Your port is filled with some of the
most delectable morsels I've ever eaten.
I love this little garden of wisdom and
delightful advice for every age.
Your greens are some of the tenderest I've
come across and the Kimchee is some of the
best stir-fried. I truly love your little
words to the wise. These are some very wise
words:
"If you're unhappy you should take care of your health,
for what's inside your mind's more powerful than wealth."
Thank you my friend for the sweet note and
congratulations, and you'll never know how
much I appreciate it.
Sincerely
Marlena
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Through you, your sister sounds like she is
doing a great battle for her life with the
dreaded one. This is a battle that one must
be strong and fight with all their mind and
spirit.
We have had several in my family who
have fought and won, and those who gave it all
they had but just couldn't continue, but they
are still with us, and deep with in our hearts.
My heart goes out to you and your family for
watching the pain of a love one can be so hurtful,
and you were right, pink is okay but I think the
color is better in Red, a true sign of strength.
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story
in such a loving way, she is I'm sure so happy to have you for a sister.
Sincerely
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You really know how to bring some tears into
one's eyes. I have a little Jacob or two in my
life, and sometimes it hurts us more then them,
to see them take so many parental falls. You've
done the right thing and secured that ladder.
Every line was beautiful, and the image was so
vivid I could see Jacob, in his roll and doing
what must come naturally! Walking in Poppa's foot-
steps.
Great piece! And I hope you and the wife are staying
warm.
Hope all your New Year wishes come true.
Sorry I've not been over for awhile, I do
look at least once a week to see if you've
added any more chapters to ‘Home of the Grey Dog’
my very favorite series of all times.
I was surprised to see that I hadn't read
this version of all about you, I could have
sworn I had, but not according to the system.
Anyway it is of course wonderful, and very
informative on your likes and dislikes, and
as far as I'm concerned you should be writing
for CSI, the series. I hate to tell you but
they just knocked me off with all the CSI's.
But of my favorites I like 'Crime Scene Investigation,' the best too. But my all, and all
is A Monk, of course. Thanks for sharing J.B. and I look forward to seeing more on the 'Home of the Grey Dog.'
I pray that this is just something that you
are going through for just a little while,
and that like all hardships it too will pass
away. Then you'll feel the sunshine touch your
face, and feel your life renewed.
Your poem was touching and my heart goes out to you, hold on with all your might, life will get better you'll see. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com. Keep writing and pouring out on paper all that you are feeling. It help's to know that their others out there who hears you and listens, we are here.
There are just a few typos, which can easily be fixed:
Slipping (of) the edge, (off)
I wish that all this horror (goes) away. (would)
It is a (whitle) line. (white)
A new friend
Sincerely
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This one really touch's the heart and
gets right to the core of the matter.
It is very meaningful, vivid, and
charged with lots of emotion. I love
it, it say's so much in such a few words.
Thank you for sharing and I'll be dropping
by again soon.
Sincerely
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What a gift you have for telling
a beautiful love story, and for
letting the reader in on the very
real visual images without over
doing it. I like how you would ask
the questions and answer for the
person to whom you speak. Thank
you so much for sharing this delightful
piece and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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What a little sweetheart of a poem,
and how right you are about today,
tomorrow and everyday. The world
wouldn't be anything with out the stage and
all its actors. We must continue
the run, as the ‘World Turns’ (no pun intended).
Thank you for sharing, very well written
and so wonderfully expressed. Looking forward
to visiting your port again soon.
'We have come to drink of knowledge, and the language of the stars
and our future's flowing brightly from our dreams.
As our blessings ripple out to heal the ones who need it most-
the negativities release, release, release.'
I love it each and every line. Thank you so much for
The impression I got from this beautiful
poem, brought such a magnitude of tears
to my eyes, and a pain that only a mother
who has lost a child can know and feel.
Your last line was all to knowing and I'll
remember these words forever.
'Precious little baby boy in womb
Now lies buried by my tears in his tomb.'
Thank you so much for sharing and I felt this
with in the deepest part of my heart.
Sincerely
Marlena
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Lovely poem, it captured my imagination and
held me from the first line. I only have a
few suggestions which you can take or leave,
and that is to enlarge the writing a bit and
to make line breaks.
For example:
'It's time I look,
into the open book
I now am brave enough to read.
Drinking in each line,
redeeming the time,
that was lost; now I'm relieved.
Of all the stares'
Overall beautiful read. Thank you
for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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