every season are qualitatively described. The rotation of the four seasons imply the evolution of life.
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Review by Boz
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A n interesting poem describing how Jenny's world is in the box. Feeling secure and protected from the world of wickedness and mischief she is happy in her own environment. Her friend Johnny was her only communicating partner. Both enjoyed each other's companionship until the death of the male one. But Jenny is reluctant to mingle with the outside world and prefers to sequestrate herself in her box.
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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A long winding poem related by the writer about the experiences he witnessed in another world. It depicts a world of sensationalism and horror at the same time. It consists of contradictory lines with contrary connotations. Indeed it is awkward to distinguish whether it is a good or bad world. The writer leaves this to the opinion of the reader.
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Review of Crossing the line  
Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A poem referring to the invisible world. But what happens after death? It is still a mystery. In the unseen world no one has got the opportunity to return and tell how is it. The place may be dark, void and scary. Life ends in this world and starts in the unseen one. Is there a line of demarcation between the two worlds?
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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A long poem based on love in all its aspects. There is an endless description of these feelings. Love comes as a leitmotiv in the poem In almost every line the reader comes across the central theme. It seems that the author is deeply amorous. Much emphasis is also laid on physical love.. However., it does not appear to be pure love with the connotation of gay/ lesbian
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Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem depicting how efforts are rewarded even for a short while. Perfection is is unrealistic. However, man must continue to struggle until he achieves the target. Sometimes one can reach close to perfection . But repeated attempts should always be effected..Don't lose hopes
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Review of The Waters Fire  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A romantic poem illustrating the manifestations of merriness in love. Everything seems to be so good but not everlasting. In love one does not differentiate between right and wrong. Love is the sole master of the situation. The poem is dedicated to a person who appears to be not reacting and indifferent.
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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good poem delving into memories of all types. Sometimes they make us feel happy and sometimes sad. It reminds us of the time spent together in the company of somebody who no longer exists. But both good and bad memories shape our lives. Only one funeral can torment the mind even if there are four weddings.
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Review of Kids With Fangs  
Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A poem illustrating the celebration of Halloween by the kids. It gives ample details about the activities going on on that day. We see how the children are enjoying themselves and are mirthful. A real fun day for the tots. Playing among friends they are in their own world. Sometimes a ghost and sometimes a zombie passing by to rejoice themselves. Long live childhood!
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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
How far is this true? Although the probability of an accident is high it does not mean that the passenger should wear soiled clothes. The priority in an accident is life saving.. Who will care about the attire?. With careful driving accidents can be prevented.
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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A realistic poem painting the behaviour of parents before their children. Of course, they tend to copy the elders. Here, the parents are destroying the future of the children. Instead of being role models they are misleading the tots. A good and decent upbringing will obviously reflect the characters of parents in the young ones. If the kids are not well guided the parents are to be blamed because they have dismissed from their responsibilities
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Review of Friends?  
Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A romantic poem analysing the effects of love on humanity. They are united in love, get apart and are reunited but in friendship this time. From love to friendship. Which is stronger? it seems that love does not last long as compared to friendship. It gives an impression that their friendship should not have been transformed into love.
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Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem originating from an anxious mind. She is hunting for peace of mind but in spite of all those attempts she's still mentally disturbed. Fear of the unknown? Who can tell what will happen to- morrow? She looks worried for the future. But let's live every single moment.
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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A poem boasting the qualities of Javert who is a loyal and devoted representative of the law. With a strict character and determination he endeavours to eliminate injustice and establish law and order. His mission is to kill the culprits for the the survival of justice. But the poem requires a little flexibility.
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Review of Shaman's Trance  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem evoking the search of identity. The individual is not aware about the environment and thinks to be in a dream. There is darkness everywhere and no complete orientation. The atmosphere is wrapped with a strange silence. The presence of shadows tend to complicate the surrounding. The writing can be simplified for better understanding
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Review by Boz
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A funny poem describing in what circumstances John met Donna and how he fell for her. The foul smell of the girl does not seem to lessen John.'s enthusiasm. But again he reminds the reader about the bad smell in Donna. In fact ,perfumes cannot promote good hygiene. Hence, the boy's appeal to bathe before going on a date. At the end John is relieved to get rid of her when she returns to Mitch.
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Review of Marianne  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A satirical poem narrating the downfall of the king who was cruel to the subjects. Marianne, portrayed as a saviour tries her best to liberate the country from the atrocities of the king. Many signs of the downfall are clearly described by the writer and almost all the predictions come true. An epic written to celebrate victory.
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Review of Croatia  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (3.5)
A travel article painting a picture of Croatia, a country once torn by war and political instability. The author gives the reader an overview of the interesting sites which are worthwhile visiting. Much emphasis is also laid on the gastronomy which consists of seafood. Very little information about culture.It requires more details about climate,weather and hotels.
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Review of All Die Once  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem related to the melancholic aspect of life. Life is short and it must be lived to the fullest. Don't let trivial matters ruin our existence. It must be spent happily and harmoniously for death is awaiting us in every nook and corner. Don't waste life by committing blunders and then regretting afterwards. Life is a unique opportunity.
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Review of My shed.  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem reflecting upon the advice of the parent to his son. In fact, it was a good idea to annex a shed to the house. Sometimes, we may need something which is stored there. Then its importance is realised. Instead of buying the items every time it is practicable to keep them for future use. But the things must be arranged tidily. Your father was right.
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Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful poem illustrating the faithfulness of the person towards the other. Devotion of heart and soul to the beloved one. The individual helps other people without expecting to get something in return. Very rare nowadays. The presence of the special person is of utmost importance. Without her life is incomplete. Indeed, it is a unique form of loyalty.
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Review of Untitled  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (4.0)
The untitled poem can be given several titles. It evokes only negative feelings like hatred, darkness, bleeding emotions, death. The word revenge prevails throughout the poem.. However, at the end we see the emergence of love which deletes all the bleak aspects of the piece of writing.
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Review of Hatred Swells  
Review by Boz
Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem is based on all the evil things which take place after sunset in the night. Although being short the poem expresses many ideas. The crying of demons symbolizes ghastly occurrences at night. The attention of the reader is diverted towards the world of supernatural.. However, it requires more elaboration
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