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Review of New Hunter  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Hihohyena, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"New Hunter"  by Hihohyena

Clarity:Seems to be a good title for this tale.

Writing style:Folklore entertainment drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure is somewhat easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem appropriate to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- None of this once wonderous décor could hold his interest anymore; he felt like a wild dog in an ornate cage—a beast, meant to be free, trapped behind beautifully disguised prison bars.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and very entertaining tale.

Good descriptions that help the reader to picture the setting.

A good and unique storyline that helps to hold the reader's attention throughout the tale.

Hihohyena, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a larger font size with a bit more line spacing to make it easier on those readers with weaker eyes.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of George and Maggie  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Humble_Poet PNG, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "George and Maggie"  by Humble_Poet PNG

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautifully written delightful poem that reads much like a true story. This helps the reader to relate more to the story holding their attention better.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of two souls caught up in Rapids of time yet still able to share their emotions.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems at all that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Humble_Poet PNG, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Say Nothing  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi again Sumojo, I came across this work while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the story: "Say Nothing"  by Sumojo

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well written description of a character in a short dark mystery style. The words work together to give the tale a realistic flow that grabs the readers attention.

A nice ending that leaves the reader wanting to turn the page.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see a dark prison cell where dark force's are at work.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this well written short story.

Sumojo, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Cotton Field  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi RJFuller, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Cotton Field"  by RJFuller

Clarity:A great title that describes this tale well.

Writing style:Fiction folklore drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure is fairly easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes the dialog does seem to be appropriate for it's speaker.

My favorite line:---Because we had to pick this cotton. We had to stay out here all day, week after week, year after year, picking cotton!" he boomed.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A unique story-line that maintains a consistant and realistic flow. This helps keep the readers attention.

A well described setting that helps the reader to picture the scene.

Good strong characters that are described well and share good dialog. This make the story more real for the reader.


RJFuller, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a good proofread and edit with possibly a few more line breaks toward the end for the long paragraphs. This will make it appear more inviting to the reader or potential reader.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi dyxeOri, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Warehouse & Trust."  by dyxeOri

Clarity: Seems like a good title for this tale.

Writing style: Friendship mystery drama.

Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure is fairly easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem appropriate for it's speaker.

My favorite line:---“Son of a cow.” ---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A entertaining tale with great descriptions that take the reader straight into the story.

Original dialog unique to it's speaker expressed in a humorous fashion. This helps to hold the readers attention.

dyxeOri, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a good proof read and edit, maybe shortening some of the longer paragraphs. This will make it look more appealing to potential readers.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Grandma  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Angel, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Grandma "  by Angel

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A beautiful poem dedicated to your Grandma.
Grandma's are such a blessing for us with their love as well as the wisdom of age that they have earned.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul being blessed with the wisdom of years from Grandma who is trying to help them avoid mistakes that they made while teaching them about love and family.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems at all that I can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Angel, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Chaim Tal, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Meditation at the Western Wall"  by Chaim Tal

Clarity: A good title for this deep how to meditate article.

Writing style: Religious, meditation, description article.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured so that it is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog seems to be specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- Before approaching the Wall, find a quiet place nearby. Close your eyes, take a few deep breaths in and out. Focus on your breathing.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Reads like a true story, this helps to grab the readers attention from the start.

Well described informative article full of good sounding advice.

Well written in a how to meditate style.

Chaim Tal, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Detective, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "I Just Want to Sleep"  by Detective

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful short peaceful lullaby. Starting as well as ending with a strong line that most everyone will relate to.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a hardworking soul tired from daily labors then drifted off into a happy dream-world.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining peaceful poem.

Detective, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Portrait  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Amethyst Angel, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Portrait"  by Amethyst Angel

Clarity:A great title for this entertaining tale.

Writing style:Paranormal family drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem to be specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- "The finest art adorning my walls means nothing to me without him. I would give it all to charity in exchange for the one painting which will come from his hands."---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written emotional story with great descriptions. This helps the reader to get into the story.

A great story-line that holds the readers attention well.

Amethyst Angel, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Keep writing.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hi Tashabrown (DEIB),I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Weaponization of DEIB "  by Tashabrown (DEIB)

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Sci-fi rough draft style.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only one listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure appears to be in rough draft style that is not that easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem appropriate to the speaker.

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A lot of good stuff here. Seems to be a rough draft version of a future masterpiece.

Tashabrown (DEIB), thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:A good proof read and edit never hurts.

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Joseph
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Review of Chapter 10  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Darkscape Entertainment, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Chapter 10"  by Darkscape Entertainment

Clarity:The title could describe the contents of this chapter better.

Writing style: Teen mystery drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog is specific to it's reader.

My favorite line:--- Not surprisingly, Imperial embodied an enticing and compelling world, so as the boys accessed the front desk, excitement flourished.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:An entertaining tale with strong characters using realistic dialog.

Written and then interesting style with a good easy format for the reader. A good opening that grabs the readers attention and holds it well throughout the chapter.

Darkscape Entertainment, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Wandering Thoughts, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Heal The World Through Love "  by Wandering Thoughts

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful peaceful world is painted through these words. If only the world would do it, so simple yet so complicated.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a world where all live as equals in peace trying to help their neighbors.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can find with the grammar spelling grrammar or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Wandering Thoughts, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review of your eyes  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi sapphire kuyeus I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "your eyes"  by sapphire kuyeus

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A interesting style for this mysterious romance poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of lost lovers traveling in the river of time only able to get glimpses of each other occasionally.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

sapphire kuyeus, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review of Angels Weep  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi fyn, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Angels Weep "  by fyn

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: An interesting short poem touching on many interested ideas. I really like the opening line.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of angels weeping crystal tears that fall into the river of time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

fyn, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review of The Open Bottle  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Weirdone-Back in the games, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Open Bottle"  by Weirdone-Back in the games

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A entertaining poem with repeating lines.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a mythological world with a girl surrounded by bottles all sealed with lids.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Weirdone-Back in the games, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review of Color of Urine  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Tito, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Color of Urine"  by Tito

Clarity:A good title that describes the contents of this article well.

Writing style:Informative health article.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only one listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A very informative and well laid out article full of interesting information about the subject.

Tito, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a blank line between paragraphs, this will make it a bit easier on the reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Lucky Error  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again QueenNormaJean Cheerleader Soon, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Lucky Error"  by QueenNormaJean Cheerleader Soon,

Clarity: A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Relationship drama.

Are all 3 genres listed? Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure and format is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line: ---
“Are you John?” I smiled back at him. ---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A great tale, short simple and to the point just the way today's busy reader likes things.

Well Done!

QueenNormaJean Cheerleader Soon, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Seasons  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Odessa Molinari, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Seasons"  by Odessa Molinari

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong and emotional work that catches the readers attention well from the start and holds it well through-out.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see young love in the low point of time yet then moving through time to the high point where all is better and we learned from our mistakes thus making us stronger .

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this the delightful work.

Odessa Molinari, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Winchester Jones, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "While the World Held Its Breath"  by Winchester Jones

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful and entertaining perception of the first moon landing.

A great idea for this entertaining work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of Neil Armstrong landing on the moon and pranking everyone watching.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can see in the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining short story.

Winchester Jones, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Jeff masquerading as Deadpool, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Stand-Up And Deliver"  by Jeff masquerading as Deadpool

Clarity:A good title for this work.

Writing style:Entertainment contest entry prompt drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is indeed easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue is indeed appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- As he peeked out from behind the curtain, he tried to count the audience but stopped once he realized the number was way more than six, and that it was only making him more nervous.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well worded and written tale that holds the reader's attention well from the beginning to the end.

A good use of the prompt for this contest entry.

Jeff masquerading as Deadpool, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi JACE, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Setting Your Review Filters"  by JACE

Clarity: A good title that describes the content of this work well.

Writing style: Modern how to advise.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A great structure and format that is extremely easy for the reader.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written and formatted article full of valuable information to help anyone on this WDC site.

A lot has changed since 2009 however this article seems to be well updated.



JACE,thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None.

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Joseph
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Review of The Doctor Visit  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hi Chuckster, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Doctor Visit"  by Chuckster

Clarity:A great title for this tale.

Writing style: Modern experience drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only two listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure is congested and not that easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem to be specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- The last time I let you come into the examination room, you started asking more questions about your own health than mine. I'm surprised the doctor didn't bill us for two appointments."---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A realistic account of a medical procedure that is everyday and normal for a Dr yet complicated once in a lifetime for the patent.

Well worded and told in a rough first draft style. A lot of potential in this work after a good proof read and edit to make it more desirable for the reader as well as browsers or potential readers.

Chuckster, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a good edit shortening the long sentences as well as paragraphs. This will make it more inviting to browsers or would be readers.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review of Rude Alf  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi again THANKFUL SONALI HAPPY WDC 24, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Rude Alf"  by THANKFUL SONALI HAPPY WDC 24,

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A great reworded description of a holiday favorite using a classic tone. Well done! A great idea for this delightful work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a prankster confusing his friends annually with his unique style of tricks.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can find can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this the delightful formatted work of art .

THANKFUL SONALI HAPPY WDC 24, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of A Frightful Night  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi GERVIC` Hiccup H Haddock III, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "A Frightful Night"  by GERVIC` Hiccup H Haddock III

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A delightful poem with a nice rhyming scheme that adds to the original flow.
Mother Nature is indeed unpredictable especially in those hard rains that sometimes come unexpectedly.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a family enjoying family time in a house when the rain begins to pour more and more into an unpredictable storm causing extraordinary measures.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this enjoyable poem.

GERVIC` Hiccup H Haddock III, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Phone  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Beholden, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Phone"  by Beholden

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:I love this humorous poem. It brings back memories of tales my kids often tell about a phone thrown out the window by their Dad. Kids and their imaginations.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a family enjoying a TV show when the phone continues ringing with annoying telemarketers then suddenly gets tossed out the window onto the cement walk disintegrating the telephone.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Beholden, thank you for sharing your poem.
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