A lot of people pull away from God and then after a while come back to Him. God never leaves us - we leave Him. If we are His children - He will forgive us. We have to accept Him as our Saviour and ask Him to forgive our sins, if we are sincere, He will save our souls from Hell. He is my Saviour and He forgives me, He loves me. I try to live like He wants us to instead of what our carnal nature wants us to do.
I really enjoyed this poem. I can just see the zebras using their tails to paint the strips! I like the black and white, I guess it answers the question 'are zebras black with white strips or the other way round.' They are green and grey!
This was a very sad story! I was hoping he would get help. In the back of my mind zombies took hold that's what I knew was coming. Shame theres no cure for that.
Good story. Thanks
Well, that's quite a story! Sounds a little like 'The Twilite Zone'. I enjoyed it and it kept me on the edge of my seat to see how it ended. Very good.
Keep writing
Dianne
Very well written. I don't critique poetry because I don't the ins and outs of it. But I know what I like and I like this one very much. We need to trust and follow Christ always.
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