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Review of To Overcome  Open in new Window.
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Hi Asteria Jackson, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "To Overcome" Open in new Window. by Asteria Jackson

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:-A silent fight.- A well worded and delightful poem that emphasizes on keeping a positive attitude even in the darker times.
A random rhyming scheme that adds to the positive flow of this inspiring work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a wounded athlete trying to keep a positive attitude while ignoring the pain from the injury.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Asteria Jackson, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Puzzle  Open in new Window.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Puzzle" Open in new Window. by Conrad Moriarty

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded poem that is deep and inspirational. A random rhyming scheme that adds to the delightful flow up this poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a modern soul who decides to cut off the toys of technology to concentrate on the search for a deeper meaning.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problem when the mechanics grammar or spelling of this delightful poem.

Conrad Moriarty, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi again Kare iauu Enga, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Swinging [204] ~ 650 words " Open in new Window. by Kare iauu Enga

Clarity:A nice title that makes the reader want to know more.

Writing style: Family horror fiction drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A wonderful structure that does make it so easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Indeed the dialogue is specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:---Well, as good as new until a bullet found him. Accident they said. Bullpuppies. Calvin was never happy unless he was pissing people off. Someone had put him out of his misery.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:First let me say that I am a dinosaur to technology and I don't know how in the world to make that font that you use in the middle of your name.

A good opening for this tale that gets the readers attention and makes him want to read more.
Written in a realistic personal tone that makes it easy for the reader to relate to.

An entertaining tale with a great storyline that shows creativity.

Kare iauu Enga, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of The New Woman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi jules, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The New Woman" Open in new Window. by jules

Clarity:A nice title for this wedding tale.

Writing style:Romance folktale drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure appears a bit crowded but it is somewhat easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- NW imagined her mother trying to figure out how to swipe up on the phone screen.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice opening that introduces NW with a bit of background information. Good descriptions that help the reader to feel the emotions of NW.

jules, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a bit more line spacing to help the story look less crowded to the reader and more inviting to a browser or a would be reader. A good proofread and edit never hurts.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Aiden Blackwood, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Invisible Thread " Open in new Window. by Aiden Blackwood

Clarity:Seems like a good title for this philosophy tale.

Writing style: Spiritual scientific philosophy.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Nicely structured making it easier for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line:---Christianity also acknowledges the limits of human understanding. The Book of Job wrestles with suffering, questioning why disorder exists in a world supposedly governed by divine justice. God's response? That some mysteries are beyond human comprehension.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A strong opening that paints a cosmic picture of a dance between order and chaos. A well structured philosophy article that addresses many religious and scientific points as well as mysteries.

Great references to several philosophies from different civilizations, this paints a very unbiased view for the reader.

Categorized very good with precise subtitles and many definitions. Written in a very entertaining style especially considering science is usually not written to be entertaining.

- The universe is a balance of order and mystery.-

A great attempt at writing about the limitless mysteries of the universe in a few words.

Aiden Blackwood, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Thanks this article has my mind spinning in all different directions.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Abhisheksharma, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Invalid Item" Open in new Window. by Abhisheksharma

Clarity:A nice title for this article.

Writing style: Legal home sales article.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A nice well ordered structure that should encourage a reader to read more. Good opening that is encouraging for would be buyers. Good subtitles that should help the reader find a certain section.
A nice touch with the additional service that the company provides. Looks like a good professional sales article to me.

Abhisheksharma, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of Self Portrait  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Manzoni, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Self Portrait" Open in new Window. by Manzoni

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nicely written positive poem emphasizing on the idea of -enjoy life and make time to smell the roses.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul sailing across the lake of time while reflecting on their past accomplishments as well as regrets.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful work.

Manzoni, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Gitisapoint, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Te Reign of Ronin Phoenix " Open in new Window. by Gitisapoint

Clarity: Seems like a good title for this tale.

Writing style: Fantasy sci-fi drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?No, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good format however the structure appears crowded making it not so easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be appropriate to its speaker.

My favorite line:---Razia's heart raced as she felt the weight of their expectations bear down on her. She knew the consequences if she failed to meet their demands.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well worded and well described fantasy tale that intrigues the reader's mind. A creative work with good descriptions that help the reader to visualize the setting.

Gitisapoint, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a bit more line spacing and breaking down the longer paragraphs into shorter ones with a blank line between paragraphs. This will make it easier on the reader and more appealing to a browser or would be reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Blame Cupid  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Amethyst Agape Angel, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Blame Cupid" Open in new Window. by Amethyst Agape Angel

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A well worded slam Cupid poem. Written in a realistic and honest tone that I think most readers will relate to.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of someone searching for true love however searching in all the wrong places.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Amethyst Agape Angel, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of First Breath  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again WriterRick, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"First Breath" Open in new Window. by WriterRick

Clarity:A pleasant title for this delightful play.

Writing style: Friendly religious screenplay.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Indeed the dialog is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---(pause, deep in thought)
But what does it mean to be in Your image? I see the animals—they walk, they breathe, they live as I do… yet I feel something in me that I don’t see in them. A longing… a question that does not have an answer.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: This is a well written pleasant play which carries a peaceful innocent tone.

Nicely constructed and laid out making a pleasant experience for the reader. Well described helping the reader to visualize the scene.
This peaceful tone is indeed inspirational for the reader.

WriterRick, thank you for sharing this inspirational work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Whiskerfacebythefireplace, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Nic-n’-Nyx inspirational for writers" Open in new Window. by Whiskerfacebythefireplace

Clarity: An interesting title that makes the reader wanna know a little more.

Writing style: Fan fiction inspirational writing advice.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure is fairly easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line:---Rise up. I dare you to write something today that readers won't forget. I challenge you to make someone cry with one thin little page of text. I urge, no, I demand you to put something down on paper that'll be copied and produced and remembered for longer than Ancient Mythologies have been.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A truly inspirational work. This article is packed with great advice as well as comparisons and quotes.

A great work to keep on hand to read when writer's block sets in or just for a good pick me up.

Ending with a call to action that I feel sure every writer that reads it will definitely relate to.

Whiskerfacebythefireplace, thank you for sharing this inspirational work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Tell your story. :)

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of What For!" WC 293  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi jackiesmuse, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"What For!" WC 293" Open in new Window. by jackiesmuse

Clarity:
A wonderful title for this short story.

Writing style: Family flash fiction drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A great structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Great dialogue that is appropriate for the speaker.

My favorite line:---“Where’s the respect for old folks like me? Who holds doors open anymore for strangers? How many say, "please" and "thank you?" Oh, I could go on, but I won’t.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written short story that says it all in a few words. Simply delightful.

jackiesmuse, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Kieran1998, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Susan's Talking Teddy! " Open in new Window. by Kieran1998

Clarity:A great title for this Teddy tale.

Writing style: Children's fantasy drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Indeed the dialog is specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:--- The young girl then woke up and heard a unfamiliar voice say, "good morning,sleepy head," before looking at Bob, who was standing in front of her.
Confused,Susan replied, "Bob,did you just talk and are you standing?"
"Yep,I sure did," said the bear as he started walking over to his owner and hugged her.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written and entertaining adventure tale.
A good opening that gets the readers attention.

A charming children's story that is sure to make your child smile when they read it. A great ending -the most popular girl in school.

Kieran1998, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Car Phone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Jacky, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Car Phone" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity: A great title for this entertaining tale.

Writing style: Flash fiction contest entry drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Yes great dialogue that is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---Good gravy girl! Suddenly realizing I was acting like a fourteen-year-old I took a breath and let it go, like an adult! Jabbing on the radio to calm myself down with a song or two, my favorite station was running its weekly giveaway.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Another well written entertaining tale that probably won the contest. A delightful story, I really like the ending.

Jacky, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Devil in details  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Maddie, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Devil in details" Open in new Window. by Maddie

Clarity:A great title for this entertaining tale.

Writing style:Crime mystery drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? A good job with the dialogue which is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- The devil was in the details, and he had already sold his soul to them.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice opening that does a good job of letting the reader get to know Elliot Graves.

Good descriptions that helped the reader to visualize all the meticulous details.

A good ending that takes the reader by surprise.

Maddie, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proofread and edit never hurts, consider not starting any sentences with but.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Kermit, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Andy Pohllard, Time Traveler" Open in new Window. by Kermit

Clarity:A great title that captures the reader's imagination.

Writing style:Sci-fi fantasy drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only 2 are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue is appropriate to its speaker.

My favorite line:--- I took a step forward and stopped. That is, I stopped in space. I remained six feet from the wall clock with the hour hand on six, and the minute hand on twelve.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A great opening that introduces Andy and makes the reader want to know him.

A well written storyline that takes the reader into this tale. A well told story in a few words just the way the modern reader likes things.

Kermit, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Adherennium - Maybe Writing?, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Beginning of the End" Open in new Window. by Adherennium - Maybe Writing?

Clarity:A great title for this Sci-fi tale.

Writing style:Sci-fi adventure drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Indeed a great structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Yes the dialogue does seem to be specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:---Somehow, though he knew not how, the Doctor knew that this was true. It had nothing to do with numbers, it was simply a truth. Everything had to have an end. This was to be his.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: This well written and described sci-fi adventure has a great opening that grabs the reader to take them into the adventure.

Professionally laid out with easy to read text and entertaining images that really help the reader to visualize this adventure.

Strong characters with great descriptions that help the reader to relate to them.

A wonderful storyline for this creative sci-fi adventure.

Adherennium - Maybe Writing?, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Lavender and Mint  Open in new Window.
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Hi again Stormy Cannon, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Lavender and Mint" Open in new Window. by Stormy Cannon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded inspirational free verse poem. A deep work that gets the readers mind spinning.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a soul traveling down life's pathway learning from past mistakes then focusing that knowledge on a brighter future.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I see with the mechanics of this deep and inspirational work.

Stormy Cannon, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi nyxie, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "the empty space beside me " Open in new Window. by nyxie

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong emotional poem that carries a realistic tone. A nice rhyming pattern that adds to the unique flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a young artist in an ancient land attempting to express in art the emotions felt from a recent loss.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this well written poem.

nyxie, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Consumed  Open in new Window.
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Hi rebby, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Consumed" Open in new Window. by rebby

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A darker poem about lost love. Well worded with a nice rhyme scheme that contributes to the overall good flow this short poem carries.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a young soul reflecting and consumed with emotions from a recent lost love.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

rebby, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Gardener  Open in new Window.
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Hi Stormy Cannon, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Gardener" Open in new Window. by Stormy Cannon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded free verse poem about gardening. This poem carries a unique flow that is pleasant for the reader.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a weed complaining about the gardener who keeps trying to exterminate her.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find in the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Stormy Cannon, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impressions of the poem: "The morning rush" Open in new Window. by Robrayl

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A realistic poem that most people will relate to about the morning rush.
Well worded with a nice rhyming scheme that adds to the unique flow this poem carries.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a modern world where busy parents are rushing their sleepy kids to school trying to be on time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see.

Robrayl, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The War Within  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Pheuma_28, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"The War Within" Open in new Window. by Pheuma_28

Clarity:A great title for this psychological article.

Writing style: philosophical psychological article.

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Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A good structure that does indeed make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite lines:---You can however choose to prioritise and develop healthier habits in place of the pathological ones. And what exactly constitutes a healthy habit? Essentially, it is a pattern of behaviour that brings long term benefit independent of external conditions. In other words, it's the kind of pleasure that lasts persistently and remains reliably available. This entails the virtue of moderation, also known as the ascetic lifestyle.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written and informational article emphasizing the author's personal views on the psychological mechanisms behind contradiction and consistency.

Pheuma_28, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Denmako, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"KENYA stands good for business " Open in new Window. by Denmako

Clarity:Seems like a good title for this article.

Writing style:Regional reference article.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A good structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well structured and well written article packed with useful business information about Kenya. Great article for those looking to do business in Kenya.

Denmako,thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Maddie, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Friday NIght Lights And Heartbreak" Open in new Window. by Maddie

Clarity: A good title for this heartbreak tale.

Writing style:Teen romance drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---Their late-night talks turned into long walks, and eventually, something more.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A nice well described opening that does catch the reader's attention and makes him wanna know more.

Great descriptions of both characters and settings. This helps take the reader right into the story.

We live and learn from our mistakes. A nice happy ending.

Maddie, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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