Good Morning,
The given title is captivating, interesting and meaningful:
" From Darkness Comes
Light "
Reading between the lines makes me admire more of your gift of writing poetry as you expressed wonderfully the message in a philosophical way .
Thank You for sharing another precious work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Nice picture that expresses the beauty of Friendship.
Nice title that speaks of two wonderful individuals with nice names "Seisa And Amy "
It also shares words of Wisdom to one and all about friendship.
Wonderful...
Thank You for sharing.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Morning,
A very interesting and meaningful title of a
Love Poetry :
"My Love For You Shall Never Desist "
The lines are inspiring and expresses the heart's deepest and greatest faith.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way .
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Interesting title that speaks of one of the seasons and the connectedness with
life :
" Our Winter "
Reading between the lines of this well written and nicely presented Prose makes me admire your talent of writing as you express it wonderfully here in this writing.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Interesting Title of a very important topic in this modern world for Working People:
"The Pros And Cons Of
Remote Work "
You explain clearly and with clarity the difference of such given topic that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very beautiful and meaningful poem inspired by a Biblical Psalm.
It expresses a deep faith and trust to The Most High.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Adorable and admirable
" He Guides My Steps"
This poem proves that you are greatly blessed.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
Children can be funny sometimes. I like the attitude of Daddy by not jumping to conclusion right away as in getting to know the real story before reacting .
Nice and wise indeed.
I enjoy reading this
" Thinking Deep "
Thank You for sharing
Write on .
Good Afternoon,
Good to know that Sandy has an ally.
Yes.. Bullying happens in School and it needs to be stopped ASAP.
This is a well written and nicely presented short story.
The given title is truly interesting :
" Sticking Together "
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A wonderful Christmas Happening and makes Christmas joyful.
The giving of gifts by the Christmas Tree area .. Reading between the lines I can vividly picture the happy faces as each one receiving the gift with great expectations and anticipation.
Thank You for the joyful read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A horrible happening that cost lives in this particular place of the Congo Country.
Two explosions that surely the work of terrorists and needs an immediate investigation and quick solution .
A very sad situation.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A captivating and interesting title of a short poetry that is well written and nicely presented:
" Mountain Psalms"
Meaningful lines that completed this wonderful work of art.
A HAIKU, I believe so.
Nice, concise and wise.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very important month of your life that serves as an inspiration, a motivation that gives a great conclusion that truly Love makes a way.
Reading between the lines makes your readers understand that September is really unforgettable .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry from the heart.
It speaks of TRAVELING
which I myself is not fond of it.
The last line ?
I can relate because it's much discomfort to note or to experience.
The poem is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The written lines fit for the given title,
Our Hate Filled World
A very sad reality.
With these kind of happenings we can never have Peace and Harmony.
I can only wish a world filled with love and joy spread all around.
A sad reality.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A beautiful poem from the heart with a very meaningful title,
An Angel's Wing
The poem is comforting.
It gives joy in time of sorrow and offers a smile during sadness and emptiness.
This is well written and nicely presented with a picture of an angel that adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Fantasy or Comedy
For me it's not but a Suspense Thriller.
Also what makes it sweeter at the end is that it proves of an interesting story of a burglar with a heart.
I wonder how the story will continue and will end but this PREFACE is very convincing and exciting.
Crime does not pay but surely you can have some twists and turns to make this story more and more interesting.
I have nothing to correct and nothing to add I enjoy reading it as it is.
Good luck for more chapters until the end.
Keep writing and keep posting .
Good Afternoon,
Wow...
A fascinating work of art with a very meaningful title
Canine Of Mine
Reading between the lines makes me so happy for both of you as love goes on in your both existence and even after life is through .
The poem has a good flow and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Yes...
Truly fascinating.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A wonderful poetry about the beauty of nature and about Trees in particular.
Yes.. it of great importance to our environment to have trees all around that you specify clearly in this precious work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Yes.. the footsteps lead to where you are or the sound of it leads to your exact location.
Interesting title of a well written free verse poetry,
Footsteps
A poem that is nicely presented and so full of suspense ,
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
The title is very interesting as well as very intriguing,
The World's Worst Passenger
True to its given title, this curiosity of the human will surely lead to his end.
An alien story that is very convincing and is well written all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I always love the beauty of the Ocean making me very curious as I read the given title,
The Ocean-s Lullaby
Admirable lines that completed this work of art.
A well written and nicely presented poem written from the heart by a very talented poet.
Thank You for another great read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Oh... A set up using a drone and it worked.
A ghost story that is convincing yet not that real.
Hahaha
As in Joke only.
An unforgettable trip indeed.
This is well written and nicely presented.
I can imagine the reaction of Audrey after knowing that it's a set up.
Well....
Thank You for the read.
Write on .
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
From the given title, to its poetic words and lines...each one expressing a philosophical message speaking the words from your heart.
Thank You for sharing
Hearts A Fire
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Triolet Form of Poetry.
A well written and nicely presented work of art that speaks highly of a wonderful woman.
A poem that serves as a loving tribute as you honor and love your dearest Mother.
The beautiful picture adds more meaning into this,
My Mum The Quiet Achiever
Wonderful poem as it is...
Thank You for the great read.
Write on
Tha
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry speaks of the drama in life.
It is full of action and many activities to hold and behold..
It sounds like a ballad with an interesting tune with low and rising tone.
Interesting title ,
Queen Of The Dance Floor
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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