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Review of Take My Hand  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi APoeticHeart, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Take My Hand"  by APoeticHeart

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong, emotional love poem. A unique as well as poetic rhyming pattern. Take My Hand; repeats the title every fifth line.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The image of soulmates traveling through time is portrayed for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:Looks good.

APoeticHeart, thank you for sharing your this lovely poem. It is a good read.
Write On!

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Review of The Pack  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi again Wanda Jane, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Pack"  by Wanda Jane

Clarity:Seems like a good title for this tale.

Writing style:Fantasy animal adventure drama.

My favorite lines:--- “Duncan, at your service my lady, and I would have taken on a Crusher for you!”---

--- We both knew this was a sign from the ancestors and we were going to be fine.---

Overall impressions:A strong storyline that develops in a good orderly, timely fashion.

Well structured story that is easy for the reader.

A nice narrative with good descriptions of the setting. There is plenty of action along Duncan's journey.

Well described cast of characters. Duncan, Floe and James are strong likeable character.

I like the scene where Duncan and Floe first meet. It is amazing how animals make mating seem so easy and natural as opposed to humans who can make it so complicated.

James is likeable and wise. He is a good father figure.

A nice happy ending.

I hope you find this feedback helpful. It is only one opinion.


Wanda Jane, thank you for sharing this delightful story, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a good proof read and edit. Todays reader has a short attention span. This story is good, it could be shortened without hurting the overall story.
A stronger opening could help grab the readers attention better from the start.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi BScholl, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Built (1st Place) (Editor Pk May-13 NL) "  by BScholl

Clarity:An interesting title, however it could better describe the story.

Writing style:Fantasy sci-fi romance drama.

My favorite lines: ---The nerdiest guy in the county dating a pearl like Shelley? Something just wasn’t right.---

Overall impressions:A great storyline. A strong opening that does grab this readers attention.

I like Thom and his determination to find the truth.

Nicely structured, this makes it easy for the reader as well as inviting for a browser or potential reader.

A nice twist for the ending.


BScholl, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review of 100 hours  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Hi kingalex1234, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "100 hours"  by kingalex1234

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded poem with a good strong structure plus a unique rhyming scheme. One hundred hours, a creative idea for this delightful poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:Life's journey condensed into a day. The image painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see.

Kingalex1234, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of RUINED  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi with love, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "RUINED"  by with love

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse poem that poses questions from the author on how to remember Mom. We can program our mind to remember the positives or negatives about people, places and things.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of a confused author trying to write a biography, comes to this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:I see no problems with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics.

With love, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of Blanket of Love  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Bernie, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Blanket of Love"  by Bernie

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong emotional poem with a unique rhyming pattern and repeating line. Written from a father to daughter point of view, this helps bring out the emotion.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of family is seen by this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that this reader can see.

Bernie, thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Gracelyn Jane, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"How To Get A Boyfriend In Two Months"  by Gracelyn Jane

Clarity:The title fairly describes this work.

Writing style:Romance, family drama.
My favorite lines: --- Not because I've been single for a long time, but because I just can't find a guy who meets my 'standards'---

Overall impressions:Great structure for this work. It is very easy for the reader and inviting for a browser.

You have a wonderful gift for descriptive dialogue, very impressive.

Really good descriptions that puts the reader there in the middle of you and your mom.

The the title suggest this is a 'how to' however the titles question was never answered.

I can really relate to this article. You sound just like my daughter who also is 30 years old, unmarried. Things are so different in this cyber age than when us baby boomers were young. It is what it is, a different world. My oldest daughter turns 35 this year, she has been married maybe 2 years, has a 20 day old baby girl.

This strong article has took my mind in a different direction. Good luck. You will find your soulmate at the time destiny has laid out. The next thing you know you will be trying to marry off your daughter.

« H2G-AB-I2M » this reader is confused as to the meaning of « H2G-AB-I2M », some of us are behind the times.


Gracelyn Jane, thank you for sharing this entertaining work that has me philosophizing. It has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proofread and edit never hurts.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Kare Enga, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Brown eyes [#28 Mark]"  by Kare Enga in Udn Thani

Clarity: The title fits this tribute well.

Writing style: Friendship life-long.


Overall impressions:A life long relationship comes to this readers mind when reading this emotional work.

These few well written words speak loudly, the emotion can be felt. Often we write things down afraid that we might forget some of the most important traits of a friend or relationship.


Kare Enga, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review of Exit roads  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Sinbad, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Exit roads"  by Sinbad

Clarity:A good title.

Writing style:Personal experience in poetic style.


Overall impressions:Written in a very realistic, honest sounding opinion of your take on today's existence. This work carries a poetic flow.

Sinbad, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider line spacing and breaks between paragraphs to make it easier for the reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi again Sumojo, I came across this delightful poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Shadow creatures "  by Sumojo

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A simple children poem with a good rhyming pattern that helps to give a tantalizing flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:A riddle that starts the readers mind to search for answers. I like the way this poem starts. Finishing with answers.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:It's a fun I endorse, a great end.

Sumojo, thank you for sharing your work it's always a pleasure to read.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi James,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Last Train Ticket"  by James Vogner

Clarity:A good title for this old western.

Writing style:Folktale memories drama.


Overall impressions: Nicely written story. Strong descriptions help make this emotional journey come to life for the reader.

Nicely structured story that is fairly easy for the reader.

James, thank you for sharing this entertaining work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:A stronger opening line to grab the readers attention at first.

Consider breaking down the longer paragraphs to make it appear less intimidating to a browser or potential reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of My Little Voice  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Wanda Jane, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "My Little Voice"  by Wanda Jane

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A well written beautiful poem with a nice rhyming scheme.
A nice output of energy. the sound of my little voice has a relaxing flow.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:The emotion can be heard from this poem. Life passage's is portrayed to this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see with the spelling grammar or mechanics.

Wanda Jane, thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!

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Review of Happy?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi Winchester, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Happy?"  by Winchester Jones

Clarity:A good title for this short story.

Writing style: Personal memories drama.

My favorite line:

Overall impressions:Seems like a good job of using the prompt words. A well written short story.

The story ends abruptly, leaving this reader a bit confused at the end.

Winchester Jones,thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of A Civil Suit  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Tim Chiu, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "A Civil Suit"  by Tim Chiu

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A nice and consistent rhyming pattern for this poem. A well written and worded poem about bowling. This poem has a catchy tone.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:A portrait of bowlers bowling at a tournament is painted for me.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see with the spelling grammar or mechanics.

Tim Chiu, thank you for sharing this entertaining poem. Write On!

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Review of To Grass & Water  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi stricuckoo, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "To Grass & Water"  by Stricuckoo

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A nice rhyming pattern to the catchy poem.
Well written and structured giving this poem a nice flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a cattle drive in an old western movie, portrait from this poem.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Stricuckoo, thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kathleen, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"College Should Change Your Mind "  by Kathleen Cochran

Clarity:A good title for this article.

Writing style: Personal opinion article.

My favorite line:--- They already know it all. ---

Overall impressions: A well written and informative article.
A good idea for this story, personally I feel that these days college is overrated and all about tuition.

This is a well written and well structured article, easy for the reader.

Kathleen, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hi bob county, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Next; the rings of Jamie Lee Curtis"  by bob county

Clarity:A good title, however it could better describe this story.

Writing style:Short story.


Overall impressions: This looks like it could be the good start of a story or a rough draft.

These two paragraphs seem to be well written. I'm bad for jotting down ideas and outlines figuring to look and finish at another time. This appears sort of like that to me.



Bob County, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Take another look at it, a good proofread and edit never hurts.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Severance  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi Writer_Mike, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Severance"  by Writer_Mike

Clarity:A good title. The title could better describe the contents of the story.

Writing style: Spiritual short story.


Overall impressions: A well written contest entry short story.

A good opening line. It could be stronger to better grab the readers attention.


Nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Writer_ Mike, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of WHAT SHOULD I DO?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi friska kida, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"WHAT SHOULD I DO?"  by friska kida

Clarity: a good title.

Writing style:Personal documentary drama.


Overall impressions:Well written diary entry style. College is only an extention of high school. In these times it is overrated and all about getting that tuition money. When the economy slows down they are among the few that still show profit.

friska kida, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Jaeff, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "The Mystery of Malachi"  by Jaeff KBtW of the Free Folk

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well written poem in a challenging style. Pantoum with reaping lines, begins and ends with the same line. I bet that could get tedious while writing.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The portrait of Malachi (the poet) is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Jaeff, thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, a joy to read. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Bob County, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The End of the Rope"  by Bob County

Clarity:A good title, however it does't describe the contents of this story clear.

Writing style: Fantasy religious political drama.


Overall impressions: A nice use of present day people and icons in the story. The story is laid out similar to poetry with 8-9 line stanzas.

Perhaps a screenplay. Is that what this is?
This story seems to jump around a lot and this is a bit hard to keep up with. Some great writing and the unique idea.

This story definitely makes an interested reader work to try and see if you miss something.


I Like this story, can see great potential here.



Bob County, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider some line spacing and bigger font to make it easier to read. Take another look a good proofread and some editing and you have a masterpiece.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi sinbad, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Knowledge is crucial"  by Sinbad

Clarity:A great title for this educational article.

Writing style:Educational opinion.


Overall impressions: Great job on this informative well structured historic article.

You're preaching to the choir brother, don't get me started.


Those pandemic times seem so long ago when in reality it was yesterday. Now it seems the world is trying to make up for lost time. Where that leads us is the question I would like the answer to.

Knowledge is crucial: well said, so true.

This is the most informative article about the pandemic that I have seen. It is amazing that humans become so vulnerable that they will believe almost anything. In a panic they can even be herded like wild animals. What history will uncover about the pandemic conspiracy will be a story that I would love to read.


I like ---I will list *5 important things* that we know now that we didn’t know in February 2020 for your understanding.---
Interesting the new things learned after 6 months of the pandemic.

Sinbad, thank you for sharing this strong work that has taken me back in time. :) It has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:A updated follow-up from then to now.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Flood  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi again Eveandthetree, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Flood"  by Eveandthetree

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful love poem that seems to turn to hate. A good rhyming pattern. There is a thin line between love and hate because the emotion is so strong.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:Your artistic voice paints a picture of a worn out relationship that needs to be left behind, looking toward a better future.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Eveandthe tree, thank you for sharing this poem, it is a good read.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Jeffhans, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Project Argus meets Project Archimedes"  by Jeffhans

Clarity:Seems like a good title.

Writing style:Sci-fi world building.


Overall impressions:Well written introduction for what looks like the start of building the setting for a sci-fi adventure.

A great description.

Jeffhans, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider breaking down the long paragraphs into shorter ones to make this appear less intimidating for a potential reader.


WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of The Kinfolks  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Kodah, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Kinfolks"  by Kodah

Clarity:The title somewhat describes the story.

Writing style:Mythological folktale drama.


Overall impressions:A well written tale that reads much like our classic fairy tales.

Billy is a strong well described and likable character.

A great job with the descriptions. This helps the reader to get into the story better by pictureing the setting.

Kodak, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a more detailed conclusion or a cliffhanger.

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