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Review of History Repeated.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Mary Ann MCPhedran I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"History Repeated." Open in new Window. by Mary Ann MCPhedran

Clarity: A good title for this biographical story.

Writing style: Biographical Drama.

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My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written biographical story about Frankie and Molly. Short and to the point, just the way the modern reader likes things these days.

History repeating, however, Molly and Frankie seems like a bit of a sad story.

Mary Ann MCPhedranthank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: There appears to be an ML tag after the first word 'Frankie'.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi WindSpirit3 I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Written from Chakras " Open in new Window. by WindSpirit3

Clarity: A good title for this psychedelic adventure tale.

Writing style: Spiritual experience. Drama.

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Is the structure and format easy for the reader?*Smile*

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Smile*

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: I like the poetic opening lines for this journey. Well described in a diary style format with such great descriptions that the reader is soon transported to that psychedelic realm alongside you.

Indeed, finding oneself is definitely a spiritual adventure that not many people get to experience.

WindSpirit3 thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it. You have gotten my mind to spinning.

Suggestions:Write On!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Quatae Turnage I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Stay In A Brick House " Open in new Window. by Quatae Turnage

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A delightful six line free verse style poem, that reminds me a bit of the fairy tale The Three Little Pigs. Indeed, brick houses are stronger than most.

Free verse poetry is a form of poetry that does not adhere to a fixed regular Rhyme or metrical scheme allowing for greater creative freedom.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Quatae Turnage thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Constitution  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Patricia A. Maniaca I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Constitution" Open in new Window. by Patricia A. Maniaca

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A great picture for this groovy poem. A well worded free verse style poem that leaves plenty of room for the reader to read into it what ever he wishes. This poem carries a modern day realistic flow. From start to finish.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Patricia A. Maniaca thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Drowning  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem: "The Drowning " Open in new Window. by ambyp

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A thirty-three line free verse style poem focusing on the quiet drowning. Well worded short stanzas that pack a lot of emotion.

At certain points in one's life, most all people get these feelings of seeming invisible to the world around you. Time has a funny sense of humor, and I'm sure it will be no time until you look back from your happy life to this poem and remember this particular low point.

Be happy, make time to smell the roses.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

ambyp thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impressions of the poem: "Sunflower Shutters" Open in new Window. by Kay Carter

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep well worded 17 line free verse style poem. Written in a unique Gothic style that really works well for this poem, it gives it a deep flow.

Indeed embracing adulthood is definitely enough to give one Gothic feelings.

Free verse poetry is a form of poetry that does not adhere to a fixed regular Rhyme or metrical scheme allowing for greater creative freedom.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see.

Kay Carter thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Quatae Turnage I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Life is Like a Road " Open in new Window. by Quatae Turnage

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful seven line free verse style poem describing how life is like a road.
'Life is like a road
Filled with straights and curves'
What a great line.

Free verse poetry is a form of poetry that does not adhere to a fixed regular Rhyme or metrical scheme allowing for greater creative freedom.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Quatae Turnage thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Apparently James  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Jacky I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Apparently James" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity:An intriguing title.

Writing style: Animal folklore drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Good dialog.

My favorite line:---As I caught up, there was James holding a straggly, whiny gray kitten. “Gram! He’s all alone! I bet he’s hungry!” The kitten actually purred. “You have to take him home!”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written short story focusing on friendship and how pets can become part of our lives.

Jacky thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Maryann I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Sights and Sounds of Fall" Open in new Window. by Maryann

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Such a lovely description of the sights and sounds of fall.
Well worded haiku style poem that truly carries a refreshing flow.

A haiku is a traditional Japanese poetic form consistent of three lines and 17 syllables typically arranged in a 5-7-5 pattern.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the birds soaring gracefully in the fall skies against the mountains painted with their colored leaves.

Maryann thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Surface  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Jeffrey Meyer I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Surface" Open in new Window. by Jeffrey Meyer

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:"Surface" is a delightful well worded five line free verse style poem focusing on the environment. Short yet deep with a philosophical description of rain soaking into the fertile ground.

A Free verse poem is poetry that does not follow a fixed rhyme rhyme scheme or meter. It mimics the rhythms of naturals speech providing poets freedom to shape their lines stanzas and overall structure based on the emotional content of the poem.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with this delightful poem.

Jeffrey Meyer thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Ichabod Crane I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Stevie Wonder - born on May 13, 1950 " Open in new Window. by Ichabod Crane

Clarity:The title makes me think this is going to be more of a biography or a history type article.

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Stevie Wonder is no doubt an incredible and talented artist. Considered one of the most influential artists of the 20th century. To accomplish as much as he has with a disability like blindness is truly marvelous.

Well done! A creative idea with a well arranged word find puzzle focusing on the artist Stevie Wonder.



Ichabod Crane thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Marvelous Friend I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Sally’s Bad Hair Day " Open in new Window. by Marvelous Friend

Clarity:A wonderful title for this humorous story.

Writing style: Comedy entertainment drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?*Ha* Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?*Ha* Nice structure.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Ha*Good dialog.

My favorite line: ---She had this orange hair mixed with areas of dark brown.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written humorous tale, short yet makes its point well. It looks like you met the prompt requirements for this story well. I know that to meet the 24 hour requirement for the daily flash fiction challenge can be quite strenuous.

Marvelous Friend thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Sea Shells  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Queen NormaJean AKA Mailyn M. I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Sea Shells" Open in new Window. by Queen NormaJean AKA Mailyn M.

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful Eintou style seven line poem perfect for the S September SuperPower Reviewer Raid.

An entertaining poem very creatively written.

An eintou is a 7-line poem with a specific number of syllables in each line: 2-4-6-8-6-4-2.



Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with this entertaining work.

Queen NormaJean AKA Mailyn M. thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again StephBee I came across this quiz while reading the WDC Newsfeed.
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My impressions of the quiz: "Pretty Woman Movie Quiz" Open in new Window. by StephBee

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: I really enjoyed this quiz about the movie "Pretty Woman". Happens to be my wife's favorite movie however I must admit I've not watched it in years. I was quite happy that I got at least half the answers right anyway.

Indeed this movie was a classic movie, it seems in these modern times a good new movie is a rare find. Remakes of the old classics have become popular although most often not as good as the original.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:A great creative idea to post a random quiz that is hard for a reader pass up with out at least sampling it.

StephBee thank you for testing my memory with this quiz.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Rama Lebe I came across this work while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "A PLEASANT MORNING" Open in new Window. by Rama Lebe

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: Congratulations on the success of your novel being available now on Amazon Kindle. I feel sure that "Sakura Bloom at Dusk" will be a great success.
Amazon has become a great platform for authors to publish their own work without having to go through all the hoops and what not from typical publishers and editors. With Amazon's huge market there is great potential for readers to find your book and make it a success.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with this inspirational work.

Rama Lebe thank you for sharing your work.
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Review of The End  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Anni Pon I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The End" Open in new Window. by Anni Pon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A unique and creative style for this entertaining end of the world poem. A sci-fi poem about vowels, you must be a school teacher.

---The ultimate question Y---. I think that's my favorite line.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a planet far far far away. The planet's orbit has brought it too close to a black hole causing catastrophic time shifts as the planet comes close to it's total annihilation.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with this delightful work.

Anni Pon thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Hunter's Moon  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Ken HuntersMoon I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Hunter's Moon" Open in new Window. by HuntersMoon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: Back in the day I looked so forward to the Hunters Moon or Harvest Moon. When the harvest was in and hunting season would begin.

This enchanting Rondeau form poem captures the essence of those times and those memories then transforms them into words. A delightful poem titled The Hunter's Moon. Seems ironic for HuntersMoon to compose this delightful work that bares his name.

Form: A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the same metrical length).

Well done.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a realm where the harvest is done. A hunter set's on a mountain top looking toward a deep lagoon and becomes mesmerized by be tranquil beauty of that time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this magical classic HuntersMoon poem.

HuntersMoon thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Pan's Lair I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "There she goes the lady in peach. " Open in new Window. by Pan's Lair

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:The Lady in Peach is a delightful sixteen line free verse style poem with the first line repeating for the last line.

Well written in an entertaining secret romance fashion that carries a charming flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a beautiful lady dressed in peach running through a field on a sunny day, completely unaware of a secret admirer watching from the shadows.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find.

Pan's Lair thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Gold Rush  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Jeff is Gru in #2343485 I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"The Gold Rush" Open in new Window. by Jeff is Gru in #2343485

Clarity:A good title for this golden tale.

Writing style:Political folktale drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nice structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Good dialog.

My favorite line:---“I don’t have any doubt that if this plan fails, someone will need to be blamed for it. That’s precisely why I didn’t tell you about the plan until it was already in action. If it fails, you can blame it on a First Secretary of a remote province who got a little overly ambitious.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice gentle opening that begins to introduce the storyline. A good creative story, I like that you used some history on California's gold rush.

A well written entertaining story. A nice ending that lets the reader use his imagination a bit.

Jeff is Gru in #2343485 thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi G.B.Williams I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"How Do You Measure YOU?" Open in new Window. by G.B.Williams

Clarity: A great title for this inspirational "How to" article.

Writing style:Educational personal advice.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Indeed.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line: ---I have learned to measure me by being able to just listen to what is being said without being overly critical, but receptive to the possibility. I measure me by my ability to appreciate a rising or setting sun, and by still being able to see, and relate to a tree that stands tall and proud with lifted arms all day.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written inspirational article with a positive flow. A great opening line that makes this reader want more.

Most often it is easy to start measuring ourselves with what we perceive are other people's views. This article makes some wonderful points and has brightened this readers day.

G.B.Williams thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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Hi Coyote Clock I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Web Diary Of A Coyote: Sept 11, 2025" Open in new Window. by Coyote Clock

Clarity:The title describes this Coyote diary entry well.

Writing style:Modern biographical diary entry.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure is somewhat easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Yes the dialogue is appropriate for the speaker.

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good diary entry of what sounds like a wild coyote day.

Coyote Clock thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider more line spacing to make it appear less crowded and easier for the reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Departure  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Stick to My Own Beat I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Departure" Open in new Window. by Stick to My Own Beat

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful and humorous poem written in a unique form with every fifth line being a negative quote criticizing Elisa.
To be able to release anger into a humorous poem shows talent. I bet it was a great pressure release.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a teenager who is still treated like a preschooler by her mother. That fact gives her the strength and determination to move out and start a wonderful life in the adult world.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I combined with the grammar spelling on mechanics of this this delightful work.

Stick to My Own Beat thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Merkel Pillow  Open in new Window.
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Hi again Jatog the Green I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Merkel Pillow" Open in new Window. by Jatog the Green

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful forty line poem emphasizing on the idea of going without sleep.
This well written free verse style poem carries a nice humorous flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul suffering from insomnia and walking around like a zombie until the miracle of a new pillar comes to his reality.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I'm can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this delightful and humorous poem.

Jatog the Green thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again JCosmos I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Trumpian Sophy's Quatern" Open in new Window. by JCosmos

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Written in the form of "Sophy's Quatern"
* Sophy’s Quatern contains four stanzas of four lines each.

* Every line has ten syllables.

* No meter required.

* There is a rhyme scheme:
-- abab, caca, adad, eaea

* Line 1 of the first stanza is repeated
-- as line 2 of second stanza
-- as line 3 of third stanza
-- as line 4 of last stanza.

A unique form for this sixteen line entertaining poem about politics and President Trump.
A good job of meeting the prompt requirements.


JCosmos thank you for sharing your poem.
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Hi Ra M I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"A Page from My Diary" Open in new Window. by Ra M

Clarity:A nice title that describes the content well.

Writing style: Philosophical experience drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed? Yes by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Yes nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Yes the dialogue is appropriate for the speaker.

My favorite line:---Some moments refuse to be captured. They are like leaves drifting on a wind-swept stream — visible, even memorable, but impossible to hold. They are meant to unsettle you, to remind you that not all rivers run both ways.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A marvelous opening line for this poetic description of a philosopher's diary entry.

This colorful tale carries the reader into this enchanted moment captured in words.



Ra M thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Next page.

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