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Review of Raw Words  
Review by MDuci
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Allyson,

Your poetry is actually very lovely and
holds so much meaning. This is a wonderful
place to come and put your thoughts, and
it can't be very inspiring if your peer's
keep giving you small ratings. Please, dear
Allyson, look at some of the poetry compositions
of your peer's and see just how to lay your
poetry out to gather greater attention. Quite
easy to do. Just take a little time. We all
here at Writing.Com would love to see you get
the best from the site.
Sincerely
Marlena
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Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Anita Thomas,

Thank you for these beautiful words of wisdom from
the wise. You put life into empty words and brought
them forward, for all to see and be healed by them.

The cross has so many meanings; but the one that
most will recognize is 'He,' who died that faithful
day in Gethsemane.

Thank you Anita, for sharing these words and exceptional piece with us, I look forward to visiting
your port again very soon. Have a blessed Christmas &
a Happy New Year.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of Fake  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Opiache,

I don't think I've really heard anything close
to your description of falling out of love.

I thought it very well written, and I loved the visual you drew in explaining the dance.
I thought these lines classic:

'I love you,
he pretends, and she turns to him,
With milky eyes and opens her mouth,
To fake it back to him.'

Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Allyon,

Welcome to Writing.Com! You have come to the right

place to put your words down, to gather energy from

your writing peer's who are here to help and watch

you grow. In time you will find everyone here very

helpful and if you are willing to learn you will get

their undivided attention. I found this story of a

young women's painful insight with her dad very sad,

but it's good that she can speak about it and maybe

find solace in the fact that she has an outlet in

which to talk about that pain. Thank you for sharing

and I look forward to reading more of your work soon.

My only suggestion would be to run it through your

spell checker and capitalize your I's.

Sincerely

Mduci

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Review of Niue Travel Guide  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Seton,

Thank you for the wonderful information on this

beautiful Island. As a travel agent I'm so surprised

that I have not seen nor heard of Niue from any of my

guide books. But it sounds like a delightful place to

visit and I will look into it further. Thank you for

sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Hirlster,

What a sweet little story! I like the way you added

so much color with out over doing it and showing

more then telling with the meeting of eyes and

glances. You did a great short story and I hope that

one day you will maybe add another little chapter,

letting us know if these two ever meet again.

Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of Life  
Review by MDuci
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello there Closetpoet,

This is certainly a very sad story of a little

girl lost, when a parent abandons the family.

She believes that the fault is all hers for sure

it is not. It is not anything to do with the young

girl. Her parents can no longer get along and perhaps

it's the best thing for them, and of course the child

always has to suffer for the love that these two

people no longer feel. She, is doing the right thing

by getting it out of her system and sharing her pain

with others, who can and will have a tender heart and

a strong shoulder. Welcome to Writing.Com and I look

forward to visiting your port again.

Sincerely
Marlena
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Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Poetically Romantic,

I must say the name certainly fits you.

Your poem is all it say's it is.

I'm sure the person you've written

this piece for is totally in love

with it. I can find not one error and

I must confess I really love every line.

Thank you so much for sharing, and welcome

to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Marlena
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Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Meg,

I can relate to this darling piece from the tip of
my toes, to the top of my head *Smile*. And just like you I thought that everyone had put me down and went on, truly that is not the case dear Meg. As your sponsor I'll always be here for you, even when you don't think I watching I am. Just as the many friends I'd made in those day's not so long ago kept a watch over me, even when I'd thought they forgotten me.

Never fear my dear I'll always be here and so will all your other friends you've met, and just like you've stated in these lines, you'll be reviewing and
looking out for Newbies too.

I have an idea! I've just joined a group called
'The Angel Army' it's a wonderful group of authors
who love to review and make a lot more friends. Would
you like to join? If you do I'll send you the link.

How is your hand doing since the surgery? Is the new grandbaby at home now? Take care friend Meg, never despair your friends are here.
Love
Marlena
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Review of I Already Know  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello milkey4Madness,

What a little cutie! This is one to put music too.

I love the roll playing within each verse and you

never got off base not even for one line. Every line

was wonderful, and not one error could I find.

Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of Soul Train  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello GypsyPixie,

This does seem to be a very dark dwelling place
in deed.

I hope that you have or will find your way clear
of it shortly, and brush it from your mind, body, and soul.

Nothing is worth the pain of living in this particular
vain, this is not life nor death! But something very
close to what may be hell.

Thank you for sharing this piece with us and welcome
to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of Dark Days  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Brittany,

I'm sure he must weep for all those that have lost
their lives and for the pain that our families must
endure for the sake of war or for that matter any war.

Gang wars, neighbor against neighbor war, parent against child, child against parent.

We all at one time in our lives have asked; 'why me' and the answer is still,'why not' after all didn't he give his only Son, so that we might live?

He also gave man! A free will, so, doesn't it seem to be man's inhumanity towards his fellow man, and his greed that is behind the earth's trouble and not God' who tore them apart?

But of course that is just my opinion on the subject, and I will always say to each his own.

Thank you for sharing your side and your poetry.
Hope you are enjoying Writing.Com and keep writing.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Barbie,

I can't tell you how much I appreciate this article

with regard to Bio-blocks. I think like you, that it

was intended to allow a little feedback into the

person that you are giving some time and energy to

reviewing his/her work and the least they can do is

let you know that they really do exist. Thank you

so much for sharing this with us and for all those

that don't care to share their bio, it is okay, but

inquiring minds would like to know a little about you! *Smile*

Sincerely

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Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Rich,

This was from his Angel, I'm sure.

I have been told that this earth

is filled with Angels and I certainly

think they are with us everywhere we

go. Thank you so much for sharing this

darling story with us and even more so

for the time of year. Welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
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Review of I'm Sorry  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello M Erickson,

I could feel the apology coming from the bottom

of your heart; and I hope that she found it in her

heart to forgive and forget the hurt it must have

caused.

You did a beautiful job of writing to say I'm sorry,

the visual was so real and very clear to see.

Thank you for sharing, and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely

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Review of Trail of Tears  
Review by MDuci
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Tazz871,

There is so much more to this story, as I'm sure

you know. It is the story of a Nation left in ruins

from disease and destruction and shut away to live

in isolation and betrayal.

Your description is visual

but there is so much more you could add. I hope that

you will add on to this story as time goes on.

Sincerely
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Review of White Heather  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Woeland,

This was a bit of enchantment to be sure!

funny how we can see things on a page when

the author paints a wonderful picture. You

carried this one right to a perfect five from

me. I love enchanting fay stories. I only had

a wee bit of a problem with these little lines:

'Pallid meadows of white heather
As a solace in distress.
Fairy floating like a feather
To its' final resting place.'

But all else held me captive.

Sincerely

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Review of It Happened to Me  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you so much for sharing this lovely

poem, and thank you too for fighting the

good fight. Good luck in all you do and

please do write that book, and when you

are through...please let me know I'd love to

read it just because it's you!!

Sincerely

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Review of Tiny Fingers  
Review by MDuci
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello ImpulseZip,

Never to much Grimm! I grew up with Grimm, my children

grew up with Grimm. So, to say all that I love this

little Grimm like fairy tale. I think your writing is

very unique and it makes me want to read a lot. Thank

you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
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Review of A Higher Call  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Puckit33,

I can remember all these wars, and the loss of our

love one’s on both sides of the fence. I can

speculate on all the reason’s for waring but none

seem more important then a parent, wife, or child’s

pain.

My heart and love goes out to all our young men, and

women who have lost their life or come home lame. I

wish I could change the world for them or take there

place, but my solace in all this is that someday the

world may be a better place. Thank you so much for

sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely

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Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Coco,

This was a real tear jerker, and I felt so good

that she was able to break away. This is the piece

that I've chosen to place the awardicon, I hope that

you will be fine with my choice. Thank you for

sharing this story of something that is still

happening all over the world today.

Thank you for letting me roam around in your site

today, and congratulations on winning Intuey's

Auction.

Have a wonderful Holiday and please wish the baby a

Happy 1st birthday from me.

Love and Big Hugs

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Review of Why Thoughts?  
Review by MDuci
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Coco,

I truly can relate to this piece, I remember how I hated to have to go to bed at night. Away from the
protection of my parents, who kept me close by day,
but then sent me alone to bed at night. I felt so lost when they kissed me and said, "Good-night, sweet dreams."
Then closed my bedroom door, that is when life became your
poem and that is scary for a little child of three.

Thank you so very much for sharing and keep writing you're awesome.

Love
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Review of Close To Tears  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)


This is truly beautiful Coco, written from the heart
which knows the season has come for change.

When a love leaves, it is not because they no longer love, but because the lesson they came to learn has been completed.

When true love arrives it will drink of the same cup,
and love with all its might until the final curtain of
that life.

There will always be tears, for without tears we cannot clear the cobwebs that entangle the mind, body and soul.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece and I look forward to continuing your port raid.

Sincerely
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Review of My last breath  
Review by MDuci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Coco,

This is my kind of writing, and I love reading about
love in its longest or shortest form.

The mere rush of wind, tells me something is about to happen; and I can see the visual, oh, so very clear.

The word to drown, tells me that you are engulfed by
the very presence of the person in your life.

I love it, every single line of it. Keep up the great work my dear friend.

Sincerely
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Review of Voiceless  
Review by MDuci
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Coco,

Just stopping by to unload some Christmas cheer and
give your port a bit of my time and love from my *Heart*.

I found the story of 'Voiceless' very well written
and she so touched my heart. I felt the fear that
she must have experienced when she lost her voice.

But that old saying how curiosity killed the cat was
the moral of this story. Never look in old box’s.
I truly hope this is not the end of this story…there
seems so much more to tell. Thank you so much for
sharing and I look forward to reading more.

Sincerely
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