Good Morning,
I love the sound of it,
" Tick..Tick "
For me it sounds like life is going on and making most of each, moment and also it speaks of a very precious Time.
The poem is well written and nicely presented and for me the presentation is uniquely wonderful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A short story written with all candidness and truthfulness.
It speaks of many topics being discussed as part of election campaign and most of all the winning as the President of a very powerful country.
Written for a prompt.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is captivating yet very intriguing:
" Competent And Preachy
: Forgone Conclusion "
The poem speaks of the many facts of life both nice and the bad side of it.
The poem is well written and nicely presented as well as nicely written.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very dark world is the main message if this free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
A world of darkness without any light is a terrible sight.
This can also be compared with a life covered with darkness and that we can only pray for the light to shine.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very busy preparation for the Halloween Party is the main message of this well written and nicely presented work of art .
The given title speaks the important activity in this particular occasion of Trick or Treat "Children In Costume "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful poetry that speaks of life's connectedness to
"Paper Airplanes" and the message is being conveyed in a philosophical way.
The lines at the last stanza are most meaningful lines to me.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Yes.. I agree with the conclusion.
"that's their problem "
Yes.. in life , we cannot please everybody.
But as long as we are doing our very best and never step on someone's shoes making our conscience clear ..then..who cares about what others say...
Well, about the story of the old man swimming at the beach...it is possibly his way of enjoying life with out any cares of the people around...or maybe...there are so many maybe...
It is also a good thing that you write all your deepest feelings it is one way of healing of whatever frustrations you experienced in life.
Thank You for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Evening,
A clear observations on a live concert through poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture the Lead singer swaying body while singing with much feelings and so convincing that the crowd was applauding after such a very great performance.
Wonderful poetry.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
An English translation of a Russian Poetry.
The title is captivating and interesting as a Love Poetry :
" Perfect Love "
A True Love that is being expressed in a perfect way.
This is how I understand this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The beauty of Art is being expressed here in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Painting, Writing, Singing, Sketching...all in wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
Fascinating poetry.
Thank You for sharing
" Artistic "
Write On.
Good Morning,
A wonderful Essay that speaks of yesterday's sweet memories and today's wonderful belonging and great existence.
You are born talented and you enhance your talents by expressing it in a most wonderful way.
A well written Essay about Friendship, Self discovery and many improvements that lead to excellence and I am so happy for you for being truly blessed.
The last paragraph speaks of your grateful heart that makes you always wonderfully blessed.
Thank You for the Worthwhile read .
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful song with an inspiring title : " Life Really
Matters "
Yes ! It does.
I admire each written line that completed this wonderful song that gives much importance to life and all its essence.
A great work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Written for a prompt and reading between the lines makes me remember the wonderful moments with our Papa and I have his favorite chalico or sleeless Yellow Gold blazer that I placed in my small traveling bag that wherever I go I always feel his presence.
The Hershey's Kisses chocolates that he gave you surely can never ever be forgotten along with his Love and be Care for You.
The poem is very touching as well as full of sweet memories being treasured in the heart.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful poetry with a great and inspiring message done in a philosophical way.
It speaks of life with much turmoil and many challenges and what matters most is the great HOPE that makes a wise and nice conclusion of a well written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Interesting and captivating title that emphasizes on the color green :
"Forty Shades Of Green "
Green, the favorite color of our Mama who told us, her children that it is the color of life.
Reading between the lines my mother's words prove to be true .
This is nicely presented and nicely written.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A lament about Snow.
A happening that I never experience in my whole life as I live in the tropical Philippines.
Reading between the lines I can imagine the coldness of the place and can understand this
" Horatio's Snowblowers
Lament "
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
" Tenari "
A new word I learned today.
Thank You for sharing this including its pronunciation and what actually it means.
Using it in a sentence gives it more clarity and clearness of what this word is all about.
Highly educational.
Thank You for the great information.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Yes..better eat the Sundaes, by doing so there's nothing to understand but only the fun of eating it.
As in why complicate matters !
Amusing story that makes me crave for Sundaes myself.
Hmmm
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry with an interesting title:
"Just Seeking
Socking It To 'Em "
The story behind the poetry is about a job well done and a goal being reached.
A poem that gives me a joyful read.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on .
Good Afternoon,
Whispering your name as they shine brightly in the high sky.
A poetry that is full of deepest feelings from the heart.
The first stanza is most meaningful and so beautiful lines that gives great attraction to this wonderful work of art.
Fascinating all the way.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I agree with your hesitation not to see a cliff as it is a dangerous site that one has to be very careful while being there.
The written lines fit for the given title
" The Cliff "
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Traffic Accident and in this story Dave is now a ghost and actually was the victim of this said accident.
He has been asking around what happened yet he cannot not be seen nor be heard.
Reading between the lines gives me a clear understanding of :
"What Happened "
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
An Essay that also serves as a Flash News on what is the latest news in this particular country of Congo that has something to do with the government activities for the good of the country.
My suggestion in this work : the given title:
"DRC The New Gouverment
Waited "
Please change the word
Gouverment to :
Government.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I enjoy most the last line that serves as a wonderful conclusion:
" through the soul of
Sitaara"
The moon, the ocean, the roses, and most of all the Poet has a great connectedness to form a very meaningful and special love poetry.
Awesome creativeness.
Write on.
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