Hat or hats are the main star in this free verse poetry. Some people cannot live without them. One of those people is my dearest husband. It is a very important accessory for him everyday of his life. Usually people who wears it everyday becomes bald but his hair is the thickest compared to others .
He has a big cabinet for his collection all over the world.
Back to the review.
This is very true
I agree with each written line.
Honestly, I don't like to wear it.
Hahaha I am not comfortable with it.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented
Wearing Hats.
Good Morning,
This looks like a Scroll of Wisdom to me.
A poetry that shares a philosophical message that speaks of heaven and earth in its own distinctive and wise way.
Thank You for sharing your very own perspective on this very special topic.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A great medical info which are available at our kitchen.
Onion or onions as cure for cough with detailed needed information to justify such claim.
Onions, honey and lemon..they are available anytime at the supermarket or market stalls.
Thank You Very much for this great information.
God Bless.
Good Evening
The story behind the poetry is intriguing and sad..very sad as well.
A mother's need. A child's need.
They both need each other but can never be together.
A very unusual and difficult situation indeed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
The story behind the poetry is deeply emotional. I can feel the father's grief looking at his dead son.
Very touching.
A poem or a Prose that is well written and nicely presented.
Very sad message.
Thank You for sharing this and
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A love poetry that lives in the passibg of time,
These Five Years
Yes how fast time flies and time shared matters.
The poem expresses your deepest feelings all the way.
It has a good flow and is well written and is nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A poem that shares great comfort to your readers who also lost a loved one.
No more pain, suffering or doubt
A line that means a lot for me too thinking that there is always a good reason for everything.
Very true.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning
A nicely written free verse poetry with a great message addressed to this particular drummer boy.
Interesting and Captivating title
I Wish I Knew Your Name
Reading between the lines makes me fullu understand why such title was given.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Sweet Memories
On a winter time
I can smell the aroma of the delicious bread.
.
I need mug of steaming hot coffee to complement with the nice smelling bread.
Nice Haiku or Haikuette that brightens the day.
Good Morning,
Great title
The Songbird
The poem is full of life as
Beautiful music surrounding you.
Precious moments to live by and to enjoy.
Truly a song that shares happiness in.
I am happy for You.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
God Bless.
Good Morning,
Truly not a love poetry yet love exists in so many mysterious ways.
This is how I understand this lovely and lively work of art that is so full of life and meaning.
When you find love in your walks of life it truly matters a lot.
Thank You for the great read.
Write On
Good Morning,
A very nice morning read to me. I love the given title
A Favorite Book
The precious moments shared with Chloe. The reading time that means a lot.
Precious unforgettable bonding with a book on hand.
I enjoy reading this all the way.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
Stating the facts of life in your own wonderful poetic and unique way.
My favorite lines are at the last stanza, which are truthful and meaningful.
I may add that each one of us has a share of happy moments too, yesterday, today and tomorrow.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning
Awesome...
Written for a prompt.
Nice presentation.
Nice words that completed this work of art.
Mesmerixing poetry.
I love the given title too
Time To Unwind
We all need that to feel refresh and ready to face the world again.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A poet's great observation of a butterfy in a big wheel.
It expresses a message of survival in a philosophical way.
The written lines fit for the given title that also relates to life's struggles and triumphs.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is a wonderful prose.
Touching and meaningful.
I admire how you describe the high sky and the twinkling countless stars, the seagulls and you thinking of this very special person in your life.
I love the positive conclusion.
Very nice.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A poetry about this phenomenon that just occurred lately
Eclipse..
The short poem has a good flow and is well written.
The written lines fit for the given title.
The social media is now posting videos on this latest eclipse that occured.
Thank You for the great read.
Write On.
Descriptive and is so true.
Good Morning,
Hahaha
Yes.. the life of a teacher is wonderful. That is from my younger brother's point of view who was the youngest teacher in our place and the topnotcher of teacher's qualifying examination.
He works as a teacher with much passion and dedication and realized his dream to earned the top position at the University that he teaches.
The Director.. and I am so happy for him.
Back to the Review..
I enjoy reading this all the way.
Fascinating experience that you gain.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
WOW, truly a night to remember.Sweet Memories with The Beatles..
That was really special.
Unforgettable.
I can feel the excitement as I read between the lines.
I can vividly picture you singing with them along with the crowd as they performed.
I was 8 years old at the time of their first few years of popularity and up to now I can still sing I Saw Her Standing There a song that my brother was singing on top of his lungs that made me memorize it too.
Hahaha
Sweet memories.
Sweet bonding time with my brothers when we were young and full of dreams.
I enjoy reading this all the way.
Write On.
Good Morning,
The title is captivating all because I love to watch the mesmerizing sunset wherein I always find time to be at the beachfront to enjoy it and to thank The Most High that another day is over with all ita blessings.
I admire the lines that
completed this work of art.
The Sunset Melody surely is a great experience to listen and to acknowledge such wonderful Music.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A story about witches, friends, betrayal and this
Blue Velvet Sapphire which leads to being expelled from the group.
This can be a beginning of a very interesting book in the making.
There will be more magic and more amazing activities to share.
Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A nicely and wisely written free verse poetry with a good flow and with a philosophical message.
" I tell you I'm your son again "
An important line that explains it all.
Thank You for sharing
Thin Blades Of Grass Fencing In The Wind
A very interesting poem.
Write On.
Good Evening,
I love the given title
The Power Of Prayer
All because I firmly believe on it.
The poem has a good flow and the written lines fit for the given title.
A poetry that expresses a deep faith to The Most High.
Yes.. Prayer is all powerful.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
Written for a prompt and I believe you did it so well.
A reflection of life as in what is in-store for today and tomorrow after yesterday through a meaningful title
The Younger Me
The written lines fit for the given title.
The last stanza expresses hope for the best.
Thank You for the great read
Good Evening,
Interesting title as in Sad too
Withered Diamonds
The poem expresses realities of life and the greatest desire of the heart.
A poem that conveys a message to someone very special basing on some linesnon this well written work of art . Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
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