Good Evening,
You describe the eclipse accurately which happened a few days ago. It was not seen in my country. The Philippines but it was clear in your country, the United States of America.
I have some friends there and I had seen it as they posted their video.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On
Good Evening,
A man heroic poem.
The presentation is Awesome.
The life of army man who never afraid to die and glad to serve his
Motherland willing to risk his own life for the safety.of his people.
Highly impressive talent.
Thank You for sharing my
A Last Few words
From.An Army Man
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Good Evening,
A short biographical Essay and it expreses a feeling of being alone.
For me, once in a while it is a nice happening to be Alone.
And in my aloneness I can never be lonely because there are so many things that I can accomplish like finish Writing an important topic or finish reading a book or.many genre in writing and most of all I can commune to the Most High through prayers.
In other words
Alone but not lonely.
Surely you are only adjusting to a
New Situation but whrn you get used to it I believe that you will be grateful that this happened.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A questions heart.
People always say something.
It can be nice or not about you
Others are judgmental too
But for as long as you never stepped on another shoes and doing what is right..then do not care about what people say.
You are good in enoigh to live meaningfully in this meaningful and be wonderful world.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Afternoon,
A tribute to the country's flag.
Admirsble lines that completed this wonderful work of art
It describes on how this American flag was made and designed.
Fascinating great lines.
Thank You for sharing Country Colors
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A wonderful Love poetry that asks a great question,
You Want To Know What's Beautiful ?
Yes..the answers are nicely presented and well written as wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
I heartily agree.
My suggestion ;
In the title, please put an apostrophe in the word Whats...to What's
Minimal suggestion only.
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Good Morning,
This is precious all the way.
This expresses your deep faith to
The Most High.
Meaningful words and lines that completed this work
of art.
The last two lines serve as the best conclusion of this nicely written and nicely presented poem.
Thank You for sharing
I Believe.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Wow.. This is wonderful all the way.
The title expresses great no expectations.
You have wandered the sea..a super Beauty that nothing can compare.
Reading between the lines makes me so happy for you to be greatly blessed.
Awesome work of art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Hahaha haha
This is fun. So true.
This truly happens in real life and you are sharing this through your briliant style of writing.
Just as we say like.mother, like daughter it is also like fathet like son.
Great
Like Son
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
I love cross word puzzle.
The listed words below makes me believe that South Dakota is a beautiful place in America.
A place I never been to as it is very far away from our country, the Pearl of the Orient Seas or the Philippines.
I have never seen a Sturgis, a badger,. Yet I believe that this place is a very interesting place.
Thank You for the read.
God Bless.
Good Morning,
Nice and lovely poetry and the picture adds more meaning into this work of art.LGBTQ..and this is openly accepted nowadays.
Yes.. Follow your heart and where your Happiness is.The poem is full of life and Love is on the air.
I have a brother in law who is an Antique Business Man and his boyfriend he calls his girlfriend who is a dedicated Medical Surgeon and they live happily for 24 years now.
I enjoy their company when they visited us and spent two nights with us with a never ending topics of wonderful conversation.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On
Good Morning,
Captivating title.
The Shoe Emporium
I wish to be there as enjoy how you advertise it through nicely written and presented poetry.
This poem leads me to Sweet Memories during my corporate World for decades.Every payday I set aside money for shoes.
Since my size 10 feet loves High Heele and there are only a few Filipina ladies who has size 10 feet for a 5 feel ten inches employee so the store has to put it on SALE which gives advantage to my budget that instead of buying a pair I can buy 5 pairs on sale. So my shoes match what ever dress I put on. And during Christmas bonus where Shoes were on SALE the more I bought more pairs. I enjoyed fitting those high heels.
Truly those were unforgettable years and your poem makes me nostalgic thinking on my corporate World experience..Do you have Red colored high heels not the Steelitto but just the regular high heels.hahaha
I love this work of art.
Thank You for the great read
Write On.
Good Morning,
Thank You for this Great information about Abstract or Sound Entry form of poetry.
A nice lesson I learned today.
Thank You for the Special Note before the Poem was written.
The given title fits for the vhosen words.
Storm
I do not love Storm or lightning but I love and enjoy your Poem.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Reading your review makes me conclude that this book is truly interesting and captivating.
The mere fact that you wish to read the book once again proves how interesting the book is.
Yes. I can relate. There are books that I keep in a big attache case not to br displayed at our family library so anytime I wish to read those books I just open the attache case which is being placed in one of the corners of our room. and wherever we live as we changed residence always due to our corresponding works meaning my husband and me..this attache case always travels with me.
Thank You for shsring such a great review that I sincerely enjoy reading.
Write On.
God Bless
Good Evening,
A biographical genre and it describes your personal weaknesses which has a connectedness with your love relationship.
Written with all sincerity, honesty and truthfulness.
My suggestion : my weakness and I Loves the painful truth..
Please change the word Loves to love.
Also, you may divide this into three paragraphs for a nicer presentation.
Suggestion only.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Evening,
A short and nice story about this particular girl.
I believe this girl because of her positive thinking and great understanding surely gains victory in life.
As long as she is doing what is right and love what she is doing then surely the goodness of her spirit be reigns.
And all is well and all will be well.
She is enough and she has to keep believing and loving herself.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
The story behind the poetry reminds me of the song
This is my life...
Yes.. life is not always a bed of roses. But life is not life if you only experience happiness.
We let go of the bad, cherish the good and move on for the best.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
One thing more I can say.
There is ALWAYS Hope
As well as there is always a bright side of the story.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Reading between the lines proves that you both have great bonding time and these special creature is very important and special to you.
The poem has a good flow be and is nicely presented.
This also shows your very caring heart.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A poem with a special and important message to everyone.
The title alone is expressing positive ness.
Nicely written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is.nice too all the way.
Thank You for sharing this and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
I love lemons too
And I admire this fascinatinh and marvelous work of art.
Great preeentation.
Very nice lines that mske this poem a remarkable one.
I enjoy reading this and we are enjoying Iced Lemon juice at noon this summertime.
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Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
It speaks of unpleasant situations of the world in a most philosophical way
.
Each line fits for the given title.
A Contemptuous Fate:
Sideways Trouble
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
A nicely written poem.
Nostalgic as in reminiscing the good old days in this familiar place taking a walk.
A great way of reconnecting the past as you enjoy the moments of today.
A poem that sounds like a lovely ballad to me.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
This is very nice.
This is for multipurpose use .
My three younger brothers favorite color
and design too.
Not too short and not too long.
A comfortable wear.
And not heavy to wash.
Yes truly a
Play Khaki Short
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Evening,
Fiction or nonfiction, reading at the last part made me laughed so loud.
But then. realizing its role in saving your life, such happening serves as a great ad to patronize their products with a headline:
Thanks To Underwear
Hahaha
This is a unique and brilliant story as in Wit and Humor and full of Suspense..
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
Yes..as in BIG YES to each word written that completed this
Quotes And Words Of Wisdom.
For me , it means the Courageous. spirit always fight for what is right.
As an example:
No to women's and children's abuse and
No to Bullying..
Thank You for sharing and for The
Worthwhile read.
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