Good Afternoon,
I enjoy reading the conclusion.Abigail is so blessed in her job as she received a very huge tip as a Courier.
Wonderful story.
Unique setting.
Unique storyline.
Fascinating.
Thank You for sharing
"Special Delivery "
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Wow...
Eighty eight year old Grady's and with a cheerful and jolly personality, possibly is the main reason why she looks younger than her age .
Nice and joyful story that is well written and nicely presented.
I am so glad to have read this.
Happy Birthday To You
As in :
May You Live to be a Hundred !
Write on .
Good Afternoon,
The best time for family and friends gatherings at this Christmas Season is the main theme of this well written work of art.
The picture adds more meaning and great purpose of the said occasion .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Love Poetry from the heart.
It speaks of a great love being received from someone very close to your heart. A love that makes you very happy and greatly blessed which makes me enjoy reading this from the start to the end.
A poem proving to the whole world that Love is real .
Thank You for sharing
Write on .
Good Morning ,
A well written and nicely presented poetry from the heart.
A very meaningful title:
" You Are My First
Love "
Reading between the lines makes me understand that this is being addressed to the Most High.
Admirable lines that are being expressed here.
Very true :
First love never ever dies.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title speaks for the story behind this well written
poetry.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art
A poem about a family life of a husband , a wife and a daughter.
The written lines fit for the given title.
I wish that the wife will get well soonest and their family life will be joyful again.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Good Morning,
Interesting title of a nicely written and nicely presented poem from the heart :
" Dinner Plates "
The meaningful message of this work of art is being addressed to a fine lady who enjoys and loves washing the dishes wherein I consider a very special trait as not much people love to wash the dishes.
For example, my husband and my daughter loves to cook but do not like to wash the dishes. So as a distribution of labor it's my duty to wash the dishes which I like doing since I was a child.
The poem is full of love and admiration and is so wonderful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A nicely written and nicely presented short poem or a free verse poetry.
Short as it is and it is lively and lovely.
The poem has a good flow with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
The last line makes a nice conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A tribute to a dearest cat whose gone too soon.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
The picture of a cat adds more meaning into this work of art.
The lines expresses the great importance of the cat in your life.
Yes...cats are wonderful and playful .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Love Poetry.
The given title is captivating and wonderful:
" A Love So Real:
The Greatest Gift Of
All "
The written lines fit for the given title.
The lines at the second stanza are my favorite lines.
Thank You for sharing this work of art.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A great poem that proves determination can lead to success in every endeavor.
This is well written and nicely presented .
A poem that expresses a nice and wise philosophical message through a very meaningful work of art.
Thank You for sharing
" Long Live The Drive "
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Good Evening,
WOW!
A poem so full of love that shares great wisdom and especially written/ documented through wonderful poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
A great legacy for your children and to the next generations of this so blessed family to have a Great and Caring Mother.
Highly impressive.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on
With your varied experiences I can understand why such title was given:
" Fright or Flight "
This is well written and nicely presented all the way and had my full focus reading this.
Traveling by plane is not my thing too. When I was working at the Front Office of a Five star Hotel years ago, one of our guests was a VIP of an airline company and asked me : " Do you know how to swim ? " I answered with a smile
" I can swim like a
fish " then told me, "Can you start working as an Airline Stewardess, you are considered hired "
I replied, " Thank You but No way ! " She asked, " why ? I am here to interview applicants and I am offering you this job"
" I am afraid of heights Ma'am " She understood me . I was only able to ride a plane one time and promised never to travel by plane again.
Well.. life is a joke sometimes that we have to laugh it off. Hahaha
Thank You for sharing your story and the opportunity for me to share mine.
Write on.
Good Evening,
For me, the given title is very interesting:
" Motorcycles"
Nice picture of the riders along with their motorcycles.
Actually, I do not know how to drive , my husband does.
Motorcycles play an important role in my life as I worked for 15 years at the Communication Center of a Yamaha Motorcycle Plant in one of the cities in our country.
The Vice Chairman who actually is the wife of the Chairman and the owner of the Company was impressed by my performance of my job that she gave me three times of a motorcycle of my choice even after telling that I do not know how to drive and told me " give it to your husband " to my husband's delight .
Thank You for sharing this that makes me reminisce of those wonderful Corporate years of my life.
God 🙏 Bless
Good Afternoon,
The story behind the poetry is truly a heavy drama.
God surely makes a way for the main character of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Reading between the lines I can feel the great relief that at the last minute this guy was proven innocent and time for him to go home not to die in the electric chair .
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Evenings .
Interesting title
" Little Gardener "
I love gardening and the given title makes me very curious to know what is this all about.
Reading between the lines makes me feel or believe that this gardener is young or still a child who loves planting and enjoying what he or she is doing .
Truly nice.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Afternoon,
The role of a Mom is not that easy. Admirable,
Adorable, caring Mom .
Good to know that the children are thankful to their mother .
Yes !
I agree with the given title " No Man Is An Island"
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the read.
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Good Afternoon,
A Phantoum Form of Poetry with a very interesting as well as important title:
" Diets "
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture the needed care to be done when one is on diet .
Actually it is my daughter's problem as she gains weight easily.
Exercise like walking, swimming and little intake of carbs and fatty foods work for her. And eating fruits instead of solid food.
But there were times when she felt like very hungry...and put plenty of food on our dining table like a fiesta .
So goodbye diet !
Hahaha
The poem poem is well written and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing.
God 🙏 Bless..
Happy Weekend !
Good Afternoon,
Interesting Word Search or Puzzle in Honor of Itchy.
Yes.. I found those words written that makes me smile reading all of words that completed this wonderful puzzle and honestly it's not easy to solve this.
Hahaha
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
I am happy for George and for the wonderful training of honesty his Mom imposed.
Yes.. honesty is always the best policy that makes George earned twenty dollars and a clear conscience.
Awesome Short Story with a great lesson to share.
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Good Afternoon,
The story behind the lyrics of the song expresses sadness with deepest regret.
The given title shares a great loss and a sad experience.
The last four lines make a clear conclusion of what's really happening.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The sound of this word gives a BIG impact
"BANG " that serves as
an interesting title of this well written and nicely presented work of art .The lines speak of a celestial dance for trillions of years.
WOW !
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I focused my full attention to know what's going on and what happens next in this well written and nicely presented short story with a captivating title:" A New Life "
The conclusion mentioning the name of
" NED " answers my question.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A short writing that serves as an introduction of this particular website that gives information about traveling.
" Asgoxplore"
I find time to Google search this particular website soon which for me gives an interesting knowledge or info.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
The " Encounter " that feels good while it lasts. Yes.. this thing happens when our of the blue the particular person comes into your life, then gone with the wind and you never see this person again.
A very realistic well written and nicely presented story.
I admire the performances that's being written here.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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