Good Afternoon,
Intriguing lines that completed this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry especially the mention of:
" Fishy
Daughter of Queenfish"
And the last line too..
Something very unusual personality .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Whew !
That's Scary.
The given title is interesting and captivating
" The Guest "
Curiousity arises if who this guest is.
Reading between the lines makes me wonder why your love brought that guest with her.
Better send that guest away soonest.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Wonderful collection of
Haiku Poetry.
It speaks of one of the seasons and the lines are lovely and lively.
Each given title expresses it's own beauty in harmony.
Poems that are concise, nice and wise.
Awesome.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Winning Piece.
Congratulations !
Wonderful as it is .
The given title is a nice place to enjoy with oneself as well as with family and friends:
"The Beach"
The nice picture adds more meaning into this special work of art.
Admirable lines from the start to the end that completed this winning poetry.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The innocence of a child in a conversation with his mother .
Simply wonderful as he talks with out pretentions.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
A Christmas Story full of joy.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Captivating and interesting title of a free verse poetry:
"Begin To Dance "
The music with the essence of life as well as the lively and lovely disposition makes this poem admirable.
A time for celebration with dances and
cheers.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
You are so blessed that at a very young age you made that wonderful decision in your life.
The story is inspiring and uplifting.
Surely, JESUS CHRIST lives in your heart forever .
I am glad to have read this.
Thank You for sharing
" The Day I Gave My Life
To Christ "
Write on .
Good Morning,
I agree with the written lines of this work of art with an interesting title: " Self-Love"
True to the lyrics of a famous song:
" Learning to love yourself is the greatest love of all"
All because you need to love yourself first so you can love others .
This is how I understand this very meaningful poetry.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Each line seeking for an answer and such answers give clarification of it all through the whispers of your soul .
Thank You for sharing and for the read .
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
And the love lingers like the tune of a lovely song that's being a part of life, deep inside the heart and soul.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented meaningful Prose written from the heart proving that true love never ever dies.
Marvelous !
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The interesting question.
The great answer.
The poem is well written and nicely presented all the way .
The meaningful lines speak of life and love .
The poem has a good flow and with wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
The last two lines express the best conclusion and the great answer to the given question.
Awesome!
Write on.
Good Evening,
The game that is full of enthusiasm both the players and the crowd and being there in a crowd is for you, a great achievement and I am happy for you .
Yes..watching this game truly gives excitement and thrill and seeing personally your favorite athletes adds more excitement and fun.
I enjoy reading this joyful and full of life work of art .
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Great problem silver.
Nice decision and it gains a positive result.
Hahaha
I can vividly picture Jeremy and Alex being friends again .
Wonderful storyline.
This is really interesting and fascinating with the happy ending.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Awesome.
A wise and a nice way of sharing unforgettable childhood memories.
A highly impressive
" When We Ran Free "
Admirable work of art from the very beginning to the end.
Fascinating indeed and it is well written and nicely presented all the way .
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Good Afternoon,
A unique story behind the music that creates a very interesting, intriguing and.meaningful poetry.
The given title is full of action and with great suspense:
" Run Boy Run "
As in run for your life.
The conclusion makes a positive twist and turn.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The given title expresses the positive side of life :
" Through The Laughter "
Yes..a laughter can ease the tension of the day.
The written lines fit for the given title as the poem expresses a message in a philosophical way.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read .
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Good Afternoon,
Interesting and captivating title of a
Crossword puzzle.
Biblical and Educational and informative as it also teaches a good learning.
I believe that I answered some correctly but not all.
I read the Holy Bible but honestly not an expert in understanding of all its writings.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
You are sharing a very important topic through " Getting Started "
This is about earning money and for me it is also about enjoying the use of money.
Deep in my heart I firmly believe that it's God plan not to have all the people in this world to be rich but there must be a lot to be poor because if all people are rich nobody will till the land, nobody will work in the factories and nobody goes fishing anymore,
As in there is always a good reason for Everything.
In my own personal opinion, I always consider Money as my Best Friend who's always there when I needed it most.
But most of all one must have an honest living by doing the very best with the goodness of spirit and surely all is well and all will be well.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Some important questions with some specific answers wherein the directions are needed is the main message of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
It serves also as a motivation to move on to the right path.
This is how I understand this nicely presented work of art.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
How about giving an example of such writing or writings for us to know or to have an idea about such collaboration of storytelling.
Is everyone or anyone can join this particular group. What are the requirements then ?
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A Dodoitsu form of poetry .
A new form of Poetry that I learned today .
I love the given title that is so inviting and refreshing especially this very hot afternoon where the sun shines to its brightness.
Truly wonderful
" Making and Selling Lemonade "
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture a lovely gardens that is full of blooming flowers and some tomatoes, eggplants and other vegetables ready for harvest along with the tweets of birds and the never ending sights of butterflies flying all around.
This is how I understand Lily's Well Watered Gardens.
Oh... Gardening is truly fun.
The nice picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Perfectly said.
Each line speaks of the truth about God's power and God's protection for the whole world including you and me and everyone else.
A writing that proves God's great love for His people.
Thank You for sharing
" GOD IS ABLE "
And will always be.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Oh !
What a scene...especially the last part. Hahaha
Siblings rivalry for attention I guess.
Very realistic story that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Hahaha
I believe many can relate.
Thank You for sharing
" Little Miss Perfect "
Thank You for the read too.
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Good Morning,
Not just any tree but a very special tree that gives a meaningful celebration at Christmas time.
A nicely written poem that looks like a HAIKU Poetry to me.
The picture of a Christmas tree adds more meaning into this work of art .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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