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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Bodhisattawa Parekh, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Reason of Bad Poetries"  by Bodhisattawa Parekh

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written poem for bad poetry day. Interesting idea for this entertaining work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of an author in a land where revolution has taken over leaving little time to write.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this interesting poem.

Bodhisattawa Parekh, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Takeover  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Scott Spence, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Takeover"  by Scott Spence

Clarity:A great title for this tale.

Writing style: Modern fiction drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A great structure and format that makes it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does indeed seem to be specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:---The toilet was constantly being voice-activated.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: This awesome story has a realistic tone as if it could have come from today's news.

A well written truly entertaining modern day tale.

Grabs the readers attention from the beginning and keeps it throughout the tale.

Well described strong characters that help to draw the reader's attention and keep it.

A great format that makes it easy for the reader. This makes it easier for them to get into the story.

Excellently described modern-day style tale that does seem to be close to being a reality.

Scott Spence, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Usman, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"A fantastic life and profession"  by Usman

Clarity: A good title that describes well the contents of this work.

Writing style: Biographical opinion article.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only one, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Seems like a good structure.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog seems to be specific to its speaker.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written biographical style article singing praises about a remarkable lady.

This article is packed full of good useful information. Written in an entertaining style.

Usman, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi ~Unknown~, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The girl with the broken smile"  by ~Unknown~

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep poem that well describes a beautiful person. A unique tone for this delightful poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of a beautiful girl unaware of her beauty at this small point on life's highway.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the spelling grammar only Canucks of this delightful work.

~Unknown~, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Find A Yellow Car  
Review by Joseph
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Deepak Sagar, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Find A Yellow Car"  by Deepak Sagar

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:An entertaining tale that brings back memories for this reader.
I too have two daughters our game was punch buggy, the punches were usually left out but the first one to see a punch buggy would have to call it by color.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see family traveling to a vacation site while being entertained with this find a car game.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the spelling grammar on mechanics of this entertaining tale.

Deepak Sagar, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Death Unexpected  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi gibarbour, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Littletown Rock "  by gibarbour

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A invitation with descriptions of a thriller book that is promised to keep you setting on the edge of your seat. Well written opening the reader to the idea of reading this described book.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a magical world in a different realm where deaf is only one of many levels one may visit.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find with the spelling grammer or mechanics of this work.

gibarbour, thank you for sharing your work.
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Review of The Globe  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi Nikola-New Horizons, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Globe"  byNikola-New Horizons

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful picture this poem paints. A nice rhyming pattern that helps give this work a simple yet elegant flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: Snow can indeed be a most beautiful distraction from reality.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that this reader can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this beautiful work of art.

Nikola-New Horizons, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Truth  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi THANKFUL SONALI Looks Ahead, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Truth"  by THANKFUL SONALI Looks Ahead

Clarity: A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Childrens drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Good dialogue that is specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:--- "Well, as long as you are really sorry ... Make sure you wash your face well."---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: There is nothing like kids, it is kind of funny how though they all are just about alike in some ways.

A well written entertaining tale, using only a few words. Short to the point, entertaining just the way today's reader likes things.

THANKFUL SONALI Looks Ahead, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Strychnine, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Too young to burn "  by Strychnine

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Bang, Bang, bang---jump. A well written short work that catches the readers attention well from the start. "just a bit more."

Catchy phrases that manage to grab the readers and hold their focus.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a young Atlas with the weight of the world on his shoulders yet negotiating with Hercules to lessen the burden.

Time often tricks us, making us think it's all got to be right now. With age comes wisdom and understanding that tomorrow's time is totally unbiased of today's time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work however it probably wouldn't hurt to work on the structure of this deep work.

Strychnine, thank you for sharing your work.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Galaticeclipse, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"here comes a thought (issue zero)"  by Galaticeclipse

Clarity:An interesting title for this tale.

Writing style: Fanfiction adventure drama.

Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem to be specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line: ---"Seriously, Jimmy, that's been our parking spot for a year. You have got to start burying the pedal," Mae told James.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written entertaining adventure tale.

Good descriptions that help to keep the readers attention.

Strong well described characters with realistic dialogue. This helps keep the reader into the story.

The ending leaves the reader wanting a little more needing to turn the page.



Galaticeclipse, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proofread and edit never hurts.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi InsaneCreationess, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Mortem Enterprises - Snippet #04"  by InsaneCreationess

Clarity:Seems to be a good title for this tale.

Writing style:Screenplay adventure drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem to be specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- The circle of Revoirâme tightened around the weary agents, gnashing fangs and flailing claws poised to strike.----

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Reads like a screen play, a good introduction of characters for a larger work.

A well written adventure tale that grabs the readers attention good from the start. Great descriptions that draw the reader into the story-line.

Strong characters that are described well helping the reader relate to them.

Seems like a good chapter with scenes that can be referenced in future works when needed.

InsaneCreationess, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proofread and edit never hurts and then continue the story so the reader can turn the page.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Strychnine, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Caught Between Fear, Duty, and Doubt"  by Strychnine

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A deep writing questioning everything. I think that we all slip into those areas from time to time when we just have to question everything because nothing seems to be going right. Amazingly time has both that effect with the opposite most the time right behind, then all seems about right.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see someone having a bad day yet followed by an extraordinary day. Time passages often go from one extreme to the other. The good usually out weighing the bad.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I could find nothing wrong with the spelling grammar of mechanics of this deep work.

Strychnine, thank you for sharing your work.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Chico Mahalo, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"the secret of her bloom"  by Chico Mahalo

Clarity: A interesting title for this tale.

Writing style:Biographical relationship drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only one, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure and formatt that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- I think that you're doing fine. But, I think, periodically, things creep up, insecurities. I think it's... I think it's a case of, if the dog hadn't stopped to pee, he might have caught the rabbit...'"---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Well written with good descriptions that help the reader to relate to the story.

Reads much like a true story, this helps keep the readers attention.

A nice modern tone to this tale that helps the reader to relate.


Chico Mahalo, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proofread and edit never hurts.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of New Becomes Old  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Jeff, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"New Becomes Old"  by Jeff

Clarity: A fair title for this work.

Writing style:Personal biographical reference.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice format and structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:--- So while her colleagues and friends started out with old clunkers and were steadily making their climb toward sportier coupes and luxury sedans, Lena was more than happy to leave the top of the line behind, and embrace the fading paint, worn cloth seats, and aging, finicky engine that was her Avalon.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written tale that reads much like a true story. This helps the reader to relate to the story better.

A strong likable character with good descriptions that helps the reader to picture the scene.


Jeff, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proof read and edit never hurts.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Curtis, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Caleb and the stream"  by Curtis

Clarity: A nice title for this dream tale.

Writing style: Nature personal happy place.

Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is fairly easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Yes the dialog is specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line: ---The remarkable thing about nature and the path is that with all the things that swirl around Caleb, all the unknowns in life, all the twists and turns of relationships and work the trail stays the same. ---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: There is nothing like a happy place. Especially on a stream, the tune of the stream can both relax and inspire a person. Everyone needs a happy place where they can find their personal solitude and inspiration.

Curtis, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A lot of good stuff here, a good proofread and edit never hurts.

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Review of Tired  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi KindaJackofAllTrades, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Tired"  by KindaJackofAllTrades

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well said. With a few lines you have said it all. Short, to the point just the way today's reader likes it.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a person overworking themselves to try and complete the job, having set too big of a goal for themselves. Working almost to exhaustion to complete a goal no one else is aware of.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work. By the way I love the handle name.

KindaJackofAllTrades, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Day She Left  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Natasha, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Day She Left"  by Natasha

Clarity:A good title that does describe the content of this tale well.

Writing style: Relationship drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Good dialog that is specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:---"You nag me about mowing the lawn. You get all upset because I want to spend some time with the guys. And look at you. You've let yourself go. You're not the same woman I married. I'd leave you if you weren't such a good cook."---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Well written and described, helping the reader get into the story.

Reads like a true story, this makes the tale seem real to the reader.

A nice ending that lets the reader finish as they see fit.


Natasha, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi SeanFear, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Lady of Glass Shoes"  by SeanFear

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A unique style and a random rhyming pattern come together to form a unique flow for this romance style poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see soul mates swimming against the Rapids of time striving to reach one another.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

SeanFear, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Chico Mahalo, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Our Style Just Didn't Coalesce"  by Chico Mahalo

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A relationship style work questioning life at a certain point in time. It is funny how points in time find us in many different scenarios that seem so life changing at that point in time. Yet tomorrow often is as different as night from day.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a young couple trying to define their new relationship only to find there relationship needs not defining only the time needs to be defined.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep work.

Chico Mahalo, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Blood Suckers  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Writer_Mike, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Blood Suckers"  by Writer_Mike

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A short yet entertaining tale. Well written with a good structure strong character and dialog.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a mythological land where vampires or massing for their attack yet hide in stealth.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find to with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Writer_Mike, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi D.K.D. I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Invalid Item"  by D.K.D.

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:We always do wonder what is going on in the mind of our pets. This entertaining works shows one reality.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of an mid-evil soul cursed to live life as a cat then somehow getting the strength to write down his thoughts.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

D.K.D., thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Presley Rhodes, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Song unfinished "  by Presley Rhodes

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong emotion filled work. The emotion screams out and grabs the reader. A lot of good stuff that can be used in future works.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a young artist experimenting with their craft learning how to chisel there work to reveal the art.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful work.

Presley Rhodes, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Galacticeclipse, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"episode one: eugene and his normal life"  by Galacticeclipse

Clarity:Seems like a good title for this tale.

Writing style: Teen adventure romance drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure is easy for the reader

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- "Seriously? When you walk around, I would say it's more of like a Kaiju monster like Godzilla for example."---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and described tale that holds the readers attention well.

Good descriptions that lure the reader into the story.

A good ending that leaves the reader wanting to know more.

Galacticeclipse, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

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Joseph
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Review of The Avalanche  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Sumojo, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Avalanche "  by Sumojo

Clarity: A good title for this adventure tale.

Writing style:Environmental adventure drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Yes, the structure is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- A whoosh of snow enveloped her, but at first that didn’t worry her thinking it was coming from her other friends behind her, until she realised she was being swept up by an avalanche of snow and she was falling, over and over.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written entertaining short story.

Good descriptions that make the reader feel the environment.

Reads like a true story which holds the readers attention even better.

Sumojo, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Magic13, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"My Secret Hideout "  by Magic13

Clarity: A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Spiritual fantasy drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Yes, a good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes, the dialog seems to be specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- It was not the village that made my heart flip it was the scenic beauty of the natural setting that did it for me.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and well worded entertaining story.

Nice structure that makes it easy for the reader. Good descriptions that help the reader to picture the scenes'.

Good strong character that helps the reader relate to the story.

Magic13, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:A good proof read and edit never hurts.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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