I didn't know if the lines had been misplaced upon posting. But the first line seemed long, and there was the single line all by itself, but semed to go wtih the next. This is just a suggestion, but it seems to go together better this way. I enjoyed this poem. I liked the pirate part and the bravado of the crew daring/warning them off.
love, LinnAnn
Sailors; fear not and look ahead,
the glow of red is in favor of us
It’s the wind that will push our sails gents
Not the calm of the sea which will prevail
Our journey through night into the savage dawn
Where the sea ends and land begins
Safe ashore with weary hands and stern backs
Let he who dare bare down upon this ship
Meet with the anger of cannon screams
Only in the end do we wish for the calm
May only the good lord heist our bounty
Fair winds and following seas!
By James McAlhany Jr.
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