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Review of A True Friend  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Word Smith,

Thank you for this little darling, it

was right all the way. You really made

me see the visual images quite clearly

and the answeres certainly matched the

questions. I liked each verse very much

but this is the one I truly loved the

most: 'A Friend, in the simplest words,

Is someone,
You can trust to the fullest extent
And one who trusts you too.'


Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Kaylerigh,

This has the sounds and making of a very

good mystrey story. It got my attention

from the beginning and I'm so looking forward

to continuing this fine read.

I like the two characters already and hope you'll

be adding even more. Thank you for sharing and welcome

to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Damozelvt,

A beautiful painting done with such wonderful strokes

of your brush. I can see no way that you could

possible improve on this one. Each stroke or line

impresses me and brings a smile to my face.

Thank you for sharing this piece and welcome to

Writing.Com. Hope you are enjoying your New Year as

well as WDC.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Puravida,

Thank you for this very interesting information

on buying and living in Costa Rica. I have a very

good friend who is thinking of doing just that, and

I will hand him a copy of your story and tell him

to look up your advice. Thank you for sharing and

welcome to Writing.Com. You maybe just what the doctor

orders before moving in.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of FLYIN' BACK HOME  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Ah! Maggie,

What a wee beauty this little dandy is! I especially

like the choirs *Smile*. Very well written and I

could really relate to it. I feel the same way when

ever I must fly into Charles De Gaulle in Paris. You'd

think the counter person owned the company or

something.

Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.

Com. Hope your New Year is as nice as your song!

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Congratulations Jade,

On having won the Editor's choice award from poetry.com.

It very well written and you seemed to
have poured your heart into this one. Thank
you very much for sharing and welcome
to Writing.Com. Hope you had a wonderful
and Happy New Year.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of Let My People Go  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Grandmapenny,

How wonderful you've told this story, I'm sure

everyone who reads it and knows the story of how

Moses became Moses will love reading this excerpt.

The young people who read it will love the easy

way in which it is told. I loved it and will pull

it off for my grandchildren to read. Very well written

and so many facts yet a very quick read.

Thank you so much for sharing and Happy New Year.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of No more tears  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Momo,

I'm so happy to read this wonderful poem, on this

last day of an ole year! Tomorrow starts a New Year,

and for most of us a New Life. This poem is also your

rebirth and I'm sure a blessing to your family whom

you love and adore. They must be very proud of you

and also for the new beginning you've chosen to renew.

Congratulations and hope all your years will be a joy

for you. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.

Com.

Sincerely
Mduci

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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Suelikestowrite,

This was a little rhyming cutie!
Life is full of rhymes and one
thing I like about writing poetry
is that there are so many forms to
choose from. Thank you for sharing
this little rhyme and welcome to
Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Clare Boutelle,

Isn't it just like the fragile snow flake

to have such a wistful answer for

the boastful rock? I love your take

on words and being the soulful romantic that I am,

brought a tear to my eyes, putting myself

in the place of the tiny snow flake. This

was such a lovely piece of art, thank you

for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of Angel Of My Soul  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Brian,

What a beauty you've written, it touches the heart

and soul. Your words are haunting and hoping that

this love will bring these two, to a fulfilling

path. Thank you for sharing and hope your year ahead

will be filled with joy! Happy writing and Happy New

Year.

Sincerely

Mduci

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Review of One  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Kristikim,

Beautifully written and lovingly expressed. I liked

your choice of words and your colors made a lovely

painting across your canvas. Thank you so much for

sharing and welcome to Writing.Com. Hope you are

enjoying yourself at WDC and have a wonderful and

joyous New Year.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of Once More...  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Lilu Bedel,

Funny how in questioning we sometimes come upon

our own right answers. It looks like you've done

just that. I like this in a poet, which just goes

to show that deep with in our very own spirit is

the right that makes the world go round. Thank you

for sharing this lovely poem and welcome to Writing.

Com.

Sincerely
Mduci

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Review of Passage to Heaven  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sweetpondering,

What an inspiring, colorful little beauty. I loved

this one from the moment I saw the title 'Passage to

Heaven.' I love these very lines the most:

'with caution
you bared yourself as a burst of firework
beautiful brilliant light'

To me this is how love comes dress, thank you so

much for sharing, and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci

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Review of HATRED  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Ann Patterson,

Thank you for these kind words to all of us who

should know that 'LOVE' is a four letter word.

And that four letter words such as 'HATE' and 'KILL'

should be removed from the dictionary. This was truly

a very sad story and a sad day for Matthew Shepard's

parents. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.

Com.

Sincerely
Mduci

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Review of How I came to Be  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Jen Gajus,

I am speechless; I sit here with my eyes glued

to this incredible piece and for once in my life

I am dumbstruck, if there is such a word. First

let me say congratulations on a job so very well

done and the honesty that seems to come from straight

from the heart. I don't think you have left anything

unsaid, or over done. Thank you so much for sharing

and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely

Mduci

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Review of Awakening  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello writerscramp,

I like your poem very much! I love the way you

have found your place in a world that has not

been so friendly. But people are learning and

coming to the understanding that people must fine

in life what it is that makes them happy and get

on with their lives. Very well written and expressed.

Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Symphonic Flight,

The death of a love one or dear friend can

never be an easy thing, and sometimes years

must pass before the healing takes place.

My heart goes out to you and Matt's family

for this untimely passing and for the loss

of one so young. But I'm sure of one thing!

He smiles down on you for writting such a

loving tribute to his memory.

So, sorry for your loss! You've

come to the right place to pour out all your tears.

Sincerely
Mduci

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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sandra,

What a delightful story into poetry, and the colors so lovely and bright. I love how you led us from
room to room and described each lovely piece one by
one. Right down to the wall paper, and I could actually see the vintage cradle you spoke of. What wonderful memories you've displayed and so very well written.

Thank you so very much for sharing and welcome to
Writing.Com. Hope you are having a wonderful and blessed Holiday and have a very Happy New Year.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of Raw Words  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Allyson,

Your poetry is actually very lovely and
holds so much meaning. This is a wonderful
place to come and put your thoughts, and
it can't be very inspiring if your peer's
keep giving you small ratings. Please, dear
Allyson, look at some of the poetry compositions
of your peer's and see just how to lay your
poetry out to gather greater attention. Quite
easy to do. Just take a little time. We all
here at Writing.Com would love to see you get
the best from the site.
Sincerely
Marlena
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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Anita Thomas,

Thank you for these beautiful words of wisdom from
the wise. You put life into empty words and brought
them forward, for all to see and be healed by them.

The cross has so many meanings; but the one that
most will recognize is 'He,' who died that faithful
day in Gethsemane.

Thank you Anita, for sharing these words and exceptional piece with us, I look forward to visiting
your port again very soon. Have a blessed Christmas &
a Happy New Year.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review of Fake  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Opiache,

I don't think I've really heard anything close
to your description of falling out of love.

I thought it very well written, and I loved the visual you drew in explaining the dance.
I thought these lines classic:

'I love you,
he pretends, and she turns to him,
With milky eyes and opens her mouth,
To fake it back to him.'

Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Allyon,

Welcome to Writing.Com! You have come to the right

place to put your words down, to gather energy from

your writing peer's who are here to help and watch

you grow. In time you will find everyone here very

helpful and if you are willing to learn you will get

their undivided attention. I found this story of a

young women's painful insight with her dad very sad,

but it's good that she can speak about it and maybe

find solace in the fact that she has an outlet in

which to talk about that pain. Thank you for sharing

and I look forward to reading more of your work soon.

My only suggestion would be to run it through your

spell checker and capitalize your I's.

Sincerely

Mduci

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Review of Niue Travel Guide  Open in new Window.
Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Seton,

Thank you for the wonderful information on this

beautiful Island. As a travel agent I'm so surprised

that I have not seen nor heard of Niue from any of my

guide books. But it sounds like a delightful place to

visit and I will look into it further. Thank you for

sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci
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Review by MDuci Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Hirlster,

What a sweet little story! I like the way you added

so much color with out over doing it and showing

more then telling with the meeting of eyes and

glances. You did a great short story and I hope that

one day you will maybe add another little chapter,

letting us know if these two ever meet again.

Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.

Sincerely
Mduci
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