Good Morning,
A very meaningful poetry inspired by that unforgettable event that shocks the world and the sorrow that fills the hearts of mankind .
A deeply emotional piece.
The conclusion expresses hope .
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Good Morning,
The given title expresses sweetness =
Honey, Honey
Reading between the lines makes me admire this poem so full of drama ,so full of life and most of all so full of love.
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry especially dedicated to a dearest wife.
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Good Morning,
A great information that is useful and helpful in the modern business world of this generation.
Highly informative and is well written and nicely presented.
A must read to gain more knowledge for the enhancement of Business activities .
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Good Morning,
A Spenserian Sonnet.
Thank You for the special Note below the poetry.
Interesting title of a sonnet=Journey
Admirable lines that completed this work of art that is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
The picture adds more meaning into this poem.
Yes..the vision is clear.
Enjoy the journey.
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Good Evening,
MADNESS Of MARCH
An Acrostic Poetry..
It speaks of this month connectedness with the Season.
A poetry that expresses great expectations and anticipation.
It is of great joy to say goodbye to winter and to welcome the beauty of Spring .
A wonderful work of art.
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Good Evening,
Haha The cat was being painted too.
Well... something nice and new.
This is fascinating.
A job well done indeed.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Wise painter to find a way of an easier job .
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Good Afternoon,
A very special day for the United States Of America and it's people on July 04....
Independence Day
In our country, the Philippines, we also celebrate this special holiday we called
Philippines American Friendship Day.
The poem is full of joy and excited as full of cheers and it must be.
This is highly impressive.
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Good Afternoon,
Intriguing and interesting title =
All I Can Do Is Imagine
Reading between the lines makes me understand why such title is given.
The mind is full of imagination that surely needs an an action.
The poem has a good flow and with a nice rhythm and rhyme.
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Good Afternoon,
A wonderful walk with the dogs and the experience of watching a beehive. The FAQ is very helpful, useful and informative. As in good to know .
Bees are unique creatures and we used to have them swarming in our mango tree nearby the house and I have to stay afar as the bite truly stings.
This is well written and nicely presented.
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Good Afternoon,
WOW ....
This is awesome.
Admirable thoughts written in every meaningful line that speaks truthfully of the desire of your heart.
It expresses a kind of love that is sacred and pure.
Great title of a great work of art.
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No Promises
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Good Afternoon,
A life in the sea is not that easy especially when the weather is stormy.
There are so many people I know whose life fully spent working by the Sea and share their horrifying experience when the weather was at its worst. They are not the people working as fishermen but the captains of the ship and some seaships engineers , the friends of my three brothers.
Each line in this poetry is truly meaningful.
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Good Morning,
Fascinating story about Fred and some unique and wonderful names of Cats you encountered as well as play a part of your very caring life.
I enjoy reading those cats names.
I love cats too. I grew up with cats and as a child I was assigned to feed them. Right now we have five at home and they love to eat fried fish with rice.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented
=FRED
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Good Afternoon
Written for a prompt about Friday the 13th.
I believe this poem fits for the given prompt as it's always the topic about a black cat during this occasion.
The given title =
Black Cat Crossing, according to the old people in my younger years it means a bad luck.
Well... I hope it's not.
Haha
I love the ending or the conclusion of this well written poetry.
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Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented ESSAY that speaks of the modern world, modern or high technology in particular. The Essay serves it's purpose of clarification on the great importance of modern technology as well as to treasure the past as a legacy for today and tomorrow.
My minimal suggestion in this work but does not hamper the important message this writing brings = the way we interact we each other.
Please change this to =
the way we interact with each other .
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Good Morning,
Great presentation.
Great title.
Great poetry.
The given title speaks of so much hope as the beginning of something very special and precious =
The New Beginning
Beautiful and wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
The union of two hearts.
Congratulations and
Best Wishes ...
Thank You for the very meaningful read.
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Good Morning,
The given topic in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry is of great importance to humankind that is also a captivating title:
A Survival Life
And such kind of life is not that easy after all.
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Good Morning,
Looking at this picture makes me feel so sad for Mother Mary's great pain in the sight of her dearest son. The Lord JESUS in this very heartbreaking situation or condition that pains the heart of a mother most.
Thank You for sharing this.
God 🙏 Bless
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry speaks of a loving and harmonious marital relationship.
Each line speaks of a marital bliss.
Fascinating and joyful feelings fill the air as love blossoms in every corner of the house.
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Good Morning,
It's an opportunity to have a free snacks...
Hahaha
Amusing way to get a free snacks and Jane plays along so well.
Oh ... beautiful world with beautiful souls is for me the message in this well written short story. Jane has no guilt at all..
Thank You for the read.
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Good Morning,
Interesting title of a poem " Wings "
Yes...many wings so it also means many angels all around ..
The lines are intriguing especially this one :
" But you only get wings
Once you go missing "
And the possibilities of having them so one can fly so high...
Well, we may not have the wings to fly but as long as we have the wings of love surrounding us..then that truly matters .
Thank You for the read.
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Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented tribute to the Veterans on this special day dedicated to them.
A poem that expresses a grateful heart to these Heroes who served the Motherland and a prayer from the heart.
Meaningful, touching and inspiring work of art.
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Good Evening,
WOW !
A great advice addressed to a very special person. Very inspiring.
I love the given title:
" Beautiful The Way You
Are "
Admirable positive lines that serve as great wisdom to share and makes a sad person smile.
This reminds me of a lyrics of a beautiful song " I love You just the way you are "
I enjoy reading this.
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Good Evening,
The given title is captivating and also intriguing :
"Love Ruined By Snow "
Reading between the lines I can see the bad effects of snow in your love life.
As in comparing her very cold heart to a snow.
Well, that's understandable.
Maybe during Summer time your true love will come that warms your heart for you to smile.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Evening,
Memories that linger forever, is the main theme of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The given title speaks of wonderful Summer experiences:
"Lemon Summers "
The nice picture of lemons adds more meaning into this work of art.
Wonderful as it is .
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Good Evening,
A dream that feels so real that Alice prefers it than in reality.
A short story about a relationship and the dream of much beauty.
Better go back to sleep so that the dream may continue
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
" Waking "
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