Could I be the famous Michigan Person you talked too? LOL
Okay, I struggled between living here my whole life and living here now. I moved away for 6 years to Indiana...does that count? LOL Thank so much for an interesting Poll. I found this on the reviewing page from Gothic Angels review. I love the reviewing page.
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Michelle
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Yes, all good wife's can find something in here to relate too! I don't fight much with my husband, I find he is never home long enough for us to fight! I have been a loyal wife as much as I could and only two kids for me! I laughed out loud at your ending statement! You sait it best! Thank you for sharing your talent!
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Michelle
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Oh girl, I have been here before! I am sorry to say, I think many can relate to your poem. It is hard to be on the outside looking in. You do a great job of telling the story of the unpopular one. I get it clear as day in this poem. Thanks for sharing your talent and write on!
Michelle
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I would have loved to give you a 5 star rating but I did notice you have a few typos. (answer, warm)
Also you should captialize your i's. I've. Over all it is a very sweet and cute story. I like the message and found it very intresting and fun to read. Thank's for sharing your talent.
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Michelle
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It was a dark love that I went looking for in your title and I am still wondering if this is real. How can two people get together in the darkness? Part of me really wants to believe this story, but reality keeps jumping into my mind, begging to find out who or what is this person in the blackness that can cause you to go so numb with love? Very interesing read. Thank you for sharing your talent.
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Michelle
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I am so glad I came across this psalm. I have never thought of writing my own, but I am sure I could, I doubt however I could be as complete and as loving as yours. From beginning to end, this flows well and cover's all the greatness of God. Thank you for sharing it!
Michelle
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I have to say as a member of writing.com for over 2 years...I still struggle with all the reviewing type rules. I do agree with being honest. I do agree with being as helpful as can be. I think I tend to review on the side of feedback and not technical because that is not my strength. I really enjoyed reading this and learned a few things. I so enjoy the quality of writing on this site. It is a very helpful place.
Thank you for sharing your talent and you are going to be a huge help to The Paper Doll Gang Newbie's!!
I find this interesting that you have used words like valedication and valor. Not the most common of words when thinking of a broken soul. Interesting for sure. I like poetry that makes me think and wonder what the poet was thinking when they wrote the poem. This reminds me of someone leaving college and not sure how to find the motivation to make it in the big world. Could just be my take on the words you used. Thanks for sharing!
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Michelle
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One has to wonder why you are so taken by the Gods. It is poem filled with imagery and yet I don't think I am seeing everything you are saying. It feels incomplete. I wonder if it is just my own knowledge of the Gods. I just don't get it. Hey that is what is so great about poetry, it is our muse talking!
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Michelle
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I was looking for something to read and I found your title irrestible. I am in love with President Obama. Reading your poem is like a short histroy lesson. Unlike a real class, this was much more interesting to read! I think it is more then him being African-American. I think it was just time for a change of thinking and getting back to some hope for the future! I do wish the next 4 years bring us closer to a better America. Thank you so much for sharing your talent and your gift points! Too kind!
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Michelle
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How lucky you are to see the sunshine in so many wonderful ways, my favorite of course is in your Love for Linda. You are indeed a lucky man when you have your own sunshine girl.
Thank you for sharing your radiance.
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Michelle
Okay so I must be in some kind of dark mood, sense I can't seem to leave this folder! I am in a mood to get haunted and sucked into your dark and scary thoughts. What hell we put upon ourself. I get so much self-hatred from this poem and can really get into that kind of empty black pit kind of feeling.
Your words spill like ink or blood, thick with emotion and vision. Wow!!
You rock!
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I don't know if this poem is reality for you, but having a close friend go through this, I know this is her poem word for word. She still struggles with forgiveness and I think it is something that is earned and hard to give. I think my husband could even say this about me. I left him emotionally a while back, and although I didn't physcially cheat. I wanted too. This poem really hits home.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent! I love your 5 star poetry!!
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Are you trying to scare me? Okay so I am home alone and all!
Wow the words written in red, really add to the dark imagery. Creepy feelings for sure. I also couldn't help but think of my son and the voices he used to experience. I think in many ways, those with a mental illness could really relate to this dark poem. Your talent for bringing your reader into the poem is 5 star writing.
Thanks for sharing!
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Congrates you have won 5 poetry reviews. This is review number one! I should be thanking you. I love your poetry and am thrilled to get another chance to read your work. I won't be going away!
Oh girl, have I been here!! I can feel so much of this emotional pull. Perhaps it is because I feel a sense of loneliness in my own marriage and because your words paint a clear picture for me. Another 5 star poem.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent!
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Well I love the line coma bound to act. The vision of that and what you are trying to say is really great. It is like almost...but not quite. You make the reader fill in the blanks to their own excuses for not getting it done. Great job and thank you for sharing your writing. I see no mistakes, so happy 5 star to you!
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Michelle
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You have made me laugh!! What a clever take on money. I have to say, losing interest with too much attention is clever as well. It is a complete twist of the words and yet some how the meaning is still there. Time really is money and you can never have too much of both. I am interested in the value of both as well. Thank you for sharing your talent and the prompt.
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Michelle
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Thank you so much for such an elegant and refined letter. I have to agree history is in the making in so many ways. I am excited for American and I pray his girls can have a dad at night to play with and talk too. He is young and I admire his strength. Reading your letter makes me realize how glad I am to be here and that I can be apart of this history. Thank you so much for sharing your emotions. I see no mistakes and this is 5 star writing!!
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Michelle
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Not knowing why you are packing the clothes is interesting. It makes me think of speration, death or divorce. It really can be a combination. It is like you are in shock. You talk of the weather and the things all having to do with your busy work but you leave the emotional element completely out of the poem, so it has to come from the reader. I like that!!
Great job and keeping Writing and Sharing your talent!
Michelle
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What a sad ending to love. I really have such a hard time reading about suicide. If you love someone you, you have to love yourself. I find it so tragic that kids think if they lose a love they won't find another one. I really enjoyed your story because of the way it made me feel!! I like a poem that can inspire my heart and my mind at the same time.
Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.com
Michelle
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As if the Trees could talk about this inspiring day! Wonderful imagery of the change that is happening in our country and how far we have come and yet still how far we need to travel. The trees will always bear witness to history. Thank you for sharing your talent and welcome to writing.com
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Michelle
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You have a nice start to a collection of poems. I like the emotinal tone and your feelings expressed in paper. I am like you, once a poem is written I have a hard time going back to change it. It will change the emotions at the time it was written. I have learned that poetry gets better if you go back and play with it some more. It couldn't hurt to do some editiong. I have one serious pet peeve with your i. I should always be Capt. It is just my thing. I like to see it that way. I learned in first grade that i is not a word, but I is.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing!!
Michelle
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Well I could just fall in love all over again reading this! Nothing like having a real Knight come into your life and open your heart that much. I truely enjoy reading this kind of poem. It makes me feel young and fresh and that life is great! Thank you so much and may you live happily ever after!
Thank you for sharing your heart!
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Michelle
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I love looking at Gage and Emma. In these pictures I see hope and sweetness and the love of a great Grandma! Kids are so cute when they are just being kids and you have captured some very wonderful moments here. I love how you made them mini postcards. What a fantastic idea. Can you do that with any picture? Girl your talent is awesome and Thank you so much for sharing it. 5 star album for sure!
Yes, Life is a variety of things, you paint a great picture of the ups and downs. I did notice a few of your Lifes were mispelled. Just a small typo thing. Thank you for sharing your talent and welcome to Writing.com. Where I love life and writing and it all comes together here.
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Michelle
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