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Review of Parking  Open in new Window.
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Hi again Jacky I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Parking" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity:A good title for this parking tale.

Writing style:Contest entry sci-fi adventure.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are given, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Great dialog that is specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:---Now, feeling he was dealing with someone slightly unbalanced, Joe decided to just go along. “Great, thank you!” he said, moving his car.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Nicely told with a realistic start that suddenly turns into a sci-fi adventure that caught me totally off guard. Did Joe ever get to go for that run?

Jacky thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:*BigSmile* Keep up the good work.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi ggbid I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "elephants on parade" Open in new Window. by ggbid

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written description of a stay in a psych ward. I once visited a friend that was in a similar situation. This poem brings back those memories well.
The wait for someone to visit is described well and I definitely feel your discouragement as time seems to stand still.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a person trapped in a locked floor where elephants roam free.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this realistic poem .

ggbid thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Sorji I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Listen to the Music" Open in new Window. by Sorji

Clarity:A good title for this music journey.

Writing style:Personal experience drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are given, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Good dialog that is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---"Locked," I growled as I stood and stared at the door for a moment, trying to intimidate it into changing its mind. It didn't work, so I spun on my heels and lumbered down the stairs, singing along with the heavy metal chorus as it filled my ears with catchy guitar riffs and a gravelly voice.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A nice opening with a realistic tone that makes this tale easy for me to relate with.
I like the references to Journey and 'Wheel in The Sky'.
Great descriptions that carry me there to the locked grey house.

A nice humorous ending to this entertaining tale.

Sorji thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Rene Maori I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Red Vineyards at Arles" Open in new Window. by Rene Maori

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong beautiful poem that starts deep with the Crimson leaves. Powerful rhyming scheme that contributes to the wonderful flow.
Then again ending with those Crimson leaves, they're branded in this readers mind.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:Gazing over the river of time I see the image of an ancient Roman slave dreaming then planning for escape while always keeping a positive vision of crimson leaves.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can't find any problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep work.

Rene Maori thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Bullereese WC 294  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again jackiesmuse I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Bullereese WC 294" Open in new Window. by jackiesmuse

Clarity:Nice title for this campfire tale.

Writing style: Folktale ghost drama.

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Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nice structure.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Great dialog that is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---“Bullereese is eight feet tall and hairy. He smells like hickory smoke,” Dad said in his storyteller's voice. “People say they can smell him before they see him.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:I love campfire ghost stories and this is a great one. Short and straight to the point ending with a little mystery to keep the readers mind guessing.

jackiesmuse thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi B.K.K. I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "I thought of you today" Open in new Window. by B.K.K.

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strongly worded poem that grabs at the readers emotions. A happy start to this poem before turning into a sad good-bye.

It is sad when we loose someone especially when the lost one was young with so much more life that was ahead still to do.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this emotional poem.

B.K.K. thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi bridge I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The first Sunking and Sunqueen" Open in new Window. by bridge

Clarity:A good title for this mythological tale.

Writing style:Mythological fantasy drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Indeed by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line:---At its peak, she felt the light on her skin, could feel it warming her bones, and let tears stream down her face. They had brought back the sun.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Seems like a nice well laid out orderly historical opinion of the beginning of the Celestine kingdom. I am not familiar with this legend however this work describes the tale of the first Sunqueen.

A nice opening that gets my attention and makes me want to know more.

A well written tale that explains the legend of the crowning of the first Sunqueen and the events leading to that event.

bridge thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of Coming?  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again BiOHazard I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Coming?" Open in new Window. by BiOHazard

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:I think this is my favorite thus far. Four most delightful well worded stanzas with a nice rhyming pattern that makes a deep realistic flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a soul shipwrecked on a island in the ocean of time. Desperately trying to escape yet unsure what time they are heading for.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see with the mechanics of this most delightful poem.

BiOHazard thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Bi0Hazard I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Delightfully Patched" Open in new Window. by Bi0Hazard

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A most delightful twelve line poem with a random rhyming pattern that adds to the humorous flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see a single person in unmatched socks preparing to dine alone with one chair, one fork and a dull knife.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Bi0Hazard thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of If Only  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Sum1 I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "If Only" Open in new Window. by Sum1

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:'If Only' is a delightful eight line poem with a nice rhyming pattern that gives this short poem a poetic flow. The focus as the title suggests is on a past time that the author would like to revisit.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a soul looking back over the sea of time to a important point that they long to revisit.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see with the spelling, grammar or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Sum1 thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Brigitte I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Re. Yellow Submarine" Open in new Window. by Brigitte

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A lyrics style poem about an indie submarine. A nice modern day version of the yellow submarine with references to the internet and You Tube. Without the Beatles singing it neither the voice on my computer or I could quite get in the rhythm.

Nice poetic lines that paint the indie story. For me 'indie' just don't seem to be as catchy as yellow.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Brigitte thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Alex I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"How Naïvithrax got her Promotion" Open in new Window. by Alex

Clarity:Good title that describes this dragon tale well.

Writing style:Fantasy comedy drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Indeed*Smile* by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? *Smile* A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Smile*The dialog is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---Naïvithrax reasoned that this was because it is difficult to hear people calling out to you while your head is underwater.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice opening with good descriptions to guide the reader into this fantasy world. Written with a very realistic tone that makes this tale easy to relate to and most enjoyable to read. A curious ending.

Alex thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.*Smile*

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of "IF"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Bi0Hazard I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: ""IF"" Open in new Window. by Bi0Hazard

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A most entertaining poem that carries a delightful flow. 'If ifs and buts were candies and nuts' what a wonderful opening.

A lovely world this poem describes.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the wise squirrel gathering then storing all the nuts he can find now. Saving them for those times when none can be found.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling all mechanics of this charming poem.

Bi0Hazard thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Portfolio  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Dickie I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Portfolio" Open in new Window. by Dickie

Clarity: Good title.

Writing style: Introduction.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nice structure well laid out with good spacing that does make it easy for the reader. *BigSmile*

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Looks like a nicely detailed introduction laid out in a good orderly fashion. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Keep writing.

Both 'Taxi Driver' and 'Forbidden Love' sound as if they would be entertaining works to read.*Smile*

Dickie thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.*BigSmile*

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hi Kanishka Sanyukt I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "European Union: A Halal Bildungsroman" Open in new Window. by Kanishka Sanyukt

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A political poem in a unique original style.
Well written in a realistic yet humorous style. A great idea for this sign of the times historical tale.
I like the realistic yet humorous style. Consider shorting some of the longer sentences to keep a more uniform structure, as they seem to linger. A wonderful work however for me it seemed to ramble on a bit toward the end.


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Review of Last Chance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hi Silvern I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Last Chance" Open in new Window. by Silvern

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:
Seems like a good poem, it is just written in a language that I don't quite get. To me it reads like it was picked from the middle missing the introduction which leaves me guessing.

A sport poem that seems to be ranting about an unpopular rule or decision.
Sports fans especially the hardcore ones do seem to have a secret language that only they understand. I have to admit I don't get it.
This work does indeed have a catchy tone that sticks in your head.


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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi vapid I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "a seat with insomnia" Open in new Window. by vapid

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A seat with insomnia is a gothic dark style free verse poem. Well written with deep undertones. It feels like this was written at a low point in the author's life.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a dark mysterious realm where nothing at all makes sense and sleep is forbidden. The birth place of misery where one can't get out of bed.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep work.

vapid thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of I Miss...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi SeanFhear I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "I Miss..." Open in new Window. by SeanFhear

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse romance poem with three psychedelic stanzas. I really like the opening line.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul longing for the company of one whose path took a different direction long ago.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can't find any problems at all with this entertaining philosophy.

SeanFhear thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Kelchworth I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Lemme buy those shoes." Open in new Window. by Kelchworth

Clarity:A catchy title.

Writing style:Sci-fi adventure drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured.*Smile*

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specific for its speaker. *Smile*

My favorite line:---"Time to dance" he said as he whipped his hand behind his back and pulled the snub nosed slug thrower. ---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: a good opening line that catches my attention and makes me want to read more.

Well written with great descriptions that easily take the readers straight into the tale.

Short and to the point with plenty of action and a nice twist at the end. That seems to be the way the modern reader likes things.

Kelchworth thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of Lincoln Penny  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi *Smile*Fivesixer I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Lincoln Penny" Open in new Window. by Fivesixer

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: As they have just now discontinued making the penny this seems like a very appropriate subject for the time. So they say it cost almost 4 cents to make a 1 cent penny. Only in the good old' USA. At least I feel like most countries would have shot it down when the cost exceeded the product.

'Head or tail I don't understand my scope or range.'
This is a well written free verse poem decades ahead of its time.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: 'Kindness and ignorance both work themselves out in the end, like the flipped sides of a Lincoln penny that you don't get a choice in common.'

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this classic work that is ahead of its time.

Fivesixer thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Happy Birthday  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Dave Ryan I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Happy Birthday" Open in new Window. by Dave Ryan

Clarity:Seems like a good title for tale.

Writing style: Fantasy horror drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?*Smile* Indeed by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? *Smile* A nice structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Smile* Yes the dialog does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Most people would think that a 240 word short story would be easy. Those people don't have a clue.
The author has so little to work with, meaning he must make every word count. That is what you have done in this delightful tale. A delightful entertaining story, short and straight to the point. Just the way the modern reader likes things.

Seems like you met the prompt requirements well, I hope you won the contest. 240 words is not a lot to work with yet what a entertaining and delightful tale. Even a slight bit of mystery at the end.

Dave Ryan thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.


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Review of Black Water  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi again *Moon* HuntersMoon I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Black Water" Open in new Window. by HuntersMoon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:'The river Styx is calling me' Wow what a great idea. Well written English Sonnet, this poem has a deep mysterious flow. I hope you won the contest.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The image of an ancient philosopher who has fell deep into a dream reality where it takes all his strength to finally free himself and return to world of the awaken.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:I can't find anything at all wrong with this enchanting poem.

HuntersMoon thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Preshi Writes I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The poetry girl(part 2)" Open in new Window. by Preshi Writes

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A truly charming enlightened poem describing the captivating yet mysterious 'poetry girl'.

This short to the point free verse poem carries a positive flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of an anonymous poet that has countless admirers longing to know her identity.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with this simply delightful work.*Sly* *Party* *Smile*

Preshi Writes thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Prem Junior I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "What a Fool I've Become" Open in new Window. by Prem Junior

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep romance poem that has the author focusing on the positive aspects and lessons learned from a past relationship.

Written in a realistic free verse form that carries an overall positive flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul reflecting on a past relationship while realizing the lessons learned from the experience and being grateful and thankful for them.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can't find no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep and positive poem.

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My impressions of the poem: "Shelter in Place " Open in new Window. by Jatlog the Green

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:This poem shows that it was written in the uncertain time of the pandemic when life as we knew stopped. Masks had to be worn. Social distancing, businesses closed, Holidays canceled even the skies had no traffic. That brief time that seemed to linger forever where the whole world had come to a stop.

This well worded poem takes me back to that point in time that will forever be carved in my memory.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a world that has stopped and fell back over a hundred years in time. The people in solitude and isolation redefine everything they were ever taught. Slowly a different world emerges and works hard to make up for that lost time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with this strong and emotional poem that has taken me back a few years in the past.

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