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Review of Twin Trouble  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings, Sonali!

Oh my, this is so funny! I struggle with reading, writing and reviewing humorous stories because I have a tendency to take everything at face value and get confused or annoyed when there are subtleties like satire or parody - especially if it's pop culture related *Pthb*

This, however, was a delight to read. It reminds me of the Andrew Clements story Lost and Found... I used to enjoy his work when I was a kid, and that story taught me a lot about "twinsies" and the individual spirit of each person... Which kind of brings me to a point I hadn't considered immediately. I know it's a comedy and not to be taken too seriously, but at some point twins do get tired of being conflated. In fact, I know a pair of real life girl twins, Gia and Coco Reynolds. They were adorable twinsies when they were little, but as they got older, Gia wanted to be a "sweetie princess" and Coco started identifying more as the boyish "bull in the china shop," especially after Val, the family's only boy, was born. How much of this is influenced by the family, I don't know. I worry a lot about those kids...

Sorry, I know you weren't looking for a celebrity gossip psychology lesson *Laugh* Ok, I'll get down to brass tacks. I was so engaged in the rollicking adventures of those two! I was scared they'd end up getting arrested for stealing stuff or something crazy like that, with those absurd pranks. They needed a good scare to straighten them out, in my humble opinion. When they grew up and were getting married, I was even more worried that it would turn into an overdramatic "adult" soap opera, but you kept it cute and innocent all the way! My favorite kind of stories *Delight*

It flows really well, following the natural timeline from birth to adulthood, and I had no trouble reading and enjoying it. Honestly, I can't think of a thing to suggest for improvement. If this were a full length children's novel, I would suggest adding more depth and distinction between the twins, especially as they come of age, but that's just me overthinking and broadening the theme beyond its intended scope. This story serves the purpose well, brightening our day with a lighthearted and ultimately positive look at a pair of twins going through life with love and enthusiasm, using their unique position to their advantage without causing anyone undue harm.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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for entry "Iar Verzi" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Greetings!

This is a crystalline poem, sharing thoughts and images in crisp, carefully chosen words. I see efficiency of vocabulary, with no extra words such as "the." Lines are balanced in length, spare and spartan. The scene and situation unfolds itself upon several readings... We see what appears to be a chance meetup with a past lover, and a glimpse of inner turmoil brought about by the unexpected interaction. Determination to be both cool and also to "test his feelings" is seen, showing a conflict of attitudes. A glimpse of a student in the background, absorbed in a book... Or is that an image of the narrator wishing they were such a calm and removed figure in the moment?

The simplicity and triteness of such a brief encounter is given a sense of mysteriousness by the word choices and the open-ended feeling of uncertainty. Were words exchanged, the meeting acknowledged? Or did the two souls slip past each other, perhaps without realizing the significance of the event? We are left to fill in the blanks with our own imagination, which is perhaps the best part of poetry.

I always recommend using something larger than the default font, especially when the vocabulary is brief and the lines are short. It makes one's poetry so much more impactful on the page. I would also suggest you add an elegant cover art to the book this is stored in. It will draw the eye to it and look more professional. Also, perhaps you might want to see how it looks if the text is centered on the page; I should look into the various rules and concepts behind the alignment of poetry, it might be helpful for me as well.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *WingL**HeartO**WingR*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings!

I can feel your pain and frustration here. Depression is a terrible thing, and those who have no experience with it simply cannot understand how awful it is. I know I can't... I struggle to find words of comfort and ways to relate to those who share their distress with me. You've done well in sharing how it makes you feel and how you don't wish to be labeled as "crazy" and avoided. Some people may even be afraid of you. Humans have an innate, universal longing for meaningful connection with others, and we feel the fear of being left alone with your darkness.

Your theme is that one should never be afraid of or judge oneself or others based on a medical condition. We should research and do as much as we can to help, whether that means simply sitting quietly with someone in their pain or engaging them in healthy, friendly diversions. Your self actualization of understanding your life has meaning and significance despite the hardship, is what keeps you strong through the chaotic ups and downs.

I would suggest adding a word count at the top or in the subtitle so we know what we're getting into. Also, Size 4 Verdana font is always best for a clear, accessible and professional presentation. If you like, you can enter this personal essay at "Senior Center Forum" Open in new Window. for the chance to earn a ribbon on your honest, heartfelt feelings.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *WingL**HeartO**WingR*
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Greetings!

I love the fun and imagination described here, as we take a peek into your world of classic make-believe adventures as a youngster. Even when the other kids don't necessarily "play along" or even the narrator loses interest too quickly, it becomes a precious memory of the experience of childhood. The free verse is conversational and easy to read, with slant rhymes that give it a rap-like flow. I also like the play on words in the title: "fantasy lies..." Our minds create the most beautiful lies sometimes... *Think*

I would recommend giving this a nice cover art image, perhaps from one of the stock collection WdC offers. It might also be a good idea to center the poem on the page, and for that matter I always recommend a larger font size to give it a fresh and engaging appearance. Another point might be to offset the footnote in a {dropnote:"LinkTextHere"}{/dropnote} to keep it tidy at the bottom.

This was a nice read; it reminded me of my own childhood make-believe universes, where I used my stuffed animals to play out scenarios inspired by my favorite books.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *WingL**HeartO**WingR*
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings!

This is an amusing and lighthearted look at the ceremony of putting lost baby teeth under the pillow, from the point of view of the Tooth Angel herself. I can see the respect for your faith in that you avoid the pagan idea of a "fairy." The difficulties she went through in her appointed job, and the extreme measures the heavenly host took to protect her this time, are a little bit out of context since this is part of a series of letters, but it's a fun read. I chuckled at the "reveal" of the decidedly unglamorous angel at the end. She sounds like she could be someone's spinster aunt, with the cheeky, gossipy and rather nosy tone of conversation. You've painted a clear picture of her personality as well as her appearance.

You should choose a third relevant genre, such as Entertainment or Family, or Personal since I assume these are really "letters" you wrote to your young son. I also prefer a larger font size for ease and accessibility. A cover art would also help it look its best in lists of items. I see this was about exactly twenty years ago; I hope Timothy is a fine young man at this point.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *WingL**HeartO**WingR*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings!

Oh my, what a shock this one was. So much happiness and beauty, blown away in two sentences at the end *Cry* The foreshadowing with the little girl drawing the angels was haunting.

I would recommend changing the rating from E, as not only does it end with death but it includes some minor "naughtiness" between the lovers. 13+ or 18+ would be more appropriate.

You painted clear word pictures, showing us the glow of emotion and the dearness of the relationship before so abruptly taking it away from us. The final image is vivid, leaving us wondering about the fickleness of fate and sudden, meaningless tragedies. It reminds me a bit of the old story The Bridge of San Luis Rey, where we spend the whole thing getting to know a bunch of people who all end up flying off the end of a broken bridge just at the major turning points of their lives *Pthb*

I might suggest considering a different title, as technically a "rainbow of colors" is redundant. The meaning is only revealed at the end. I think the word "confetti" would lend more depth of significance to the title and ending sentence, as confetti is made of shreds and fragments of former beauty that quickly get discarded.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, sir, and thank you for requesting a review *Smile*

I find this to be an especially appealing poem, full of mysterious atmosphere and old-fashioned quaintness. It feels like the poetry of yore, perhaps from Sir Walter Scott in one of his novels. You've painted a picture of personified fog, beckoning with phantom scenes of imagination and adventure. I've learned a new word: "destrier:" a medieval battle horse. Though perhaps, if we were to split hairs over it, a destrier is solely for war purposes and would not be used in the fox hunts, unless the image has already shifted between the two couplets.

Your flow is smooth and free, with an engaging structure that makes me want to write it down by hand and memorize it, as I used to do with poetry that caught my fancy when I was a kid. I remember memorizing several poems of this sort, likely written by Walter Scott... Are you familiar with the one about Allen A Dale? (That name looks so funny...) https://www.poetrynook.com/poem/allen-dale

I always suggest Size 4 Verdana font to ensure your item takes its best place on the page, especially because an item this long can tend to come across as rather tedious (purely visually speaking) if it's left at default size. I could quote an old friend who complains about "used car contracts..." You can glance at my own poetry or my blog for examples. This review is in 3.5 Verdana. Oh, do add a cover art of some kind, it'll add so much to the item and look more professional in your portfolio. One of the old-school Wombo Dream AI styles would be perfect...

You should submit this for publication; I have no idea if there's a market for classical poetry, but there must be. Also, you should enter it over at "Poetic Traditions Poetry Contest " Open in new Window., Bren would love it. I think it's lovely, mystical and charming.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Review of The Surprise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings, Josh!

I'm on a quest for birthday themed items for "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window. and found yours *Smile*

Oh my, that was weird indeed. What thoughtlessly cruel lengths brothers at war can go to. I'm glad Rambo got his revenge for a cheap trick without being too brutal about it. He could've died in such a situation. Also, I just thought I'd mention: chloroform makes one *Vomit*, literally. I was rather distressed when I found that detail while reading Agatha Christie at a young age *Pthb* It's usually left out of the discussion, but since you write with earthy realism, you might as well throw it in. Something to startle those ants with, for sure!

At first I thought it would end in fun, with the brother coming with a gift and a laugh, but it's darker than that. Not too dark for my preference, though. I was on the edge of my seat wondering how it would play out. The ending is satisfying, as we see Rambo having a comfortable laugh at the end of his struggle, and hopefully the brother getting a chance to regret his ridiculously mean prank.

I can't think of any improvements to suggest; this was tense and well written, with good visuals and relatable details. I liked the use of the butterfly as a contrast with the grittiness of the setting, and as something to "lead the eye" through the opening scenario.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Audra!

Aww, this is such a beautiful story, a powerful exploration of the strength of family love and imagination. The gap between old and young is bridged, and it shows us how the grandpa is truly young at heart. He wants the best for his grandson, and that includes making sure his imagination is fed in the healthiest way possible.

I noticed when the magic happens, you shift from writing in the first person, from the grandpa's point of view, to writing in the third person, showing us the emotional reactions and thoughts of all involved. You may want to decide between the two perspectives, and yet there is also something perfectly magical about the shift that makes sense in the context of the setting.

I would recommend enlarging the font to create the best reading experience across devices; I always go with Size 4 Verdana.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Review of U.S. Route 23  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings, Joey *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*

Well, I've been tasked with reviewing birthday items, and whaddya know, many of them are WdC themed.

This is a great premise, showcasing a journey down a historic US highway with love and a little adventure. My favorite part was when they were exploring Erwin, a town in the Tennessee mountains where I've visited as well. The Bojangles was especially amusing. The details are relatable for anyone who's traveled a bit in the US.

I might suggest tightening up the plotlines a little, because it's a little hard to follow exactly what goal they're running after, aside from the desire to be in warmer climes. Perhaps a rethinking of the plot altogether, since the highly specific underlined keywords are no longer needed. And also, how is Sherry "elusive?" That means "hard to find." And the sentence doesn't really fit together; Sherry herself isn't "an infectious spirit of adventure." Since the story is two years old, you can feel free to edit and rework as necessary.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Review of Birthday Candles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings!

This is a beautiful little teenybopper poem, sharing the narrator's thoughts and affections for the young lady as she reaches an important milestone. It has a slightly mystical air, as though there is something royal or magical about the lady as she blows her candles out. We can almost see her, smiling radiantly, surrounded by loved ones. I see one of the chosen genres is "personal," and this was written almost twenty three years ago... Wherever either of you are now, I hope you're doing wonderfully.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Greetings, Megan!

I love this cozy story. The details are so sweet, and the ending is just perfect. It's so comforting to read about a little girl whose father came back for her. This reads like a movie, with lots of emotion and great visuals. Just when we think her wish isn't coming true, the adorable little puppy shows up, with Daddy right behind it. The mother is loving and concerned, knowing the improbability of the wish being fulfilled. She wants her daughter to be happy. Macy has faith in the stars, but she starts questioning as it gets later. Tears and laughter and hugs; a charming, heartwarming story.

Talking of wishing on stars, here's a nice wistful little song from OneRepublic... "I don't believe in the stars anymore/ they never gave me what I wished for..." It's sad but hopeful.
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Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Review of Birthday Party  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings, Jess!

I found this item by doing a keyword search for "birthday" for a reviewing challenge, and found this item at the 13+ or under ratings *Smile*

I love the thoughtful way you've shown us inside the young man's head, as he considers the consequences of sticking up for his values in the close-knit office environment. It's so typical and relatable for anyone with some level of spirituality and religious observance. I feel much the same, wondering what other people think of me in the workplace as I quietly stand out from the others by my avoidance of party culture, bad jokes and also my dress habits.

I was wondering why he felt the irritation at his Mormon coworker; from my experience, the general purity culture of both Mormons and JWs should overlap in some broad ways, and they should perhaps feel a sense of brotherhood, of being outsiders in a worldly culture. Although I don't think Mormons have any objections to birthday parties in theory, only to the things that go on at parties. So perhaps the annoyance is that the Mormon can attend the party without bothering his conscience, but the narrator can't.

Also, this is written in such a way, I almost thought it was autobiographical from the opening lines. Perhaps you should bring us more into his head immediately at the beginning, setting up place and situation, rather than opening in the middle of his quirky ramble that could just as well be an essay hook. Also, I feel as though it's more of a vignette than a complete story. We get a glimpse of the young man's feelings, a look at his thoughts chasing each other around in his head, but there is no resolution at the end, nor even a clear beginning or middle. The conflict is there, but nothing happens: no character development, no dialogue, no real interaction.

Perhaps the story could be pushed further to explore different angles of the interaction between the secular work environment and spirituality. I feel as though the most important parts are left out. Maybe he could even discover that Janet is also a JW... There are lots of options.

Other than that, this was an excellent and relatable read.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Greetings!

I'm so glad to have discovered this! I didn't realize who you are at first. You must be so proud of your family *InLove2* Let me tell you firsthand, this is a wonderful site they've built.

I love how you shared your story here, with humor and charm. I was concerned for your health and wellbeing and was delighted when the truth was revealed. The personal anecdote is relatable and easy to read, and the addition of images makes it even more special.

I would suggest adding three relevant genres to make this easier to find when browsing. Personal, Experience, Family, Community, Biographical, or Emotional would be suitable.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings!

This is a lovely poem that reads with a rhythmic, repetitive quality almost like a rap. We see your sincerity of expression as you share how much this person means to you. The treasure that they are is portrayed clearly and warmly. I love the historicity of this piece, going back to the days when WdC was Stories.com.

I would recommend using larger font size to ensure a pleasant reading experience across devices.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Olivia!

Happy birthday month, and I hope you're having a *Party* time! This is a *ThumbsUpGreen* fundraiser to support multiple great causes around the site. I don't normally spend *WDCGiftPoints* on raffles and such, but it's always nice when others buy me *Tickets* *BigSmile*

You've set it up as clearly and succinctly as possible, with a full list of donors and ticket holders (did someone really buy over 500 *Shock2*) I love how you besprinkle your words with emojis; it's so relatable and fun. Is it just me, or are WdC emojis cuter than standard keyboard ones *WingL**Delight**WingR* and now we have appendable wings! And we don't even need Red Bull *CanOfWorms* (wait, do they sell it in Germany with the slogan "Red Bull gives you wings?" Or am I being culturally opaque *Think*)

You've picked three relevant genres, stated the rules clearly and simply, and even used *Rainbowl**Rainbowr* to sort through the *Hand1**Ticket**Hand2* *Idea* I can't think of anything to suggest here for improvement *WDCAuthors*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, *Wolf2**CastleLeft*

I noticed this on the sidebar and the emojis in the title made me guess it was yours. That's a distinctive way to set your work apart from the rest, especially in cases where we may not see the subtitle.

Your theme is thoughtful, asking us what our legacy will be and reminding us not to fret about how others will use it. What they do is up to them. It's advice we can use even while we're alive, as we consider our reputation. We create ourselves by how we treat others, and it's not our responsibility beyond that, as to what they think of us. If they don't like us, that's their problem, as long as we mean well and have done our best to be kindly and respectful.

The rhymes are steady, and it flows well on the page, though I usually recommend a larger font size to ensure maximum readability across devices. Perhaps even consider using navy blue font color to create a more memorable and distinguished item appearance.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Review of Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Greetings, Steph!

I saw you mention this on the Newsfeed and thought it looked inviting.

Dreams... Why does one English word encompass so vastly different experiences? The sleeping, semiconscious visions that arise from who knows where, and the hopeful plans for one's future, made with all cognizance and awareness. Then, there are good dreams and bad dreams... Well, that's where the word "nightmare" comes in - quite unrelated to the word for a female horse.

Your diamante poem captures the feelings of a nightmare, with strings of rapid fire words that layer in the dread and unease, from the subtle beginning to the climactic ending. May I ask - I know this poem is twenty years old, and I respect the archival quality as such, but this is bugging me - might perhaps the word in the center of the fifth line be "hurtling," as in hurtling down the mountainside? Because often, nightmares involve the feeling of falling or weightlessness. Also, I just noticed now that the word "unpleasant" is misspelled.

Aside from those little things, this is an excellent creation, channelling the frightful essence of those dreaded upsetting dreams that leave us afraid to go back to sleep.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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Review of Megan's Ballroom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Megan!

What a charming idea! I noticed this on the sidebar and knew it must be yours. You've decorated it beautifully and invited us with a warm and personal welcome. I love your aesthetic: fairies, princesses, Jane Austen, Downton Abbey, Frozen, puppies, kittens... It's sweet and spreads love and kindness in a harsh world.

I'll be sure to drop by soon with something to share. I hope others see this lovely ballroom and join the fun.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*
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for entry "I Remember" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings, sir!

I'm here as a fellow member of PPC6 *Smile*

Ah... You make me feel chipper and optimistic. I often tend to have a sour outlook on life and the past. Indeed, the poem I wrote for the ongoing 48 Hour Media Prompt Challenge seems to have gone out of its way to be grumpy and cynical, when tasked with the idea of talking to old Father Time *Think*

But then I see people who have lived long and interesting lives, who have suffered and matured and learned from their mistakes, who know what the inside of a hospital looks like, who know what grief is, and I feel as though I'm grumbling about a mere dream. How can I complain that I have no happy memories? I do have them; they just don't look the same as the ones others have. You remind me of how much more living I have left to do, and my responsibility to make it meaningful so I have something to look back on that I can be proud of.

You have such a way with poetry, lending this a gently autobiographical feel with the wistfulness of a life arcing to the end of the rainbow. I hope your day is filled with peace and love. *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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for entry "week one I remember" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings, sir!

I'm back for another one today, having tapped on the next entry in your book. Congrats on completing PPC5, and best of luck working with the new round. I love seeing how everyone takes the prompts and works them into something unique to their own life experiences, either autobiographical or more of an artistic license.

I see you have a few "mixed-up" words in the description of your dream emotions... Is it "bewitched" and "hypnotized?" Or did you purposefully mix up the words to create that mysterious, dreamlike state of mind where nothing is quite as it seems? If so, it's cleverly done, like an Alice in Wonderland down the rabbit hole kind of thing. I'm always amazed at the providence of you and your wife meeting and getting married. It must be such a joy to know you were destined to be together.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings, sir!

I'm here as a fellow member of PPC6 *Smile*

At this point, I've realized your Sam character is a cognate for yourself and your autobiographical experiences. I love how you've done this across your portfolio, giving us hints of your backstory and wrapping it up in what looks like odd, disjointed rambles about one particular character just to make it easier. This is a funny, heartfelt description of that first kiss of Sam's dream lady, in a far distant land under the shadows of wartime. I hope they have a long and lovely life together *Wink*

As always, I appreciate your giant font and double spacing, and you've included the prompt for reference.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Purple Princess!

I feel the need to point out the difference between a crossword and a word search... I'm sure it won't take much of thought for you to understand *Smile* Word searches are definitely a lot easier to create than crosswords, because you don't have to fret about writing hints for people to come up with their own words to fit together. Lists of words are fun to make and fun to look for.

As someone equipped with a phone and an iPad, I can't actually solve any of the word searches we create around here. The closest I can get is to print one out and solve it the old-fashioned way, with a pen and paper. This is a great selection of words related to the birthday milestone, and it looks like you did a great job making it.

I might suggest "decorating" it a little, by picking a cover art and adding a fun gif in the description, or a string of cute emojis... Maybe some of the brand new ones being released *Delight*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*
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for entry "What is 25?" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Sox!

I'm here as a fellow member of PPC6 *Smile*

Twenty-five years... A silver anniversary, as I've heard, and a remarkable milestone indeed. Google itself is older, but they were never exactly a "social media" site or anything comparable to WdC. Ooh, we can't forget the quiz from Samberine Everose Author Icon - a perfect score earns you an exclusive MB *Delight* I remember I flunked it in 2023 and aced it in 2024...

I love how you've laid context for the number, both positive and negative. A number only makes sense in the real world in context: 25 what? You run us through a helpful list of things, from dolls in a collection to the percentage of actual hazelnuts in that yummy jar of Nutella *Hungry* (what, Nutella is only 13% hazelnuts *Shock2* what's the rest, chocolate flavored sugar glop?)

A fun and respectful free verse poem exploring the number 25. I enjoyed reading it.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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Review of Wheel of Fortune  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Greetings!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC6 challenge *Smile*

A stern warning from Mother Earth... I'm trying to remember what Ragnarok means, and all I can come up with is something to do with Thor and Marvel... *Pthb* A quick Google search shows me it's the Nordic version of the apocalypse. Got it...

Your theme reminds me of the old poem Ray Bradbury quoted, "there will come soft rains." When humanity is out of the way, the earth will renew itself, starting with the smallest and most humble life forms: algae, bacteria, mites. Then insects, plants, etc... If humans ever get recreated, hopefully they'll have more sense than we do now.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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