Good Evening,
Hahaha
With this kind of waiter, the restaurant will surely be bankrupt.
Hahaha
The best way to lost customers.
Amusing.
The story has a good flow and is well written.
I admire the introduction of the story.
But.. at the end
I cannot stop laughing.
Hahaha
Write on.
Good Evening,
Very nice story.
There are three characters.
Lucy, Carmela and
Theresa.
I admire how you tell the story from the very beginning until the
end.
Adorable Flamenco dance
I enjoy watching this dance too.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Awesome.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The title is captivating as well as interesting.Each climb for me is a Great encouragement to move on with life full of enthusiasm.
" I find the strength to carry on"
My favorite line in this very meaningful piece of art.
Yes. And that strength will help you make it through all the struggles in life for you to reach at the perfect destination with a Smile.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting
Vampire Story with a good flow.
This can be a very impressive preface of a Novel in the making
Interesting business deal in the middle of the night.
A unique form of
Entrepreneurship.
Not anyone can write a vampire story.
It takes a lot of knowledge and more research to write one and I highly acknowledge your talent of doing it.
This can be a future Bestseller..
Good luck for more and more pages to write
Stay Blessed..
Good Afternoon,
A beautiful and a very inspiring story about friendship
Diane, a very strong lady and highly admirabl3 traits.
A friend to remember and to cherish forever.
You are a blessing to each other
Friends, they are the true treaures of the heart.
Thank You for sharing this
A Lifelong Friendship
Write on.
God Bless You Always.
Good Afternoon,
A Love Poetry.
A very special and precious person kissing you goodbye for a very good reason.
Three weeks of her absence makes your heart miss her presence.
A poem with a good flow and is well written and nicely presented all the way.
A beautiful story behind the poetry.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that expresses a very unpleasant experience of love.
Not only once, not only twice but thrice being betrayed is no ordinary pain to the loving heart
As God gives you the strength in your journey surely God will bless you with a True Love Sooner than you expect as you well deserved it.
Keep walking with Faith in your heart.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Yes.. possibly someone is out there
So better stay away from the woods especially on Night time
A spooky poem that is well written from the start to the very end.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Winning Piece..
Congratulations..
This is lovely.
A wonderful expression of thoughts as you looked at a wooden bench by the sea
It brings you to many memories and it also includes a wish
And as reality steps in the dreaming ends too.
A poem that sounds like a beautiful song to me
Thank You for sharing
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written free verse poetry with a good flow. It expresses a very important message about life and all its essence.
It speaks of the truth and it explores of how precious it is.
I agree with the given title and the whole story behind the poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
In life, this particular item may not be given much attention always.
As I read between the lines, I now realized that such
Marble Slab
Makes a part of us as we embark on a new dimension when we said goodbye to our precious existence.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is great.
Thank You for the read.
This is lovely.
It speaks clearly and with clarity about the given topic
Words vs. Actions
The poem has a good flow.
It is well written and nicely presented.
Very true to its wtitten lines
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting as well as an intruiging title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
A Cluttered Mind
Same with cluttered things we need to declutter our minds to gain a perfeft harmony.
The chosen written lines speak of the given title.
The last two stanzas explained it nicely and wisely after all.
A great read.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
Aha... The one word that caused it all.
Amusing and realistic.
A matter of saying the right word.
Yes.. the power of the word...
Interesting
The Crime scene...
So who wins ?
But it doesn't matter anymore
Thank You for sharing and for showing your truth.Write on,
Good Morning,
Fascinating...
Thank You for bringing me into Bengaluru... The City of Your Dreams
Descriptive.
The city of your dreams and you are blessed to be living your dreams too in your ideal city.
May your stay in this city be a wonderful beginning of an awesome today and a most meaningful tomorrow.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses a situation and it is about a balloon actually a
Balloon Adrift
The chosen lines are descriptive of what was going on.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and Thank you for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning.
Written for a Contest.. with a
Prompt..
Interesting title
The wise decision is needed here in this 24 syllable contest.Reading between the lines... Yes.. Exactly the title fits.
To Cross or Not To Cross
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
Intriguing and interesting title
Laughing With Ghosts
Reading between the lines makes me smile and understand why such title was given
Laughing With Ghosts
Yes..
Laughters from people close to our hearts are always being treasured and remembered.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning ,
Thank You for sharing your experience in visiting this particular Museum in your country.
A unique one and is located in a very familiar place to you.
Nice to cross paths with kind people as you went on your memorable visit.
I am happy for you.
Thank You for sharing
Visiting The Morbid Anatomy Museum
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very touching free verse poetry with a good flow.
A sad experience or a sad story behind the poetry.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Sad to note that this happened.
The poem has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A nicely written
The Stars
The written lines fit for the given title of this nicely written free verse poetry.
Lines that are truthful and honest in realizing on
" It is funny how I can be so blind "
Thank You for sharing this special work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
An acrostic poetry.
She Is A Nurse
Wonderful poem.
I admire how you poetically , artistic fully and beautifully describe this particular professional person.
I agree with every wtitten word that completed this work of art.
Great presentation.
Awesome
A complete trust to The Most High as I read between the lines of this very meaningful
I Surrender
Yes..
All to Thee my greatest Saviour
I Surrender All
With al my heart and soul.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
It speaks of the Most High with honor and respect.
A poem of faith, honor and love of God to His people.
Each written line fits for the given title.
Thank you for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
An Essay with Biographical genre
. It speaks of plans for the future
as a student.
A questioning heart ?
What Should I Do?
Interesting.
My suggestion in this work:The letter I..
Always capitalize it..
Always believe that you can.
Thank you for sharing and for the read
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