This is such a wonderfully told story of past memories, those of colorful youth, laughter and
happiness. How we all must be reminded of those
wonderful days when sisters and brothers could
be the only people in the world for the time and
it didn't matter. What wonderful times with just the family. I could see the picture you painted of the children eating the mangoes and enjoying them right down to the very last one, for the hot lazy summer days that we thought would last forever. Thank you for sharing the joy and the taste of that wonderful fruit, and for all the memories of the past. keep up the great writing.
Sincerely
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What a very nice piece you've written to that special
someone. I love your play with words about the band on his finger letting the reader know that he is your life choice and partner.
Thank you for sharing this work with us and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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What a lovely tribute to a strong gifted women, who with no skills other than taking care of home and family, and with little education pulled herself up and flew like that beautiful butterfly. God bless her, and I salute you for writing her story.
Thank you for sharing this timely piece and welcome to Writing.Com.
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MDuci
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Yes, it is true the first thing you notice are the eyes. I think everyone who ever cared about another person or even a new born child wants to look into the eye's. For they are the windows to the soul and every deed happy or sad is in the eyes. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to visiting you again.
Sincerely
MDuci
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What a delightful piece on women's night out.
I feel as if I was a part of that group of
exceptional women. I love us, I love being a
woman and show it in everything I do. I love
being out with my friends, and there is never
a dull moment where ever we go. Thank you for
sharing and I look forward to visiting your site again soon.
What a beautiful piece, and thank you so much for sharing the information about how it came to be.
I think your writing has such a flair and a lovely grace about it. This piece swirls and sways across the mind taking one on many different rides, all good and all exciting. It speakes wonders, and these two lines somehow I favor the most:
'I want to walk through the world of my imagination, both when I sleep and when I wake and know that I am doing no wrong by being here, creating my worlds and stories.'
I'm so happy that you paid a visit to my site now I have the opportunity to read your work. It was a pleasure visiting and I'll be back.
Sincerely
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Thank you for this wonderful little tale of the hunter and the hunt. You painted a very nice picture
for me to look at. I felt I was sitting in the theatre some many, many years ago and the actor had me fasten to my seat spellbound. I like your style and please continue to write.
Sincerely
Mduci
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I can see that you like to write, and you seem to be able to say what feels comfortable to you. But I would suggest that you stretch and pull all the little ends together and really say what is on your mind. No one should end their life because of one bad seed, there are so many beautiful seeds out there just ripe for the plucking. Keep writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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What a wonderful inspiring story of a young man who
found that he wasn't different but very normal indeed.
This story is very touching and makes one think about being in the young man's shoes and finding the beauty in just hearing and touching. I love your special way of relating the two characters together, outstanding.
A must read for everyone.
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
MDuci
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This is just too cute! I love the color and it fits
right in with the season.
'Beware one and all of Halloween night.
Must you be reminded it’s a spook’s delight?
I can't wait to see all those little spookie faces looking up at me, on that scarry night. I look so forward to Halloween. For the past two years we have placed to big people (dolls my sister made just for the night)a man and a women on the front porch with a large bowl of goodies between them and the children can help themselves, they always leave enough for the next group of little characters.
Thanks for sharing this one with us.
Love
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Came accross you port and it looked very interesting! so I thought I'd sit a while and catch upon some reading. This little title quickly tweeked my readers 'love at first sight title bone' so I thought lets go with this one. Not at all what I expected, but thats okay it still gave me a little laugh and some really good smiles. I really did like that ending very much it shows that there is still some life after death. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
MDuci
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Very nicely written and your facts about the history of Mississippi, and the civil war is very informative. There are still so many things that we don't find in books! They must be handed down from generation to generation and told in the way you've done. Because somethings won't be found in history books.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of history with us. I see that you are just joining us and please let me extent a very warm welcome to you from Writing.Com.
Sincerely
MDuci
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What a wonderful piece you've composed here, there
may not be any notes written but I could really hear
a song floating on the wind singing your words as I passed your port.
'I cannot write any notes, to music any way.
But I can write poems, if you listen to what I say.'
I'm listening, and I'm sure all those little 5th graders listening too. Thank you so much for sharing
and for brighting my day.
What a lovely tribute to someone you cared a great
deal about.
I hope this person knew how much you cared and what
she meant to you before she left this world for what
we hope and pray is more loving and beautiful without pain.
You never cease to amaze me! Have I told you that before?
Everytime I think I've read your best you come right
back with another even better.
what a wonderful job of putting that many genres in
your story. Your characters were too believable and
fit like a glove. These were my favorite lines;
'I blushed and shook my head, wishing someone else was in the classroom with us. Mr. Peppers had gone to use the restroom, and I was stuck here alone with a girl who was probably into the Occult.'
Great story from a great writer, write on.
Thank you for sharing and I could not find any errors at all of any sort.
It's a winner in my opinion.
Sincerely
Marlena
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Looks like a fun project you're about to tackle. Would this be for English Lit. class?
One thing I can tell you about King Henry V he was
not about to release these men. He was not that nice
even to a good friend...what do you think he'd do to a disloyal friend?
Good luck in your research and welcome to Writing.Com.
You've joined just in time for our 6th Birthday celebration.
Have a great weekend and get busy on that essay.
Sincerely
Mduci
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Now and then one comes upon such beauty, and here at Writing.Com it is nearly daily. I love fantasy and
fairy tales and this lovely is done in just the right
colors for my spirit.
I love the title and this is my favorite verse;
'Gliding through winds above mountains of green,
They came across an island in the Western Sea.
Sharp rocks on all sides; it was contained,
Invoking elemental guardians of ancient names.'
You have a wonderful way of playing with words and
your visual is always present.
Only one tiny suggestion, and it is just a suggestion!
See how it would look if it were not centered.
Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your work very soon.
Sincerely
Mduci
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Again I have found something on your site so delightful. This one is also a perfect five
from me.
I love how you used the gift of the eyes over
being confined to the use of a 3x5. I love these
lines I will think of this cutie every time I see
someone peering into the eye of a 3x5.
'I’d rather fall asleep and rest my gift
Than clean a lens and charge batteries.
To look left to right and up to down
Without the movement of a hand,
Would only seem natural to me.'
I enjoy your writing so very much and happy that you
wanted to share it here on Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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I like this Good Deeds... Go Noticed v9.0 contest very much, I think it will provide many authors a chance to be reviewed and also help provide gps for some very good causes and maybe help some with earning an upgrade.
Thank you for always being inventive and also informative. This is a great place to live. And
HAPPY 6th BIRTHDAY!*ballon6*
Sincerely
Mduci
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Mduci
Great informative piece, and the ten hints are great for those who write press releases for themselves or others. I know for sure I can use them in my own press releases for my business.
I like the idea about including a photo of the person,
event or group you're writing about.
I have printed off a copy for my reference desk and will also like to mention this article in my "I REMEMBER WHEN" Newsletter, for October.
Thank you for sharing and looking forward to reading more of your work.
Sincerely
Mduci
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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds... Go Noticed v9.0".
This is a story that I will surely read aloud to my grandchildren and perhaps they one day will read it to their own.
At the beginning I tried reading it silently but soon found that it reads much easier and smoother when read aloud. I loved each and every line of your story and found no errors at all.
These lines stand out to be so well remembered;
'All the poodle had perceived in the parcels were pitch pipes, and what kind of paradise could a pitch
pipe bring? ♫'
I very much like the painting you've painted and the colors are all so very, very grand. Of course the highlight of this story is the polka-dotted poodle, not to mention all the wonderful bright array of magnificent colors and the story was not only flowing but also glowing with a houseful of beautiful birds, horses and all the wedding guests. And of course the bride and groom. I love the mix with the padre it was special.
Thank you so much for sharing this great read.
Sincerely
Mduci
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