Hello, I'm StephBee and I am reviewing your story for The Best of the Rest Contest. Thanks for entering.
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE IN & OUT
This in and out offers inspirational quotes based on "karma."
WHAT I LIKED
I believe in karma. This is a nice place to pop into and get inspired, especially with NaNoWriMo this month.
CONTENT
There are a lot of quotes. Nice variety.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The centering of the in & out is a bit off and it's too big for my screen. Good use of WDC ML. Good use of graphics to set the mood for the in & out. Good luck in the contest.
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
Fay is a pysch student who finds it challenging.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the ending. It was very dramatic and intense.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person limited from Fay's perspective. The POV switches with no clear line breaks which readers can find disconcerting. (It's known as head hopping.) I might suggest an edit for POV narration and stick strictly with Fay's perspective. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. I would suggest spacing between dialogue tags. Keeping tags in a paragraph can be disconcerting to readers.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes, but this is something that could be expanded on.
SETTING
TIME: modern day?
PLACE: college campus?
This is something that that is not defined but could be clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Fay
There's enough here to understand his motivations. The end plays into all her concerns.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. The opening engages the reader.
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
A princess, Annabelle, is passionately in love with Adrian, but her father wants her to marry Marcus.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked how the author used letters to tell the story. Very creative. You don't see that too much. I also liked the title. It summed up the essence of the story.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the first person mainly by Annabelle through her letters. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes, but this is something that could be expanded on. I know it's a letter, but you could use metaphors, strategically placed to describe high emotion.
SETTING
TIME: long ago
PLACE: Ireland
This is something that was clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Annabelle
There's enough here to understand her motivations. She's not in love with the man who will be her husband, so she writes letters to her love, Adrian.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestion as mentioned above. The letters tell a romantic, yet sad story, reminicient of "Romeo & Juliet."
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
A man helps an elf free a wizard from a fallen tree.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the writer's style. It was easy to read and easy to get into the story.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the first person by an unnamed narrator. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. The dialogue moves the story forward. Good job with dialogue tags
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes, but this is something that could be expanded on.
SETTING
TIME: modern day?
PLACE: forest/hospital ER
This was clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Unnamed narrator
If anything, I might have had the elf or the wizard ask his name. It's the least they can do for him helping them. There's enough here to understand his motivations. He's a good samaritian.
MECHANICS
I might suggest an edit for spelling/punctutation. If you do an edit, let me know and I'll increase your rating.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. Also, I might want to double check the ending - it seems to be rather abrupt and I'm not sure you meant to leave the story hanging like that. Good character voice.
Hello, this is StephBee with a Best of the Rest Contest Review.
THE FORUM
This forum hosts the author's review page.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the theme which revolved around coffee.
CONTENT/RULES
The rules were easy to understand. Nice variety of packages to choose from. The prices were reasonable.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes.
SUGGESTIONS/PARTING THOUGHTS
I have no sugestions for improvement. Good use of WDC ML and graphics. The opening graphic helped to set the theme of the forum. A nice way to support the WDC Community. Good luck in the Best of the Rest Contest.
Hello, this is StephBee with a Best of the Rest Contest Review.
THE FORUM
This is forum encourages participants to come up with alliterations.
WHAT I LIKED
Nice word play. The contest helps the participants to grow in words.
CONTENT/RULES
The rules were easy to understand, but the big font was a little hard on the eye. I might suggest using regular size font and only 1 bigger if you want to highlight something.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes.
SUGGESTIONS/PARTING THOUGHTS
Suggestions as mentioned above. I see that you used WDC ML, but again, I thought the font was too big for the eyes. You might consider having an opening graphic to have a visual reference for the theme of the forum. The forum looks to have a lot of activity. Nice community support. Good luck in the Best of the Rest Contest.
Hello, this is StephBee with a Best of the Rest Contest Review.
THE IN & OUT
This in and out encourages creatively by using 3 words to continue a story.
WHAT I LIKED
A good word building activity. The In & Out appears active and the participants are having fun.
CONTENT/RULES
The rules were easy to understand.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes.
SUGGESTIONS/PARTING THOUGHTS
Good use of WDC ML. If anything, I might suggest using an opening graphic for a visual reference for the theme. Nice community support. Good luck in the Best of the Rest Contest.
Hello, I'm StephBee and I am reviewing your story for The Bard's Hall Contest. Thanks for entering.
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
A cute story about an unicorn and what's at the end of a rainbow.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the end. It was cute.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the first person by an unnamed narrator. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's no dialogue.
SETTING
TIME: ?
PLACE: a field at the end of a rainbow
This is something that is defined but not clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Narrator
There's enough here to understand her/his motivations. He/She is sure there's a reward at the end of the rainbow.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. I liked the narrator's voice, it engaged the reader. Word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the contest.
Hello, I'm StephBee and I am reviewing your story for The Bard's Hall Contest. Thanks for entering.
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
Hooves, the cow, goes to the post office to buy some stamps.
WHAT I LIKED
The loved the comedic touch in the story. Hooves is the coolest cool I've ever met. I especially liked his man-purse.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person limited mainly from Hooves's perspective. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes, if you wanted to, you could expand on this.
SETTING
TIME: modern day
PLACE: Post office
This is something that is clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Hooves
Hooves is just a good natured cow. While he's not directly effected by "the government," we see through his eyes the effect of government.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling mistakes. I might suggest a minor edit for punctutation.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestion as mentioned above. The opening is interesting and captures the reader's attention. Nice satire which makes a point. Word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the contest.
Hello, I'm StephBee and I am reviewing your story for The Bard's Hall Contest. Thanks for entering.
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
An old man decides to reverse the tables with his children.
WHAT I LIKED
I thought the author did a great job showing how paterical (sp?) the society was. She did a good job showing a different culture.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person mainly from an unknown narrator's position. Past tense is used appropriately. I might suggest tightening up the narration a little - use a third person limited and tell it from one perspective - maybe one of the daughters?
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes, if anything you could expand on this.
SETTING
TIME: modern day
PLACE: India
This is something that is clarified for the reader, but I think could be a little expanded on. What city? Paint the Indian backdrop for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Old gentleman, the children, Lokesh, the wife,
There's enough here to understand the old man's motivations, and that he looks at a person's heart and judges accordingly. He found his sons lacking.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling mistakes. I might suggest a minor edit for punctuation.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. The opening is interesting. Word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the contest.
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
Kate's parents are getting divorced.
WHAT I LIKED
Great character voice. I really like Kate was talking.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the first person by Kate. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. I would suggest an edit for dialogue tags. Use only "he said" or "she replied" in tags to identify the speaker only, if you have to. Put action in a seperate sentence. Put the action first, then the dialogue.
FOR EXAMPLE, AS WRITTEN: "You won't get your way this time, Edward," she hissed, still pacing back and forth.
MY SUGGESTION: Mother paced back and forth, unable to tame her restless energy. "You won't get your way this time, Edward."
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes, but this is something that could be expanded on, especially when painting the 1888.
SETTING
TIME: 1888
PLACE: England
This is clarified well for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Kate
There's enough here to understand her. She had to fend for herself in the light of her parents divorce.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling mistakes. I might suggest a minor edit for punctuation.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
I would suggest spacing between paragraphs in the WDC format because it's easier on the eyes to read. Again, good voice. I think divorce in Victorian England would be highly frowned upon. It certainlly wasn't accepted as it was now. I would think the parents choising to live apart would be more of an appropriate solution for them considering the time period. Food for thought, nothing more.
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THE STORY
Leah fears her husband, Cliff is cheating on her - again.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the introspection Leah went through to make her choice.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person limited mainly from Leah's perspective. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. I would suggest an edit for dialogue tags. Use only "he said" or "she replied" in tags to identify the speaker only, if you have to. Put action in a seperate sentence. Put the action first, then the dialogue.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes. I got a good visual of the story.
SETTING
TIME: modern day?
PLACE: urban setting?
This is something that that is not defined but could be clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Leah
There's enough here to understand her motivations.
MECHANICS
I might suggest a minor edit for spelling and punctuation.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening paragraph sets the scene for the story then we have a little exposition, which throws the opening off a little. Then again, it's all infomation that the reader would like to know as it sets the stage for the reason why Leah makes the decision. Overall, it works, but it's a lot of info after the action of the opening.
The title was very appropriate to the story. I felt on the edge of reality right along with Leah!
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THE STORY
Junior Young is a kid who has been picked on since the day he was born. Then he meets Uriah Johnson...
WHAT I LIKED
This was creepy good. I was totally creeped out, and I liked the ending and how it was left up to the reader to believe what they wanted.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the first person by Junior. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. I didn't see any problem with the dialogue tags. My only caution is with the accent. Personally, I like to use accents because I think it makes the story more authentic, but some don't care for the accents. I've found accents can work well or they can totally backfire on you. If anything, when I write an accent, I try to tone it down a bit. This is just my personal observation on accents and is not a reflection of the story.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes. It got a good sense of Junior's world.
SETTING
TIME: modern day?
PLACE: rural setting?
This is something that that is not defined but could be clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Junior
There's enough here to understand his motivations - the fact he's been picked on for so long. Adding Uriah to help explain what he does is a nice twist.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
I have no suggestions for improvement. I loved the beginning. It drew me right into the story. I thought the 18+ rating was appropriate to the story. Good luck in the Short Shots contest!
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
Rose and Emmett find another couple have the same special bench.
WHAT I LIKED
It was a very sweet story. Quick and easy to read. I could see how your love for Stephenie Meyer influenced the story.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in dialogue. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
The dialogue drives the narration. Well done.
DESCRIPTIONS
This is something that could be expanded on. Usually description comes in narration, which there's little of. I did get a visual of the bench, but not much else while I was reading.
SETTING
TIME: modern day?
PLACE: urban setting?
This is something that that is not defined but could be clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Rose and Emmett.
There's enough here to understand her turmoil over the bench. Emmett does a good job reassuring her of his memories.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling mistakes. I might suggest a minor edit for punctuation.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. It's a very romantic piece in that Emmett is the one to reasure Rose that it's not the bench, but the memories that count and coming from a man, that means a lot!
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
Saima's parents are trying to arrange a marriage for her, but in her culture, she's consider "too" old.
WHAT I LIKED
I just finished reading "Kabul Beauty School" so I recognized this as part of the custom from that side of the world. I thought it was an accurate portrayal and I have to give Javed credit for picking her.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person limited mainly from Saima's perspective. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
Th dialogue accents the narration.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes, but this is something that could be expanded on.
SETTING
TIME: modern day?
PLACE: southeast asia, perhaps?
This is something that that is not defined but could be clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Saima
There's enough here to understand her. She has to go through the custom to get married and sadly, it's almost humilating for most women to be scruitized like so.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. While the ritual of courting in this story usually doesn't leave much for romance, what I thought evoked a sense of romance was Javed "stepping up to the plate" and telling his mother he'd married Saima. Javed is taking a chance, and that's what trusting in romance is all about - taking a chance. That in itself strikes a romance chord in this story.
This is StephBee with a Show Off Your Best at the Sandbox Contest Review. My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
A man, stuck in a rut, finds inspiration in an old man's story.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked Murphy. He was quite a character.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person limited mainly from Mike's perspective. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. The dialogue drives the narration.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes. I thought I was in the drugstore right next to Mike and Murphy.
SETTING
TIME: modern day.
PLACE: drugstore.
This is clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Mike, main
There's enough here to understand his motivations. He has no inspiration, but finds it after talking to a man who has lived a full life.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes. One typo: pregnancy test should be tests.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. I liked how the story had an "every day" feel for it. The story fit the prompt - biographical. Word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the contest.
This is StephBee with a Show Off Your Best at the Sandbox Contest Review. My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
A man must decide if he should save his wife or his child.
WHAT I LIKED
The dilemma posed has followed us through the ages. It's a close to your topic that many can identify with. Not surprisingly, the man's gut instinct is to save his wife's life. He loves her and wants to be with her.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person limited mainly from Nazmul's perspective. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. If anything, watch out for dialogue tags. Put action in a seperate sentence, not in a dialogue tag. For example, as written:
"Go ahead, doctor," Komol declared, signing the documents required. "Please save my child."
My suggestion: Komol signed the documents. "Go ahead, doctor. Save my child."
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes. If you wanted to, you could expand on this. Use the descriptions to augment the emotions flowing through Nazmul.
SETTING
TIME: mid 1960's
PLACE: India? I'm not sure where the "Red Crescent" is.
This is something that that is not defined but could be clarified for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Nazmul, main
There's enough here to understand his motivations. He loves his family, but his choice is not easy.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. A gripping read. The story fit the prompt - biographical. Word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the contest.
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THE STORY
An autobiographical look by the author at her time in the Peace Corps.
WHAT I LIKED
This is a very exciting account. I was on the edge of my seat. You made this come alive!
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the first person by the narrator (author). Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
The dialogue accents the narration.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes. I was able to picture the story in my mind. I especially liked: "It tasted like copper in my mouth. Its pungent stench burned my nostrils."
SETTING
TIME: modern day - 1994
PLACE: central Africia
This was clearly defined for the reader.
CHARACTERS
Narrator, main
There's enough here to understand her motivations. She had a desire to help others.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
I have no suggestions for improvement. The opening sets the tone for the story to come. The story fit the prompt - biographical. Word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the contest.
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
Adriana tries to save her sister from "the beast."
WHAT I LIKED
I true, masterful tale of horror. I literary felt "breathless" the entire time I was reading - just like I suspect Adriana was.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person limited through Adriana's perspective. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
The dialogue accents the narration.
DESCRIPTIONS
There's a good balance of description. It's not overwhelming, but just enough to give you the flavor of the setting. I especially liked: "The fear eating in her chest was so intense it felt like a rat gnawing at her flesh from inside her body." Ewww, that's gruesome!
SETTING
TIME: modern day?
PLACE: rural, island setting named Nob Hill
This is defined for the reader and augments the "horror" aspects of the story.
CHARACTERS
Adriana
There's enough here to understand her motivations. She wants to save her sister which is totally understandable.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes. The story is tight mechanically.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
I have no suggestions for improvement. A terrifing read. I loved the opening sentence. How could a perfect day be horrorifing? A great tease that hooks!
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
Set in the French trenches during World War I, a British squad must defend the line.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the characterization! It gave the story a sense of authencity.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person omniscient. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. The dialogue moves the story forward nicely. There's a lot of good showing here as opposed to telling and I enjoyed it very much!
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scenes. If anything, you could expand on this. You don't need a lot, just a few stragetic sentences placed. Touch on the sense of smell a bit more. I can't imagine the trenches smell good.
SETTING
TIME: World War I
PLACE: trenches in France.
This is clearly defined and allows the reader to picture the backdrop of the story. Well done!
This is an ensamable cast which is very enjoyable. I enjoyed how each character had their quirks, yet came together as a team.
There's enough here to understand their motivations.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling mistakes. I might suggest a minor edit for punctuation. Spell out "OK" in manuscript writing. (It's okay for journalistic writing, but not for manuscript writing.)
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. The opening pulls the reader in by inserting them in the heat of battle. Great visuals without being too wordy. I can see the potential to expand this. Write on!
The script was formated well and easy to understand.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes.
SUGGESTIONS/PARTING THOUGHTS
This is a nice vignette. I liked the opening, spanning over the fire pit. If anything, I would have liked more of the scene. Maybe the Shaman could have told a story that was relevant to a situtation going on in the scene? I think you could easily expand on this.
Hello, I'm StephBee and I am reviewing your story for Show Off Your Best. Thanks for entering.
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE STORY
This is an NCIS fan fiction. Gibbs foun someone he lost a long time ago.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the characterization. I haven't had a chance to watch the series, but the writing was so solid, I felt very at ease with the characters.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person limited by Gibbs. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
DIALOGUE
There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. I would suggest an edit for dialogue tags. Use only "he said" or "she replied" in tags to identify the speaker only, if you have to. Put action in a seperate sentence. Put the action first, then the dialogue.
FOR EXAMPLE, AS WRITTEN: "NCIS," he announced, not lowering his Sig.
MY SUGGESTION: Gibbs didn't bother to lower his Sig. "NCIS."
DESCRIPTIONS
There's enough to set the scene, it could be expanded on a little, not much. I especially liked: "She reached up to smooth the copper kissed strands."
SETTING
TIME: modern day.
PLACE: Washington DC?
I wasn't sure on the place. Since I'd never seen the series, I wasn't sure where the place in the setting was.
CHARACTERS
Gibbs
There's enough here to understand both his motivations. The salty ol' investigator thought his wife was dead. She wasn't.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctutation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
Suggestions as mentioned above. The opening is intriguing as Gibbs notices the woman and engages the reader right away. Word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the contest.
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