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Review of Lavender and Mint  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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My impressions of the poem: "Lavender and Mint" Open in new Window. by Stormy Cannon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded inspirational free verse poem. A deep work that gets the readers mind spinning.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a soul traveling down life's pathway learning from past mistakes then focusing that knowledge on a brighter future.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I see with the mechanics of this deep and inspirational work.

Stormy Cannon, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi nyxie, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "the empty space beside me " Open in new Window. by nyxie

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong emotional poem that carries a realistic tone. A nice rhyming pattern that adds to the unique flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a young artist in an ancient land attempting to express in art the emotions felt from a recent loss.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this well written poem.

nyxie, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Consumed  Open in new Window.
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My impressions of the poem: "Consumed" Open in new Window. by rebby

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A darker poem about lost love. Well worded with a nice rhyme scheme that contributes to the overall good flow this short poem carries.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a young soul reflecting and consumed with emotions from a recent lost love.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

rebby, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Gardener  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem: "The Gardener" Open in new Window. by Stormy Cannon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded free verse poem about gardening. This poem carries a unique flow that is pleasant for the reader.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a weed complaining about the gardener who keeps trying to exterminate her.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find in the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Stormy Cannon, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The morning rush  Open in new Window.
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My impressions of the poem: "The morning rush" Open in new Window. by Robrayl

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A realistic poem that most people will relate to about the morning rush.
Well worded with a nice rhyming scheme that adds to the unique flow this poem carries.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a modern world where busy parents are rushing their sleepy kids to school trying to be on time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see.

Robrayl, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Denmako, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"KENYA stands good for business " Open in new Window. by Denmako

Clarity:Seems like a good title for this article.

Writing style:Regional reference article.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A good structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well structured and well written article packed with useful business information about Kenya. Great article for those looking to do business in Kenya.

Denmako,thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Maddie, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Friday NIght Lights And Heartbreak" Open in new Window. by Maddie

Clarity: A good title for this heartbreak tale.

Writing style:Teen romance drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---Their late-night talks turned into long walks, and eventually, something more.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A nice well described opening that does catch the reader's attention and makes him wanna know more.

Great descriptions of both characters and settings. This helps take the reader right into the story.

We live and learn from our mistakes. A nice happy ending.

Maddie, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi lbidler, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Peace In the Midst of Chaos" Open in new Window. by lbidler

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful testament describing your walk with the Lord. Well written with such an honest tone it makes it sound like you're talking to directly to the reader.

A great choice of scripture quotes that flow delightfully with this testament. The Lord works in mysterious ways, still he is always there.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul walking across the sand observing that there were two sets of footprints. He then noticed that in the roughest times the other set of footprints disappeared.
He said "Lord why did you abandon me in my times of trouble?"
The Lord answered "Those are my footprints. I did not abandon you it was in those times that I carried you."

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:A beautiful work.

lbidler, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Over There  Open in new Window.
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Hi SeanFhear, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Over There" Open in new Window. by SeanFhear

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: What a beautiful place home must be from the picture this beautiful poem paints.
These well worded stanzas carry a great rhyming scheme that contributes to the natural flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul gazing through the windows of time at their childhood home and acknowledging all the changes that has come with age.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this beautiful poem.

SeanFhear, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi LightinMind, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Ju's sisters - Chapter One" Open in new Window. by LightinMind

Clarity:A good title for this suspense tale.

Writing style:Detective suspense drama.

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Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that makes it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- "Because I was watching you listen to our conversation and you have very expressive eyes, beautiful eyes but they do not keep secrets very well."---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written mystery with great descriptions that helped pull the reader right into the story.

Well described characters sharing realistic dialogue, this helps the reader get to know them.

A nice happy ending.

LightinMind, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of Heaven's Citadel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi brom21, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Heaven's Citadel" Open in new Window. by brom21

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Mythological fantasy drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Indeed the dialog is appropriate for it's speaker.

My favorite line:---“Truly? I am most thankful. This is a dream come to pass.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written adventure tale with great descriptions that help to carry the reader into the storyline.

Strong characters that are well described making it easy for the reader to visualize.

A creative idea for this tale.


brom21, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi DuongMinh I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"A Special Drag Of His Day" Open in new Window. by DuongMinh

Clarity:An interesting title that makes the reader curious.

Writing style:Fiction teen drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite lines:---"What was so fun about the football match last night?" - The 'football match last night' part is what he thinks actually happened and what they are actually talking about, it is just something he made up to fill up his own answer about what they are talking about. Because in actuality, he doesn't know if there was a football match yesterday or not, only an answer that fills in his large ignorance about their ranting topic. And so, he only thinks, and listens.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: The opening does a good job of describing Alexander while providing a bit of background. The opening lines could be stronger to better grab the reader's attention.

Good descriptions of the settings and characters in a realistic tone describing everyday teen high school life. The realistic tone helps the reader relate better with the storyline.


A good ending that leaves the reader guessing.

DuongMinh thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a good proofread and edit. A stronger opening line that grabs the readers attention. Possibly experiment with breaking down to shorter chapters while editing out some of the less exciting details.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of War and Peace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi lborland I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "War and Peace" Open in new Window. by lborland

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep free verse poem emphasizing life's ups and downs. Emotional words about war and peace.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul living in a war torn land, enjoying the times of peace and enduring the times of war.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I find no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this powerful poem.

lborland, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Prof Moriarty tries to return, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Lesson # 2 - Writing Assignment" Open in new Window. by Prof Moriarty tries to return

Clarity:A good title that well describes the content of this article.

Writing style: Educational documentary style article.

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Are all 3 genres listed? yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? indeed nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: An interesting and educational article packed full of details about Africa. I assume the numbers throughout the articles have something to do with the writing assignment. However they're a bit annoying to the average reader.


Prof Moriarty tries to return, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a good edit with number removal.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Sasha Harding, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "An Artist Undone (Poem)" Open in new Window. by Sasha Harding

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded deep romantic poem emphasizing on beauty. I think it's embedded in our human nature to want what we can't have. The grass always looks greener on the other side of the pasture.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of an artist in an ancient land striving for perfection yet never quiet reaching her goal.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Sasha Harding thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Iaima, I came across this article while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the article: " Narcissistic Personality Disorder" Open in new Window. by Iaima

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Everything you need to know about Narcissistic personality disorder.

A well written medical article with useful information especially for someone who is dealing with narcissistic personality disorder.

For a medical article this one seems to be as good as any medical article. Personally I would prefer a bit more line spacing because the articles and directions for the medical field seem to keep getting smaller text making it harder and harder to read.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find .

Iaima thank you for sharing your article.
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Review of Talking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Jacky I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Talking" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity:A nice title that describes the content of the story well.

Writing style:Flash fiction drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Yes, a nice structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line:---Why can’t they let me be me, the way I already am? It’s like they can’t understand that people are all different and that’s OK.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A good opening that gets the readers attention.
An honest realistic storyline that readers can relate to.

Interesting yet true points about peoples talking habits.
The story is short and straight to the point, this seems to be how the modern reader likes it.
I like the ending, well worded.

Jacky thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Milkyinfinity, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Rainbows and Overtures" Open in new Window. by Milkyinfinity

Clarity:A good title for this mythical tale.

Writing style: Sci-fi mythological drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure is a bit crowded making it somewhat difficult for this reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Indeed

My favorite line:---I look up to the sky and see something. Something in the distance it looked rectangular and as if a snake of dots was swirling around inside it.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice opening that catches the reader's interest. Well worded in a very realistic tone making it easy for the reader to relate.

An entertaining and creative work ending with a bit of mystery to leave the reader guessing.

Milkyinfinity, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider breaking it down to smaller paragraphs with more line spacing and perhaps a bigger font, this will make it more inviting to browsers and easier to read for those of us with weak eyes.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi again Jeff, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"WdC Masquerade - Deadpool #3" Open in new Window. by Jeff

Clarity:An intriguing title.

Writing style:Folktale fantasy drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A magical structure filled with video clips that transport the reader into another realm.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Great dialogue with good descriptions that lets the reader know the characters.

My favorite line:--- "I may be a mercenary who indiscriminately kills people for money, convenience, and ever-so-often sometimes just for funsies... but I'm an animal lover at heart. ---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A great opening that grabs the readers attention and takes him into this adventure.

The characters are brought to life with the realistic dialogs that help the reader to relate with them.
The dragon egg then captures the imagination of the entranced reader. A calm ending that leaves the reader guessing at what's next.

Jeff thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Wordsmith John I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Chapter Twenty-Six - Home" Open in new Window. by Wordsmith John

Clarity:A good title for this chapter.

Writing style:Fantasy action drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Indeed it is a very nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? A great job with the dialogue which does seem to be specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:--- He momentarily forgot where he was going and what he was doing.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A great opening that grabs the readers attention and draws them into the story. Well described setting that helps the reader to visualize the scene.

Well written realistic dialog that makes it easy for the readers to relate to. Great character descriptions that bring them to life for the reader.

A nice ending.

Wordsmith John thank you for sharing this entertaining work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Hi PureSciFi, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Helping Those Who Need Help" Open in new Window. by PureSciFi

Clarity:Seems like a good title.

Writing style:Sci-fi drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A great structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Yes the dialogue does seem to be specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:---“That’s good. I would hate myself if I had to turn you into the Government. But I would do it,” said Ammia.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written short sci-fi story for a contest entry. Short and to the point the way the modern reader likes things.

PureSciFi, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Hi Luzingu, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:" An inter professional union is underway" Open in new Window. by Luzingu

Clarity:A informational news article.

Writing style: Educational news article.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Yes nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Indeed.

My favorite line:---The genesis of this union took place a few days ago at the headquarters of the---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Nicely written and laid out article packed with educational information for the reader.

Luzingu, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Hi again THANKFUL SONALI Love my family, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Conversation with a bird" Open in new Window. by THANKFUL SONALI Love my family

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Great use of emojis. A beautiful poem with an elegant flow. A nice tribute to the birds. Nicely done, I hope you won the contest.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a beautiful mother eagle in a nest with her fledglings while she is trying to teach them about humans.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find in this entertaining poem.

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My impressions of the poem: "Inside Out" Open in new Window. by Angelica Weatherby-Freezing0*

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful and entertaining poem emphasizing on beauty.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a proud parent trying to answer their child's question, what is beauty.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find with the spelling, grammar or mechanics of this delightful poem.

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My impressions of the poem: "Dance " Open in new Window. by Milkyinfinity

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well written short poem that paints a nice picture of dance.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a beautiful dance recital with the auditorium filled with proud parents.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problem that I can see with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this delightful poem.

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