Good Morning,
A Love Poetry.
Each line speaks highly of a wonderful lady in your life.
Wonderful and admirable as it is.
The poem has a good flow and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing
" A Love So Pure:
A Glorious Vision "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
An observance from the eyes of others in a physical appearance and being expressed through
four poetic lines of this work of art.
And the honest and sincere reply.
Well said !
Thank You for sharing
" Hale and Hearty"
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry speaks of a relationship between two people and how it turns out along the way.
The conclusion is a great realization.
This is a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry written from the heart.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is captivating that speaks of the facts in life :
" After The Trials"
The poem is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
Wonderful lines that fit for the given title and it expresses a message in a philosophical way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is a sad to note that such exists based on the given title:
" An Unwilling Soldier "
The written lines fit for the given title.
Reading the last few lines of this well written poetry makes me believe that he truly deserves a firing
squad .
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
After what she had been through...then the great suspense of seeing an empty shelf but, miracle of miracles, here's the chocolate.
AHA ! I can figure out the wide smile of victory.
Brilliant Writer !
Great conclusion.
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Evening,
Hahaha I was thinking differently as reading the tornado effect of Jeff's room. And then.. it's about a Mouse..and all the whole Mom has it.
Huh ! Grounded for the whole week. Tsk Tsk Tsk
Yet.." Jet still smiled"
Fascinating...
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
And the secret wealth was revealed .
Thanks to Benjamen.
Hahaha
That calls for a celebration.
A very interesting story that gives me a joyful read.
I can vividly picture the whole family rejoicing. A nice twist indeed.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Written for a prompt
Interesting and captivating title
" Up A Tree "
The story behind the poetry speaks of a
Chasing Game between a Squirrel and A Canine .
The picture adds more meaning into this well written work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
This is wonderful.
A very precious song nicely presented and nicely written all the way
Meaningful and touching.
Thank You for the Special Note below the lyrics that explains clearly about this work of art.
Marvelous children.
Fantastic message.
Thank You for sharing
" A Song For The Children Of Nakajo "
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
Truly amusing.
Rebecca is very lucky that her friends come and rescued her in that terrible situation.
Tanya, Anna and Rebecca nice names of these Rats.
A Fascinating short story.
Thank You for sharing
" Rebecca Rat's Bottle
Bother "
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Wise decision and action to win the heart of Jen.
Oh..those were unforgettable High School days that's nicely written and nicely presented.
The time where the technology is not as great as today.
Thank You for sharing
" Joe's Beginning" and Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The right time comes and after all he wanted it done as early as possible and it gains a positive result.
A nice and wonderful story about family decisions and a time for surprise.
I am happy for both of them having a nice conclusion
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
How come Stocie become and alien when her mother is not.
A family drama with a sad ending.
How did her mother know that her daughter is an alien.
A short alien story that is a bit confusing, intriguing yet very interesting.
" Attack ! "
Terrifying !
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture a happy family gathering with food, good conversation, gift giving and much merriment in:
" The Family Christmas
Dinner"
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the joyful read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very captivating Poetry or a Prose with an interesting title that sounds like a tongue twister to me :
"Titter Tatter,
Pitter Patter "
Reading between the lines makes me feel how wonderful this season is, Autumn in particular with the falling leaves and the feeling of being greatly blessed with true friends and a loving family.
The conclusion is truly meaningful.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A poem so full of life and the love of horses
Nice names for these horses who played an important role in this wonderful World.
Admirable lines that completed this work of art.
" These hardworking animals have earned our praise "
My favorite line that is truthful and speaks of how great horses are .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always
Good Morning,
The given title is captivating and interesting as it plays an important role in my life all the way:
" The Sea "
The poem seeks answers to some questions and it gives a wonderful conclusion: " Many seek to destroy it But I seek to protect it."
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Oh..
Max might be very hungry and cannot wait to be given the food for him and the Salad was on sight so Presto ! It surely was delicious.
Hahaha
Sad to note that everything was ready yet no noodles as the son did not tell that he. Used it. Hmmm
Truly the title fits for this written experience.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Reading the first paragraph I wonder why there's no excitement for this day as if anticipating a gloom not excitement.
As I continue reading between the lines it makes me understand why the couple feeling that this day is dreadful it is because the birthday celebrant is their dead son. Very touching and a surely painful day and it's only the mother has to visit the tomb.
Oh...heartbreaking.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Awesome...
A very interesting and captivating title of a free verse poetry
" The Heart Of
Football "
A very exciting game being loved by millions.
The poem is based upon the player's actual experience of the game that is full of action, excitement and high spirit.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
I admire the wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written biographical Essay.
It speaks of yesterday and the facts of today which surely leads to a wonderful tomorrow.
Nice to note that God makes a way for you to continue living life with purpose all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry especially written for Mom on Mother's Day.
The poem is full of love, honor gratefulness to the very caring and loving mother.
Truly very inspiring.
Thank You for sharing
" On Mother's Day "
Write on.
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry speaks of Sarah's kindness of heart and her willingness to give.
The poem is very inspiring and the presentation is uniquely wonderful that truly speaks the true meaning of Thanksgiving.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title fascinates me that I have some special collection of it:
" Bottles"
Interesting way of presenting this well written work of art .
A poem that showcase your talent in the most unique way.
Interesting all the way.
Thank You for another nice read .
Write on.
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