Good Afternoon,
Pick pick pick
Gathering everything that doesn't belong here..
I admire these lines and I agree with your Mom.
I love gardening too
The snake.. good that it was disposed before it bites anyone
I enjoy reading this.
It is so full of life and for me
Gardening is truly fun.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A loving tribute to a dearest friend Glenda.. gone too soon.
I am sorry for your loss.
We the living always feel the pain when we lost someone we truly love and they have a special place in our hearts forever..
Nicely written with love and care.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
As I read this Haiku poetry we are experiencing an extreme hot weather and we are having a drought for a month now..or more than a month.
How I wish to have this
Sad Sky
So it may rain and offers coolness to everyone including the plants and the trees.
This is a three line poetry that expresses it all. Il
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon
Some words of wisdom to live by.In life, there are many roads to follow, there are msny branching paths...as long as you believe in your own capabilities along with the goodness of your spirit...then all is well and
All will be well.
Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A feather that serves as a message from a very special person in your life or from angel in Paradise.
Very touching and meaningful as it gives a great feeling thst soneone up there truly cares.
Very hearwarming.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read..
Write On.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses the poet's caring heart. The title is captivating
Sisters Of The Land
The message is philisophical that shows great concern for the people or the inhabitants of the place that you are calling sisters of the land.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Interesting title
Novel
A product of your great thoughts and creativeness.
The poem has a good flow and it has a very wonderful and truthful lines that completed this work of art.
Well.. I wish to read the full story from the start to the end.
Write on.
Good Morning,
And a very beautiful flower.
I love this wonderful work of art
The Flower I Was
The poem has a good flow and
well written.
I admire each line that completed this poetry.
The lovely flowers picture adds more meaning into this poem with great rhythm and rhyme.
Indeed a lovely poetry.
Write On
Good Evening,
A Horse With No Name
Playing a dangerous game
Kiling here, Killing there
Surely someday this horse with
No Name will disappear
What makes this horse out of his mind
So unbalanced hurting everyone..
Oh.. the story behind the poetry is horrifying
I wish this horse will be gone soonest with the BB wind.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A part of unforgettable yesterday
The Time Of The Hippies
I was in my early teens during this time.
Yes..The given title fits for the chosen lines.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
A historical poem
Good Afternoon,
A short story that describes the cold snow days and the summertime along with the planned vacation with your husband.
Nice and wonderful.
A story that is well written and nicely presented.
The given title fita for the written lines.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry with an interesting and Captivating title
In The Middle Of The Night Again
The poem is being addressed to
somebody, it was not mentioned what was the relations..this someone felt so cold in the middle of the night giving a blanket and feeding sugar and love.
Her child ?
I guess so.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented short story. The man and his past actions led him to live in isolation in this lighthouse or the
Old Ivory BB Tower
Here he lives with loneliness that surrounds him and the sad memories.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Reading the title
Lighthouse
I was thinking differently.
Reading between the lines it shares a crime invertigation story.
Robert Lloyd was concerned about Wilde while Wilde does not appreciate his presence..
This can be a very good beginning of a book in the making.
Interesting as well as intriguing.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
An eclipse in October.
We had just another one this month
April
April 8..three days ago and the whole world was talking about it.
Possibly this time you have seen it with your very own eyes.
It was not seen in our country, the Philippines but it was seen cleatly in your country, America as some of my friends there posted some videos.
This is nicely presented and with a good flow.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The story behind the poetry is full of sadness.
All that's left is memories of a failed relationship and the emptiness of the heart.
Like a very sad song that makes me cry.
She lost him...she lost her baby
Double jeopardy that is so heartbreaking. She needs so much courage and inner strength to face it all.
Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A nicely written Essay about a very powerful and a very special word
What Is Love ?
You mentioned here some kinds of love with clearness and clarity..
Yes.. love wears many be expressions and is being expressed in so many ways.
I have nothing to Correct simply becaude this writing is highly impressive.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning
Written for a prompt.
This was on the pandemic time where Corona Virus horrifies and terrifies the whole world.
I lost some friends and relatives due to the.pandemic and experienced many unpleasant situations especially when you need something and you are not allowed to go out of your house. The scarcity of food and many lost their jobs
.and a lot more.
Yes... The given title fits for the written lines.
Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning
A very nice and a very meaningful poem.
It expresses a grateful heart not only for the good times but at all times.
Inspiring and uplifting.
Yes.. a grateful heart will always be blessed.
I am a firm believer of that
Good Morning,
Congratulations for your Book Lsunching.
It is truly a great achievement and an author's great dream. I am happy for you
What is the title of the book and what is the genre.
It surely is very exciting.
Congratulations once again.
GOD Bless You Always.
Good Morning,
A poem about Christmas and the very cold season.
It speaks of Santa and the snow and many be aspects of Christmas.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
And Santa delivers gifts on Christmas Eve.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
I love this...
Ode To Coffee Shops
Yes..This is very truthful and I admire how you form words into lines that completed this work of art.
Reading the first stanza makes me go to the nearest coffee shop and enjoy the chocolate cake fhere bite after bite and the delicious sip after BB sip of their coffee.
Interesting as well as Entertaining poem and this is highly impressive yo5 me.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional piece.
Reading the title alone makes me sad.
She'd Taken A Life
The story behind the Poetry is heartbreaking.
How many suicides worlwide in a day.
A waste of life. A very sad reality.
The poem is well written and it speaks clearly of the subject matter.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful free verse poetry and also a Beautiful prayer.
The heart and soul speaks with all humility and sincerity.
I admire each written line that completed this work of art.
A prayer with complete Trust to The Most High.
Sacred and Precious.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Wow..
I love the story behind the poetry.
It expresses true love and devotion.
This is well written and nicely presented.
A poem that makes me smile reading between the lines.
The last line is very special.
Great conclusion.
Thank You for sharing this beautiful
Valentines Story
Best Regards.
God Bless.
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