Good Morning,
Hahaha
No wonder he loves the frigid weather. It resonates to his name
Jack Frost. I can imagine what was happening at the conversation.
Amusing story that makes me laugh .
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read .
Write on.
Good Morning,
Jonah, the pool, and the heart problem,
Amusing way of telling the story , true to its given title
" Funny Things "
Admirable way of facing life at the lighter side is one way to achieve positive results and make life easy inspite of all the struggles.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
To dream the dream she dreamt. This is to be realized and Andrea is affirming it .
Nice story with a great positiveness as in what your mind conceived you can achieve.
Fascinating story that is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Captivating title of a well written and nicely presented short story.
I wish he makes it so he can enjoy the gold of his grandpa.
An interesting story and surely a great adventure too in search of that gold .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I got 4 out of 4 as in 100 percent.
YES !
All my answers are Tough answers as I firmly say
"NO TO Bullying " and I always speak my mind for the right reason.
Possibly the reason why I scored 4.
Anyway, Thank You for sharing this and the opportunity for me to answer this quiz.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Afternoon,
A very meaningful Essay
about Music .
The given title is captivating and interesting as Music has a special place in my heart for Always:
" Music is What Feelings
Sound Like "
This title reminds me of a very famous movie, The Sound Of Music.
I admire the brilliant lines that completed this work of art.
The last lines with two questions.
My answer is BIG YES !
Thank You for the great read .
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is captivating and very intriguing:
" Seeking Calamity:
A Righteous Ambition "
The last two lines are my favorite lines that also serves as a meaningful conclusion.
This is well written and nicely presented in a philosophical way.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful " Heart Song"
It tells of a story that maybe a part of yesterday yet can never ever be forgotten as it lives in the heart.
The picture of a ❤️ adds more meaning into this well written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank You for the read.
God 🙏 Bless.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is full of meaning and sad as well as lonely expectations.
Reading between the lines makes me understand fully why such title was given:
" FADE "
As in everything lists it's spark and brightness and what remains is a sad memory.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very special writing commemorating the 21st birthday of this Awesome Community we all love,
Writing. Com.
A writing that's composed also of 21 words.
Reading between the lines makes me feel joyful as the celebration surely gives much happiness, meaning and most of all FUN.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Possibly there's a great treasure inside.
This truly needs a great repair due to its being old and dusty as well.
There is a wonderful story behind the well written and nicely presented free verse poetry and the conclusion is full of excitement and expectations.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses of an observation while traveling or driving in a very busy metropolis.
Written lines fit for the given title:
"Highways From Dawn 'til
Dusk "
Yes...such truthful and honest well written lines and nicely presented work of art .
Write on.
Good Morning,
An Essay that expresses the true feelings of the heart with an interesting title:
" I Hate Arranged Marriages "
Yes.. this is truly happening and I am not in favor of it too.
My suggestion in this writing :
The first line, " In any relationship respect important then
anything "
Please change this to :
In any relationship respect is important than anything.
Also, this : " my believe is gone .."
Please change the word believe to...believe
Thank You for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
A lovely and meaningful Christmas poetry.
The busy activities preparing food specialties for this special occasion that the whole family is celebrating.
A very nice and colorful presentation of this work of art.
Highly admirable all the way.
The grateful hearts make a wise and nice conclusion.
Merry Christmas !
Write on.
Good Morning,
A beautiful Love poetry especially dedicated to a dearest wife in this special celebration of
Women's Day.
The poem is heartwarming, full of love and the great hope for a wonderful today and a brighter and most meaningful tomorrow along with the whole family.
Surely your wife loves this well written and nicely presented work of heart.
Keep loving both of You
Beyond Forever.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Oh. The mistake was using the gasoline that makes the small troublesome fly the winner.
Interesting, captivating, intriguing story and indeed a great battle. Admirable words that you described this fly and such words are truthful.
Sad ending.
Brilliant Writer.
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A HAIKU poetry that speaks of words of wisdom with a meaningful and interesting as well as inspiring title :
" Advice "
I agree with the words of the poet as in perfectly said in this well written and nicely presented work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Prose that speaks the true feelings of the heart. It speaks of a relationship that has a sad ending.
The original and the revised form still expresses the same sentiments that's well written and nicely presented.
Yes.. this situation happens .
A sad reality.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry. It speaks of a doll being bought from the flea market.
Naming the doll, Gypsy as it also has a connectedness with our existence in this journey called life.
Well - said !
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The story behind the poetry speaks of an unforgettable memories of a well spent time shared with a very someone special.
A time full of a great experience of togetherness .
Thank You for sharing
"Road Trip "
Write on .
Good Morning,
A very long Chapter 1...
The half- brothers Rory and Barney trying to save this hulky man from the slavers. Not an easy thing to do as he's very heavy yet they did it.
A story well written according to the accent on how they say the words. This sounds like a very interesting movie full of action , suspense and mystery.
The finding of the mysterious jewelry box whose medallion inside sticked into the hand of Rory, the wounded Barney as they both tried to maneuver the boat.
A story about bandits and the tied big man tried to hurt the brothers only to realiz
his mistake upon seeing the hand of Rory where the image of the mysterious medallion was imprinted.
Their escape from the slavers makes a victorious conclusion of this first chapter.
I noticed one grammatical error :
" I needs a minute to catch my breath "
Please change the word needs to need..
I look forward to read the next chapter.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented Acrostic Poetry.
I admire the colorful first letters in every line that completed this work of art.
The poem speaks of the beauty of nature as well as of the weather condition of this particular season.
Thank You for sharing
" Madness Of March "
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title:
"Join Those Causes:
Sweeter Reprises "
has a nice rhythm and rhyme as well as the whole poetry from the start to the end.
The message is philosophical that speaks of a worldwide observations.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented Essay that expresses
" Random Thought"
It speaks of the world that you belong, the world of modern technology wherein everything is connected with just a touch of a finger.
Truly a wonderful world.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Very well done.
Sad but no fighting.
No shouting.
Dining and the finality of both decision ending the relationship.
No second chance or no hope for reconciliation.
Sad reality that people change and relationship ends.
A heavy drama that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Truly " The Last
Supper "
Write on.
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