Good Morning,
Thank You for this Great information about Abstract or Sound Entry form of poetry.
A nice lesson I learned today.
Thank You for the Special Note before the Poem was written.
The given title fits for the vhosen words.
Storm
I do not love Storm or lightning but I love and enjoy your Poem.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Reading your review makes me conclude that this book is truly interesting and captivating.
The mere fact that you wish to read the book once again proves how interesting the book is.
Yes. I can relate. There are books that I keep in a big attache case not to br displayed at our family library so anytime I wish to read those books I just open the attache case which is being placed in one of the corners of our room. and wherever we live as we changed residence always due to our corresponding works meaning my husband and me..this attache case always travels with me.
Thank You for shsring such a great review that I sincerely enjoy reading.
Write On.
God Bless
Good Evening,
A biographical genre and it describes your personal weaknesses which has a connectedness with your love relationship.
Written with all sincerity, honesty and truthfulness.
My suggestion : my weakness and I Loves the painful truth..
Please change the word Loves to love.
Also, you may divide this into three paragraphs for a nicer presentation.
Suggestion only.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Evening,
A short and nice story about this particular girl.
I believe this girl because of her positive thinking and great understanding surely gains victory in life.
As long as she is doing what is right and love what she is doing then surely the goodness of her spirit be reigns.
And all is well and all will be well.
She is enough and she has to keep believing and loving herself.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
The story behind the poetry reminds me of the song
This is my life...
Yes.. life is not always a bed of roses. But life is not life if you only experience happiness.
We let go of the bad, cherish the good and move on for the best.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
One thing more I can say.
There is ALWAYS Hope
As well as there is always a bright side of the story.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Reading between the lines proves that you both have great bonding time and these special creature is very important and special to you.
The poem has a good flow be and is nicely presented.
This also shows your very caring heart.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A poem with a special and important message to everyone.
The title alone is expressing positive ness.
Nicely written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is.nice too all the way.
Thank You for sharing this and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
I love lemons too
And I admire this fascinatinh and marvelous work of art.
Great preeentation.
Very nice lines that mske this poem a remarkable one.
I enjoy reading this and we are enjoying Iced Lemon juice at noon this summertime.
Write On
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
It speaks of unpleasant situations of the world in a most philosophical way
.
Each line fits for the given title.
A Contemptuous Fate:
Sideways Trouble
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
A nicely written poem.
Nostalgic as in reminiscing the good old days in this familiar place taking a walk.
A great way of reconnecting the past as you enjoy the moments of today.
A poem that sounds like a lovely ballad to me.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
This is very nice.
This is for multipurpose use .
My three younger brothers favorite color
and design too.
Not too short and not too long.
A comfortable wear.
And not heavy to wash.
Yes truly a
Play Khaki Short
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Evening,
Fiction or nonfiction, reading at the last part made me laughed so loud.
But then. realizing its role in saving your life, such happening serves as a great ad to patronize their products with a headline:
Thanks To Underwear
Hahaha
This is a unique and brilliant story as in Wit and Humor and full of Suspense..
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
Yes..as in BIG YES to each word written that completed this
Quotes And Words Of Wisdom.
For me , it means the Courageous. spirit always fight for what is right.
As an example:
No to women's and children's abuse and
No to Bullying..
Thank You for sharing and for The
Worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
This is so no true. I
Admire the courage.
The Abuse must be stopped Now..
Not later, not tomorrow but Now.
The sad plight of women...of battered wives..it is happening worldwide.
I agree with the poet's stand.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
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Good Evening ,
A Love Poetry.
Fascinating and amusing in your own unique way especially the last Three lines that serve as a conclusion to
Possess the patience to wait and see.
Nice poem all the way.
Thank You for sharing
Fairy Heart
Thank You for the read too.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written acrostic poetry.
Magic BeanstalkIt
Nice lesson that this poem shares.Jack's was not wise then.
It can only ruin his reputation.
The poem hss a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
For me, it is the best place to travel and make each moment counts.
Morgan surely loves this particular place, The Library..
Very nice short story..
Reading between the lines I was wondering if where will this 6 year old go ?
Then the words of her Mom me makes a brilliant conclusion.
Write On m
Good Afternoon,
A lovely poem that shows the poet's loving and caring heart and the prayerful soul too..
You are one of the reasons why this world is such a beautiful place.
I admire the poem all the way.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for your.prayers.
God Bless You Always.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Very nice poem about this very special art by the Japanese popularly known as Origami..
The making of Cranes using paper as the materials and individually done by the hands.
I wish to learn that one of these days as I was and I am contemplating..in
Making happy baskets.
I can vividly picture of beautiful.pink cranes that this.poem.nicely.disctibed.
Thank you for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Oh...I was excited with the result too as i read between the lines and the 1, 2, three. Jump.!
Full of suspense and you did it and no that matters a lot.
I am happy for you the
Somthing to celebrate ,,
Cheers ,!
Thank you for sharing and thank you be for the be Great read.
Good Morning,
This is wonderful and fun to read.it i is a nicely written poetry but I wish it is a reality for you to win the lottery.
Hahaha
Great lines that completed this.
Written for a prompt and this is remarkably done.
The rhythm and rhyme is awesome,
Write On.
Good Morning
This is a writing that makes something fruitful of the time that you have.
As in you work your plan and you plan your work to achieve your goals and realized your dreams.
Wise and nice thinking.
Surely You Can.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A nice morning read.
The words are like a sweet music that sooths to the deepest nerves and make the reader smile and feel so blessed to read a poem who gives importance to others as well as value oneself.
I love this
Loving You , Loving Me
The presentation is great.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
And You are the Sweet Darling.
I enjoy reading this quality family
Bonding time which will become a Sweet Memories tomorrow.
Time flies so fast the next thing we know our children will have a family of their.own...so.enjoy the moments.
Cherish your loved ones.
Thank you for sharing
Write On.
Good Morning,
A beautiful Christmas Story.
About the kindness of heart, forgiveness and most of all, Love.
A wonderful way of spending Christmas and the story shares a great lesson to one and all.
Precious Plainclothes
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Merry Christmas...
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