Good Morning,
Great presentation.
Great title.
Great poetry.
The given title speaks of so much hope as the beginning of something very special and precious =
The New Beginning
Beautiful and wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
The union of two hearts.
Congratulations and
Best Wishes ...
Thank You for the very meaningful read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given topic in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry is of great importance to humankind that is also a captivating title:
A Survival Life
And such kind of life is not that easy after all.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Looking at this picture makes me feel so sad for Mother Mary's great pain in the sight of her dearest son. The Lord JESUS in this very heartbreaking situation or condition that pains the heart of a mother most.
Thank You for sharing this.
God 🙏 Bless
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry speaks of a loving and harmonious marital relationship.
Each line speaks of a marital bliss.
Fascinating and joyful feelings fill the air as love blossoms in every corner of the house.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
It's an opportunity to have a free snacks...
Hahaha
Amusing way to get a free snacks and Jane plays along so well.
Oh ... beautiful world with beautiful souls is for me the message in this well written short story. Jane has no guilt at all..
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Interesting title of a poem " Wings "
Yes...many wings so it also means many angels all around ..
The lines are intriguing especially this one :
" But you only get wings
Once you go missing "
And the possibilities of having them so one can fly so high...
Well, we may not have the wings to fly but as long as we have the wings of love surrounding us..then that truly matters .
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented tribute to the Veterans on this special day dedicated to them.
A poem that expresses a grateful heart to these Heroes who served the Motherland and a prayer from the heart.
Meaningful, touching and inspiring work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
WOW !
A great advice addressed to a very special person. Very inspiring.
I love the given title:
" Beautiful The Way You
Are "
Admirable positive lines that serve as great wisdom to share and makes a sad person smile.
This reminds me of a lyrics of a beautiful song " I love You just the way you are "
I enjoy reading this.
Write on .
Good Evening,
The given title is captivating and also intriguing :
"Love Ruined By Snow "
Reading between the lines I can see the bad effects of snow in your love life.
As in comparing her very cold heart to a snow.
Well, that's understandable.
Maybe during Summer time your true love will come that warms your heart for you to smile.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Evening,
Memories that linger forever, is the main theme of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The given title speaks of wonderful Summer experiences:
"Lemon Summers "
The nice picture of lemons adds more meaning into this work of art.
Wonderful as it is .
Write on.
Good Evening,
A dream that feels so real that Alice prefers it than in reality.
A short story about a relationship and the dream of much beauty.
Better go back to sleep so that the dream may continue
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
" Waking "
Write on
Good Evening,
The given title is very meaningful as in Destiny to Perfection in the matter of Love :
"Destination Mine "
All the questions are being answered as both found the love for each other.
No need to seek for the stars are both are already in heaven.
This is how I understand this exciting work of art . Write on.
Good Evening,
The story behind the poetry is a horrible one believing that there are monsters during night time as darkness filled in the place.
This can be a Preface of a Horror Novel in the making.
Good luck for more writings .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A family story. Bonded with love and unity and everyone's presence especially on special occasion. Yet, when the husband is gone, emptiness follows and here's grandma willing to go home to follow her husband.
Sad and comforting at the same time that both will be together again.
Very truthful story and well written all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A HAIKU Poetry.
It speaks of a Storm, truly a bad weather condition.
" I think I will
sleep "
A line that serves as a wise decision to stay safe from any harm that a storm can cause.
Nice, concise and wise work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I choose love.
I choose life.
I choose gain.
But this excruciating pain in my left side remains.
Grrr feeling angry
Huhuhu feeling crying
Hahaha laughing in the outside, crying in the outside as like a great actress this kind of Neuralgia pain I truly can handle
But not an emotional pain like the pain of betrayal or the pain of death of someone close to your heart that no pain reliever can ease.
Back to the review :
The poem speaks of pain in its own discomfort way and the last three lines makes a conclusion to let your readers think...
Brilliant Piece..
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a good flow.
It is well written and nicely presented.
It speaks of being alone even if being surrounded with people. As in the feeling of emptiness is always there.
This truly happens.
A very sad reality.
Write on.
Good Morning,
WOW,
A unique way of poetry that looks like a wonderful buffet for me.
From cleaning to preparing then presenting.
Awesome.
Truly impressive.
Thank You for sharing
" Attitudes Of Food "
Thank you for the read too.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning
This surely is very delicious.
I learned to love eating Pasta since my daughter as a teenager loves to experiment in her varied cooking that includes Pasta preparation .
Thank You for this Recipe along with an easy to understand instructions.
The ingredients are available in our country .
Bon Appetit !
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry .
The given title is very interesting
" Search For Peace "
The written lines fit for the given title.
The last two lines are my favorite lines which are most meaningful to me.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very lovely and lively " Sunflower " is the main topic of this short Essay .
It speaks of its beauty yet once wilted it's a different story that has also a great connectedness with life's essence including its ending .
This is how I understand this well written and nicely philosophical Essay .
Write on.
Good Morning,
Hahaha
Funny as it is.
With all the efforts and the discussion and the effect of this special dedicated work to bake a cake only to know it's a wrong date..
Hahaha
Truly worth a topic to share in every family gathering...Well ..let the story goes on..
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
Interesting and captivating title
" My Perfect Dream"
A Love Poetry that is well written and nicely presented. It speaks of the true feelings of the heart.
A poem so lovely and lively and the written lines fit for the given title.
A poem proving that Love is truly a many splendored thing .
Write on.
Good Morning,
Oh..the ending...what a great twist of the story.
Well. Not all story has a happy ending.
This one is scary after all the good deeds
" Liel" the Angel has done, only to be home with..... hahaha
Never mind...
Unique Story.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Whew ! That's horrible and terrible ending .
The given title is captivating and intriguing :
" Bugged "
What a pitiful sight of Henry at the graveyard only to be killed by his zombie wife.
Ohhhh
That's scary.
Written for a Contest .
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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