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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Winchester Jones, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Old Ryker House"  by Winchester Jones

Clarity:A good title for this childrens tale.

Writing style:Ghost childrens drama.

Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog seems specific for it's speaker.

My favorite line:---. “It’s the wind, you big baby!”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A delightful contest entry story.

Nicely formatted with good descriptions. This makes it easy for the reader while keeping their attention.

Winchester Jones, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proofread and edit never hurts especially on an older work that you haven't seen for a while.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Rishi, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Some life may I borrow?"  by Rishi

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded poem with two repeating lines at the end of each stanza that add to the unique tone.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a soul lost on the pathway of life, negotiating with death for more time

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling on mechanics of this delightful work.

Rishi, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Ashok Banerjee, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Invalid Item"  by Ashok Banerjee

Clarity:A great title that describes the content of this work well.

Writing style:Book review.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.



My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A thoroughly good detailed review that makes me want to read the book. Well done!

To the point with enough information to make the point. This is what todays readers seem to like, keeping with the speed of the cyber age. Everything flowing so fast leaving only a limited time to scan before clicking again.

Ashok Banerjee, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.



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Review of Happy  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Jimmy Fog, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Happy"  by Jimmy Fog

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful deep poem. Well worded, this poem relates well with the authors name.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a morning fog rising over the ocean while an artists try to capture a piece of its glory.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see nothing at all wrong with the grammar spelled or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Jimmy Fog, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Kare Enga in Montana, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "A snowman cares about our memory water"  by Kare Enga in Montana

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded ekphrastic poem. A great idea, how a snowman cares about water.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a snowman appearing and reappearing through time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Kare Enga in Montana, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Attempting  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Sumojo, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Attempting "  by Sumojo

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Eight line poetry. It is amazing what can be said in eight short lines of poetry.

I might can think of a poem in 60 seconds although I can't say how good it would be.


Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see an ancient Greek philosopher experimenting with different ways of expressing their poetry.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Sumojo, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Summer Magic  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Genipher, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Summer Magic"  by Genipher

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Childrens mysteries drama

Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? a great structure that is indeed easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:--- “That means someone wasn’t trying to break in,” Maya gasped. “They were trying to break out”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written entertaining tale, especially considering that it was written for the writers cramp in 24 hours. Awesome.

Great descriptions that help the reader to picture the scene.

Genipher, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proofread and edit never hurts to catch any overlooked typos.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi HuntersMoon, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Don't Wait - Update!"  by HuntersMoon

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A great title for this sign of the times type poem. The times surely have changed in ways many of us didn't expect. Even though we should have seem it coming.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see time rolling like a snowball down a steep mountain gaining size and speed as it devours all in its path.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems at all with the format grammar or mechanics of this beautiful piece of art.

HuntersMoon, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Progress  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi green supports Israel, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Progress"  by green supports Israel

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written and structured Rictameter form poem. Short, straight to the point, that's how todays reader's like it.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see a politician trying to convince people they have made change. People seeing no change made.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problem at all with the grammar spelling on the mechanics of this delightful poem.

green supports Israel, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Memoirs of you  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Laharee Banerjee, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Invalid Item"  by Laharee Banerjee

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A romance poem to a former lover. Acknowledging that the author has moved on.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a strong young relationship ending abruptly with sorrow. Leaving the author figuring the words that it takes to move on.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this short delightful poem.

Laharee Banerjee, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of help  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi coals, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "help"  by coals

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A short yet strong cry for help. It takes a while due to circumstances and such for each individual to figure out when it's time to quit blindly following. Start in a new direction while offering a new direction for others to follow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a soul that feels trapped in the ship of time yet slowly makes a new way out.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this entertaining work.

coals, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Trapped  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi ElaraFox101, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Trapped"  by ElaraFox101

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded strong poem that starts out pointing out common flaws that most of us can relate to. Then ending with good advice's for remedies.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a soul stuck in a trap of time and slowly figuring away for escape.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

ElaraFox101, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Charity Marie -*Heart*, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Libby's Law Letter"  by Charity Marie -*Heart*

Clarity: A good title for this great letter.

Writing style:Modern nonfiction letter.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structured letter. The structure could be easier for the electronic reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:---She went from believing everyone was going to kill her to the loving, smiling, happy child I knew her to be.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written letter and great attempt at changing the current health care situation. This letter points out many flaws in the system.

A very strong and emotional letter I hope that it's done some good.

Our system has many faults and I know there are many even the majority of people that feel this way. Letters like this could start the change that is inevitable.

Charity Marie -*Heart*, thank you for sharing this super strong work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of How many sorries?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hi Riley I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "How many sorries?"  by Riley

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:How many sorries will it take? A well written very strong deep poem. I like this poem, well done.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a mystical world where all coincide in peace.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find nothing at all wrong with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this lovely poem.

Riley thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi GERVIC, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "A Gaze on their Struggling Lives"  by GERVIC

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:What a beautiful tribute to your parents. The descriptions are so strong you can feel the emotions as well as the aches from the labor of your parents. Even the joy from that glimmer of a smile.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a loving family happily living the best they can. Proud of their rewards.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find in this wonderful family story.

GERVIC, thank you for sharing your work.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Sebs, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "For Those in Prison"  by Sebs

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep strong emotional poem. Projects a positive flow with good advise.
Well written sending out positive vibrations.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a soul trapped in solitude from their own mind.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see nothing at all wrong with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining positive poem.

Sebs, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Jameson Rehm, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"It Wasn't My Fault"  by Jameson Rehm

Clarity:Intriguing title for this tale.

Writing style: Personal horror drama.

Are all 3 genres listed? Only 2, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure is somewhat easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specefic for it's speaker.

My favorite line:---Anyway, only God in His infinite wisdom knows how or why she spotted me that night and zeroed in on my position.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:An entertaining well written mystery tale.

Gets the readers attention from the start then enough hints to keep the readers attention. An ending that leaves the reader wanting to know "what the **** happened?"

Jameson Rehm, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a larger font size with some line spacing to make it easier for readers with weak eye's.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi JCosmos, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"'Celebrating the Take-Over of the Earth""  by JCosmos

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Sci-fi war drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A great structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line: --- “Guys, it is now or never. The Khan are winning, we are losing the battle. But we are not done yet. We may lose the battle but God willing, we will win the war, we keep the faith, keep hope alive and remember when humanity was free.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written sci-fi tale with great descriptions. The descriptions help keep the readers attention.

Strong characters that help the reader to better get into the story.

A great story-line for this entertaining tale.

JCosmos, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Detective, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Magic Treasure Chest"  by Detective

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded poetic treasure hunt. Very delightful poem with the mystery adding to the positive flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see kids on vacation at the beach enjoying a mystery, hunting for a treasure chest.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Detective, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Pearlescent  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi Scarypotato, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Pearlescent"  by Scarypotato

Clarity: A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Mystery adventure tale.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:---Dear reader, I do not count this retelling as a breach of my oath. Both Mrs and Mr. Codswell have long since died, therefore I kept my promise.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A entertaining mystery tale. Well described with strong characters. This helps to keep the readers attention.

Nicely structured, short to the point the way today's readers like things.

Scarypotato, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.


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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Davejesi, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Elemental Chronicles Chapter 7"  by Davejesi

Clarity: The title could describe the contents of this chapter better.

Writing style: Fantasy action drama.

Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A good structure and format that is fairly easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- Then Aqua asked Draefus "So, sir are you truly the boss of this beautiful business and he said "yes of course", then Aqua said "wow I have heard so much about you, you are truly magnificent" but in her mind she said a fat cow a disappointment, and I could hear her---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A strong opening for this tale, that grabs the readers attention.
Strong characters with good descriptions that does help the reader to picture the scene.

Many well detailed descriptions. This helps hold the readers attention.

The dialog does not seem to be in the standard format that starts a new paragraph when the speaker changes.

Consider a good proof read and edit. There are many sentences that are extremely long making them sound a bit dangling. A larger font size with line spacing would make it easier for those of us with weak eyes.



Davejesi, thank you for sharing this entertaining work it has been a joy to read it.


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Joseph
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Review of Rediscover  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi intuey, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Rediscover"  by intuey

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A nicely worded poem with a good structure all adding together for a unique flow. Good use of all the prompt words.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see souls traveling backwards thru time trying to learn how to refresh there soul.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics this entertaining poem.

intuey, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Politics  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

Hi Fivesixer, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: Politics by Fivesixer

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A nicely designed free verse poem. Politics is greed, unfortunately I might have to agree. Indeed politics is one of those subjects I find best to avoid. Seems that everyone has their own opinion, they're right, their mind is not gonna be changed. No use to waste your breath.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a politician arguing with a Stonewall.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I could find with the spelling, grammar or mechanics of this poem.

Fivesixer, thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi scarlett_raven, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "The Highway of Existence"  by scarlett_raven

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Starts out as a getting older time journey. Then it turns into a road trip that I think most of us can relate to. One of those trips when you hoped your car would get you there and back. I remember a few of them.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a traveler slowly navigating time while learning it's not about the destination it's all about the journey.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this poem.

scarlett_raven, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Hi again Ebonii, I came across this work while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the story: "Sindy's Summer Adventure (continued)"  by Ebonii

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well formatted story still yet a bit entertaining.

Unsure where the story is heading.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul lost in time working hard too find the way home.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I don't see too many problems with the spelling mechanics or grammar of this work.

Ebonii, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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