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Review of Mine Drone Inc  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Jeffhans I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Mine Drone Inc" Open in new Window. byJeffhans

Clarity: A great title for this sci-fi adventure.

Writing style: Sci-fi technological drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes *Smile* by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Yes *Smile* Nicely structured.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes *Smile*Good dialog

My favorite line:--- Maybe it was the coffee I’d chugged, or maybe I’d just rehearsed the moment too many times in my head. Either way, I kept my head, and that’s what opened the door. What started as a quick chat at a conference in ’62 stretched into hours, then weeks of late-night talks over glitchy holo-calls.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A fair opening that does make me want to read more. Wonderful sci-fi technical descriptions that bring the Lasor scanning process to a perfect logical reality.

Marcus's vision of owning the mines is a nice modern day human touch that most everyone can relate to.
A creative storyline written in a nice orderly fashion to make this an entertaining read.

A good sales pitch ending.

Jeffhans thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:*Smile* Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Book 1 Chapter 2  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi throwaway I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Book 1 Chapter 2" Open in new Window. by throwaway

Clarity:Draft style title.

Writing style:Fantasy adventure drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?*BigSmile* Yes by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?*BigSmile*A nice structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*BigSmile*The dialog does seem appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line: ---“Sounds like you're on the run from something,” he remarked, then noticing the stricken look on her face said, “Don’t worry. I won’t pry more than I already have. Care for tea? No? Then we’ll get you going, and I’ll take mine later.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: The opening line could be made stronger to grab the reader's attention better from the start.
Consider starting with --“Thanks for letting me stay overnight. I’ll get myself out of your hair now.”

Well written with good descriptions that does help the reader visualize the scene as well as relate better with the storyline. A bit more action would hold the reader's attention better.

A nice ending however ending with a bit more mystery might leave the reader wanting to read more.


throwaway thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider adding a little more action in the middle and possibly spreading out some of the less exciting details. A little mystery at the end or like a cliffhanger ending will be more out too leave the reader wanting to know more.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the article: "Smart Cupping Massager" Open in new Window. by dainelylab.com

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well laid out informational article emphasizing muscle pain treatments and cures. Nice structure with good subtitles describing causes and treatments as well as ways to prevent muscle pain. Good recommendations and conclusion.

A nice well written article with good information. A bit more line spacing wouldn't hurt with possibly a larger font to make it easier for us with weak eyes. Also make it stand out and be more inviting for browsers.


dainelylab.com thank you for sharing this article.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi AnchorHolds925 I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "A Paschal Praise: A Dizain" Open in new Window. by AnchorHolds925

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A dizain poem with a good specific rhyming pattern that contributes the strong spiritual flow. A deep ten line poem about Christ and the resurrection

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a world where the all powerful father grants his son the power of his throne. The son teaches the world to be peaceful and forgive, not to let death have power over them and he paid the price for mankind's salvation.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the mechanics of this inspirational poem.

AnchorHolds925 thank you for sharing your poem. *Smile* *Smile* *Smile*
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again JCosmos I came across this recipe while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the work: "Winning Chili Recipe " Open in new Window. by JCosmos

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Sounds like one delicious chili recipe. Written with great descriptions that I can almost taste it.

Looks like a great use of the prompt words.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a country town hosting a chili Bake Off competition. Packed with contestants spectators and the delicious aroma of homemade chili.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the great structure of this recipe.
*Cookie4* *Smirk2* *Smile*

JCosmos thank you for sharing your Work.
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Review of Memory  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Beck Firing back up! I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Memory" Open in new Window. by Beck Firing back up!

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful humorous poem that this reader can certainly relate to. My memory it just ain't the best.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a man getting older and learning how to deal with the effects of getting old.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this entertaining and humorous poem.

Beck Firing back up! thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Letting go  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi again Kare iauu Enga I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Letting go " Open in new Window. by Kare iauu Enga

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A prose-poem form well written in a orderly well defined fashion that all add to the overall realistic flow of this work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a blessed prophet testifying about how to make the best out of your life to a hungry crowd of followers.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar mechanics or spelling of this entertaining work.:*Bird* *Bird* *Bird*

Kare iauu Enga thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Dying Sun  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Adhere - Definitely Writing I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Dying Sun" Open in new Window. by Adhere - Definitely Writing

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep and colorful work attempting to describe the beginning and ending of life.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a gorgeous sunset on a oceanfront beach followed by a tattered grey night.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this mind altering poem.

Adhere - Definitely Writing thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Am I Dependable?  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Learning As I Go I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Am I Dependable?" Open in new Window. by{bLearning As I Go}

Clarity:Good title for this work.

Writing style:Personal experience drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes*BigSmile* by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure appears crowded making it not that easy for the reader. A bit more line spacing with a blank line between paragraphs would help for those of us readers with weak eyes.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line: --- I am learning however, that one can be dependable without being a matt for others to tred on.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice Diaries style article. Makes many good points but reads first draft style.

Learning As I Go thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a good proofread and edit with a bit more line spacing with a blank line between paragraphs. This would make it easier for those of us with the weak eyes as well as more inviting to a browser or would be reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi AB2 I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Present-Hope is All We Have" Open in new Window. by AB2

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded strong poem emphasizing life and how you should enjoy it today. Through the good times and the bad we must make time to stop and smell the roses, enjoy what we have and don't worry about what we have not.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of an ancient philosopher realizing how precious life is in the moment. Recording it on paper and teaching to others that you must enjoy today before it is gone.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the mechanics of this delightful and poetic work.

AB2 thank you for sharing your poem.*Wink* *BigSmile*
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Daisy I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Echoes of Flanders" Open in new Window. by Daisy

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded deep, emotional poem emphasizing the brutal scar that is left on the world and the battlefield from all the soldier's who bled there.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a land that is haunted by all the soldiers who fought and died there in wars from the past as well as the current. Leaving a blood stained land cursed from the streams of blood that never fade away.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems with the mechanics of this deep poem about humans weakness and greed.

Daisy thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Timeline  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi w0lfbane I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Timeline" Open in new Window. by w0lfbane

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong philosophical poem that touches on the idea of a spirit being born although was not suppose be. Yet evil came, tainted his soul.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a lost soul longing to grow old yet when he does he sees the light and longs to be young.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep work.

w0lfbane thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Presence  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Kanu I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Presence" Open in new Window. by Kanu

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep and emotional romance poem written in the secret admirer style with a unique rhyming scheme that adds to the overall gentle flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a classroom where one student composes a poem for another student that they are obsessed with.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: The format reads a little off on my computer screen. Editing out some commas would not hurt this poem as they are not needed.

Kanu thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Adhere - Definitely Writing I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Love song for whoever" Open in new Window. by Adhere - Definitely Writing

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep and emotional romance poem with a nice rhyming scheme that adds to the realistic flow of this work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul navigating the sea of time in search for the elusive soul mate that is hiding in time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Adhere - Definitely Writingthank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi JMariah, I came across this poem while random quill reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Fate of The Molly Fair" Open in new Window. by JMariah

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A wild and entertaining sailor's tale written poetically in six line stanza's. Ain't it great when you can get carried away with poetry.

Well Done! This delightful poem has my vote.



Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the ship the Molly Fair on her journey. A terrible storm takes control and finally pushes the ship into her final fate as a raft.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the mechanics of this enchanting sailor's tale. *Wind* *Wind*

JMariah thank you for sharing your poem.*BigSmile*
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Review of Out of the fog  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Howl, I came across this work while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Out of the fog" Open in new Window. by Howl

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful poem written in a unique format and structure. Emphasizing on how life can at times wear you out if you don't make time to stop and smell the roses.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a wise man walking through a fast-paced, busy, crowded world while trying to keep his mind focused on finding the light at the end of the tunnel.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:A delightful work yet the standard use of capital letters couldn't hurt.

Howl, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Dark Vows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi again HuntersMoon, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Dark Vows" Open in new Window. by HuntersMoon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A short mesmerizing poem that sends this readers mind into a spin to solve the mystery.

A well written strong poem that can get the readers mind working

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of ancient Greece where the Sirens sing their song to attract sailors into the web.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: As always I can find no problems at all with this HuntersMoon poem.

HuntersMoon, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Wandering Thoughts, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "My Dream That Died." Open in new Window. by Wandering Thoughts

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A lyrics style poem with repeating lines. Very entertaining work with a rhythmic flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a poet trying to get over a lost love so he puts his emotions on paper. Then uses that to write a song.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the mechanics of this delightful and entertaining poem.

Wandering Thoughts, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review of Forever More  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Allan Charles Busy Busy, I came across this story while random quill reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Forever More" Open in new Window. by Allan Charles Busy Busy

Clarity:A wonderful title for this Poe tale.

Writing style:Horror tribute drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A great structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is appropriate for it's speaker.

My favorite line:--- Memories of local rumors rummaged through my brain. Those who wander alone to seek Poe shall meet him only in death. ---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:It appears to me that you satisfied the prompt requirements well.

A great opening that catches my attention well and makes me want to know more. Classic Edgar Allan Poe style. Great descriptions that helped the reader visualize this haunting tale. My heart is still beating a little fast from the image of the Ravens Pierced blood colored eyes.

"Never more. Never more. If he asks you of Lenore, you will be no more."

A chilling tribute to Edgar Allen Poe.

Allan Charles Busy Busy, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: If ever you decide to edit, the ending could be stronger.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Rizz, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "I miss the old kanye" Open in new Window. by Rizz

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written poem with a catchy flow. I must admit this reader don't know what a kanye is. At the same time this reader wishes the old Kanye would come back.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul staring over the sea of time searching for that lost kanye time when all in the world was right, the stars were lined correctly. The cosmos was as it was meant to be.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can't find any problems at all with the mechanics of this deep work that has my mind spinning still.
*Sun* *Sun* *Sun* *BigSmile*
Rizz, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Keira Conley, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Monster They Created - Chapter 1-3" Open in new Window. by Keira Conley

Clarity:A intriguing title that makes me want to know more.

Writing style:Dark fantasy drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed? Yes. by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A fair structure. A larger font with a bit more line-spacing would make it easier for those of us readers with weak eyes.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Good dialog that is appropriate for it's speaker.

A strong story with a good tone that makes it sound like a true story. This helps the reader to relate with this tale.
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:
A good opening that draws the reader deeper into this tale. A creative and a well told story that holds the readers attention well throughout the story.

Keira Conley, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a larger font size with more line spacing. This will make it easier for the reader as well as more inviting to a browser or a would be reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Kenzie, I came across this article while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the article: "Artists & Photographers? Read This!" Open in new Window. by Kenzie

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A information packed article emphasizing how congress can take away the rights of artist. Unfortunately in this imperfect world it would seem that the government can pretty much take away anything they want.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a disappointed artist seeing his work being sold by others with no regards to the creator of the work.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A great easy to read structure well formatted in an orderly fashion making it easy for this reader.

Kenzie, thank you for sharing your work.
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Review of 21 words  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi St. Patrick's Sox, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "21 words" Open in new Window. by St. Patrick's Sox

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:twenty-one seems to be a magic or lucky number as this poem emphasizes.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul sitting at the blackjack table, down to his last dollar when suddenly he hits blackjack. Now he can play a little longer.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find.

St. Patrick's Sox thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Justyn, Happy WDC Anniversary. I came across this tale while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the story: "Sculpture of the Pharaoh's Daughter" Open in new Window. by Justyn

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:An Awesome creative short story that makes it's point well in just 99 words. Well done. Like many others I love tales of ancient Egypt.

-Keeping the Princess cool and relaxed for the royal sculpture was crucial.-
A great idea to end it with the cobra.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: Looking back through the sea of time I see the ancient land of the pyramids where the Princess is being sculptured for the pharaoh. Her servants work hard to keep her cool yet they do not notice the cobra creeping into their midst.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: Short and sweet with 99 words, straight to the point exactly like today's modern reader likes things.

Justyn thank you for sharing your work.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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My impressions of:"The Voice Inside" Open in new Window. by W.D.Wilcox

Clarity:A great title that caught my curiosity. Great image also.

Writing style:Psychological horror tale.

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Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A+ format and structure.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?A+ dialog that sends chills up my back.

My favorite line:--- I got the spider from my biology class and then after putting it under his bed covers, I left for the weekend. When I returned he was still in bed, mouth hanging open in death, eyes bulging and oozing with yellow pus. The spider had crawled up into his mouth where it was living quite peacefully.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A wonderful opening that starts the action and pace of this paranormal thriller.

That crazy man in the head keeps me on the edge of my seat from crazy cat example to getting kicked out of high school then some more.

The flames at the end caught me of guard. I'm still thinking about Aunt Lucy.

Well done. A true classic horror tale. I think this one has my vote.

W.D.Wilcox, thank you for sharing this awesome work it has been a joy to read it.

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WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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